摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦七年级上册Unit 1 “A new start”单元话题写作,属课时同步训练。课堂导入从话题词汇(如“friendly”“make me feel good”)、佳句仿写(教材原句转化)起步,衔接经典范文模版与高分范文赏析,最终落脚实战演练,构建“词句储备—范文借鉴—实战应用”的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握写作脉络。
其亮点在于分阶递进式写作训练,融合语言能力(积累话题词汇、仿写句式提升表达)与思维品质(审题明确体裁时态、列“总—分—总”结构培养逻辑),采用“审—列—写—评”四步教学法(如赏析范文时拆解“学校—学习—师生—爱好”四方面内容)。学生通过系统训练提升写作能力与思维逻辑,教师可直接利用分阶资源与范文点评,优化教学流程。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级上册 WY
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Unit 1 A new start
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课时同步训练
单元话题与写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.重要的 adj.___________
2.希望;期望 v.______
3.记得 v.__________
4.友好的 adj.__________
important
hope
remember
friendly
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5.把某人介绍给某人____________________
6.交很多朋友____________________________________
7.各种各样的活动_________________________
8.使我感觉很好________________________
introduce sb to sb
make a lot of/lots of/many friends
all kinds of activities
make me feel very good
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】That’s really an important lesson!(That’s really… 那真是……)
→仿写:那真是忙碌而有趣的一天!
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That’s really a busy and interesting day!
10.【教材原句】I wrote down the first word and stopped.(write down写下;一
般过去时)
→仿写:我在笔记本上写下了一些东西。
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I wrote something down in my notebook.
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11.【教材原句】I’m so lucky to have a teacher like him.(be lucky to do sth做
某事很幸运)
→仿写:我是如此幸运有很多朋友。
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I’m so lucky to have a lot of/lots of/many friends.
12.【教材原句】Can you give me some advice?(give sb some advice给某人一
些建议)
→仿写:她给了我们一些关于怎样学习英语的建议。
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She gave us some advice on how to learn English.
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13.【教材原句】Dad and Mum protected your boat from winds.(protect…
from… 保护……免受……的伤害)
→仿句:太阳眼镜保护我们的眼睛不受阳光的伤害。
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Sunglasses protect our eyes from the sun.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
My First Lesson at Junior High School
I will always remember my first lesson at junior high school.
I was excited and nervous (谈感受).When I walked into the classroom, I
saw many new faces. The teacher was very kind and friendly (性格特点).She
introduced herself to us and asked us to introduce ourselves one by one. After
that she gave us some advice (课堂活动) on how to learn English well and
then started the lesson. I listened to her carefully (上课态度) and wrote
something down in my notebook.
It was an interesting lesson (对这节课的评价) and I liked English from
then on. I hope (提出希望) I can get better at English.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
亲爱的同学们,初中生活已经开始了。相信在新的学校里你一定交了好朋友,
并且过得很开心吧!我们学校正举行主题为“My school life”的征文活动。请根据
以下信息提示,写一篇英语短文向学校投稿吧!
学 校 大且漂亮;在7年级6班。
学习情况 最喜欢的科目是……,原因是……
老师和同学 老师和同学都对我很好;最好的朋友是……,她想成为……
爱 好 喜欢读书,是学校阅读俱乐部的一名成员,读书让我感觉很棒。
感受及打算 ……(至少2点)
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写作要求:1.必须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2.词数90左右,可适当拓展。
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第一步 审
体裁:说明文
时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:根据表格内容介绍学校生活
写作框架:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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My name is Millie. I am a new student in a
junior high school. I would like to tell you
something about my school life. ①would like to do短语展
示出作者想要分享的意愿。
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My school is big and beautiful and I am in
Class Six, Grade Seven. My favourite subject is
science because I think science is interesting The
teachers and classmates are all very friendly to me.
My best friend is Alice, and she wants to be a
doctor when she grows up I like reading very much
and I am a member of the school’s reading club.
Reading makes me feel good. ②句式多样,运用了
because 引导的原因状语从
句、when 引导的时间状语
从句,使文章内容丰富。
续表
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I have fun in my school and I learn new
things every day. I like going to school and having
fun with my friends. I’m going to try my
bestand work hard at my lessons.
That’s all. Thanks a lot! ③使用have fun、try one’s
best、work hard等短语,使
文章表达更加准确。
开头直接表明身份,引出要介绍校园生活;中间部分从学校、学习情况、老师和
同学、朋友和爱好几个方面介绍校园生活,层次分明;结尾说明对学校生活的感
受以及未来的决心,内容完整,结构紧凑。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。开学以来,你的学习情
况如何?你和同学们、老师们相处得怎样?你面临什么问题以及你的感受如何?
请以“My school life”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你的初中学校生活。包括
以下内容:
1.You favourite subject.
2.Classmates and teachers.
3.Activities at school.
4.Your problems.
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注意:1.80词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My school life
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【参考范文】
My school life
The new term comes.Now I’m a student in junior high and let me
tell you about my school life.
There are many subjects in junior high, such as English, Chinese,
maths and PE.And my favourite subject is English, because it’s easy
and fun.In the first lesson, I met my new classmates and English
teacher, Miss Li.She asked us to introduce ourselves.I felt nervous,
but she encouraged me.I’m so lucky.Our school holds all kinds of
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activities, such as the sports meeting and the cultural
festival.However, there is much homework every day.It’s hard to decide
what to do first.
Now my school life is really busy but interesting.I hope I can
enjoy my junior high school life.
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