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英 语
八年级上册 JJ
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Unit 2 Festivals and holidays
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单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.灯笼 _________
2.庆祝;庆贺 ___________
lantern
celebrate
【解析】链接狂K
celebrate的详细讲解见狂K重点P10。
3.风俗;习俗;习惯 ________
4.……的象征 _____________
custom
a symbol of
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5.驱赶 ____________
6.向……表示某人的敬意 ________________________
drive away
pay one’s respects to
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I like to have fun with my family and friends during the Festival.
(have fun with… during…)
→仿写:他想在春节期间和他的朋友们一起玩乐。
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He wants to have fun with his friends during the Spring Festival.
8.【教材原句】The Mid-Autumn Festival dates back more than two thousand
years.(date back…)
→仿写:这座古老的建筑可以追溯到数百年前。
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This old building dates back hundreds of years.
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9.It shows the beauty of Chinese culture and the value of togetherness.
(show the beauty of…)
→仿写:这支传统舞蹈展现了中国民间艺术之美。
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The traditional dance shows the beauty of Chinese folk art.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Now let me tell you something about the Spring Festival (引出话题). The
Spring Festival usually comes in January or February (说明时间). It lasts for
15 days. During the Spring Festival, people use red things to decorate the house
(介绍庆祝方式). Children will . .put on all kinds of new clothes (介绍做什
么). People often visit friends and relatives and eat dumplings together
(介绍做什么). What’s more, children are always looking forward to getting
lucky money and setting off the fireworks with friends happily (介绍做什么).
I think this festival is important because it brings families closer and allows us
to honour tradition (介绍节日的意义). It shows the beauty of Chinese culture
and the value of togetherness.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025河北唐山期中]假如你是李华,你的笔友Mary想了解更多中国传统节
日。请你以“My Favourite Chinese Festival”为题,用英语写一篇短文,内容包括
以下要点:
提示:
(1)What is your favourite festival? When is it?
(2)How do people celebrate it?
(3)Why do you like it?
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注意:
(1)短文应包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80左右(标题已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Favourite Chinese Festival
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一、三人称为主
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写作框架:
MyFavourit
eChineseFe
stival 总述 最喜欢的节日及时间
I like… best. It comes in…
点明节日意义: It is a time for family members to get
together…
分述
庆祝
方式 年夜饭: On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family
members…
守岁: We also stay up late…
走亲访友: During the Spring Festival, people often visit
their relatives and close friends.
总结 喜欢原因: It can not only make us feel…, but also let us
know the importance of family.
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第二步 列
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My Favourite Chinese Festival
Among all the traditional festivals in China, I like the Spring Festival best. It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together.
On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also stay up late , hoping to have a new start in the following year. During the Spring Festival, people often visit their relatives and close friends.
It is my favourite festival because it can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also let us know the importance of family. ①使用短语 get together、such as和stay up late生动描绘出春节家人团聚的场景,使文章内容更具画面感。
②“It is a time for family members to get together.”自然流畅地引出春节家人团聚这一核心特点。
③用“not only… but also…”连接并列成分和because 引导原因状语从句;结构清晰,增强了文章的逻辑性。
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这篇习作开篇以I like the Spring Festival best直接点明最喜欢的中国传统节日是
春节,并介绍了春节的时间以及意义,此为总述部分。接着从除夕的活动以及春
节期间走亲访友等方面进行分述。结尾总结喜欢春节的原因,强调春节带来的情
感体验和家庭观念的重要性。文中的各种短语以及高级句式的运用体现了作者的
语言功底,也是文中的亮点。同时,对春节传统习俗的描述具体且贴近生活,使
文章内容丰富、真实。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025河北保定期中]在即将举行的中学生
国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的
传统节日——中秋节。请根据以下导图提示,用
英语写一篇发言稿。
注意:词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear friends,
Today I’d like to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
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【参考范文】
Dear friends,
Today I’d like to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you.
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on August 15 in the lunar calendar. When
night falls, Chinese people sit around the table with their families
and enjoy mooncakes and the full moon. In Chinese people’s view, the
moon always reminds them of family and home. As Du Fu once wrote in his
poem, “The moon viewed at home is brighter.” Children enjoy listening
to the story of Chang’e in the moonlight, which adds colour to
traditional Chinese culture. I hope you will like this festival.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
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【解析】知识拓展
remind sb of (doing) sth 提醒某人(做)某事
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