Unit 4 Section B Period 4 2a—2b（大单元话题与写作）-【初中必刷题】2025-2026学年新教材七年级上册英语同步课件（鲁教版五四学制2024）

该初中英语课件聚焦七年级上册Unit 4“Once upon a Time”故事主题写作，通过话题词汇积累（如“once upon a time”“tell the truth”）、教材原句仿写（如there be句型、if条件句）搭建学习支架，引导学生从词句储备到范文模板、再到赏析与实战，形成连贯的写作能力培养脉络。 其亮点在于融合文化意识与语言能力培养，以“木兰”“曹冲称象”等中国传统故事为载体，通过分阶训练（高分词句-范文模板-赏析-实战）提升学生写作逻辑与表达准确性。如“曹冲称象”范文赏析中，引导分析记叙文结构及时态运用，既增强文化认同，又培养思维品质。课件支持编辑修改与超链接跳转，助力教师高效教学，帮助学生夯实写作基础与跨文化表达能力。

英 语 七年级上册 LJ 1 2 3 Unit 4 Once upon a Time A 课时同步训练 4 Section B What can stories teach us? Period 4 2a—2b（大单元话题与写作） 5 刷写作 6 写作 第1阶 高分词句储备 一、话题词汇 1.从前；很久以前 ___________________________ 2.起初;最初 __________ 3.说实话 ________________ 4.出乎某人的意料 ___________________ 5.许下诺言 ________________ 6.最后；终究 ____________________________ once upon a time/long ago at first tell the truth to sb’s surprise make a promise in the end/at last/finally 刷写作 返回目录 7 二、佳句仿写 7.【教材原句】Once upon a time, there was a mother duck.（there be句型） →仿写：很久以前,有一个不开心的国王。 _____________________________________________ Once upon a time there was an unhappy king. 8.【教材原句】The emperor decided to show everyone his new clothes. （decide to do…） →仿写：他们决定讲一个关于中国文化的故事。 _____________________________________________________ They decided to tell a story about Chinese culture. 刷写作 返回目录 8 9.【教材原句】It took me months to learn how to paint a horse well！ （It takes sb+时间+to do sth） →仿写：他们花费了几天时间穿过那片森林。 _____________________________________________________ It took them a few days to walk through the forest. 10.【教材原句】 If anyone set me free, I would kill them instead of giving them anything.（if引导的条件状语从句） →仿写：如果有人喜欢这个故事,请把它分享给他们。 _________________________________________________________ If someone likes this story, please share it with them. 刷写作 返回目录 9 第2阶 经典范文模版 Dear classmates, As we all know, China has a long history and is known for it’s colourful culture. Today, it’s my great honour to be here to share a traditional story with you. The name of the story is Mulan （点明故事名称）. Once upon a time （用于故事开头的结构）, there was a girl named Mulan living with her family in a little village.One day （故事发生的时间）, the emperor asked each family to send one man to the army. Mulan’s father was too old to fight. So Mulan decided to be dressed up as a man. She joined the army and fought for many years. 刷写作 返回目录 10 A few years later （故事情节发展）, when the war ended, the emperor offered Mulan a job. But she refused and wished to return home. She put on makeup when she came home.In the end （故事结局）, people just knew she was a girl when she came back home. I think Mulan was very brave and smart （个人看法）. That’s all. Thanks for your attention.. .（结尾总结） 刷写作 返回目录 第3阶 高分范文赏析 请你根据提示和表格内容及要求，用英语讲述“曹冲称象”的故事。 提示：孙权送给曹操一头大象。曹操想知道大象有多重，但不知道如何称大象的 重量，他的儿子曹冲想出一个好办法。 方法 （1）先把大象引到船上，并在船上标记水位（the water level）； （2）把大象带走，然后往船上放石头，直到河水达到标记的水位； （3）最后称（weigh）一下石头的重量就可以知道大象的重量。 刷写作 返回目录 12 要求：（1）包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥； （2）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Today I’ll tell you a famous Chinese story named Cao Chong Weighed an Elephant.Here it goes. _______________________________ 刷写作 返回目录 13 第一步审 体 裁：记叙文 时 态：以一般过去时为主 人 称：以第三人称为主 内容要点：曹冲称象的故事情节 写作框架：总——分——总 刷写作 返回目录 14 第二步列 刷写作 返回目录 15 __________________________________ __________________________________ Today I’ll tell you a famous Chinese story named Cao Chong Weighed an Elephant.Here it goes. One day, Sun Quan sent an elephant to Cao Cao. Cao Cao wondered the weight of the elephant. Everyone said that they couldn’t weigh the elephant.Soon② Cao Chong told people to lead the elephant to a boat and mark the water level on the boat. ①全文以一般过去时为 主，准确叙述了故事。 ②用One day、Soon、 Then、Next、Finally表 明故事情节的发展，使 文章层次清晰。 刷写作 返回目录 16 Then they took away the elephant.Next , they kept putting stones into the boat until the water reached① the marked level.Finally , Cao Chong said , “After we weigh the stones, we will know how heavy the elephant is.” How clever he was! ③宾语从句和时间状语 从句的使用增加了句子 的复杂性和表现力，使 文章更加丰富。 ④结尾部分用感叹句赞 扬了曹冲的聪明才智， 使文章完整、有力。 文章语法严谨，结构清晰，句型多样，既准确又流畅，易于理解且富有表现力。 这是一篇值得学习和借鉴的优秀英文写作。 续表 刷写作 返回目录 17 第4阶 实战演练 ［2024山东泰安期末］同学们一定听过“守株待兔”的故事吧，请 根据图片提示用英语描述一下这个故事并谈谈自己的感想。 提示词：knock against撞上；crops庄稼 写作要求： （1）故事情节完整，可适当发挥，语言准确流畅，书写规范； （2）不少于80词。 _______________________________ 刷写作 返回目录 18 【参考范文】 Once upon a time, there was a farmer working in his field.Soon he was very tired so he sat near a big tree.A hare ran out of a hole.When it saw the farmer, it was very afraid.It ran so quickly that its head knocked against the stump.It died soon.The farmer was very excited to see it.He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner.He was very happy. From that day on, he didn’t farm.He stayed by that tree, waiting for hares to come again.In the end the farmer couldn’t get anything again because he was very lazy. The story teaches us that we can’t only depend on luck.We need to work hard to get what we want. 刷写作 返回目录 19 【解析】链接狂K die的详细讲解见狂K重点P25。 Value statement：Short stories can hold big ideas. 刷写作 返回目录 20 $$