专题 08 读后续写如何实现句式升级（写作专练） 英语高考复习通用版

专题 08 如何实现句式升级 目录 01句式特点---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------1 02升级技巧指导---------------------------------------------------------------------------------1 03常用句式归纳---------------------------------------------------------------------------------3 几种常见的提升句式的方法------------------------------------------------------------------3 几种常见表达情绪的句式---------------------------------------------------------------------7 04即时演练--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------13 句式特点 1．读后续写和应用文的句式的区别 应用文为了使内容表达的更准确，采用高级词汇和高级句式可根据自己的英语水平展现自己的实力。读后续写最重要的特征之一是：续写的故事和前文要有高度的契合度，这个契合度不仅指内容，还有语言风格的契合度，这样以来，续写故事一定要遵从前文的语言风格，不能你认为什么句式高级就用什么。要关注前文，承接前文的语言句式风格，所以我们准备充分的句式种类，在成文时，我们要审时度势，信手拈来，要与前文进行自然流畅的语言衔接。 2.句式多样的重要性 在读后续写中使用花样的句式增加语言亮点,是提高表达档次、提高续写得分的有效途径。 如果多样句式使用得当, 可以使句子长短结合, 错落有致, 为文章增分。 我们在使用时一定要注意灵活多变, 使用得体, 以防出现语法错误和画蛇添足的现象。 升级技巧指导 高级句式1：Doing ...，主语＋谓语…… doing作状语，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主谓关系；有时可以在doing前加before, after, while等。 ①He was trembling in a blanket and he said, “I'm cold.” →Trembling in a blanket, he said, “I'm cold.” ②I sat back in a chair and fell asleep. →Sitting back in a chair, I fell asleep. ③When I saw no one noticing us, I put the Christmas present down and left. →Seeing no one noticing us, I put the Christmas present down and left. 高级句式2：主语＋谓语……， doing ... doing作伴随状语，与句子的谓语动词同时发生，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主谓关系。 ①“Here，” he said.At the same time, he handed the coins to the gatekeeper. →“Here，” he said，handing the coins to the gatekeeper. ②For a few moments, I just stood there.I held that ten-dollar bill and I wondered what to buy and who to buy it for. →For a few moments, I just stood there, holding that ten-dollar bill and wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. 高级句式3: 独立主格结构 (1)主语＋谓语……， 逻辑主语＋doing/done ... (2)逻辑主语＋doing/done, 主语＋谓语…… 逻辑主语与doing构成主谓关系，或者逻辑主语与done构成动宾关系，有时前面有介词with，在句中常作状语。 ①He stood there and tears of gratitude were welling up in his eyes. →He stood there, (with) tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. ②Her father was lying on his back, and his dog was trapped under the truck. →Her father was lying on his back, (with) his dog trapped under the truck. 高级句式4：“表情感类的形容词，主语＋谓语……”或“主语＋谓语……，表情感类的形容词” 情感类的形容词在句中作状语，说明主语的情感状态，可以转化为：表情感类的形容词，主语＋谓语……。有时可以放在句后：主语＋谓语……，表情感类的形容词。 ①He was eager and excited, and she waved her hands, trying to attract others' attention. →Eager and excited, she waved her hands, trying to attract others' attention. ②To Annie's delight, surrounded by his classmates, Mark seemed like a rock star, and he was cheerful and proud. →To Annie's delight, surrounded by his classmates, Mark seemed like a rock star, cheerful and proud. 高级句式5：方式副词，主语＋谓语…… 方式副词在句中作状语，修饰谓语动词，一般放在宾语后，但有时根据需要可以放在句首，有时放在实义动词前。 It was fortunate that the cat was still alive, though badly injured. →Fortunately, the cat was still alive, though badly injured. 高级句式6：完全倒装：地点状语或表示运动方向的副词＋谓语(vi.)＋主语(名词) 该句型是一个完全倒装句，主语必须是名词，谓语动词为不及物动词，常见的表运动方向的副词有：in、 out、 off、 away、 up、 down、 outside、 inside等。 ①An old woman sat ahead. →Ahead sat an old woman. ②The crowd went away one by one. →Away went the crowd one by one. 高级句式7：强调句：It was＋被强调成分＋that＋(主语)＋谓语…… 除了强调句，在突出某一成分时，还可以用部分倒装句。 He knew what had happened then. →It was then that he knew what had happened. →Only then did he know what had happened. →Not until then did he know what had happened. 高级句式8: 非限制性定语从句 We'll also spend some fun time together, singing, dancing and playing games.We hope it will make them happy. →We'll also spend some fun time together, singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. 常用句式归纳 几种常见的提升句式的方法。 一、画龙点睛的形容词、副词 贴切的形容词（短语）或副词（短语）放句首或句末，可使句子更加生动形象，感情色彩更为强烈浓厚。 1. I gripped the hard-earned paycheck more firmly, ready to argue. （2021年6月浙江高考续写） 2. Better yet, the idea of going back to the farmer and working more popped into my mind. Exactly then and there, I realized why my father let me have the money-it was his earnest expectation for my future, his hearty encouragement and quiet love. （2021年6月浙江高考续写） 3. Worse still, my dad announced that the amusing video would be shared online. （2021年1月浙江高考续写） 4. Ultimately, I got the picture, the most adventurous yet the best ever. （2020年7月浙江高考续写） 5. Naturally, he threw himself into his parents’ arms and hugged them tightly. With resounding barks, Poppy twisted her body dramatically, bouncing up to the height of the boy’s knees, constantly licking his hand. （2020年1月浙江高考续写） 二、 增光添彩的介词短语 介词短语放句首，往往可以有效衔接上下文、保持句子平衡或起到突出强调的作用。 1. At one point, I gathered my courage and asked him why he seemed so serious and kept me at a distance. Without any reply, he was still buried in the statistical analyses. （2022年1月浙江高考续写） 2. To my surprise, he replied that he didn't have time for small talk or so-called friends who were just a distraction. （2022年1月浙江高考续写） 3. In the blink of an eye, numerous fun activities I could do presented themselves to me. （2021年6月浙江高考续写） 4. Despite my unwillingness to admit it, I had made the most shameful and stupid mistake ever. （2021年1月浙江高考续写） 5. From then on, the quiet house was filled with fun again and the parents finally burst out a sign of relief. （2020年1月浙江高考续写） 三、 言简意赅的with复合结构 with+宾语(名词或代词)+宾语补足语(形容词/副词/名词/现在分词/过去分词/不定式/介词短语等)，统称为with复合结构，在句中作状语。巧用此结构，可使句子简洁明了又鲜活灵动。 1. I signaled to him, with my thumbs up, feeling proud of him. （2022年新高考全国I卷续写） 2. With the number of “likes” increasing rapidly, I eventually couldn’t resist the temptation to watch it myself. （2021年1月浙江高考续写） 3. “It’s not fair!” I shouted in protest, with the money tightly clutched in my hand and my eyes glowing with anger. （2021年6月浙江高考续写） 4. Ellis was stunned there, with the mouth wide open. （2020年7月浙江高考续写） 5. With her tail wagging furiously, Poppy barked with joy as a yelp echoed in the near distance as if to remind everyone of its presence. （2020年1月浙江高考续写） 四、灵活使用的非谓语动词 非谓语动词在续写中频频出现，在句中位置也比较灵活，可使文句具体形象，富有画面感。 1. Reflecting on the whole experience throughout the evening with my friends, we found we enjoyed ourselves a lot by helping those in need. （2022年6月浙江高考续写） 2. Having promised I wouldn't let him down, l used whatever spare time to work on the project. （2022年1月浙江高考续写） 3. Just at that moment, Jason tapped on my shoulder and admitted that I was the winner this year, followed by a thunder of applause of my whole family. （2021年1月浙江高考续写） 4. I swept frantically around, searching for something I could use to fight back. （2020年7月浙江高考续写） 5. The parents were moved to tears by the sweetness of the dogs mixed with their yearning for their son return. （2020年1月浙江高考续写） 五、独具风格的独立主格结构 独立主格结构由两部分组成，前一部分是名词或代词，后一部分是非谓语动词(不定式、现在分词、过去分词)、形容词、副词、名词或介词短语等。前后两部分具有逻辑上的主谓关系。此结构本身不是句子，在句子中作状语，表时间、原因、条件、伴随、目的等。独立主格结构是简化了（省去with）的with复合结构，亦可使句子简洁、紧凑。 1. He nodded in gratitude, tears blurring his eyes. （2022年1月浙江高考续写） 2. David was staggering and struggling his steps forward, his body uncontrollable, his shoes worn out and his heels bleeding. （2022年新高考全国I卷续写） 3. The video gaining more and more popularity, I felt a mixture of embarrassment and satisfaction striking into my heart. （2021年1月浙江高考续写） 4. For quite a moment, disappointment rooted me to the spot. I stared at my father, money in hand. （2021年6月浙江高考续写） 5. The machine delivered to Mrs. Meredith’s doorstep, the family shortly got the hang of using the machine to make popcorn. （2020年7月山东高考续写） 六、美观整齐的并列句式 并列句式指用并列连词将两个或两个以上的简单句串联起来的句子。句子信息量大，但不松散、拖沓。 1. He seemed to be a little bit surprised but he thought for a while and accepted my advice to take part in the running. （2022年新高考全国I卷续写） 2. At first, it seemed that he was dominating our discussion, for he was familiar with the topic, but I was the opposite. （2022年1月浙江高考续写） 3. I don’t feel embarrassed at all and I regard this year’s Halloween as the best Halloween I’ve experienced! （2021年1月浙江高考续写） 4. I had to take action, so I picked my courage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray, but finally failed. （2020年7月浙江高考续写） 5. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their discouraged faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. （2021年新高考全国I卷续写） 七、丰富多彩的复合句式 复合句包括名词性从句、定语从句和状语从句。恰当运用复合句，可使语言表达结构更严谨、逻辑性更强、句意更清晰。 1. Although they might look dangerous sometimes, they still left with a “Thank you” when they took the food, which was so comforting to us all. （让步状语从句，时间状语从句，定语从句）（2022年6月浙江高考续写） 2. His coach heard what David said and gave me a look—the kind that was more determined than anyone else’s. （宾语从句，定语从句，比较状语从句）（2022年新高考全国I卷续写） 3. It was true that everyone had his potential to be better, both in academy and personality when fueling passion for them. （主语从句）（2022年1月浙江高考续写） 4. We kept praying that he would be distracted by some noises or anything else that would stop him. （宾语从句，定语从句）（2020年7月浙江高考续写） 5. It was awesome to know that while many people tend to ignore those in need, there are some kind-hearted ones who go out of their way to lend a hand. （宾语从句，让步状语从句，定语从句）（2021年1月八省联考续写） 八、彰显文采的特殊句型 特殊句型指强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等。高调使用特殊句式，不但丰富了续写句式，更渲染了情感色彩，为表达效果锦上添花。 1. Hardly could I imagine that serving the salad could be so tough and challenging when facing a good number of guests. （倒装句，省略句）（2022年6月浙江高考续写） 2. It was not until then that I found a camera shooting just in front of me. （强调句型）（2021年1月浙江高考续写） 3. So ashamed was I that I could feel the blood rush to my face. （2021年6月浙江高考续写） 4. No sooner had he bent down to give Poppy a bear hug than happy kisses rained upon his face ! （倒装句）（2020年1月浙江高考续写） 5. At that moment, they all sensed how beautiful something living could be. What a sweet surprise! （感叹句）（2021年新高考全国I卷续写） 九、委婉动人的虚拟句式 在写作中熟练使用较难语法项目虚拟语气，不仅可优化句子结构，更可显示一定的语言表达能力。 1. "Thank you!" he gasped. "Without you, I would never have tasted such a sense of achievement of challenging myself." （2022年新高考全国I卷续写） 2. David insisted that he finish the run as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, even though he was tripped over time and again. （2022年新高考全国I卷续写） 3. Seeing the mess, their father froze with shock, as if he were rooted on the ground. （2021年新高考全国I卷续写） 4. Had it not been for the timely rescue, we would not have survived. （2020年7月浙江高考续写） 十、惟妙惟肖的修辞手法 读后续写中常用的修辞手法有比喻（明喻或暗喻）、拟人、排比、夸张等。巧妙使用修辞手法，可引发读者的联想，使抽象的事物更形象具体，从而使续写更具文采。 1. Mixing the salad dressing and distributing one by one, I was almost like a cat on hot bricks, my hands racing. （明喻）（2022年6月浙江高考续写） 2. Its dripping jaws were open wide and dagger-claws came smashing through the fence right toward us. （暗喻）（2020年7月浙江高考续写） 3. Silence regained the room. I sat on the sofa, eyes glued to the money I earned. （拟人）（2021年6月浙江高考续写） 4. It was the day that I learned about how guilty tears tasted. It was the day I learned of letting go of my childish obsessions with getting exactly what I wanted. （排比）（2022年1月浙江高考续写） 5. It seemed that his mouth was full of blood and his eyes were red with anger. Seeing such a terrible sight, I could feel a coldness flooding from my back. （夸张）（2020年7月浙江高考续写） 几种常见表达情绪的句式 一、表达情绪的常用句式 1. 表达情绪与情感 【句式1】a flush of＋表情绪的名词＝a wave/feeling/sense of...一阵…… 【句式2】表情绪的名词＋flooded over sb/swept over sb/seized sb ……涌上心头 【句式3】a burst/wave/surge/rush/ripple/sense/feeling of＋表情感状态的名词＋有灵动词＋sb.表示"某人感到……"或"一阵/一种……向某人袭来"。 【句式4】A wave of joy（happiness/sadness/sorrow/delight/panic/fear/horror/depression/ guilt/embarrassment/hate/regret/panic/jealousy/envy/pride/shame/anxiety/boredom/relief/satisfaction/humiliation/insecurity/irritation/isolation/loneliness/misery/outrage/rage/resentment/torture） washed over（积极 消极）/seized（积极 消极）/enveloped(消极）/struck(消极） him as/when he heard the news/at the sight of........./at the fact that..../at the thought that............ 当他听到消息，他非常开心。 1.A flush of pride swept over him as he watched his children.＝He felt a flush of pride as he watched his children. 当他看着自己孩子的时候， 一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头。 2.(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. And much sooner than could be expected，Bernard returned with an empty basket. Never before had he earned so much money in his life. A wave of happiness flooded over him. 一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始了他的新生意。伯纳德带着一个空篮子回来，比预期的要快得多。他一生中从未挣过这么多钱。他感到高兴极了。　 3(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写) To my surprise, I learned that my essay had ranked first in the contest. A mix of excitement and doubt washed over me. 令我吃惊的是，我得知我的作品在比赛中排名第一。兴奋和怀疑涌上心头。 2. 表达“(因为紧张、害怕)心跳” 【句式1】sb could feel one's heart pounding wildly in one's chest 感到心在胸中怦怦直跳 【句式2】one's heart thumped/raced/beat wildly/loudly/hard某人心怦怦直跳 1．(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)I could feel my heart pounding wildly as I went on stage to collect the prize. 上台领奖时我感到心怦怦直跳。 2．He unfolded the letter,his heart racing. 他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。 3．(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Their hearts began to thump wildly as they were afraid of being scolded by their father. 天哪！锅里的那块面包也变黑了。当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他们害怕被父亲责骂，心开始怦怦直跳。　　 3. 表示“流泪”场景 【句式1】One's eyes got misty./One's eyes misted with tears.泪眼模糊 【句式2】be close to tears 几乎要哭了 【句式3】tears roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face 泪水从眼睛/脸颊/面部落下 1．My mother was close to tears when she heard I was admitted to a key university. 当得知我被重点大学录取时，我母亲差点儿就哭了。 2．With tears of gratitude rolling/streaming down his cheeks, Peter hugged Green tightly, saying “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.” 感激的泪水顺着他的脸颊流下，彼得紧紧地拥抱着格林，说：“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。” 4. 常用句型归纳 【句式1】So 情绪adj. was sb that +从句 【句式2】What 情绪v. sb was that +从句 【句式3】Much/Greatly to one’s 情绪n., sb did sth 1.So sad was Tom that tears welled up in his eyes. 汤姆伤心得眼泪夺眶而出。 2.So guilty was my mom that she lowered her head and murmured, “Sorry.” 我妈妈非常内疚，她低下头喃喃地说：“对不起。3.What surprised us was that he made great progress in such a short time. 令我们惊讶的是，他在这么短的时间内取得了长足的进步 二、动作描写常用句式 1. 表示“一……，就……” 【句式1】upon/on＋n./doing...“一……就……”，相当于as soon as引导的时间状语从句。【句式2】immediately/directly/instantly＋从句 【句式3】the moment/minute/instant＋从句 【句式4】no sooner...than.../hardly...when... 【句式5】at the sight/thought of… 1．The instant I saw him, I knew he was the policeman who had helped me carry the box. 我一看见他，就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。 2．(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写) “Ignore what the players from other teams would say and I believe you could make it！” Upon hearing my words，David beamed a big smile，stood up and moved towards the starting line. (2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写) “不管其他队的队员怎么说，我相信你能做到！”听到我的话，大卫笑了笑，站起来朝起跑线走去。　　 3.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)Upon hearing this, I could feel my heart pounding wildly and my mind going unconsciously back to the days I racked my brain for stories. 一听到这些话，我感到心跳加快，大脑不由自主回到那些绞尽脑汁编故事的日子。 4. (2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)No sooner had I stepped into this familiar room than I saw my teacher sitting among piles of papers. 我刚一走进这个熟悉的房间就看到历史坐在一堆试卷前。 2. 表示“迫不及待做……；毫不犹豫” 【句式1】sb could hardly wait to do sth 【句式2】without a second thought...不假思索；毫不犹豫地 【句式3】without even thinking...连考虑都不考虑 【句式4】without delay...立即；毫不迟延地. 【句式5】without hesitation...毫不犹豫 1．The water was freezing cold, but without a second thought the young man jumped in. 水冰冷冰冷，可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。 2．Without delay, he climbed up the tree quickly to reach for the leaf. 他毫不迟疑地迅速爬上树去摘树叶。 3．On Christmas morning, I could not wait to open the package. To my excitement, it was a brand­new pair of ice skates which I was eager for. 圣诞节早晨，我迫不及待地打开包裹。令我兴奋的是，这是一双我一直想要的崭新的溜冰鞋。　 3. 表示“因……颤抖” 【句式】tremble/shake with fear, panic, excitement, rage... 1．Her lips trembled with rage and big tears rolled down her cheeks. 她气得嘴唇发抖，泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。 2．He lay there for a long time, shaking with fear. 他躺在那里很长时间，害怕得发抖。 4. 表示 “发出……(声音)” 【句式1】There were loud shouts and cheers (from...) when...从……传来喊叫与欢呼声 【句式2】There was a storm of applause (from...) when...……响起了雷鸣般的掌声 【句式3】let out a cry/scream (of horror/fear/terror/shock/surprise/pain...)发出了……叫声 1．The night before last, just before dinner, while my father was looking through the evening paper, he suddenly let out a cry of surprise. 前天晚上，就在晚饭前，我父亲在看晚报时，突然惊讶地喊了一声。 2．While my mind was wandering, our performance time came. It turned out a great success, loud shouts and cheers from the audience filling the theatre. 当我心不在焉的时候，我们的表演时间到了。这场演出取得了巨大成功，观众的欢呼声和喝彩声响彻了整个剧场。　　 5. 表示 “带着情绪做某事” 【句式1】情绪adj., sb did sth 【句式2】Sb did sth, adj（短语） 【句式3】Adj. as 主+谓, sb did sth Suddenly something inside me began saying, “Try it! Try it!” Shy and scared, I watched them, trying not to look too eager. 突然间，我内心的某个东西开始说：“试试吧！试试吧！我又害羞又害怕，看着他们，尽量不让自己看起来太急切。 Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family. 疲惫和害怕的简躺在一块石头旁边，想念她的家人。 6. 常用句型归纳 【句式1】adv., sb did sth 【句式2】With growing +情绪n, Sb did sth 【句式3】Sb did sth, with/in +抽象名词 with +抽象名词(care, confidence, ease, patience, pride, eagerness, interest, caution, attention, seriousness, kindness, calmness, determination, anxiety, curiosity, courage, joy, devotion, fear, sadness, satisfaction) 关心、自信、轻松、耐心、骄傲、渴望、兴趣、谨慎、注意、严肃、善良、冷静、决心、焦虑、好奇心、勇气、喜悦、奉献、恐惧、悲伤、满足 in + 抽象名词 (peace, excitement, anger, amazement, relief, confusion, excitement, admiration, puzzlement, shock, secret, anger, terror, horror) （和平、兴奋、愤怒、惊奇、解脱、困惑、兴奋、钦佩、困惑、震惊、秘密、愤怒、恐怖、恐怖） 1.Tenderly, grandma placed her hand on Susan’s head and comforted, “as long as you realize your fault, you will still my little girl!” 奶奶温柔地把手放在苏珊的头上，安慰道：“只要你意识到自己的过错，你还是我的小女儿！ 2.Carefully, I cleaned up the broken pieces of the ball, wishing I could stick them together. 我小心翼翼地清理了球的碎片，希望我能把它们粘在一起。 三、心理描写常用句式 1. 表示“不知道做……” 【句式1】sb did sth, wondering what to do next 【句式2】sb did sth, not knowing what to do next 【句式3】sb did sth, unsure of what to do next 【句式4】sb was at a loss what to do 1．(2023·浙江1月卷读后续写)Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. 离开家，我禁不住想现在进展如何呢。 2．(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)David sat still with a deep breath, wondering what to do next. I said gently and quietly，“No one can change your mind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others' thoughts.” 大卫静静地坐着，深呼吸，不知道下一步该做什么。我轻轻地说：“除了你自己，没有人能改变你的想法。如果你想挑战自己，那与别人的想法无关。” 3．Facing the situation，Ruth felt her heart was pounding，and chest pains almost took her breath away. She started to sob，totally at a loss what to do. 面对这种情况，露丝感到心跳加速，胸痛几乎让她喘不过气来。她开始哭泣，完全不知该怎么办。 2. 表示“心里想” 【句式1】An inner voice told sb that...内心的声音告诉某人…… 【句式2】An inner voice whispered, “…”/ Sb thought / said to oneself, “…” 【句式3】Doing sth, sb felt as if sb did sth / sb had done sth 1.An inner voice whispered, “Stay clear-headed. I can make it.” 一个内心的声音低声说：“保持清醒的头脑。我能做到。 2.An inner whispered, “You can do this.” 一个内在的人低声说：“你可以做到。 3.Looking at the man, she felt as if she had known him for years. 看着这个男人，她觉得自己好像认识他很多年了。 3. 表示“虚拟语气” 【句式1】Had it not been for / Without / But for +n, sb would not have done sth 【句式2】情态动词+did/have done 【句式3】 if only+did/had done 1.But for your guidance, we would not have settled the problem. 如果没有您的指导，我们无法解决问题。 2.Had it not been for the experience, we would not have made a new friend. 如果不是这次经历，我们就不会结交新朋友。 4. 表示“某人想到” 【句式1】idea, thought ...+ hit/struck/occurred to + sb.t 【句式2】sth. crossed/flashed through/sprang to/came to/popped into/jumped out of sb.'s mind 【句式3】one's mind began to race/one's mind raced 某人开始转动脑筋／某人拼命地转动脑筋 1.(2021新高考I卷） It hit/struck/occurred to/dawned on them that they could make breakfast for mother to celebrate Mother's Day. 他们突然想到他们可以给妈妈做早餐庆祝母亲节。 2.(2021·浙江卷） I was struck/hit by the thought that I should have my own money and planned how to spend it. 我突然想到我应该有自己的钱，并计划如何使用它。 3.The thought sprang to her mind that maybe she had left the door open when she left home. 她突然想起也许她离开家时没把门关上。 四、情节发展常用句式 1. 表示“直到……才意识到……” 【句式1】Not until＋时间状语＋did sb realize/notice that... 【句式2】It was only＋时间状语＋that sb realized that... 1．(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started. It was only then that I realized that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a heart disease. 我看着大卫和其他赛跑者一起向起跑线上移动。比赛开始了。就在那时，我才意识到跑道对小孩子来说太长了，更不用说一个患有心脏病的孩子了。　 2.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写) Eager and delighted, I held up the championship trophy, and It was not until then that I realized the journey of writing was not only filled with disbelief and self-doubt but also support and self-approval. 我急切又高兴地举起奖杯。指导那时我才意识到写作的历程不仅充满着不相信和自我怀疑，而且还充满着支持和自我肯定。　 2. 表示“某人想到/明白……；有了主意” 【句式1】It suddenly occurred to sb that...＝It hit/struck sb that... 【句式2】(idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb＝...came/flashed into one's mind＝...crowded into one's mind 【句式3】one's mind began to race 头脑开始快速转动 1．Suddenly a brilliant idea flashed into his mind. 突然他想到一个好主意。 2．His mind began to race, trying to think of a way out. 他的头脑开始快速转动，试图想出办法。 3．There was no meal on the table.“Let's prepare for the party together this time，”Aunt Beatrice said gladly dressed in the same outfit. It suddenly occurred to Mya that the theme this year was supposed to be “Sweet Labor, Sweet Sixteen”． 桌上没有饭菜。“这次让我们一起准备聚会吧，”Beatrice阿姨穿着同样的衣服高兴地说。Mya突然想到，今年的主题应该是“甜蜜的劳动，甜蜜的十六岁”。 3. 表示“转折” 【句式1】But bad luck for sb...但是某人真不走运 【句式2】To one's surprise (delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that...让人惊讶(高兴)/奇怪的是，原来…… 【句式3】..., but in vain ……， 但徒劳 【句式4】.., but without success……，但没有成功 【句式5】But on second thoughts，...但是转而一想，…… 1．But bad luck for Jack, he tripped and fell to the ground. Jack真不走运，他绊了一脚，摔在地上。 2．Her friend tried to persuade her to go back home with him,but in vain. 她朋友想劝她和他一起回家，可只是白费唇舌。 3．When I got up and looked out of the bedroom window, I found,to my great surprise, it was snowing heavily. 当我站起来，从卧室的窗户往外看时，我惊奇地发现，天正在下大雪。 4. 常用句型归纳 【句式1】Sb did sth, only to find… 【句式2】地点状语(in the box...) lay / was / were +主语 【句式3】out of +地点/out/into +地点/in/away/off +walked (rushed /stormed...) +主语 【句式4】At the thought/sight/sound of sth, sb did sth 【句式5】On /Upon doing sth, sb did sth on/upon后面的动名词多为：go, arrive, leave, reach, return, step, enter等。 1.I turned back to the tractor, only to find it move suddenly away from me. 我转身走向拖拉机，却发现它突然从我身边移开了。 2.I stopped teaching and open it up. In the box were a shirt and a note from Freddy’s mother. 停止了教学，打开了它。盒子里有一件衬衫和一张弗雷迪母亲的纸条。 3.Inside the bottle was a piece of paper. 瓶子里有一张纸。 4.Out of the house rushed a dog, followed by a puppy. 从屋子里冲出一只狗，后面跟着一只小狗。 5.At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror with my palms sweating. 一看到凶猛的狼，我被一股强烈的恐惧感抓住，手心出汗。 6.At the sound of the alarm, the wolf fled into the thick woods警报声响起，狼逃进了茂密的树林中. 7.On arriving at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers. 到达村子后，我们受到了村民的热烈欢迎。 8.Upon going out of the room, Jack heard the telephone ringing. 走出房间后，杰克听到电话铃声。 即时演练 1.用适当的句式完成下列句子 1.I paced back and forth in the room anxiously, _______________. 我在房间里焦急地踱来踱去，不知道该怎么办。 2._________________________, I finally decided to call the number on the poster and get in touch with Chrissy. 在挣扎了很长一段时间后，我终于决定拨打海报上的电话号码，并与克丽丝取得联系。 3.Once home, I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things, ___________________.一到家，我就把项链放在我特殊的地方，为特殊的东西，陷入沉思。 4._________________________, she told me that the necklace was a gift from her mom before she got sick and she was grateful to me for returning the necklace to her. 她用泪流满面的眼睛看着自己手中的蓝色石头，告诉我，这条项链是她妈妈生病前送给她的礼物，她很感激我把项链还给了她。 5.______________________, Messi began to make up his mind to become a genuine player before the final. 回到家后，梅西开始决定在决赛前成为一名真正的球员。 6.Thus, he spared no effort to practice kicking the ball, ________________________________ attentively and painstakingly.因此，他不遗余力地练习踢球，跟着球跑，再用心而煞费苦心地踢球。 7.______________________ he had made for the game, Messi, ___________________, took a deep breath and stepped into the soccer field. 想到他为比赛所做的努力，梅西准备充分且自信，深吸了一口气，走进了足球场。 8.____________________, he kept on running as fast as he could, and finally here came the chance! 他的心狂跳，继续尽可能快地跑，机会终于来了！ 9.I felt so embarrassed that I couldn’t do anything but sit there, _____________________________________. 我感到很尴尬，我只能坐在那里，保持我的身体不动，抑制住我的眼泪。 10.__________________, I saw Diane who came up to me __________________________.我转过身来，看见黛安，脸上带着温暖的微笑来到我跟前。 11._______________, Alan froze, ___________ something was there in the darkness. 听到一种声音，艾伦僵住了，感觉黑暗中有什么东西。 12.________________, Alan made his way to the noise, ____________________________. 艾伦的心疯狂地跳动着，来到声音中，两双腿无法控制地颤抖。 13.The officer, ________________, offered no comments.这名警官带着怀疑的表情，没有发表任何评论。 14.So exhausted as they were, the two grandsons stopped, _______________.两个人已经疲惫不堪，孙子停了下来，擦去脸上的汗水。 15.When _____________________, I should let them. 当我被嘲笑的时候，我应该让他们去笑。 【答案】1.not knowing what to do 2.Having struggled for a long time 3.lost in thought 4.Looking at the blue stone in her hand with her tearful eyes 5.After returning home 6.running after it and kicking it again 7.Thinking of all the endeavor; fully-prepared and confident 8.Heart beating wildly 9.keeping my body unmoved and holding back my tears 10.Turning around; with a warm smile on her face 11.Hearing a noise; feeling 12.Heart beating wildly; with both of his legs trembling uncontrollably 13.wearing a doubtful look 14.wiping the sweat from their faces 15.being laughed at 2.请用高级句式升级下面考生作文中加蓝的一般句式 　　Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.①Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog.She lowered her head to watch it curiously.Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer.②The box was tipped over and out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy.③It didn't take long before the two played around the house and cheerfully ran after each other. A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university.④He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time.⑤When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing towards the dog and he bent down to give her a big hug.Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog.“Oh my gosh，who is this？” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face.“It's Poppy's new companion，” said Mom. 1．用非谓语动词作时间状语升级句① _______________________________________________________________________________________ 2．用with复合结构升级句② _______________________________________________________________________________________ 3．用非谓语动词作伴随状语升级句③ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 4．用强调结构强调主句宾语升级句④ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 5．用省略结构升级句⑤ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1．用非谓语动词作时间状语升级句① Noticing the little dog, Poppy jumped with joy. 2．用with复合结构升级句② With the box tipped over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. 3．用非谓语动词作伴随状语升级句③ It didn't take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other. 4．用强调结构强调主句宾语升级句④ It was his parents and the dog that he had been missing since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. 5．用省略结构升级句⑤ When catching sight of Poppy, he went rushing towards the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. 4 / 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$