Unit 4 大单元话题与写作-【初中必刷题】2025-2026学年新教材八年级上册英语同步课件（人教版2024）

该初中英语课件围绕“Amazing Plants and Animals”主题写作，从话题词汇（如protect, importance）和佳句仿写（如in order to…句型）导入，通过“高分词句储备—经典范文模版—高分范文赏析—实战演练”的递进学习支架，帮助学生构建从基础表达到篇章写作的能力脉络。 其亮点在于分阶训练结合语言能力与思维品质培养，例如佳句仿写中融合教材原句与语法点应用（如one of the+最高级句型仿写熊猫句子），范文赏析通过“审体裁、列结构”引导逻辑梳理（如蓝鲸写作的开头介绍-中间描述-结尾愿望框架）。采用分阶递进教学法，学生能逐步提升写作能力，教师可借助结构化资源高效开展教学。

英 语 八年级上册 RJ 1 2 Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals 3 A 课时同步训练 大单元话题与写作 4 刷写作 5 写作 第1阶 高分词句储备 一、话题词汇 1.保护 _________ 2.重要性 ____________ 3.与……相连 ______________________ 4.实际上 _________ 5.参与某事 ________________________ 6.是……的家乡 ____________ protect importance be connected with/to in fact paly a part （in sth） be home to 刷写作 返回目录 6 二、佳句仿写 7.【教材原句】In order to store honey, they create honeycombs.（in order to…） →仿写:为了保护野生动物，我们必须采取行动。 ____________________________________________________________ In order to protect the wild animals, we must take action. 8.【教材原句】Blue whales play an important role in our world… （play a role in…） →仿写:动植物在地球的生态系统中起着重要的作用。 ____________________________________________________________________ ________ Animals and plants play an important role in the ecosystem of the earth. 链接狂K role 的详细讲解见狂K重点P27。 刷写作 返回目录 7 9.【教材原句】The ginkgo tree is one of the most ancient living trees on earth. （one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数） →仿写:熊猫是世界上最可爱的动物之一。 ____________________________________________________ Pandas are one of the cutest animals in the world. 10.【教材原句】For this reason, many scientists believe that bees are the most important animals on this planet.（for this reason） →仿写:由于这个原因，我们不能再捕杀野生动物了。 _______________________________________________________ For this reason, we can’t hunt wild animals anymore. 刷写作 返回目录 8 第2阶 经典范文模版 My favourite animal is the panda（介绍最喜欢的动物）.Pandas are so cute that they are popular （交代受欢迎的原因） all over the world. They have black and white fur, round bodies and short tails （描述形态特 征）.Their most noticeable feature is their big, black-rimmed eyes, which make them look like they are wearing glasses. Pandas spend most of their time eating bamboo （交代饮食）, as they mainly feed on it. They are slow-moving but good at climbing trees （描述行为特点）. 刷写作 返回目录 9 Pandas are national treasures of China and play a crucial role in cultural exchanges between countries （交代价值和作用）.We often see them in zoos, attracting many visitors. I hope we can protect pandas well so that they can live happily. （表达希望） 刷写作 返回目录 第3阶 高分范文赏析 假如你是一条蓝鲸，请用第一人称简单对自己的体重、饮食和习性等进行介绍。 内容包括: ●体重约200吨 ●喜欢吃海洋里的小动物 ●是世界上最大、最重的动物 要求: （1）词数不少于80； （2）文中至少使用一处最高级。 __ 刷写作 返回目录 11 第一步 审 体 裁:说明文 时 态:一般现在时 人 称:以第一人称为主 内容要点:介绍蓝鲸的食物、体重等特点 写作框架: A Blue Whale 介绍自己 name and features 具体描述 height, eating habits and so on 表达愿望 express the wishes 刷写作 返回目录 12 第二步 列 刷写作 返回目录 13 高分范文 名师点评 A Blue Whale Hello, everyone! My name is Belly, a blue whale. I am the largest and heaviest animal on earth. I am heavy and I can weigh as much as about 200 tons, but I love to swim for people to watch. They think it is one of the most beautiful things for them. ①用“Hello, everyone!”营 造出了一种亲切感。 ②“as… as…”、one of the most beautiful things 等短语的使用使描述准 确。 刷写作 返回目录 14 高分范文 名师点评 I live in all oceans except the Arctic Ocean. My favourite food is some of the tiniest animals in the ocean. I can eat around four tons of these animals a day. Besides , I have a long life and I can live up to 90 years. Do you love me, a lovely blue whale? Come to me! ③Besides使文章逻辑清 晰。 ④结尾处的疑问句可以引 起读者兴趣，使文章结构 更加完整。 续表 刷写作 返回目录 15 高分范文 名师点评 文章语义流畅，结构完整，逻辑清晰。最高级、Besides、“as… as…”的使用使文 章亮点频出。 续表 刷写作 返回目录 第4阶 实战演练 ［2025浙江衢州期中］假设你是李冬，你的英国笔友Bob给你发了一封英文邮 件，请结合以下邮件内容，给Bob回一封邮件。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，使 行文连贯。 Dear Li Dong, How are you? I know the panda is a symbol of China and I like pandas very much. But I’m so sorry to hear that they are in danger. Can you tell me something more about pandas? For example, where do they live? What’s their favourite food? 刷写作 返回目录 17 Why are they in danger and how to save them? I’m looking forward to your email. Best wishes. Yours, Bob _ 刷写作 返回目录 【参考范文】 Dear Bob, I am so glad to hear from you.And I will tell you more about pandas. As we all know, the panda is one of the best-known animals in the world.Pandas mainly live in the forests and mountains of Southwest China and live on bamboo.Each panda needs to eat a lot of bamboo every day.However, they are in danger.The reason is that the area of bamboo is becoming smaller, so pandas have less and less land to live on.We should set up more nature reserves to protect them and plant more bamboo for them to eat. 刷写作 返回目录 19 Let’s take some action to protect pandas. Yours, Li Dong 刷写作 返回目录 Value statement：Take care of animals and plants because we cannot live without them. 刷写作 返回目录 21 $$