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英 语
七年级上册 人教版
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Unit 5 Fun Clubs
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
What can you learn in a
school club?
Period5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.俱乐部______
2.参加;加入______
3.选择;挑选________
4.能力;才能_________
club
join
choose
ability
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5.对……感兴趣__________________
be interested in
【解析】链接狂K
interested的详细讲解见狂K重点P34。
6.爱上______________________
7.表演_________
8.拍照______________________
fall/be in love with
act out
take photos/pictures
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】I’d love to, but I can’t play any musical instruments.
(can’t do sth)
→ 仿写:我不会有感情地朗读,所以我想加入戏剧俱乐部。
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I can’t read with feeling so I want to join the drama club.
10.【教材原句】I’m good at telling stories.(be good at)
→ 仿写:她擅长拍照。
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She is good at taking photos.
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11.【教材原句】I’m interested in nature.(be interested in)
→ 仿写:珍妮对数字很感兴趣。
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Jenny is very interested in numbers.
12.【教材原句】I… French, but I’d like to learn.(would like to do sth)
→ 仿写:我想加入音乐俱乐部,因为我能把钢琴弹好。
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I would like to join the music club, because I can play the piano well.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Dear Mr Zhang,
I want to join the school volunteer club (介绍想加入什么俱乐部)and help
with the school trip next week to help students.
My name is Li Hua. I’m thirteen years old.I’m in Class 3, Grade 7 in our
school.(基本信息) I am friendly and helpful in life.(性格优势) I’m good at
speaking English.(介绍特长) What’s more, I’m also in the school music club.I
like singing and dancing and I can sing some English songs.I can play the guitar
and the violin well.(介绍喜好及特长)
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I think I can be good with students.(表达信心) Please call me at
2365698.I hope to hear from you soon.(结尾点题,期待回复)
Yours,
Li Hua
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
为了丰富学生的校园生活,阳光中学为七年级的学生开设了一系列多彩的俱
乐部。假如你是阳光中学七年级学生李华,请根据表格中的相关提示,写一封俱
乐部申请信。
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Clubs Club 1 Club 2 Club 3
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Running ___________________
Badminton ________________
Basketball
Among the three clubs, which club would you like to join?
Reasons 1.Personality (个性): What is your personality?
2.Ability: What can you do?
3.Wish (愿望): What do you want to get from the club?
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要求:
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括提示中的所有信息;
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear teachers,
I would like to join ____
Thank you!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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第一步 审
体 裁:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:第一人称
内容要点:写作要点已经给出,注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点
写作框架:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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Dear teachers,
I would like to join the basketball club.
I’m not shy and I’m friendly to my classmates. I
am 1.75 metres tall. I have a strong body and I can run
fast. I can play basketball but I can’t play it very well.
So I need to join the basketball club to practise playing
basketball. I like basketball very much. I want to be a
basketball player someday. ①开门见山:文章开
头直接点题,用“I
would like to join…”
简洁明了地介绍自己
想加入的俱乐部是什
么。
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If I join the basketball club , I want to learn skills
from other members. I hope to do better in the
basketball games.
Thank you!
Best wishes,
Li Hua ②阐述个人优势与需求:使用“I am/I have/I can/I need/I like/I want…”介绍个人的性格、能力等,紧扣写作要求。
③书写结语:文章中以含有条件状语从句的复合句表达自己对加入俱乐部的期待与愿望,紧扣文章主题。
续表
本文在介绍个人适合加入该俱乐部的优势与需求及愿望时,使用了多样化的表
达,如would like to、be friendly to、hope to do等,充分地介绍了自己的
特点。
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第4阶 实战演练
假如你是李华,近期你校将举行俱乐部展示会。你将代表你们七年级一班的
同学发言介绍学校的俱乐部。请你根据所给提示,以“Colourful Clubs”为题写一篇
不少于60词的短文,谈谈你们本学期的俱乐部活动以及你的感想:
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要求:1.必须包括提示的所有信息;2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;3.句子通
顺,书写工整。
Colourful Clubs
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【参考范文】
Colourful Clubs
Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.There are so many
colourful clubs in our school.
Are you interested in sports? You can join the sports club.There
are different sports such as football, basketball and ping-
pong.Exercise helps you get strong.Are you proud of our Chinese culture?
Join our culture club.You can learn a lot about different Chinese
festivals and activities.Do you want to keep healthy? It’s good to
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join the health club.You can learn to have a healthy eating habit.I’m
in the book club.We act out stories, talk about books, and make new
friends here.
All in all, these clubs open our minds and we really enjoy our
school life.
Thank you for your listening.
Value statement:Our interests make us interesting.
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