Unit 1 Section 5 Writing（写作优质课）-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册同步优质课件（沪教版2024）

上 沪教八年上 Unit 1 Look it up Section 5 Writing 写作优质课 Content While -Writing Homework Lead in Pre-Writing Read for Writing By the end of the lesson, I will be able to... 1 2 3 4 learn to structure an encyclopaedia entry properly. collect and organize factual information about a notable person. write an encyclopaedia entry using facts, not opinions. apply target words and expressions from the unit in writing. Learning objectives Lead in Writing an encyclopaedia entry Writing We are calling for articles about famous people around the world. Write an encyclopaedia entry and send it to us. Online Encyclopaedia for Teens Pre- writing Basic information year of birth and death Main achievements hybrid rice research Awards and titles Medal of the Republic Tip Encyclopaedia entries should contain facts in stead of opinions. Yuan Longping 1 Wang Yao drew a mind map before she wrote an encyclopaedia entry about a scientist she admires. Look at the mind map and label the parts of the entry. Pre-writing Basic information year of birth and death Main achievements hybrid rice research Awards and titles Medal of the Republic Writing 2 Who do you admire? Find information about this person and write an encyclopaedia entry. Step1 Plan Draw your own mind map. Step 2 Write Write an encyclopaedia entry about the person you admire. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Basic information year of birth and death Main achievements Awards and titles Qian Xueseng Writing Body Ending Beginning 1.Basic information (Name, identity...) 2.Lifetime Important story 3.Achievements Evaluation Structure 引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平，教育，职业等 介绍人物主要经历---挑比较重要的事迹进行描写，贡献或成就等 人物成就以及评价---人格，贡献，闪光点 注意：运用正确的时态。评价人物等常用 ，而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、 经历、事迹时常用 ____________ 一般现在时 一般过去时 人物介绍的写作要点可分为三部分： Writing 姓名 钱学森 出生日期 1911 年 12 月 11 日 出生地 上海 经历 国立交通大学（National Chiao Tung University）毕业；1935 年前往美国深造；1955 年克服困难，回到中国 其他 发展中国航空航天工业；中国航天之父（Father of Chinese Aerospace） 评价 …… 【写作指导】 1. 审题 本篇书面表达要求介绍科学家钱学森。 主题：人物类介绍 体裁：an encyclopaedia entry 时态：以一般过去时为主 人称：以第三人称为主 行文布局 第一段：开头。引入写作主题，说明自己最喜欢的科学家是钱学森，总体介绍。 第二段：主体。具体介绍科学家钱学森的生平经历及成就 第三段：结尾。给出评价 Step 1 审题 时态: V-ed 人称: He him his 文体: an encyclopaedia entry 1. 开头简介： one of the greatest/most famous .... his great achievement in... 2.  生平 ： was born on(某天) showed great interest/intelligence in... graduated from....(从...毕业) showed great perseverance 3.  成就 ： gained得到 a lot of experience/prizes. made great contributions 4. 评价/看法： is considered to被认为 dedication ... admirable such ...that ... Step 2 列要点 Step 3 连框架(First of all, Besideds, In addition...) When he was a child .... As he grew older... After he graduated Step 4 加细节,加梯度，查错误 每个点适当扩充 A great scientist --Qian Xuesen Among the great scientists, I like Qian Xuesen best. He is well-known for his great achievement in China's aerospace industry. He was born on December 11, 1911 in Shanghai. As he grew older, he showed great intelligence in Maths. After he graduated from National Chiao Tung University, he went to America for further education in 1935. Qian Xuesen returned to China in 1955 after overcoming lots of difficulties. Hard work paid off. He made great/significant contributions to China’s aerospace industry, and was known as the “Father of Chinese Aerospace”. Qian Xuesen is such a great scientist that everyone in China will not forget him. His perseverance毅力and dedication奉献 make him a role model for many young people. We should learn from him. Writing Writing Summary 出生于：_____________ 表现出极大的兴趣：____________ 在……方面有天赋：_______________ be born in show great interest in be talented in... 1.引出人物：--- 简单介绍人物背景 (出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣) 2.介绍人物主要经历 做…工作：____________ 把…奉献给…：___________________ 起重要作用：_______________ 坚定的决心___ _______________ 在…获得巨大的成功：___________________ 下定决心做某事：_____________________ devote oneself to... play a important role in strong will achieve great success in... make up one’s mind to do work as 3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要词汇 做出巨大贡献：________________________ _作为……而闻名：__________________ 树立好榜样：_________________ 值得我们尊重：_________________________________ make great contributions to be known/famous as set a good example deserve our respect 1.He/She put his/her heart into …and made great contributions to… 他/她全心全意投入…, 并为…做出了巨大贡献… 2.As a great...，he/she will be remembered by us forever. 作为一个伟大的……，他/她将被我们永远铭记。 3.Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重 Writing 下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于中国科学家屠呦呦的介绍，请你根据提示，用英语写一段文章介绍屠呦呦 。 基本信息：中国科学家，1930 年生于浙江宁波，至今在世 。 成长背景：早年对中医药和化学极感兴趣。一生致力于抗疟疾药物研究 。 主要成就：发现青蒿素（artemisinin ），有效治疗全球疟疾患者，让中医药获国际认可 。 荣誉与影响：获 “共和国勋章”（the Medal of the Republic ），被誉为中医药抗疟研究先驱 。 Practice Practice Tu Youyou is a remarkable medical scientist in China. She was born in 1930. When young, she was deeply interested in traditional Chinese medicine and chemistry. For decades, she focused on researching antimalarial drugs. Finally, she discovered artemisinin. This discovery can effectively treat malaria patients all over the world and helps traditional Chinese medicine get more international attention. Tu Youyou has won the Medal of the Republic. She is a great pioneer in using traditional Chinese medicine for antimalarial research. Her work saves millions of lives and inspires more people to explore traditional Chinese medicine.（约130词 ） Practice Thanks! $$