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英 语
七年级上册 人教版
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Unit 1 You and Me
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
What do we need to know
about a new friend?
Period5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.年级;等级_______
2.业余爱好_______
3.交朋友______________
4.姓氏___________
grade
hobby
make friends
last name
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5.名字____________
first name
【解析】知识拓展
first name/given name意为“名字”。
6.弹吉他_________________
play the guitar
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】My name is Peter Brown.(sb’s name is…)
→仿写:她的名字叫海伦·格林。
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Her name is Helen Green.
8.【教材原句】I’m 14 years old.(… years old)
→仿写:我有个弟弟,他八岁了。
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I have a brother and he is eight years old.
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9.【教材原句】I live in Beijing with my parents.(live in)
→仿写:约翰现在和他姐姐住在伦敦。
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John lives in London with his sister now.
10.【教材原句】My favourite food is Beijing roast duck, and my favourite
place is the Great Wall.(sb’s favourite… is)
→仿写:我最喜欢的运动是网球。
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My favourite sport is tennis.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Hi, everyone. I am Daniel (介绍姓名).I am very happy to (表达情绪)
be your classmate. Now I will tell you something about myself.
I am 13 years old (介绍年龄).I am from the UK (介绍来自某地).I’m
tall and strong with short hair. I wear a pair of glasses.(介绍外貌) I like
Chinese and art best.I’m interested in maths, but I’m not good at it.(介绍喜欢
的学科) I am helpful and always ready to help others. My hobbies are reading,
drawing and playing basketball.(介绍性格和爱好)
I hope all of us can be good friends.(提出希望)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
请根据下表提供的信息,以“This is me!”为题,用英语做自我介绍。80词左右。
Name Sandy Age 13
Living place Beijing School Sunshine Middle
School
Appearance
(外貌) tall and slim; long black hair; wear glasses
Hobbies listening to music and playing badminton
Good at drawing Not good at swimming
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:姓名、年龄、居住地、学校、外貌、业余爱好、特长等
This is me!
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写作框架:
This is me! 总述 Name
Age
Living place
School
分述 Appearance
Hobbies
Good at/Not good at
总结 My teachers and classmates all like me.
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第二步 列
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This is me!
My name is Sandy. I am 13 years old.I live with my
family in Beijing now. I study at Sunshine Middle School.
I’m tall and slim. I have long hair with a pair of
glasses .I enjoy listening to music.I listen to CDs at the
weekend.I also like playing badminton. I usually play
badminton with my friends after school.I am good at
drawing, but I am not good at swimming.
I have lots of friends at school. I’m very nice to
everyone. My teachers and classmates all like me. ①with a pair of
glasses作伴随状语,
既生动说明人物形
象,又增加文章的
亮点;
②but连接了作者的
特长与不足,丰富了
文章的句式;
③文章最后两句体现
了作者与老师和同学
之间真诚的情感。
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这篇习作运用了“总——分——总”的“三段式”写作结构,要点齐全,语言流
畅,全面介绍了作者的相关情况。文中years old、live with、with a pair of
glasses、enjoy listening to music、at the weekend、after school、am good at、
nice to等体现了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些短语也是文章的亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025浙江绍兴质检]请根据表格内的信息写一篇英语短文,向你的同学介
绍你的加拿大朋友Tomas。要点如下:
基本信息 1.中文名:杜甫;年龄:13;国籍:加拿大 (Canada);现居住
地:泰州;学校与班级:月光中学 (Moonlight Middle School)
七年级二班
2.短发,不戴眼镜,个头小但是强壮
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爱好、特长 1.喜欢所有学科,学习用功;最喜欢……科目,因为……
2.擅长运动,……是他的最爱;他认为运动……
3.热爱阅读,因为……他每周去一次图书馆
理想 他希望……(至少一点)
要求: 1.短文省略号部分要求适当发挥1—2句;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My friend
Hello everyone! This is my good friend Tomas.____
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【参考范文】
My friend
Hello everyone! This is my good friend Tomas.His Chinese name is Du
Fu.He is 13 years old, and he comes from Canada.He lives in Taizhou
now.He studies in Class 2, Grade 7 in Moonlight Middle School.He is
short but strong, and he doesn’t wear glasses and has short hair.
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He likes all subjects, and he studies hard.His favourite subject is
English, because he thinks it is interesting.He is good at sports.He
likes playing football best.He thinks doing sports is good for his
health.He also likes reading, because reading makes him know more about
the world.He goes to the library once a week.
He hopes to be an English teacher, because he wants to make more
students like English.
Value statement:Getting to know each other is the first step in making new
friends.
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