Unit 3 单元主题写作满分10篇精讲精练（题型突破）-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元重难点精讲精练全突破（人教版2024）

Unit 3 单元主题写作满分精讲精练 （讲义&题型突破) 1、 写作主题 谈论人物的个性特征 2、 主题分析 本单元的话题是谈论人物的个性特征，本单元的写作题目与描写人物的个性特征相关。写此类短文时，要抓住所比较的人物的特点，从外貌特征(如tall, short, thin, fat, long/short hair等)、个性特点(如outgoing, funny, friendly, hard-working, smart等)等方面来描述。若要进行人物个性特征的比较，则要写出他们的相同点和不同点，并能够正确使用比较级进行表达。语言要精炼、准确，行文要流畅。 三、写作积累 （一）.常用的词汇： 1. tall/thin/heavy/long hair/short hair高的/瘦的/长发/短发 2. funny/friendly/outgoing/hard-working/smart/lazy搞笑的/友好的/外向的/努力的/聪明的/懒惰的 3. be similar to与 ……相似 4. be talented in在 ……有天赋 5. like doing sth.喜欢做 6. be serious about 对……认真 7. care about 关心 8. work hard努力学习 9. play sports做体育运动 10. be good at 擅长 11. as...as与 ……一样 12. be different from与 ……不同 13. bring out 使显示 14. the same as 和 ……相同 15. as long as只要 16.Be different from... 不同于…… 17.In some ways 在某些方面 18.Both... and... 两者都 19.Do well in... 在...方面表现出色 20.Good friends 好朋友 （二）.常用的句型句式： 1.I have a best friend. His/her name is...我有一个好朋友，她/他的名字是 …… 2.She has long hair/short hair...她留着长发/短发 3.But we have some differences...但是我们有一些不同 …… 4.I am more outgoing than him.我比他外向。 5.She is not as...as I am.她不如我 …… 6.He is good at...他很擅长 …… 7.We both like...我们都喜欢 …… 8.I work harder than her.我比她学习努力。 9.She is talented in music.她在音乐方面有天赋。 10.He likes to do the same things as me.他喜欢做和我一样的事情。 11.My friend truly cares about me.我的朋友真地很关心我。 12.We can talk about and share everything.我们可以互相交谈并且分享一切。 13.We enjoy studying together.我们喜欢在一起学习。 14.I think friends are like books-you don’t need a lot of them as long as they are good.我觉得朋友像书-不需要太多只要足够好。 15.It’s not necessary to be the same没必要一样。 16.I believe we will become better and better.我相信我们会变得越来越好。 17.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。 18.True friends are always there for you.真正的朋友会一直陪在你身边。 19.My best friend is Tom. 我最好的朋友是汤姆。 20.We are both thin, but Tom is much thinner. 我们都很瘦，但是汤姆更瘦。 21.I am good at English but he does well in math. 我很擅长英语但是他擅长数学。 22.I think differences are not important in a friendship. 我觉得不同点在友谊中不重要。 23.Our friendship will last forever. 我们的友谊会持续永远。 (三)写作方法： [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 4、 写作步骤 第一步，介绍自己的择友观； 第二步，比较自己和好友之间的异同点； 第三步，介绍好友值得自己学习的优秀品质。 五、例题精讲 友谊就像花朵，在岁月里静静绽放。友谊就像风帆，在时间的长河里让我们远航。朋友是一种默契，是一种温暖，是迷茫时的明灯，是孤独时的陪伴。我们应该好好珍惜身边的朋友。 假如你是李华，你们学校将举办以“珍惜友谊（Value Our Friendship）”为主题的英语演讲比赛；请用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍谁是你最好的朋友，你们之间的相似点（similarity）和不同点，以及应该怎样珍惜朋友。 参考信息： 1. Who is your best friend? 2. What similarities or differences do you and your best friend have? 3. What should you do to value your friendship? 要求： 1. 80-120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 Value Our Friendship Friendship plays an important role in our life. My best friend is Tom. He is tall and outgoing. He has black eyes and black hair. He is very thin. He is really more hard-working than me. I am good at English, but he does well in math. We like playing basketball. Both he and I like sports shows. Differences are not important in a friendship. We can respect and learn from each other. Although we have some differences, we are good friends. When we are in trouble, we care about each other. We always encourage each other, so I cherish this friendship very much. I think he’s a true friend. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据写作要点以及提示问题，来介绍一下你的好朋友，比较你与他/她之间的异同，最后谈一谈你认为真正的朋友是什么样的。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍你的朋友。描述一下他/她的长相； 第二步，具体阐述你与他/她之间的异同； 第三步，总结，怎样做去珍惜友谊。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②do well in在 ……某方面干得好 ③learn from向 ……学习 ④be in trouble处于危险中 [高分句型] ①Although we have some differences, we are good friends.（“although”引导的让步状语从句） ②When we are in trouble, we care about each other.（“when”引导的时间状语从句） 六、写作精练 （一） 1．友情是身后的支持、是心灵的慰藉，是分享，是陪伴。每个人都有朋友，或许你的朋友和你志趣相投，或许你们性格迥异，却能帮助彼此。请你介绍一下你最好的朋友。 内容包括： ①简要说明你的择友观； ②比较你和好友之间的异同点； ③好友有哪些值得你学习的优秀品质。 要求： 1. 文中需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥： 2. 文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3. 字迹工整，条理清晰，不少于80词。 注意事项： 1. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 2. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 My good friend ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 My good friend I think friends are like books.You don’t have a lot of them, as long as they are good. Besides, it’s not necessary for friends to be the same. My good friend is Lucy. She is very different from me. She is much quieter and taller than me. She always has long hair but I like short hair. I’m good at math but Linda does well in English and Chinese. We like to do our homework together after school and we always help each other. We both like playing tennis, too. Last year, we went fishing by the river. Suddenly, she found a little boy crying for help in the river and she jumped into the river at once. Luckily, the little boy was saved and his parents were very grateful to her. Her kindness and bravery always infect me and I can learn a lot from her. I love my friend. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的择友观； 第二步，比较自己和好友之间的异同点； 第三步，介绍好友值得自己学习的优秀品质。 [亮点词汇] ①be different from与 ……是不同的 ②be good at擅长 ③each other彼此 ④at once立刻 [高分句型] ①I don’t think it’s necessary for friends to be the same.（宾语从句） （二） 每个人都有自己的好朋友，或许两人相似，或许截然不同。贵阳市第四十中学八年级的同学正在开展以“Should friends be the same or different?”为主题的班会，请根据提供的信息谈谈你的观点。 要求：1.表明自己的观点。 2.对比自己和好朋友，说出自己的感受。 3.不少于70词。 4.文中不出现真实校名和姓名。 【总体分析】 ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； [写作步骤] 本文分为三段式： 第一段表明自己的观点并介绍自己和朋友的不同之处； 第二段介绍自己和朋友的相同之处； 第三段总结概括。 写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 I think it doesn’t matter whether my friends are the same as me or different from me. I only care if my friends truly care about me. My favorite saying is “A good friend is my nearest relation.” Helen is one of my best friends and she is quite different from me. I’m short but she is quite tall. As for the personality, I’m more outgoing than her, although I’m quieter than most kids. But we also have one thing in common. We both study hard. She is better at English, so she always helps with my English. I like my friends because they help me when I am in trouble. In my eyes, a true friend should always be there to help when I’m in trouble. I will also care about my friends and help them in life and study. （三） 随着时光的流逝，不知不觉中我们已经长大，变成健康阳光的青少年；从懵懂无知的孩子变成学有所成的初二学生——这便是成长的收获。请你以“Great Changes in My Growth”为题，谈谈自己成长过程中的转变和收获，并表明对未来的打算。 in the past now in the future 1. be short and thin 2. play sports after class 3. didn’t care about English, 4. be not polite, be quiet 5. … 1. be strong and healthy 2. study all the time 3. become more interested in English 4. help parents with housework 5. … 注意： (1) 根据上面表格中的提示，并适当发挥； (2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名； (3) 词数：70左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。) Great Changes in My Growth As time goes by, I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 Great Changes in My Growth As time goes by, I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be. In the past, I was short and thin, but now, I am strong and healthy. I used to play sports after school but now I don’t have the time anymore. I have to study all the time. In the past, I didn’t care about studying English very much, but now I find that English is much more interesting than before. So I’m much more interested in studying English. What’s more, I used to be impolite and quiet. Now, I often help my parents with housework. Finally, I always played computer games in my free time in the past. Now, I become interested in reading books. In the future, I hope I can become better and let my parents be proud of me. Besides, I will work harder to get good grades and get into the ideal high school. 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章开头，介绍文章的主题； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，详细介绍自己过去和现在的变化； 第三步，展望未来，并收尾。 （四） 上周育英中学开展了以“Should friends be different or the same?”为主题的调查活动，下面是他们对全校 500 个学生的调查结果，请你根据调查表格和下面信息写一篇短文。 内容包括以下几点： 1. 简要描述表格内容以及你对交友的观点; 2. 介绍一位你的好朋友，并描述你和好朋友在外貌，性格和爱好方面的相同和不同之处; 3. 你和好朋友谁的生活方式更健康，为什么？（至少两条理由） 要求：字数 70字左右，文中不得出现真实的人名。 开头已给出，不计入字数。 Should friends be different or the same? Last week Yuying high school asked this questionamong 500 students. Here are the results.________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 Should friends be different or the same? Last week Yuying High school asked this question among 500 students. Here are the results. 35% of the students thought friends should be the same, while 30% said friends should be different and the rest 35% didn’t care if friends are the same or different. For me, I also don’t mind the differences between friends. But I think a true friend should reach for your hand and touch your heart. My best friend Lily is as tall as me but I am heavier than her. We both like talking with others, but Lily is more outgoing and friendlier than me. We both like sports, but I only like watching sports on TV. Lily likes to play it every day, because she says it is healthy for the body and the mind. She also likes to eat healthy food while I enjoy fast food, so I think Lily is much healthier than me. I should learn from her. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体说明图表内容以及你和好朋友之间的相同与不同之处并做出评价； 第三步，表达你和好朋友谁的生活方式哪个更健康以及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①reach for one’s hand帮助某人 ②touch one’s heart打动某人 ③as ... as和 ……一样 …… ④talk with和 ……交谈 [高分句型] ①But I think a true friend should reach for your hand and touch your heart. (宾语从句) ②My best friend Lily is as tall as me but I am heavier than her. (并列句) （五） 你的老师上了一节关于朋友的课，希望你想想你最好的朋友。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一下你最好的朋友和你。内容提示： What is your best friend like? What are the differences and similarities between you and your friend? Do you like your best friend? Why? Something more about you and your best friend. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数70字左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My best friend and I Hello, everyone! Today I want to tell you something about my best friend and me. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 My best friend and I Hello, everyone! Today I want to tell you something about my best friend and me. My best friend is Simon. We are in the same class. We both have black eyes and black hair, but his hair is shorter than mine. He often exercises so he is stronger and healthier than me. We both like sports, but he plays basketball better than me. Besides, he studies harder than me so he always gets good grades. I’m weak in English so he always reaches his hand and helps me with it. I really like Simon because he is supportive and always encourages me to do my best. Our friendship means the world to me, and I hope it lasts forever. Thank you! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的朋友是谁； 第二步，具体阐述自己和朋友的不同之处和相似之处； 第三步，表达对朋友的喜爱及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①be weak in不擅长 ②reach his hand伸出手 ③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①He often exercises so he is stronger and healthier than me. (so引导的结果状语从句) ②I really like Simon because he is supportive and always encourages me to do my best. (because引导的原因状语从句) （六） 1. 亲爱的同学们，正如歌中所唱：“友谊是一道光，如此美妙，照亮你我想要的未来。”进入初中以来，你也结交了不少的新朋友吧。根据以下表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友。 人物 不同点 相同点 Tina 1. 比我高得多，更外向。 2. 唱歌、跳舞在班上都是最棒的。打算学习表演专业。 1. 喜欢运动。 2. 学习努力，各门功课都学得好。 3. 喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起去图书馆。 I 1. 更喜欢画画，长大想要成为一个画家。 2. 喜欢看肥皂剧。 对朋友之间异同点的看法： …… 注意： 1. 词数：80~100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥。 3. 严禁使用与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名、班级等信息。 My Best Friend and I My name is Nancy. I am a middle school student now. I want to tell you something about my best friend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【例文】 My Best Friend and I My name is Nancy. I am a middle school student now. I want to tell you something about my best friend. Tina is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. For example, both of us enjoy exercising because it keeps us healthy. We all study very hard and do well in every subject, so either I or she is the top student in the class. Reading is our common hobby, and we often go to the library to read together on weekends. But in some ways, we are different from each other. Tina is much taller than me and more outgoing than me, while I am a little shy. She sings and dances best in the class, and she plans to study acting. However, I prefer painting and want to be an artist when I grow up. And I enjoy watching soap operas. In fact, I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different from me. I think my best friend can help me bring out the best in me. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，具体介绍自己与朋友的相同之处； 第二步，具体介绍自己与朋友的不同之处； 第三步，介绍自己对朋友之间异同点的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①do well in擅长 ②either...or...要么 ……要么 …… ③be different from与 ……不同 ④prefer doing sth更喜欢做某事 ⑤the same as与 ……一样 [高分句型] ①For example, both of us enjoy exercising because it keeps us healthy.（because引导原因状语从句） ②However, I prefer painting and want to be an artist when I grow up. And I enjoy watching soap operas.（when引导时间状语从句） ③In fact, I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different from me.（if引导宾语从句） （七） 《学习周报》联袂阳光中学正在举行“我的闺蜜我来谈”活动。请你根据下面表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友Nancy的相同之处和不同之处。 要求： 1. 包括表格中提及的所有内容，语句通顺，条理清楚； 2. 80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥。 人物 不同点 相同点 Nancy 1. 比我高得多，更外向 2. 更擅长唱歌、跳舞 3. 喜欢去听音乐会 1. 喜欢运动 2. 学习努力，各门功课都学得好 3. 喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起去图书馆 Ⅰ 1. 喜欢上网 2. 喜欢旅游 对朋友之间异同点的看法： ……（至少两点） Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. ________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. Both of us like sports. We are both hard-working and good at all subjects. We both like reading, and we usually go to the library together on weekends. But in some ways we are different. She is taller and more outgoing than me. She is better at singing and dancing. She likes going to the concert. For me, I like surfing the Internet. And I love traveling. In fact, I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different from me. I think my best friend can help me bring out the best in me. [总体分析] 1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段主要叙述我和我的好朋友Nancy之间的共同点；第二段主要叙述我和我的好朋友Nancy之间的不同点以及我对朋友之间异同点的看法。 2.写作指导：本文应该采用第一和第三人称叙述，时态采用一般现在时，在叙述时应按照表格中所给的内容认真组织语言，做到语句通顺，条理清楚，在最后阐述自己的观点时应有理有据，言简意赅，在写作的过程中，注意语言符合英文表达的习惯。 （八） 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda想了解关于你和你最好的朋友的一些情况。请你根据下面的思维导图和要求，给Linda回一封电子邮件，告诉她你和你最好的朋友的相同和不同之处。 要求： 1.包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Linda, How’s it going? I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and me. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope we can be best friends forever. Yours, Li Hua 【例文】 Dear Linda, How’s it going? I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and me. My best friend and I have many things in common. For example, we both enjoy playing basketball and often play together after school. Though we are similar in some ways, we have many more differences. First, we look quite different. I have short black hair and wear glasses, while my friend has long brown hair and doesn’t need glasses. As for personality, I am shyer and like spending time reading books, while my friend is very outgoing and enjoys playing with others. She is talented in language, so she’s better at English than me. She often helps me with English. We always support and help each other. I hope we can be best friends forever. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯 [写作步骤] 第一步，先表达写作目的，引出话题（已给出）； 第二步，具体介绍和好朋友之间的相同之处和不同之处，可从爱好、外貌、性格、学习等方面来介绍； 第三步，书写结束语，表达希望友谊长存的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①have things in common 有相同之处 ②for example 例如 ③as for 至于 ④spend time doing sth. 花费时间做某事 ⑤each other 互相 ⑥ be talented in 在某方面有天赋 [高分句型] ① Though we are similar in some ways, we have many more differences. (though引导让步状语从句) ② I have short black hair and wear glasses, while my friend has long brown hair and doesn’t need glasses. (while表对比) （九） 假设你叫李华，你校的英语社团正在举行“我和我的朋友”为主题的征文比赛。请根据表格内容，以“My Best Friend Jenny and I”为题，用英语写一篇短文参赛。 要求： 1.文稿须包括表格所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等。 3. 词数100左右。 Jenny I tall tall long hair short hair outgoing quiet hard-working lazy like sports like music be good at swimming be good at tennis My Best Friend Jenny and I _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 My Best Friend Jenny and I My best friend is Jenny. We have many things in common, but we are not the same. We are both tall, but she is heavier than me. Jenny has long hair, while I have short hair. Her hair is much longer than mine. Jenny is more outgoing than me. She likes sports. But I am quiet and I enjoy listening to music in my spare time. Jenny is more hard-working than me. I think I should learn from her because I am quite lazy. She is better at swimming than me, while I do better in tennis than her. Though we have some differences, we are still best friends. I hope our friendship will last forever. 【详解】[总体分析]​ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述了“我”和最好的朋友Jenny的情况；​ ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；​ ③提示：文章通过对比的方式，介绍了“我”和Jenny在外形、性格、爱好等方面的相同点与不同点，以及两人深厚的友谊。​ [写作步骤]​ 第一步，开篇点明Jenny是“我”最好的朋友，且两人有很多共同点但也存在不同。​ 第二步，中间部分具体对比两人的不同之处，包括身高、体重、发型、性格、爱好、学习态度以及擅长的运动等。​ 第三步，结尾说明尽管存在差异，两人仍是最好的朋友，并表达了希望友谊长存的愿望。​ [亮点词汇]​ ①in common共同的；共有的​ ②outgoing外向的​ ③spare time空闲时间​ ④hard-working勤奋的​ ⑤last forever永存​ [高分句型]​ ①We are both tall, but she is heavier than me. (形容词比较级)​ ②She is better at swimming than me, while I do better in tennis than her. (“while”表对比)​ （十） 假如你是Zhang Ming，在班会上用英语分享自己和好朋友Liu Dong相同和差异。写作要点如下： 项目 内容 相同点 1. 都留短发 2. 爱好打球，看书，周末常一起去图书馆 不同点 1. 你比他更瘦；Liu Dong更外向； 2. 他的朋友更多，(补充对待朋友的观点)； 3. 他经常帮父母做家务，一周四次； 4. …… 要求： 1. 短文应包含要求的所有信息，可以在此基础上适当发挥。 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名信息。 3. 词数80词左右。(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Dear classmates, Let me tell you something about my good friend. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks! 【例文】 Dear classmates, Let me tell you something about my good friend. We have a lot in common. Both of us keep our hair short, which makes us look tidy. We both like playing ball games and reading books. On weekends, we often go the library together. However, we also have our differences. I’m a bit thinner than him, while he is more outgoing and has more friends. He believes in treating friends with sincerity and always being there for them, which I deeply admire. Liu Dong often helps his parents with housework four times a week. As for me, I may not be as active in housework, but I will do my part when needed. Although we have many differences, we always help each other. Thanks. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍两者的共同点； 第二步，具体阐述两者的不同点； 第三步，最后表达总结。 [亮点词汇] ①in common共同之处 ②treating friends with sincerity真诚对待朋友 ③help each other互相帮助 [高分句型] ①Both of us keep our hair short, which makes us look tidy. （定语从句） ②Although we have many differences, we always help each other.（让步状语从句） 20 / 20 19 / 20 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 单元主题写作满分精讲精练 （讲义&题型突破) 1、 写作主题 谈论人物的个性特征 2、 主题分析 本单元的话题是谈论人物的个性特征，本单元的写作题目与描写人物的个性特征相关。写此类短文时，要抓住所比较的人物的特点，从外貌特征(如tall, short, thin, fat, long/short hair等)、个性特点(如outgoing, funny, friendly, hard-working, smart等)等方面来描述。若要进行人物个性特征的比较，则要写出他们的相同点和不同点，并能够正确使用比较级进行表达。语言要精炼、准确，行文要流畅。 三、写作积累 （一）.常用的词汇： 1. tall/thin/heavy/long hair/short hair高的/瘦的/长发/短发 2. funny/friendly/outgoing/hard-working/smart/lazy搞笑的/友好的/外向的/努力的/聪明的/懒惰的 3. be similar to与 ……相似 4. be talented in在 ……有天赋 5. like doing sth.喜欢做 6. be serious about 对……认真 7. care about 关心 8. work hard努力学习 9. play sports做体育运动 10. be good at 擅长 11. as...as与 ……一样 12. be different from与 ……不同 13. bring out 使显示 14. the same as 和 ……相同 15. as long as只要 16.Be different from... 不同于…… 17.In some ways 在某些方面 18.Both... and... 两者都 19.Do well in... 在...方面表现出色 20.Good friends 好朋友 （二）.常用的句型句式： 1.I have a best friend. His/her name is...我有一个好朋友，她/他的名字是 …… 2.She has long hair/short hair...她留着长发/短发 3.But we have some differences...但是我们有一些不同 …… 4.I am more outgoing than him.我比他外向。 5.She is not as...as I am.她不如我 …… 6.He is good at...他很擅长 …… 7.We both like...我们都喜欢 …… 8.I work harder than her.我比她学习努力。 9.She is talented in music.她在音乐方面有天赋。 10.He likes to do the same things as me.他喜欢做和我一样的事情。 11.My friend truly cares about me.我的朋友真地很关心我。 12.We can talk about and share everything.我们可以互相交谈并且分享一切。 13.We enjoy studying together.我们喜欢在一起学习。 14.I think friends are like books-you don’t need a lot of them as long as they are good.我觉得朋友像书-不需要太多只要足够好。 15.It’s not necessary to be the same没必要一样。 16.I believe we will become better and better.我相信我们会变得越来越好。 17.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。 18.True friends are always there for you.真正的朋友会一直陪在你身边。 19.My best friend is Tom. 我最好的朋友是汤姆。 20.We are both thin, but Tom is much thinner. 我们都很瘦，但是汤姆更瘦。 21.I am good at English but he does well in math. 我很擅长英语但是他擅长数学。 22.I think differences are not important in a friendship. 我觉得不同点在友谊中不重要。 23.Our friendship will last forever. 我们的友谊会持续永远。 (三)写作方法： [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 4、 写作步骤 第一步，介绍自己的择友观； 第二步，比较自己和好友之间的异同点； 第三步，介绍好友值得自己学习的优秀品质。 五、例题精讲 友谊就像花朵，在岁月里静静绽放。友谊就像风帆，在时间的长河里让我们远航。朋友是一种默契，是一种温暖，是迷茫时的明灯，是孤独时的陪伴。我们应该好好珍惜身边的朋友。 假如你是李华，你们学校将举办以“珍惜友谊（Value Our Friendship）”为主题的英语演讲比赛；请用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍谁是你最好的朋友，你们之间的相似点（similarity）和不同点，以及应该怎样珍惜朋友。 参考信息： 1. Who is your best friend? 2. What similarities or differences do you and your best friend have? 3. What should you do to value your friendship? 要求： 1. 80-120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 Value Our Friendship Friendship plays an important role in our life. My best friend is Tom. He is tall and outgoing. He has black eyes and black hair. He is very thin. He is really more hard-working than me. I am good at English, but he does well in math. We like playing basketball. Both he and I like sports shows. Differences are not important in a friendship. We can respect and learn from each other. Although we have some differences, we are good friends. When we are in trouble, we care about each other. We always encourage each other, so I cherish this friendship very much. I think he’s a true friend. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据写作要点以及提示问题，来介绍一下你的好朋友，比较你与他/她之间的异同，最后谈一谈你认为真正的朋友是什么样的。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍你的朋友。描述一下他/她的长相； 第二步，具体阐述你与他/她之间的异同； 第三步，总结，怎样做去珍惜友谊。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②do well in在 ……某方面干得好 ③learn from向 ……学习 ④be in trouble处于危险中 [高分句型] ①Although we have some differences, we are good friends.（“although”引导的让步状语从句） ②When we are in trouble, we care about each other.（“when”引导的时间状语从句） 六、写作精练 （一） 1．友情是身后的支持、是心灵的慰藉，是分享，是陪伴。每个人都有朋友，或许你的朋友和你志趣相投，或许你们性格迥异，却能帮助彼此。请你介绍一下你最好的朋友。 内容包括： ①简要说明你的择友观； ②比较你和好友之间的异同点； ③好友有哪些值得你学习的优秀品质。 要求： 1. 文中需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥： 2. 文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3. 字迹工整，条理清晰，不少于80词。 注意事项： 1. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 2. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 My good friend ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 每个人都有自己的好朋友，或许两人相似，或许截然不同。贵阳市第四十中学八年级的同学正在开展以“Should friends be the same or different?”为主题的班会，请根据提供的信息谈谈你的观点。 要求：1.表明自己的观点。 2.对比自己和好朋友，说出自己的感受。 3.不少于70词。 4.文中不出现真实校名和姓名。 【总体分析】 ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； [写作步骤] 本文分为三段式： 第一段表明自己的观点并介绍自己和朋友的不同之处； 第二段介绍自己和朋友的相同之处； 第三段总结概括。 写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 随着时光的流逝，不知不觉中我们已经长大，变成健康阳光的青少年；从懵懂无知的孩子变成学有所成的初二学生——这便是成长的收获。请你以“Great Changes in My Growth”为题，谈谈自己成长过程中的转变和收获，并表明对未来的打算。 in the past now in the future 1. be short and thin 2. play sports after class 3. didn’t care about English, 4. be not polite, be quiet 5. … 1. be strong and healthy 2. study all the time 3. become more interested in English 4. help parents with housework 5. … 注意： (1) 根据上面表格中的提示，并适当发挥； (2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名； (3) 词数：70左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。) Great Changes in My Growth As time goes by, I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 上周育英中学开展了以“Should friends be different or the same?”为主题的调查活动，下面是他们对全校 500 个学生的调查结果，请你根据调查表格和下面信息写一篇短文。 内容包括以下几点： 1. 简要描述表格内容以及你对交友的观点; 2. 介绍一位你的好朋友，并描述你和好朋友在外貌，性格和爱好方面的相同和不同之处; 3. 你和好朋友谁的生活方式更健康，为什么？（至少两条理由） 要求：字数 70字左右，文中不得出现真实的人名。 开头已给出，不计入字数。 Should friends be different or the same? Last week Yuying high school asked this questionamong 500 students. Here are the results.________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 你的老师上了一节关于朋友的课，希望你想想你最好的朋友。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一下你最好的朋友和你。内容提示： What is your best friend like? What are the differences and similarities between you and your friend? Do you like your best friend? Why? Something more about you and your best friend. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数70字左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My best friend and I Hello, everyone! Today I want to tell you something about my best friend and me. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 1. 亲爱的同学们，正如歌中所唱：“友谊是一道光，如此美妙，照亮你我想要的未来。”进入初中以来，你也结交了不少的新朋友吧。根据以下表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友。 人物 不同点 相同点 Tina 1. 比我高得多，更外向。 2. 唱歌、跳舞在班上都是最棒的。打算学习表演专业。 1. 喜欢运动。 2. 学习努力，各门功课都学得好。 3. 喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起去图书馆。 I 1. 更喜欢画画，长大想要成为一个画家。 2. 喜欢看肥皂剧。 对朋友之间异同点的看法： …… 注意： 1. 词数：80~100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥。 3. 严禁使用与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名、班级等信息。 My Best Friend and I My name is Nancy. I am a middle school student now. I want to tell you something about my best friend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 《学习周报》联袂阳光中学正在举行“我的闺蜜我来谈”活动。请你根据下面表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友Nancy的相同之处和不同之处。 要求： 1. 包括表格中提及的所有内容，语句通顺，条理清楚； 2. 80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥。 人物 不同点 相同点 Nancy 1. 比我高得多，更外向 2. 更擅长唱歌、跳舞 3. 喜欢去听音乐会 1. 喜欢运动 2. 学习努力，各门功课都学得好 3. 喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起去图书馆 Ⅰ 1. 喜欢上网 2. 喜欢旅游 对朋友之间异同点的看法： ……（至少两点） Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. ________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda想了解关于你和你最好的朋友的一些情况。请你根据下面的思维导图和要求，给Linda回一封电子邮件，告诉她你和你最好的朋友的相同和不同之处。 要求： 1.包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Linda, How’s it going? I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and me. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope we can be best friends forever. Yours, Li Hua （九） 假设你叫李华，你校的英语社团正在举行“我和我的朋友”为主题的征文比赛。请根据表格内容，以“My Best Friend Jenny and I”为题，用英语写一篇短文参赛。 要求： 1.文稿须包括表格所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等。 3. 词数100左右。 Jenny I tall tall long hair short hair outgoing quiet hard-working lazy like sports like music be good at swimming be good at tennis My Best Friend Jenny and I ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十） 假如你是Zhang Ming，在班会上用英语分享自己和好朋友Liu Dong相同和差异。写作要点如下： 项目 内容 相同点 1. 都留短发 2. 爱好打球，看书，周末常一起去图书馆 不同点 1. 你比他更瘦；Liu Dong更外向； 2. 他的朋友更多，(补充对待朋友的观点)； 3. 他经常帮父母做家务，一周四次； 4. …… 要求： 1. 短文应包含要求的所有信息，可以在此基础上适当发挥。 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名信息。 3. 词数80词左右。(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Dear classmates, Let me tell you something about my good friend. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks! 12 / 12 13 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$