内容正文:
英 语
七年级上册 JJ
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Unit 2 Learning English is fun!
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单
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.提示 _____
2.可能的 __________
3.害怕的 ________
tip
possible
scared
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4.错误 _________
5.杂志 __________
6.提高 _________
7.技能 _______
8.尽可能多的 __________________________
9.对……有用 __________________
mistake
magazine
improve
skill
as many/much as possible
be useful for/to
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二、佳句仿写
1.【教材原句】My English teacher, Ms Liu, gives me some tips.(give sb sth)
→仿写:让我给你一些提示。
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Let me give you some tips.
2.【教材原句】English songs can also help!(can also help)
→仿写:看英文电影也是有帮助的。
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Watching English films/movies can also help.
3.【教材原句】But I am afraid of speaking English in public.(be afraid of)
→仿写:不要害怕犯错误。
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Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Hello, I’m Mike (介绍名字). My favourite subject is English (介绍最喜
欢的科目).I like it because it is interesting (介绍喜欢的原因). And I like
my English teacher. She is kind and patient. She helps me a lot. She always
encourages me to speak English (介绍英语老师对自己的帮助).I have English
classes at school every day. Now I can speak English better. I can read English
books. And I see English movies on weekends (介绍学英语的方法).I think it
is useful to me. I want to learn it well.I like English very much. (再次表达对
英语的喜爱)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你的同学Mark在学习英语方面遇到了困难,请你给他提出一些建议。请
以“How to learn English”为题写一篇短文,70词左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数。
How to learn English
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第一步审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:第二人称为主
内容要点:给出学英语的几种方式
写作框架:
How to learn
English 总述 plan to give suggestions
分述 listen to songs and watch films
speak as much as possible
remember good sentences
总结 express hope
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第二步列
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高分范文 名师点评
How to learn English
How can you learn English well? Here are my
suggestions.
First , you can learn it by listening to English
songs and watching English films. You can learn some
new words.Second, you can speak it as much as
possible.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You can
also learn from these mistakes. ①使用First、
Second、Third、Last
but not least给出建
议,使文章层次更加
分明。
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高分范文 名师点评
Third, read more English magazines and newspapers. It
can improve your reading skills.Last but not least,
remember some good sentences in English. They are
really useful for writing.
I hope these suggestions can help you. ②使用祈使句,丰富文
章句型。
③使用“I hope…”表达期
望,紧扣文章开头。
文中by listening to、as much as possible、be afraid of、learn from、Last but
not least等是文中的亮点,表明了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025河北承德期末]假定你是李华,进入初中后你认识了Mike这个朋友,
他的英语学得很好。请根据提示用英语向大家介绍一下他吧。
提示:
(1)What does he look like?
(2)What are his hobbies?
(3)How can he learn English well?(至少两点)
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注意:
(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(2)词数60左右(标题已给出,不计入总词数)。
My friend
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【参考范文】
My friend
This is my friend, Mike.He is from Tianjin, but he is living in
Hebei now.Mike is tall and handsome with short brown hair and bright
eyes.He likes to read books and play sports.To improve his English,
Mike watches English movies and listens to English songs.He also writes
emails to practice his writing.These methods can help him learn English
well.
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