专题 10 读后续写如何写好文章的结尾（写作专练） 英语高考复习通用版

专题 10 如何写好文章的结尾 目录 01结尾特点---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------1 02从结构上分类---------------------------------------------------------------------------------2 03从话题上归纳---------------------------------------------------------------------------------4 04即时演练--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------11 结尾特点    读后续写的结尾，体现学生的逻辑思维能力和语篇的整合能力，决定了读后续写的价值走向，给整个故事画上一个圆满的句号，让读者产生满足感或留下深刻印象。或者升华主题，传达更深刻的思想或情感，或是情感的自然流露，是读后续写更重要的一步。      一、结尾的写作方法 1. 呼应前文：与开头或文中的关键元素相呼应，使故事具有连贯性。 2. 升华情感或主题：让读者在情感上或认知上得到进一步的提升。 3. 合理收尾：不要过于突兀或留下未解决的问题。   二、结尾常见问题及解决方法 问题1：文章结尾写的过长，给人无病呻吟的感觉。解决方法：结尾句用一句话顺应文章主题，画龙点睛即可。 问题2：仓促收尾，缺乏深度。解决方法：深入思考，挖掘主题，给予恰当的总结和升华。 问题3：与前文脱节。解决方法：仔细回顾前文，确保结尾与之紧密衔接。 三、写好结尾注意事项 1.要保持故事逻辑的连贯性。 结尾不能与前文的情节发展和人物设定产生冲突或矛盾，必须是顺理成章的延续，确保整个故事在逻辑上是通顺的，避免出现不合理的跳跃或转折。 2.注重情感的一致性。 如果原文营造了特定的情感氛围，结尾也要与之相符，不能突然转变情感基调，否则会让读者感到突兀和不适应。 3.注意情节的完整性。 不能留下未解决的重大问题或悬念，要对故事中的主要事件和冲突有一个清晰明确的交代，让读者感到结局是完整的，没有缺失感。    4.在语言表达上，要符合故事的风格和语境。不能使用过于生僻或与整体文风不搭的词汇和句式，保持语言的自然流畅和协调性。    5.要避免过于直白和简单的收尾方式。要有一定的深度和内涵，可以通过巧妙的暗示、隐喻或象征来传达更丰富的信息，让读者在读完后有回味和思考的空间。   6.要考虑读者的感受和期待。尽量满足读者对故事结局的合理预期，同时又能给他们带来一些惊喜和新鲜感，以增强读者的阅读体验。    仔细斟酌每一个用词和句子，确保结尾达到最佳的效果，使其能真正为整个读后续写增色添彩。 从结构上分类   1、结尾方法   圆满式结尾：让主要人物达成目标，故事有一个皆大欢喜的结局，给读者带来满足感，如“Watching him, I knew we’d made the right decision. This was his world, and he was thriving in it.”。   开放式结尾：留下一定的悬念或不确定性，引发读者的思考和想象，比如“He set out on an unknown journey, and no one knows what the future holds for him.   寓意式结尾：通过某种象征或隐喻传达深刻的道理或感悟，“The old tree still stands, witnessing the change of time and the resilience of life.”。   自然收尾 自然而然地结束全文。但讲究“自然”并不意味马虎草率，而是顺着文章发展的自然趋势结束全局。自然式结尾简单、自然，使文章的结构显得十分完整。 主题升华 主题升华式结尾，也称哲理式结尾，即在结尾用富含哲理的语句，总结全文，升华主旨，并给人以启发。同学们平常可以积累一些富含哲理的段落或句子，如果引用得当，不仅能深化主题，而且能启人深思，给读者以有益的启迪。 Sometimes a little kindness can make a big difference. Without the dark, you would never see the stars. 以景结情 在结尾营造画面感，寓情于景，让读者体味不言情而情无限的感觉。 No matter how cold the winter was，all that they could feel now was the surpassing warmth. 无论冬天多么寒冷，他们现在感受到的都是扑面而来的温暖。 意味深长的对话结尾 对话式结尾以故事中的人物对话结尾，功能包括：紧扣主线、意味深长、反映人物心理、揭示谜底、首尾呼应等。对话式结尾有时伴有相应的动作收尾，因为说完话总会有肢体动作伴随。对话式结尾有时意味深长，值得回味，留有空白给读者思考与感悟。 画面定格 以人物动作的画面定格结尾。 Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes. 2、处理故事的高潮和结局    在高潮部分，要充分展现冲突的激烈和紧张感，将人物置于最关键的抉择或困境中。 结局要自然地承接高潮，解决或部分解决冲突，让故事有一个合理的走向。可以是人物找到了解决问题的方法，或者在经历后有了新的认知和成长。This encounter became a constant reminder that in a world with uncertainties, kindness has its own reward.   3、让结尾更加引人入胜   运用生动的细节描写，如环境细节来烘托氛围，或人物的细微表情、动作来展现其内心活动，“Her trembling hands held the letter, and tears glistened in her eyes.”。   加强情感渲染，让读者更能感受到人物在结尾时的情绪，如喜悦、悲伤、感慨等，“His heart was full of emotion, and tears flowed down his face”。   与开头形成呼应，使整个故事形成一个完整的闭环，让读者体会到一种结构上的美感。 4、首尾呼应   在续写中运用首尾呼应的写作手法可以使文章的结构更加完整，主题更加鲜明。以下是一些运用首尾呼应的具体方法： 重复关键词或短语： 在开头和结尾使用相同或相似的关键词或短语，以达到首尾呼应的效果。例如: 开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.（开头爸爸想给我一个难忘的假期） 结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.（结尾这是我经历的最刺激的假期） 回顾开头的情节或场景： 在结尾处回顾开头的情节或场景，让读者感受到故事的完整性。比如: 开头：His usual big toothy smile was absent today.这篇读后续写的开头写到他的笑容消失不见了。 结尾：His big toothy smile came back again.（他的笑容回来了，结尾与开头照应，深化主题） 强调主题： 首尾呼应可以帮助作者强调文章的主题。在开头提出主题，结尾再次提及，使读者更清楚地理解文章的核心思想。 使用相似的句式或结构： 在开头和结尾使用相似的句式或结构，增强文章的连贯性。例如，开头使用了排比句，结尾也可以使用排比句来呼应。 从话题上归纳 几种常见具体话题的结尾通用句（结尾的句子一定不要太长，太啰嗦，避免出现大脚现象。） 一、亲情类 1.“The Mother hugged the twins tightly, whispering, ‘This is the best surprise in the world!’” 母亲紧紧地抱住双胞胎，轻声说道：“这是世界上最好的惊喜！” 2.“Only then did I realize that how much my mom loved me.” 直到那时我才意识到妈妈有多爱我。 3.“It occurred to me that family love is the greatest gift in life.” 我突然想到，亲情是人生中最伟大的礼物。 4.“It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.” 就在那一刻，我完全理解了家庭的意义。 5.“This birthday is bound to be kept in my memory forever, lightening my future path.” 这个生日注定会永远留在我的记忆中，照亮我未来的道路。 二、助人类 1.“Sometimes our small action can make a great difference to others.” 有时候，我们的一个小举动就能给他人带来巨大的改变。 2.At times, a small gesture of care will possibly melt people's loneliness. 有时候，一个小小的关怀手势可能会融化人们的孤独。 3.“The mother gave each of us a big hug, whispering in our eyes, ‘Thank you for your kindness. It's your love that has warmed us up.’” 这位母亲给了我们每个人一个大大的拥抱，看着我们的眼睛轻声说道：“感谢你们的善良。是你们的爱温暖了我们。” 4.“It occurred to me that a simple act could make the world so much better.” 我突然想到，一个简单的举动就能让世界变得美好得多。 5.“Although the wind still screamed outside, a warm current rose in my heart.” 尽管外面的风仍在呼啸，但一股暖流在我心中涌起。 三、遗憾与反思 1.As he looked back on his life, he realized that the greatest regret was not the mistakes he had made, but the chances he had let slip by. 当他回首往事时，意识到最大的遗憾不是犯下的错误，而是错过的机会。 2.Looking back, the missed opportunity feels like a fleeting meteor, leaving me with regret but also urging me to cherish every future choice. 回望往昔，那份未能把握的机会如同错过的流星，让我深感遗憾，却也促使我更加珍惜未来的每一次抉择。 3.Beneath the shadow of failure and regret, I reflect deeply, realizing that the path of growth is never smooth. Only by learning from mistakes can we go further. 在失败与遗憾的阴影下，我深刻反思，意识到成长之路从无坦途，唯有从错误中汲取教训，方能行得更远。 四、友谊与陪伴主题 1. True friendship is the rare gem that shines brightest in the darkest times, offering comfort and strength. 真正的友谊是稀世珍宝，在最黑暗的时刻闪耀得最亮，给予安慰和力量。 2. A friend is someone who knows all about you and still chooses to stand by your side. 朋友是一个了解你的一切，却仍然选择站在你身边的人。 3. In the tapestry of life, it is the threads of friendship that add the most vibrant colors and warmth. 在人生的织锦中，是友谊的线增添了最鲜艳的色彩和温暖。 4. Friendship is not about how long you’ve known each other, but how you make each other feel. 友谊不在于你们认识了多久，而在于你们彼此给对方的感觉。 五、勇气与坚持主题 1. Courage is not the absence of fear, but the strength to move forward despite it. 勇气不是没有恐惧，而是尽管有恐惧，仍然向前迈进的力量。 2. In the face of adversity, it is perseverance that carves the path to success, one step at a time. 面对逆境，正是坚持不懈一步步地开辟出通往成功的道路。 3. Courage is the spark that ignites the fire of determination, driving us to conquer our fears. 勇气是点燃决心之火的火花，驱使我们战胜恐惧。 4. Every step taken in the name of courage is a victory, no matter how small it may seem. 以勇气之名迈出的每一步，无论看起来多么微小，都是一次胜利。 5. Perseverance is the silent force that turns dreams into reality, one challenge at a time. 坚持不懈是那股默默的力量，一次挑战一次地将梦想变为现实。 六、 经验教训 1.It's never too late to learn.活到老，学到老。 2.Don't take others' concern for granted.不要把别人的关心当成理所当然。 3. He was delighted that it helped him realize one required more patience in any task being accomplished.他很高兴，那帮助他认识到一个人在完成任何任务时都需要更多的耐心。 4. After this experience, I eventually understood the importance of time management, and began to adjust my schedule with caution.经过这段经历，我终于明白了时间管理的重要性，并开始谨慎地调整自己的时间表。 5. The valuable lesson Mr. Green taught him will be kept in his mind forever.他会永远记住格林先生给他上的宝贵的一课。 七、人与动物关系类 1. Through this experiences, they realize that the bond between humans and animal is built on love, trust, and mutual respect. 通过这次经历，他们意识到人类与动物之间的纽带建立在爱、信任和相互尊重的基础上。 2. This taught them an invaluable lesson that treating animals with kindness and respect creates a world of love and harmony. 这教给他们宝贵的一课，善待动物并尊重它们创造了一个充满爱和和谐的世界。 3. This magical kitten was changing our lives and this was just the beginning. 这只神奇的小猫正改变我们的生活，而这仅仅是开始。 4. From time to time I look at the photo as a reminder to show respect to all animals. 我不时地看这张照片，以此提醒自己要尊重所有的动物。 八、 同学朋友关系 1. They realized that true friends are always there for each other, supporting and celebrating one another, creating a bond that lasts a lifetime. 他们意识到真正的朋友总是彼此支持和庆祝，建立了一种持久的纽带。 2. Through thick and thin, they discovered the beauty of friendship, finding comfort, laughter, and a sense of belonging in each other's company.在顺境和逆境中，他们发现了友谊的美，从对方身上找到了安慰、欢笑和归属感。 3. Their friendship grew stronger as they embraced each other's imperfections and stood by each other's side. 随着彼此接纳对方的不完美并始终相互支持，他们的友谊变得更加牢固。 4. Through laughter, tears, and shared moments, they found strength and solace in their friendship.通过笑声、眼泪和共同的时刻，他们在友谊中找到了力量和安慰。 九、比赛表演类 1. To everyone’s joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. 令大家高兴的是，他到达了终点线，名列第20位。 2. He eventually proved himself to be a strong-willed man even though he wasn’t the first. 他最终证明了自己是一个意志坚强的人，尽管他不是第一个。 3. Never in his wildest dream had he expected that he won the first prize. 他做梦也没想到自己获得了一等奖。 4. Meanwhile, a storm of thunderous applause rang through the classroom. 与此同时，雷鸣般的掌声响彻整个教室。 5. It dawned on Adam that one should stick to his dream no matter what happens. 亚当突然想到无论发生什么事，都要坚持自己的梦想。 十、生活趣事类 1. The room echoed with our happy laughter and our gratitude for the recovered wallet. 房间里回响着我们对于找回钱包的感激和欢笑声。 2. She hugged her two kind girls and stepped onto the stage again to get the award. 她拥抱了两个善良的女孩，再次走上舞台领奖。 3. This unforgettable experience reminded Maggie that nothing is impossible if you trust yourself. 这段难忘的经历提醒Maggie，如果你相信自己，没有什么是不可能的。 4. Bathed in the warm sunshine, we made our way home happily. 沐浴着温暖的阳光，我们高高兴兴的朝家走去。 5. There is no doubt that it has become the most unforgettable experience, which I will cherish forever in my life！ 毫无疑问，这已经成为我一生中最难忘的经历，我将永远珍惜。 十一、 校园师生关系 1. In the end, the student and teacher realized their bond went beyond the classroom, becoming a lifelong connection filled with respect, guidance, and gratitude.最终，学生和老师意识到他们的纽带超越了教室，成为一种充满尊重、指导和感激的终生联系。 2. The student and teacher developed an unbreakable bond, where wisdom and inspiration flowed between them, creating a lasting friendship built on mentorship and shared accomplishments.学生和老师建立了一种牢不可破的纽带，他们之间的智慧和灵感互相流动，创造出一种基于导师关系和共同成就的持久友谊。 3. In the end, the student and teacher realized they had formed a special bond that would last a lifetime, filled with respect, guidance, and gratitude.最终，学生和老师意识到他们建立了一种特殊的纽带，将伴随一生，充满尊重、指导和感激。 4. Through their journey, the teacher's impact on the student went beyond the classroom, teaching them valuable lessons about perseverance, kindness, and the pursuit of dreams. 在他们的旅程中，老师对学生的影响超越了教室，教给他们有关坚持、善良和追求梦想的宝贵教训。 十二、诚信类 1.Integrity is built in moments of choice, when no one is watching but our own conscience. 正直在抉择的瞬间铸就，此时无人注视，唯有我们的良知。 2.A single lie may save the moment, but honesty preserves something far greater: trust. 一句谎言或许能应付当下，但诚实能守护更珍贵的东西：信任。 3.What we do when tempted reveals not just our character, but our true values. 面对诱惑时的所作所为，不仅暴露我们的品格，更彰显我们真正的价值观。 十三、教诲类 1.The most valuable lessons are rarely taught with words, but learned through experience. 最珍贵的教训很少通过言语传授，而是从经历中习得。 2.Wisdom comes not from having all the answers, but from asking the right questions. 智慧并非源于知晓所有答案，而是源于提出恰当的问题。 3.Sometimes life's hardest teachings become our greatest guides. 有时，生活中最艰难的教诲会成为我们最伟大的指引。 十四、和解类 1.Forgiveness is not giving up on justice, but freeing ourselves from the weight of resentment. 宽恕并非放弃正义，而是将自己从怨恨的重负中解脱出来。 2.Understanding comes not from being right, but from seeing the world through another's eyes. 理解并非源于证明自己正确，而是源于站在他人的视角看世界。 3.Peace begins when we choose to mend what's broken, even when we didn't break it. 当我们选择修复破碎的关系 —— 即便并非我们造成的破碎 —— 和平便开始了。 十五、充满希望和鼓舞类结尾 1.With renewed determination, she set out on her journey, knowing that the future held endless possibilities waiting to be explored. 带着重新燃起的决心，她踏上了旅程，深知未来充满了无限可能，等待着她去探索。 2. Moving forward hand in hand, the future is full of promise. Let us take hope as our wings and build a bridge to our dreams together. 携手前行，未来可期，让我们以希望为翼，共筑梦想之桥。 3.Facing challenges, we fear neither wind nor rain, for our hearts are illuminated by light, and hope forever shines the way forward. 面对挑战，我们不惧风雨，因为心中有光，希望永远照亮前行的路。 4. Every ending is but the prologue to a new beginning. Embracing hope, we bravely step into the unknown tomorrow. 每一个结束都是新开始的序章，怀揣希望，我们勇敢步入未知的明天。 十六、面对逆境、积极向上类 1.“It's not what happens to you, but how you react to it that matters.” 重要的不是发生在你身上的事情，而是你对它的反应。 2.“Be brave, rise to setbacks, and make efforts. You will end up creating miracles.” 要勇敢，直面挫折，努力奋斗。你最终会创造奇迹。 3.“Fear never builds the future, but hope does.” 恐惧无法铸就未来，但希望可以。 4.“To change the worst situation into best, one should take actions.” 要把最糟糕的情况转变为最好的情况，人们应该采取行动。 5.“The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties.” 成功的道路并非一帆风顺。它充满了挑战和困难。 十七、追求梦想类 1.“It's true: If the dream is big enough, the facts don't count.” 确实如此：如果梦想足够远大，现实因素就不足为惧。 2.“Anyone with a dream, courage and persistence will be successful.” 任何一个有梦想、有勇气和毅力的人都会成功。 3.“Only then did I realize that it's never too late to be all you can possibly be.” 直到那时我才意识到，成为最好的自己永远都不晚。 4.“The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties.” 成功的道路并非一帆风顺。它充满了挑战和困难。 十八、脱险类 1.“What a narrow escape!” 真是死里逃生啊！ 2.“I would still feel a strong sense of fear whenever I looked back on the thrilling experience.” 每当回想起那次惊心动魄的经历，我仍然会感到一种强烈的恐惧感。 3.“It turned out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.” 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都总有出路。 4.“Never had I fallen into such a dangerous situation. The experience was deeply engraved in my mind and reminded me to respect the nature.” 我从未陷入过如此危险的境地。这段经历深深地刻在了我的脑海里，提醒我要尊重自然。 十九、哲理与思考类结尾 时间的流逝 Time, like a relentless river, carried away the memories of the past, leaving only faint traces on the shore of the present. 时间如一条无情的河流，带走了过去的记忆，只在当下的岸边留下淡淡的痕迹。 生活的真谛 In the end, life was not about reaching the summit, but about enjoying the journey and cherishing the moments along the way. 最终，生活的意义不在于达到顶峰，而在于享受旅程，珍惜沿途的每一刻。 选择与后果 Every choice we make, no matter how small, echoes through eternity and shapes the course of our destiny. 我们所做的每一个选择，无论多么微小，都会在永恒中回响，并塑造我们的命运轨迹。 Life is not about finding the perfect solution, but about learning to embrace the imperfections that make us human. 生活不在于找到完美的解决方案，而在于学会接受那些让我们成为人类的不完美之处。 即时演练 一、根据提示完成句子 1.【仿写】叙述作者的母亲很健忘，一家自驾旅游去祖父母所居住的地方，途中发生了一些有趣的事情。 故事开头：I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. 续写结尾：___________________________________________________________________________________ 2.【仿写】(2021·新课标I&II卷) 梗概：讲述双胞胎为了献给母亲一份美味早餐，自己动手做起饭餐，但是不幸的是他们连连失败的故事。 故事开头：The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. 续写结尾：___________________________________________________________________________________ 3.【仿写】 (2020·新课标卷) 梗概：善良的Meredith想帮助一个贫困家庭。孩子们想出一个主意--制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。 故事开头：The Meredith family lived in a small community…Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. 续写结尾：___________________________________________________________________________________ 4.【仿写】续写结尾：(历险脱困类) 普通结尾：She managed to survive the desert and find her way back to safety. 续写思路：生存下来→展现坚韧和智慧→相信坚韧和智慧能带来希望 主题升华后：_________________________________________________________________________________ 5.【仿写】续写结尾：(人与动物类) 普通结尾：The wounded bird he cared for finally flew back to the forest. 续写思路：鸟飞回森林→建立联系→相信人与动物的关爱可以跨越物种界限 主题升华后：________________________________________________________________________________ 6.【仿写】续写结尾：(家庭亲情类) 普通结尾：Our family trip to the mountains was full of laughter and bonding. 续写思路：愉快的时光→感受到亲情的力量→相信亲情的温暖和力量是无尽的 主题升华后：_________________________________________________________________________________ 7.【仿写】续写结尾：(个人成长类) 普通结尾：He felt a sense of accomplishment after finishing the marathon. 续写思路：完成马拉松→获得成就感→相信坚持和努力可以带来巨大的成就感和潜力 主题升华后：_________________________________________________________________________________ 8.【仿写】续写结尾：(助人为乐类) 普通结尾：After a long day of volunteering, I felt tired but happy to have made a difference. 续写思路：志愿服务→感到快乐→相信助人为乐带来内心的满足和幸福感 主题升华后：_________________________________________________________________________________ 二.根据短文内容，写出结尾句。 My friend John was always upset about some small things and couldn't keep calm.When he was asked about the reason, he often became annoyed. As a result, his classmates were tired of him. But his teachers were concerned about him and often talked with him face to face. However, all the efforts were in vain. One day, he had a bad cold. The teachers and students sent him to hospital without delay and attended him carefully. After he recovered, he was grateful to his teachers and classmates. From then on, he began getting along well with his classmates. ______________________________________________________________________________. 三、（2025·河北保定·期末）读后续写：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the beginning of a new year, and as the “smarty-pants” of my peers, I was placed in the best class, where most of the chatterboxes were. Sadly, I was not one of them. Most of the time, my mouth was zipped very tightly and I hardly had any friends who appreciated my silence. Thus, the incident that happened three months ago was both shocking and surprising. There was a speech competition three months later, and our school was to choose a representative from the best class of our level. The selection was left to our strict English teacher, Mrs Lee, whom I feared the most because she hardly ever smiled at us. Due to her high expectations, all of us presumed she would pick one of the biggest mouths in our class. Strangely though, she declared, “Jane shall be the one who will join in the competition.” There was silence in our usually-noisy class. My jaw dropped as I drew a deep breath awkwardly. Me? A speech competition? I rubbed my eyes to ensure I was not dreaming. “You have to write a speech today and show it to me tomorrow, Jane,” Mrs Lee instructed, thereby breaking the ice. The next day, I showed my speech to Mrs Lee. Reading it, she nodded in satisfaction and smiled at me for the first time. In the sweetest voice I had ever heard, she praised me, “Wonderful work! Why don’t you read it to the class?” Swallowing hard and taking a deep breath, I began reciting my essay with the worst pronunciation anyone had ever heard. The entire class burst into laughter as they shouted discouraging words, saying that they should have been in my place instead. Hot tears stung my eyes as I rushed back to my seat, weeping silently in embarrassment, while Mrs Lee criticized the class for such rude behaviour. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 After school, Mrs Lee called me to her office. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, the day of my competition arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 一、1.Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still the most wonderful mom in the world. 2.Mother kissed them and smiled dazzlingly “Oh dear, thank you my sweeties. What a big surprise!” 3.Holding the money, so moved was Bernard that he could hardly utter a word. Even a small act of kindness can make the world better. 4.Surviving the desert and finding her way back to safety showed her that resilience and intelligence can bring hope even in desperate situations. 5.As the bird he cared for flew back to the forest, he understood that compassion for animals could create bonds that transcend species boundaries. 6.The laughter and bonding during our family trip to the mountains reminded me that no matter where we are, the unbreakable bonds of family provide us with endless warmth and strength. 7.Crossing the marathon finish line filled him with a profound sense of accomplishment, showing him that perseverance and determination could unlock his true potential. 8.After a long day of volunteering, I felt tired but deeply fulfilled, knowing that acts of kindness bring profound joy and satisfaction to both the giver and receiver. 二、It’s love and care from the teachers and classmates that has changed him entirely. 三、读后续写 【解析】本篇书面表达以演讲为线索，讲述了作者在新学年开始时，不擅长与其他人交流，在一次演讲比赛中，老师鼓励作者参加并帮助她克服了自己的恐惧，纠正正确的发音，最终作者在比赛中赢得了冠军，作者由衷地感激老师的故事。 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“放学后，李老师把我叫到她的办公室。”可知，第一段可描写李老师帮助作者纠正发音，鼓励作者建立信心，帮助作者克服演讲的各种困难，经过艰苦努力，作者为演讲比赛做好充分准备的经过。 ②由第二段首句内容“最终，比赛的那一天到来了。”可知，第二段可描写作者站在台上演讲的过程，在老师的鼓励下作者由紧张到勇敢自信地演讲出来，最终赢得冠军的经过。 2.续写线索：老师纠正发音——帮助作者克服困难——艰苦努力，为演讲做准备——比赛开始紧张——老师鼓励自信地演讲——裁判宣布冠军——作者感激老师 【参考范文】   After school, Mrs Lee called me to her office. She gave me a few points on how to overcome stage fright. Patiently, she went through the speech with me several times until my completely bad pronunciation was “cured”. In the following three months, Mrs Lee helped me to overcome all the difficulties. With great effort, I finally mastered my speech and was well-prepared by the end of three months, as the competition approached day by day. Finally, the day of my competition arrived. I felt stressed and nervous again. Mrs Lee held my cold hands and spoke words of encouragement. I immediately gained confidence. When standing on the stage, I threw all my fears aside and began speaking with enthusiasm. When the contest was over, the judges declared me the champion and asked me to go up on stage to receive the award. The tears of joy welled up in my eyes. Smiling into the audience, I spotted Mrs Lee. It was all thanks to her. 3.词汇激活 行为类 ① 接近：approach/come near/draw near ② 站在：stand on/step onto ③ 宣布：declare/announce/proclaim 情绪类   ① 恐惧：fright/terror/scare/fear   ② 眼里充满泪水：the tears welled up in my eyes/tears flowed down my face 【点睛】[高分句型1] Patiently, she went through the speech with me several times until my completely bad pronunciation was “cured”.（运用了until引导的时间状语从句） [高分句型2] With great effort, I finally mastered my speech and was well-prepared by the end of three months, as the competition approached day by day.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句） [高分句型3] Smiling into the audience, I spotted Mrs Lee.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语） 4 / 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$