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英 语
八年级上册 人教版
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Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Anima
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.保护_________
2.重要性____________
3.与……相连______________________
4.实际上_________
5.参与某事________________________
6.是……的家乡___________________
protect
importance
be connected with/to
in fact
play a part (in sth)
be home to sb/sth
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】In order to store honey, they create honeycombs.(in order to…)
→仿写:为了保护野生动物,我们必须马上采取行动。
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In order to protect the wild animals, we must take action right now.
8.【教材原句】Bees play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet.
(play a part in…)
→仿写:动植物在地球的生态系统中起着重要的作用。
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Animals and plants play an important part in the ecosystem of the earth.
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9.【教材原句】The ginkgo tree is one of the most ancient living trees on earth.
(one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数)
→仿写:熊猫是世界上最可爱的动物之一。
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Pandas are one of the cutest animals in the world.
10.【教材原句】For this reason, many scientists believe that bees are the most
important animals on this planet.(for this reason)
→仿写:出于这个原因,我们不能再捕杀野生动物了。
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For this reason, we can’t hunt wild animals anymore.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
My favourite animal is the panda(介绍最喜欢的动物).Pandas are so cute
that they are popular (交代熊猫受欢迎的原因) all over the world.
They have black and white fur, with round bodies and short tails
(描述熊猫的形态特征).Their most noticeable feature is their black-rimmed eyes,
which make them look like they are wearing glasses. Pandas spend most of their
time eating bamboo (交代熊猫的饮食情况), as they mainly feed on it. They
are slow-moving but good at climbing trees (描述熊猫的行为特点).
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Pandas are . .national treasures of China and play a crucial role in cultural
exchanges between countries (交代熊猫的价值和作用).We often see them in
zoos to attract many visitors.
I hope we can protect pandas well so that they can live happily in nature
(表达希望).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是一头蓝鲸,请用第一人称简单对自己的体重、饮食和习性等进行介绍。
内容包括:(1)体重约200吨;
(2)喜欢吃海洋里的小动物;
(3)是世界上最大且最重的动物。
要求:(1)词数不少于80;
(2)文中至少使用一处含最高级的句子。
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第一步审
体裁:说明文
时态:一般现在时
人称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:介绍相关情况,包括饮食、体重、居住环境、习性等
写作框架:
A Blue Whale 介绍自己 name and features
具体描述 height, eating habits and so on
表达愿望 express the wishes
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第二步列
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A Blue Whale
Hello, everyone! My name is Belly, the blue
whale which is the largest and heaviest animal on
earth.
I am heavy and I can weigh as much as
about 200 tons, but I love to swim for people to
watch. They think it is one of the most beautiful
things . __________________________________
①以蓝鲸的口吻进行叙述,
营造出一种亲切感,使读者
更容易产生共鸣。
②as much as和one of the
most beautiful things的使用
增加了作文的亮点。
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I live in all oceans except the Arctic Ocean.
My favourite food is some of the tiniest animals in
the ocean. I can eat around four tons of these
animals a day.
Besides , I have a long life and I can live
up to 90 years.
Do you love me, a lovely blue whale?
Come to me! ③Besides的使用既使文章
的逻辑清晰,又凸显了作者
的写作能力。
④结尾处的疑问句可以引起
读者兴趣,使文章结构完
整。
文章语言流畅,结构完整,逻辑清晰。最高级、Besides、“as… as…”的使用使文
章亮点频出。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025浙江衢州期中]假设你是李冬,你的英国笔友Bob给你发了一封英文邮
件,请结合以下邮件内容,给Bob回一封邮件。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,使
行文连贯。
Dear Li Dong,
How are you?
I know the panda is a symbol of China and I like the panda very much.
But I’m so sorry to hear that they are in danger. Can you tell me something
more about pandas? For example, where do they live? What’s their favourite food?
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Why are they in danger and how to save them? I’m looking forward to your
email.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Bob
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【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
I am so glad to hear from you.And I will tell you more about pandas.
As we all know, the panda is one of the best-known animals in the
world.Pandas live in the forests and mountains of Southwest China.They
mainly live on bamboo.However, they are in danger.The reason is that
the area of bamboo is becoming smaller, so pandas have less and less
land to live on.We should set up more nature reserves to protect them
and plant more bamboo for them to eat.
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Let’s take some action to protect the panda.
Yours,
Li Dong
【解析】链接狂K
one of结构的详细讲解见狂K重点P28。
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Value statement:Take care of animals and plants because we cannot
live without them.
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