专题 09 读后续写如何写好文章的开头（写作专练） 英语高考复习通用版

专题 09 如何写好文章的开头 目录 01句式特点---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------1 02从情绪上分类---------------------------------------------------------------------------------1 03从句式上归纳---------------------------------------------------------------------------------2 04即时演练---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------4 开头特点 一篇好的文章有一个好的开头是非常重要的。它能让阅卷老师眼前一亮打出的高分。As the saying goes," well begun is half done !"良好的开始就是成功的一半！可见，写出一个引人入胜的开头是多么的重要。读后续写的开头有其独特的特点，续写的开头要和给出的首句吻合，要进行无缝隙对接，在这个前提下我们采用恰当的手段写出文章的开头。根据具体情况，常用的开头有以下方式。 从情绪上分类 一、情感渲染类 Tom woke up and found many people standing around him . When he was told what John had done for him , tears started welling up in his eyes and rolling down his cheeks.当他被告知约翰对他的所做作为，泪水夺眶而出，顺着脸颊流下。 【点评】该句利用眼泪的动作描写，反映人物的悲伤情绪，非常生动形象。 二、环境烘托类 We drove through several states and saw lots of great signs along the way.I looked out of the car window,winding rivers,lofty mountains,sunny beaches,deep valleys, holding me entirely in their fascination. 【点评】这里运用了“视觉+环境+拟人”的描写手法，赋予无生命的景物以感情，语言生动，感染力强。 三、悬念设置类 1.The letter in sb's hand felt like a ticking time bomb, its contents unknown but surely holding the power to change everything. （某人手中的信就像一颗定时炸弹，其内容虽未知，但肯定有改变一切的力量。） 2.The sudden silence that filled the air after the [event] was more deafening than any noise, leaving sb on edge, waiting for the next thing to happen. （[事件]之后突然充斥在空气中的寂静比任何噪音都更震耳欲聋，让某人紧张不安，等待着下一件事的发生。） 四、回忆关联类 1.As sb looked at the [object or scene], memories of that fateful day came flooding back, as vivid as if they had happened just yesterday. （当某人看着[物体或场景]时，那个决定性日子的记忆如潮水般涌回，就像它们昨天才发生一样清晰。） 2.The familiar smell of [scent] transported sb back to his/her childhood, triggering a flood of emotions and long - forgotten memories. （[气味]那熟悉的味道将某人带回了童年，引发了大量的情感和被遗忘已久的记忆。） 从句式上归纳 几种常见的开头方式 一、以非谓语动词(短语)、with复合结构或独立主格结构开头 1.(2025·全国II卷)In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. Standing up, I felt a mix of nervousness and excitement. 【点评】现在分词短语作伴随状语，人物的画面感跃然纸上。 2.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.With excited tears in my eyes, I thanked him again, adding that it was he who let me get a taste for writing. 【点评】with复合结构和现在分词短语表示伴随,增加了文章表达的简洁性和语言表达的丰富性。 3.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.Dropping his head, he was in low spirits. 【点评】开头用了分词充当时间状语,不仅使行文简洁,而且突出动作,惟妙惟肖。 二、以名词性从句、状语从句或定语从句等从句开头 1.(2025·全国I卷)I realized it was me who was at fault. I had been so focused on keeping the party under control that I failed to consider how important Toby was to my brother during this difficult time. 【点评】用状语从句和宾语从句，让内容表达紧凑，一个句子既表达了自己当时的状态，又表明了事情的原因。 2.(2021·浙江高考·1月卷)I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.How I wished I had not acted so foolishly, making myself a laughing stock of my family! 【点评】由该段首句内容“我被困了五六分钟,但感觉要长得多。”可知,该段开始可描写作者是多么后悔把头插入南瓜中,此处用了感叹句,且wished后加了宾语从句。 3.(2021·浙江高考·1月卷)I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My brother came up with an idea that he could cut the pumpkin with a knife. 【点评】该句idea后面that引导同位语从句,对idea进行解析,同位语使文章更加紧凑,同时增加了文章表达的高级性。 三、以形容词/副词(短语)开头 1. (2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.  【点评】此处是形容词作状语的结构，作了后面句子的伴随状语。 2.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷) A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. Unexpectedly, I beat a lot of participants and won the first prize. 【点评】根据该段首句内容“几个星期后,当我几乎忘记比赛的时候,传来了消息。”可知,开始可以写作者得知这个消息时的感受,可以写兴奋、吃惊或意外,本句用了副词unexpectedly描述当时的意外的心情。 3.(2021·浙江高考·6月卷)I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished. Excited and overjoyed, I rushed into my room and lay in bed thinking about how to spend the money. 【点评】由该段首句内容“我很惊讶,我爸爸允许我按照我的意愿使用这笔钱。”可知,本段可描写作者兴奋的心情,开始用excited and overjoyed准确地描写了作者的这种心情。 四、以倒装句、强调句等句型开头 1.(2022·浙江高考·6月卷)As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile.Nervous as I felt, I did my utmost to keep myself calm and hand out the delicately-wrapped meal to those in need, with my hands trembling. 【点评】这里“Nervous as I felt”用了倒装句,提高了文章表达的质量。 2.(2021·浙江高考·1月卷)That video was posted the day before Halloween. It was my brother who did that for amusement. 【点评】由该段首句内容“这段视频是在万圣节前一天发布的。”可知,该段续写开始部分可以补充说明谁发的,这里用了强调句,突出发视频之人。 五、以介词短语开头 When the girl was walking in the garden , a snake appeared suddenly.At the sight of the snake, she screamed at the top of her voice. 一看到蛇，她就以最大的声音尖叫起来。 【点评】句中at the sight of 意为“一看到... ”，在句中作时间状语，用在此处，能完美地呼应段首句中的“suddenly突然”，与前一句衔接自然生动。 六、以时间状语开头 1.I didn’t leave the injured dog.And then the inner voice whispered to me, “go all out to save the poor creature.” 就在那时/那个时刻，我内心有个声音低声说道“竭尽全力帮助这个可怜的小生灵吧。” 【点评】此处加上时间状语then 使得句子与所给段首句的衔接更加自然，描写更加生动。 2.At that moment, I can’t help but shed tears of gratitude. 在那个时刻，我唯有流下感激的泪水。 【点评】时间状语 at that moment 不仅起到衔接过渡的作用，还可以让文章更加生动自然。 七、以对话或独白开头 1.Then appeared a rescue boat with a pole attached to it.“Don’t worry, the rescue boat is on the way.” one of the men shouted. 【点评】此处借鉴一考生的文章，这里的语言描写使得文章画面感很强，与段首句完美衔接，符合故事发展的逻辑，反映了见义勇为者看到希望时的兴奋。 2.The car abruptly stopped in front of him. “Get into the car.” Paul shouted at Mac. 【点评】该句简洁明了，刻画了一幅生动的画面即大难临头，恰逢有人拔刀相助的快意，生动形象，情节紧凑。 八、以连词开头 My mother had been preparing the dinner all the morning.Although she was kind of tired , she felt very excited , expecting us to come back. 【点评】此处用连词“尽管”与段首句妈妈忙了一早上进行呼应，更反衬出妈妈为了孩子回家不辞辛劳。 即时演练 根据汉语意思完成句子 Para.1 It’s a perfect family summer seaside holiday. , some white clouds floated across the blue sky. Para.1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. , I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Para.1 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. , an absolute darkness rules the forest. Para.1 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. , Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her cheeks. Para.1 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. , she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. Para.1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I might hurt the lovely small creature, I let out a cry to stop my horse. Para.1 However, he could see nothing but a blank wall of another building. , Leo couldn’t believe his eyes. Para.1 The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. she might be rejected again, she felt her throat tighten standing among a crowd of students. Para.1 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. , Jane had to stay alone for another night. Para.1 “Let’s get out here, Paula!” screamed Krin. , with his heart throbbing violently, Krin sprinted the door immediately. Para.1 “Let’s get out here, Paula!” screamed Krin. , he stepped down the stairs as fast as possible. Para.1 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. , Mac dashed towards the car. Para.1 “Let’s get out here, Paula!” screamed Krin. , the creak repeated again and again in the small room. Para.1 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. “ ” Paul shouted at Mac. 【答案】 Para.1 It’s a perfect family summer seaside holiday. Occasionally, some white clouds floated across the blue sky. Para.1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Para.1 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. Soon, an absolute darkness rules the forest. Para.1 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her cheeks. Para.1 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. Para.1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically/instinctively let out a cry to stop my horse. Para.1 However, he could see nothing but a blank wall of another building. Stunned and paralyzed, Leo couldn’t believe his eyes. Para.1 The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. Worried that she might be rejected again, she felt her throat tighten standing among a crowd of students. Para.1 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed/ desperate, Jane had to stay alone for another night. Para.1 “Let’s get out here, Paula!” screamed Krin. Grabbing Paula’s hand, with his heart throbbing violently, Krin sprinted the door immediately. Para.1 “Let’s get out here, Paula!” screamed Krin. With the heart beating wildly, he stepped down the stairs as fast as possible. Para.1 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Without the slightest hesitation, Mac dashed towards the car. Para.1 “Let’s get out here, Paula!” screamed Krin. Just as Krin finished the words, the creak repeated again and again in the small room. 4 / 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$