摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦“学校生活”主题写作训练,通过“高分词句储备—经典范文模版—高分范文赏析—实战演练”分阶设计,从话题词汇(如environment、uniform)和佳句仿写(如be like、take part in句型)入手,搭建从基础积累到综合应用的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握写作要点。
其亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心,结合思维品质提升,采用支架式教学法,通过范文模板(如My school life结构)、名师点评(分析逻辑顺序和语言运用)及“双减”背景下的实战演练(如How to make our after-school life more meaningful),引导学生积累素材、构建结构、灵活表达。这既助力学生提升写作水平和语言运用能力,又为教师提供可编辑、超链接跳转的系统教学资源,方便高效教学。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 YL
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Unit 2 School life
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) & Assessment &
Further study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.环境 _____________
environment
2.课本 __________
textbook
3.完成;做好 ________
finish
【解析】链接狂K
finish 的详细讲解见狂K重点P9。
4.校服;制服 _________
uniform
5.期待 _________________
look forward to
6.大量 ___________
plenty of
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】What is your school life like? (be like)
→仿写:我们的学校就像一个美丽的花园。
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Our school is like a beautiful garden.
8.【教材原句】Our school also pays a lot of attention to food education.
(pay attention to)
→仿写:我们可以重视学习,取得好成绩。
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We can pay attention to our studies and get good grades.
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9.【教材原句】… so we can take part in different types of sports.(take part in)
→仿写:我们可以有更多的时间参加课外活动。
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We can have more time to take part in after-school activities.
10.【教材原句】I hope you will find my suggestions useful and improve the
school in some of these ways.(hope)
→仿写:我希望每个月都去学校旅行。
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I hope to go on a school trip every month.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
My school life
I’d like to tell you something about my school life (直接点题).
Years ago, I had a lot of homework to do (之前的日常学习活动) every
day. I usually spent more than two hours in doing my homework (介绍时长),
so I had little time to do sport (交代体育运动少的情况).
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But now, things have changed. My school organizes all kinds of activities
(丰富的活动) to relax us and our teachers try their best to (老师辛勤的付出)
make their classes interesting (有趣的课堂).At school we get on well with
(和谐共处) my classmates and teachers. We help each other and learn from
each other (相互学习).
I hope (个人愿景) our teachers give us more suggestions on learning, and
then we will be more interested in studying.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假设你校正在举行“畅想未来”的英语征文活动。请根据以下要点提示,以“My
ideal school”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
要点提示:(1)作息时间;
(2)学习科目;
(3)学校活动。
My ideal school
My ideal school is near a lake, so the environment is nice and it is like a
beautiful garden.
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时和一般将来时
人 称:第一人称和第三人称
内容要点:介绍梦想中的学校生活,包括作息时间、学习科目、学校设施、学校
活动(俱乐部、课后活动、体育活动)等相关内容。
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写作框架:
My ideal school 总述 location
environment
分述 work and rest time
subjects
school facilities & activities
总结 feelings
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第二步 列
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__________________________________
My ideal school
My ideal school is near a lake, so the
environment is nice and it is like a beautiful garden.
I often get up late so in my ideal school the
class starts at 9 a.m .It finishes at 4 p.m. And we
have plenty of time to do after-class activities. Our
classroom will be small and there will be only
twenty students in each class. __________________________________
①get up late和 the class
starts at 9 a.m.体现了作
者的个人偏好,语言自然
真实;
②运用了“it’s+adj.+for sb
to do sth”结构,结构正
确,表达流畅;
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We will have English classes every day. Because I
think it’s important for us to learn English .My
ideal school has more clubs and after-school
activities, and it will be better if we do not have to
do much homework at weekends .
I love my ideal school very much. ③if条件状语从句反映了
学生对丰富校园生活和减
轻学业压力的期望,贴近
现实。
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这篇习作结构清晰,采用了“校园环境——课程安排——课外活动”的逻辑顺序,
要点齐全,语言简洁流畅。文中灵活运用了near a lake、after-school activities、
plenty of、have English classes、more clubs等短语和there be句型以及if引导的条
件状语从句,展现了作者较好的语言运用能力。文章结尾“I love my ideal
school very much.”简洁有力,表达了作者对理想学校的向往之情。
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025安徽合肥期中]“双减”政策(the “double reduction” policy)实施之后,
同学们有了更多可自由支配的时间。那么,如何才能让我们的课余生活过得更有
意义?请你根据以下提示,以“How to make our after-school life more
meaningful?”为题,给校报英语专栏写一篇不少于80词的短文,为同学们提供一
些建议并说明理由:
(1)Way 1: protect animals
Reason: make nature more and more beautiful
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(2)Way 2: watch plays, such as Teahouse
Reason: learn more about society
(3)Way 3: do sport
Reason: become healthier and sleep better
How to make our after-school life more meaningful?
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we students now have more free
time. And how can we make our after-school life more meaningful? Here are
some of my opinions.
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【参考范文】
How to make our after-school life more meaningful?
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we students now have
more free time.And how can we make our after-school life more
meaningful? Here are some of my opinions.
First, it’s necessary to protect animals to make nature more and
more beautiful.Second, it’s good to watch plays like Teahouse to learn
more about society.Third, we can do some sport to become healthier and
sleep better.I think sports have become more and more important in
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people’s life.Fourth, we can read fairy tales, such as Alice’s
Adventures in Wonderland.It is a good way to be happier and more
relaxed.What’s more, we can take an active part in some social
activities as volunteers to help people in need.
In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and make it more
meaningful.
【解析】温馨提示
become 的过去式是 became,过去分词是 become。
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