UNIT 6 Section 8 Writing Workshop(Word教参)-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（北师大版）

Section 8　 Writing Workshop 课时目标 1.了解范文的关键信息和结构。 2.判断电影评论的写作手法及写作风格，并归纳总结电影评论的语言特点及基本结构。 3.写一篇电影评论。 1．Beauty offers to replace her father and be trapped in the castle. 美女提出代替她父亲，被囚禁在城堡里。 ★trap vt.困住，使陷入危险中；诱捕；诱骗 n．陷阱 |用|法|感|知| ·(“交通”主题佳句)What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians are trapped in the traffic jams because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. 更糟糕的是，由于近年来汽车数量的不断增加，一些司机、骑车的人和行人受困于交通堵塞。 ·(“心理描写”佳句)By the time he realized he had walked into a trap, it would be too late for him to do anything about it. 等他意识到自己落入圈套时，那就做什么都太晚了。 [归纳点拨] (1)trap sb.into (doing) sth. 使某人陷入(做)某事的圈套； 诱骗某人(做)某事 be/get trapped in　　　　 　 被困在……中 (2)fall into a trap 落入陷阱/圈套 fall into the trap of doing sth. 落入……的圈套 set/lay a trap for 为……设圈套 |应|用|融|会| (1)单句语法填空 ①He felt he had been trapped into accepting (accept) the terms of the contract. ②Don't fall into the trap of investing all your money in one place. ③The old man was trapped in the burning house at that moment. (2)替换加黑词汇 ④The thought of being stuck in the car with the possibility of car trouble along the way is enough to make me consider staying home. trapped/caught 2．In one vivid scene, Beauty looks in the mirror and her face is transformed into the Beast's. 在一个生动的场景中，美女看着镜子，她的脸变成了野兽的脸。 ★transform vt.使转化，使改观 |用|法|感|知| ·(“环境保护”主题佳句)With more and more trees planted, the local people have succeeded in transforming the bare hill into a green one. 随着越来越多的树木被种植，当地人成功地把光秃秃的山变成了绿油油的山。 ·(“社会发展”主题佳句)The way we communicate has undergone a dramatic transformation in the past decade. 在过去的十年里，我们的沟通方式发生了巨大的变化。 [归纳点拨] (1)transform ...(from ...) into ... 把……(从……)变成…… (2)transformation n. 改变 transformation from sth. to/into sth. 从……到……的转变 |应|用|融|会| (单句语法填空) ①Vigorous development of automobile industry has transformed that country from a farm－based society into an industrial power. ②The place has been transformed from a quiet farming village into a busy city in the past years. ③The way in which we work has undergone a complete transformation (transform) in the past decade. ■写作项目——Write a film review　 本单元的写作任务是写一篇电影评论，属于夹叙夹议的议论文。影评一般包括对影片的背景、故事梗概、观众印象最深的部分等的介绍以及对影片的评价。叙述电影情节时要运用生动形象的语言，更要简洁流畅。评论电影时要观点鲜明，条理清晰。 由教材学写作 一、学文体架构 阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下： 二、学要点构思 写影评时要注意紧扣“电影”与“评论”两点。评论可以从多方面进行，但一篇评论的中心点只能有一个，要注意点面结合。对要评论的电影先做一个总体介绍，如电影的导演、主要演员、主要情节等，这是“面”的介绍；然后结合某一个情节、某一段对话或者某一个场面进行具体分析，这是“点”的评论。如课文开篇就点明了《美女与野兽》这部电影的导演、参演人员等背景信息，为后文进一步介绍这部电影做铺垫。第三段就处理主题的方式以及一些巧妙的特效作了具体介绍，并举例进行说明，为读者描绘了一幅美丽的电影场景，让读者在欣赏的过程中也学到了一些电影知识。 三、学靓丽表达 叙述电影情节时，经常使用一些形容词或动词，使得画面感很强，让人仿佛身临其境。如第一段第二句直接用is代替acts，语言表达更形象生动，同时也刻画出演员在表现美女和野兽时的传神表演。第二段使用abnormal一词刻画出野兽的外在特点，与下文点明他曾是一位英俊的男子形成对比。第三段使用clever一词表达了在使用特效方面的独到之处。 [提能训练]　(完成句子) ①My parents thought it_was_abnormal_for_a_boy to be interested in ballet. 我的父母认为一个男孩喜欢芭蕾是不正常的。 ②In a word, this is a_clever_approach to a common problem. 总之，这是一个解决常见问题的妙方。 具体写作指导 Write a film review——写一篇电影评论 第一步：构思谋篇 Tense Simple present tense Person First and third person Main points Part 1：Give basic information about the film(the film's name, film's type, director, lead actor, release time, story background, etc.)． Part 2: Provide information about the storyline and give your opinion of the film. Part 3: Express your comment, or recommend the film to readers. 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　如何简要介绍电影？ ①It is a comedy－drama adventure film, adapted_from_a_novel of the same name. 它是一部喜剧冒险电影，改编自一本同名小说。 ②The film is_set_in the remote deserts of western China. 这部电影的背景是中国西部遥远的沙漠。 第二部分　如何叙述电影情节？ ①It tells_a_story_concerned_with a big, fat panda that can perform martial arts. 它讲述了一只可以表演武术的胖胖的大熊猫的故事。 ②The movie is about a_captain_who_completed one of the most incredible emergency landings in China's civil aviation history. 这部电影讲述的是一位机长完成了中国民航史上最不可思议的紧急降落之一。 ③The_theme_of_the_film_is the main character's growth story of fighting against his own destiny.电影的主题是主角与自己的命运相抗争的成长故事。 第三部分　如何对电影作出评论或推荐？ ①It is a great animated film.It is elegantly drawn and the action sequences are_packed_with_energy.Teenagers, even adults, like watching it. 它是一部极棒的动画电影，它的画面优雅，动作充满了活力。青少年，甚至是成年人都喜欢看。 ②As_far_as_I'm_concerned,_it is Rowan Atkinson's good performances that impress people most.So I hope you_can_enjoy_this_film some day in the future.I bet you'll love it. 就我而言，给人印象最深刻的是罗温·艾金森的精彩表演。所以我希望你将来有一天能喜欢这部电影。我打赌你一定会喜欢的。 [针对练笔] 英语课上，老师让大家观看电影《阿甘正传》(Forrest Gump)并进行评论。请你根据提示完善讨论稿，并作为小组代表发言。 Forrest Gump is one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me. Forrest Gump is an American film, ①which_is_adapted_from_the_novel_ (它是根据小说改编的) written by Winston Groom.Tom Hanks stars in the film.Forrest Gump，the main character，was unfortunately ②born_with_a_lower_IQ (天生智商较低), but he is an open－minded person with strong determination.It is unbelievable that ③he_has_achieved_great_success_at_last (他最终取得了巨大的成功)．Not only is he a football star, but he is also a war hero and later a millionaire. The film is filled with a tender feeling and kindness.What's more, it conveys a message that ④we_should_take_a_positive_attitude_towards_life (我们应该以积极的态度对待生活)．No matter what difficulty we meet in life, ⑤we_should_not_give_up (我们不应该放弃)．Besides, the use of the language is striking, which also makes the film a success. 写作素材储备 (一)写作常用句式 1．影片概述 ①The main characters are ... ②The film tells us a real story. ③The film ...directed by ...is a story about ... ④The story takes place in ... ⑤The film ...is about ... ⑥The film ...is set in ... ⑦The film is a love (romantic/moving) story. 2．正面的评价 ①This is a very touching film/a must－see. ② ...gives an amazing performance in the film. ③My favourite part of the film is ... ④Even with these small problems, the film is still a great film, and I really enjoy it! ⑤People like the film not just because ...but also because ... ⑥One of the keys to the film's success is ... 3．负面的评价 ①However, many people have complained that the film is too ... ②Another common complaint is that the film ... ③I'm disappointed with the film because ... (二)主题语段 1．电影介绍 Journey to the West is a classic Chinese animated film. It tells the legendary story of Sun Wukong and others protecting the Tang Monk's journey to the West. Full of humor and excitement, it showcases the charm of traditional Chinese culture. 《西游记》是一部中国经典动画电影。它讲述了孙悟空等人保护唐僧去西天取经的传奇故事。这部影片充满了幽默、惊险(的情节)，展现了中国传统文化的魅力。 2．电影评价及推荐 Life Is Beautiful is a classic that combines comedy and tragedy. It portrays the cruelty of war and the glory of humanity from a unique perspective, full of love and hope. Highly recommended! 《美丽人生》是一部融合了喜剧和悲剧元素的经典之作。它以独特的视角描绘了战争的残酷与人性的光辉，充满了爱与希望。强烈推荐大家观看！ [课时检测]　　　　　　　　　(标题目配有教师讲评课件) Ⅰ.靓表达升级(8分) 1．The live concert was very successful and the audience was unwilling to leave for a long time.(so ... that ...句式) →The_live_concert_was_so_successful_that_the_audience_was_unwilling_to_leave_for_a_long_time. 2．Moreover, listening to some soft music relaxes your mood and gives you a new start.(强调谓语动词) →Moreover,_listening_to_some_soft_music_does_relax_your_mood_and_give_you_a_new_start. 3．Also, while you are watching the film you'll learn a lot of words and phrases for talking about social networks and computers.(状语从句的省略) →Also,_while_watching_the_film_you'll_learn_a_lot_of_words_and_phrases_for_talking_about_social_networks_and_computers. 4．We'll sit in the front of the hall in order to hear better.(so that ...句式) →We'll_sit_in_the_front_of_the_hall_so_that_we_can_hear_better. Ⅱ.微语境写作(16分) 1．A classic movie which was called The Shawshank Redemption made/left_a_deep_ impression_on_me (给我留下了深刻印象)． 2．The Silk Road, dating_back_to_the_Han_Dynasty (追溯到汉代), was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world. 3．The movie is_directed_by (由……导演) James Cameron, who is famous for the film Titanic. 4．The film is not_just_a_love_story_but_also_an_educational_film (不仅仅是一个爱情故事，更是一部具有教育意义的影片)． 5．Many famous old artists all_perform_wonderfully (都表演得很精彩)． 6．It_is_worthwhile_to_watch/watching (值得一看) the TV play series. 7．The animated film, Uproar in Heaven, is_adapted_from_the_classical_Chinese_novel_ called_Journey_to_the_West (改编自中国古典小说《西游记》), which is set in the Tang Dynasty, about 1,400 years ago. 8．The film is a_perfect_combination_of (……的完美结合) traditional Chinese elements and creative artistic design, and you will find it strikingly beautiful and extremely imaginative as well. Ⅲ.应用文写作(15分)() 假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Gary观看了热映的中国动画电影《哪吒2》，大受震撼。得知你也观看了该电影，为此发邮件给你，想了解你对该电影的看法。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1．你对该电影的看法； 2．谈谈该电影最打动你的部分(如情节、特效、音乐等)。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇：特效special effects Dear Gary， ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 参考范文： Dear Gary， I'm delighted to hear from you and know that you've watched Ne Zha 2. I'm more than glad to share my views on this remarkable animated film with you. As a big fan, I consider the film to be an absolute masterpiece. It not only showcases the rich cultural heritage of China but also presents a heartwarming story that resonates with audience of all ages. What strikes me most is its plot. When Ne Zha faces new challenges, his growth and inner struggles are vividly depicted. He constantly breaks through himself and upholds justice, and his unbending spirit is truly moving. In short, the film shows us the unlimited potential of Chinese animation. I hope you'll have the chance to watch more outstanding Chinese movies in the future! Yours， Li Hua Ⅳ.读后续写(25分)() 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I have already forgotten the name of that old lady.Yet I still remember the matter as if it happened yesterday.It is she who teaches me a lesson in forgiveness. It happened when I was twelve years old.That summer holiday, I planned to earn some pocket money by delivering the newspaper in our neighbourhood.And she was a customer on my paper route.She was a kind lady and every time I gave her the paper, she would give me some cookies. On a mindless Saturday afternoon, a friend and I were throwing rocks onto the roof of the old lady's house from a quiet spot in her backyard.The purpose of our play was to observe how the rocks changed to missiles as they rolled to the roof's edge and shot out into the yard like comets falling from the sky. I found myself a perfectly smooth rock and sent it for a ride.The stone was too smooth, however, so it slipped from my hand as I let it go.Seeing it headed straight for a small window on the old lady's back porch (门廊), we stood there, numb with fear.The sound of broken glass awoke us from the fear and the next second, we ran away from the old lady's yard faster than any of our missiles flowing off her roof. After coming back home, I was so scared of getting caught that I dared not go out that whole afternoon.I stayed at home, glancing at my front yard nervously from time to time, feeling that lady would knock at our door at any time.But until I went to bed，what I was afraid didn't happen.Lying in bed, I wondered whether she didn't discover the broken window or she didn't discover who had done it.That was a sleepless night. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 The next morning, I delivered the paper to her as usual._______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ After three weeks, I earned seven dollars and put them in an envelope.___________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： The next morning, I delivered the paper to her as usual.On the way to her home, so nervous was I that I could feel my heart pounding in my chest.But to my surprise, I saw the broken glass had been repaired and she didn't mention it.When I handed her the paper, she still greeted me and gave me some cookies as usual.Holding these cookies in my hand, a feeling of guilt swept over me and I determined that I would save my paper delivery money to make up for the broken window. After three weeks, I earned seven dollars and put them in an envelope.I secretly put it through the letter box in her door.After doing this, I suddenly felt in relief.The next day, I handed the old lady her paper and thanked her for the bag of cookies.When I opened the bag, I was stunned.Inside were the seven dollars and a short note that said, “I'm proud of you.” She knew it was me.But instead of blaming and punishing me, she chose to forgive me.Even so many years later, she is still deeply engraved in my mind, because she taught me a valuable lesson in my life. 137 / 137 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$