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英 语
七年级上册 JJ
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Unit 1 New school, new beginning!
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单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.建筑物 __________
2.借 ________
3.最喜欢的 ____________________
4.科目 _________
building
borrow
favorite/favourite
subject
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5.俱乐部 ______
6.有意义的 ____________
7.在……前面 _____________
8.帮助某人做某事 _______________________
club
meaningful
in front of
help sb (to) do sth
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二、佳句仿写
1.【教材原句】Let me show you around!(show sb around)
→仿写:欢迎来我的学校,我将带你参观它。
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Welcome to my school, and I will show you around it.
2.【教材原句】My favourite subject is PE.(My favourite subject is…)
→仿写:我最喜欢的科目是英语因为它很有趣。
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My favourite subject is English because it is interesting.
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3.【教材原句】We call her Ms Liu.(call sb sth)
→仿写:我有一个新朋友汤姆。我们叫他汤米。
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I have a new friend, Tom.We call him Tommy.
4.【教材原句】Sometimes I join them.(join sb)
→仿写:你愿意加入我们吗?
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Would you like to join us?
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第2阶 经典范文模板
I would like to tell you something about my school and school life
(表达出想要告诉的事情).
Our school has a beautiful garden and a modern library (介绍学校设
施).There are two classroom buildings. We also have a big playground. We do
sports there every day.
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Our class begins at 8:30 a.m.and ends at 5:30 p.m. (介绍上课时间)I
study many interesting subjects. I like English best because I think it is very
useful (介绍最喜欢的科目和原因).There are many different clubs. I am in the
______________ (介绍所在的俱乐部).All my teachers and classmates are
friendly and helpful.(介绍老师和同学)
I love my school (表达对学校的喜爱).
reading club
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假设你是李华,你的国外朋友Fred想了解你的初一新生活,请你在回信中介
绍你的学校生活。
参考要点:新的学校、喜欢的学科、丰富的社团生活、新的朋友……
要求:1.句意连贯,语法正确,要点齐全;
2.书写工整,卷面整洁,不少于60词,可适当增添内容;
3.文中不得出现真实信息。
Dear Fred,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:学校生活,包括朋友、科目、课外活动等
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写作框架:
总述 introduction of the topic
分述 my school
my favourite subject
my friend
my after-school activities
总结 my feeling
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第二步 列
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Dear Fred,
I’m glad to tell you about my school life.
My new school is big and beautiful. On school
days, I usually get up at 6:30 and go there at 7:30.My
favourite subject is English because it is interesting. I
have a new friend. We call him Tom. He is very kind
and he always helps me with my study. I join the
basketball club and play basketball with my friends
after school. __________________________________
①作者开门见山,直抒
胸臆,先用“I’m glad
to tell…”表明自己愉快
的心情。
②用because引导原因状
语从句,丰富了文章的
句式。
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I feel happy and excited about my school life. It
is colourful and meaningful. I hope to hear from you
soon.
Yours,
Li Hua ③体现了作者对学校生
活的热爱。
这篇习作要点齐全,语言流畅,全面介绍了初中新生活。文中glad to tell、get
up、because引导的原因状语从句等表明了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些短
语和句型也是文中的亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025河北秦皇岛期末]假如你是李华,你的
初中生活刚刚开始,你的朋友 Maria非常关心你的
学校生活。请你根据右侧的思维导图,向你的朋友
介绍一下你的学校生活吧。
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注意:
1.作文中至少包含思维导图中的5个问题;
2.短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.不少于70词。
Dear Maria,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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【参考范文】
Dear Maria,
I want to share my school life with you.
My school is not big, but it is very beautiful.My favourite subject
is English, because I think it’s very useful.I join the English club.I
can practice my spoken English and make many new friends there.I have
four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon every
day.To make my school life meaningful, I’ve been involved in community
service projects.
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I’m looking forward to hearing about your experiences as well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】知识拓展
practice doing sth意为“练习做某事”。
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