Module 1 Unit 3 Healthy or unhealthy（写作突破专项训练）英语牛津上海版三起六年级上册

Unit3对比法写保持健康的建议 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 Alice: What did you have for breakfast this morning, Joe? Joe: I had two hamburgers and some cola. I had these for breakfast yesterday too.（Joe的饮食：高油高糖——不健康） Alice: That’s not healthy. You should drink some milk and eat some fruit. （饮食点评和健康饮食建议） Joe: But I love hamburgers. Alice: You can have a little meat, but not too much. What about you, Jill? （饮食建议） Jill: I didn’t have breakfast this morning. I have lunch and dinner every day, but not breakfast. （Jill的饮食：不吃早饭——不健康） Alice: Breakfast is very important. We should have breakfast every day. （饮食点评和健康饮食建议） Jill: What did you have for breakfast? Alice: I had some bread and milk. I also had an egg and an apple. （Alice的饮食：营养均衡——健康） 02 写作方法指引-对比法 Alice健康饮食观念者: some bread and milk + an egg and an apple Joe习惯吃汉堡可乐的 “偏爱者” : two hamburgers + some cola（高油高糖：不健康） Jill长期不吃早餐的 “忽视者”: no breakfast （不吃早饭：不健康） Alice的饮食建议 ─ To Jill： have breakfast every day ─To Joe：drink milk、eat fruit、a little meat 03写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 Breakfast is very important to us. （评价饮食） I had some bread and milk this morning. I also had an egg and an apple. （健康的饮食） Joe had two hamburgers and some cola. That is not healthy. （高油高糖——不健康的饮食） He should drink some milk and eat some fruit. （健康饮食的建议） Jill did not have breakfast this morning. （不吃早饭——不健康） That is not good. 01 基础知识精讲-句型 1.不健康的饮食 参考单词： unhealthy不健康；fat 肥胖; candy 糖果; hamburgers 汉堡；ice cream 冰淇淋；chocolate 巧克力；cola 可乐； 参考词组： drink a lot of cola 喝很多可乐；eat a little sweet food 吃一些甜食 参考句型： 1. What did you have for breakfast this morning? 2. That’s not healthy. 3. You can have a little meat, but not too much. 2.健康的饮食 参考单词： healthy 健康；strong 强壮；eggs 鸡蛋；milk 牛奶；fruit 水果；fish 鱼；vegetables 蔬菜；chicken 鸡肉; bread 面包; rice 米饭; noodles面条 参考词组： play sport 做运动 参考句型： 1. Breakfast is very important to us. 2. You should drink some milk and eat some fruit. 3. We should have breakfast every day. 02 基础知识精讲-语法 “a lot of”、“a little”和“a few”的区别: 1. a lot of 含义：表示大量的、许多的，既可以修饰可数名词复数形式，也可以修饰不可数名词。 用法示例： 可数名词复数：I have a lot of books to read.（我有很多书要读。） 不可数名词：There is a lot of water in the bottle.（瓶子里有很多水。） 2. a little 含义：表示少量的、稍微的，只能修饰不可数名词。 用法示例： 不可数名词：I only have a little money left.（我只剩下一点钱了。） 3. a few 含义：表示少数的、几个的，只能修饰可数名词复数形式。 用法示例： 可数名词复数：I saw a few birds flying in the sky.（我看到几只鸟在天空中飞翔。） 对比与总结： 修饰对象：“a lot of”可以修饰可数名词复数和不可数名词；“a little”只能修饰不可数名词；“a few”只能修饰可数名词复数。 数量意义：“a lot of”表示大量；“a little”和“a few”都表示少量，但前者用于不可数名词，后者用于可数名词。 提分练 一、选择题 ( ) 1. Tim and Judy eat ______ fruit and vegetables. They are healthy. A. a lot of B. a little C. a few ( ) 2. They only eat ______ sweet food on Children’s Day A. a lot of B. a little C. a few ( ) 3. Lily and Bob eat ______ candy. They are unhealthy. A. a lot of B. a little C. a few 二、判断题，正确的打√，错误的打× 1.（ ）We bought a few milk and a lot of apples. 2.（ ）There are a few books on the desk, and a lot of people are reading them. 3.（ ）A little birds are singing in the tree. 参考解析 一、选择题 1. 答案：A 解析：文中提到 “Tim and Judy eat a lot of fruit and vegetables.” ，“fruit and vegetables” 是不可数名词（这里把水果和蔬菜整体看，视为不可数概念 ）或可数名词复数，“a lot of” 可修饰可数名词复数和不可数名词，“a little” 修饰不可数名词，“a few” 修饰可数名词复数，这里符合 “a lot of” 用法，选 A。 2. 答案：B 解析：文中 “They eat a little sweet food.” ，“sweet food” 是不可数名词，“a little” 修饰不可数名词，“a lot of” 不符合 “a little” 体现的少量意思，“a few” 修饰可数名词复数，所以选 B。 3. 答案：A 解析：文中 “Lily and Bob eat a lot of candy” ，“candy” 是可数名词复数（这里指各类糖果 ）或不可数名词（指糖果整体 ），“a lot of” 可修饰，“a little” 修饰不可数名词但体现少量，不符合语境，“a few” 修饰可数名词复数但语义上 “a lot of” 更契合 “吃很多糖果”，选 A。 二、判断题 1.（ × ）We bought a few milk and a lot of apples. 解析：milk 是不可数名词，不能用 “a few” 修饰，应是 “a little /a lot of milk” ，故错误 。 2.（ √ ）There are a few books on the desk, and a lot of people are reading them. 解析：books 是可数名词复数，“a few” 修饰正确；“a lot of” 修饰 people（可数名词复数 ）正确，语义 “桌上有几本书，很多人在读” 合理，故正确 。 3.（ × ）A little birds are singing in the tree. 解析：birds 是可数名词复数，“a little” 修饰不可数名词，应是 “a few birds” ，故错误 。 模拟写作提升1 请根据下图中Healthy Breakfast（左图主人公为Sam）和Unhealthy Breakfast（右图主人公为Mike）写一篇作文 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考词组： oatmeal 燕麦片；feel good 感觉良好；study hard 努力学习；bacon burger 培根汉堡；feel tired看电视；sleep in class 上课睡觉；have energy 得到能量 参考句型： It makes sb. feel + 形容词 范文1： A good breakfast is important. （评价饮食）Mike and I have different breakfasts. I get up early. I eat oatmeal with a little milk and a few blueberries. I drink green tea，too.（牛奶和水果——健康的饮食） It makes me feel good. I can study hard in class.​ Mike is always late. He eats a bacon burger and drinks cola. （汉堡可乐——不健康的饮食） It makes Mike feel tired in the morning. He always sleeps in class. I tell him: "Eat eggs or bread. You will have energy."（健康饮食的建议） 模拟写作提升2 你是Amy, 每天晚上你吃胡萝卜、水果、面包和鸡蛋，你的同班同学Alice每天早上吃糖和炸鸡，请你点评一下什么是健康饮食，并给出建议。 要求: 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考词组： make me strong 让我变得强壮; fried chicken 炸鸡; look tired 看上去疲惫；junk food 垃圾食品 参考句型： 1. Unhealthy food has much fat and sugar. 2. It’s +形容词+for + sb. 范文2： Dinner is very important. （评价饮食） I eat apples, carrots and eggs for dinner. They make me strong. （水果、蔬菜和鸡蛋——健康的饮食） But my friend Alice often eats fried chicken and candy. She looks tired.​ （糖和炸鸡——不健康的饮食） Unhealthy food has much fat and sugar. It's bad for us. （评价饮食）I tell Alice: "Eat more fruits and veggies. Have junk food sometimes, not always." （给出建议）Let's keep healthy! 2024学年沪教牛津版Unit 3单元测试作文题（真题作文） 题目：以Healthy and unhealthy food 为作文题目,写一篇英语作文. 要求： 1.句子通顺，思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于六句。 参考单词&词组： what to eat; have the habit to do sth.; love the taste; good choice of sth. 参考句型： 1. They are really delicious but I don't think they are healthy if we eat too many. 2. People can be fat and unhealthy if they don't eat fruits or vegetables. 范文3 Healthy and unhealthy food What to eat for breakfast is important. （评价饮食） I like eating hamburgers and I can eat three of them a week. They are really delicious but I don't think they are healthy if we eat too many. （汉堡——不健康的饮食）People can be fat and unhealthy if they don't eat fruits or vegetables. They need to eat less. （给出建议） I have the habit to drink milk every day. I love the taste and I like hot milk. Milk is healthy for children to eat. （牛奶——不健康的饮食） Heath is important to us. 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