Unit 6 When was it invented 发明与创造（单元写作精练）英语人教版九年级全一册

Unit 6 When was it invented ? （发明与创造） 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：发明与创造 当前，科技发展日新月异，高新产业更是突飞猛进。现代科技改变了人们的生活，也激发了全民学科学、爱科学、用科学的热情，形成了“大众创业，万众创新”的科学热潮。本单元以“谈论发明物的历史及用途”为话题，涉及科普知识与技术等内容，是学生最感兴趣的话题之一。写作体裁多为说明文，写好这类文章一定要抓住事物的特征、功能和用途。在中考中，说明文一般要按照“总一分”结构或并列结构布局，而且在说明一件事物的时候，应按照一定的顺序：如时间顺序、空间顺序或逻提职序等。 素材积累 【开头句】 1. Science plays an important part in our life. 科学在我们的生活中起着重要作用。 2. … is an important/ useful invention. ……是一项重要的/有用的发明。 3. WeChat is widely used in the world. 微信在世界上被广泛使用。 4. Shared bikes are more and more popular now. 共享单车现在越来越受欢迎。 5. If I was an inventor. I want to invent a robot. 如果我是发明家。我想发明一个机器人。 6. Shopping online is very popular among young people. 网上购物在年轻人中非常流行。 【中间句】 1. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. 一般来说，其优势可以如下体现。 2. Computers can do most of the things people can do. 计算机可以做大多数人能做的事情。 3. Using smartphones distracts our attention from our lessons. 使用智能手机会分散我们对课程的注意力。 4. Some students spend too much time online, playing electronic games and sending text messages after class. 一些学生花太多时间上网，课后玩电子游戏和发短信。 【结尾句】 Through the above, I believe that the positive aspects overweight the negative ones. 通过上述内容，我相信积极方面超过了消极方面。 真题示例： （2024·山东青岛·中考真题）科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如computers，cars，smart phones，e-books，robots，Internet…请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。 要求: 1. 词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, __________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（2025·河南驻马店·三模）AI (人工智能) 的发展催生出了许多智能产品，陪护机器人 (companion robot) 就是其中之一。如果你的父母不在家，你是否会选择和陪护机器人待在一起呢？请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下观点中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你对陪护机器人的观点。 YES NO ☆ wise and knows a lot ☆ can talk with me ☆ will never get tired ☆ expensive ☆ can’t look after me like a real person ☆ needs to be charged (充电) 写作要求： 1.文中须包含所选观点的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Will you choose to stay with a companion robot if your parents are not at home?_______________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2025·广东深圳·三模）假设你是李华，你设计的一项小发明在学校科技展览中荣获一等奖。请你写一篇发言稿，在学校英语角分享此项发明的功能特点，制作过程中遇到的挑战并发表获奖感想。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2.可以添加适当细节以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学习名称； 4.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My Little Invention Good morning, everyone! Today I’d like to talk about... __________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 3．（24-25九年级上·云南昆明·期末）科技改变生活，发明无处不在。我们对许多发明都无比熟悉，例如 computers, cars, smartphones, e-books, robots, Internet, AI ……这些发明影响和改变着我们的学习生活。请你以“Invention and Life”为题，写一篇短文。内容包含以下方面： 1.介绍一项你觉得最有用的发明 (如外形、功能、用途等)。 2.结合你自己的经历，谈谈它与生活的关系。(它是如何影响和改变你的学习生活的? ） 3.你对这项发明的未来有怎样的预期？你觉得它未来会变成什么样？为什么？ 要求： 1.内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。 2. 文中不得出现真实信息 (姓名、校名等)。如用学校名，请使用Gumming Middle School。 3.词数不少于80词。 Invention and Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（24-25九年级上·重庆忠县·期末）随着社会的发展，各种发明以及科技产品为我们的日常生活带来越来越多的便利。李华一直想发明一种可以改善环境的东西。两周前，他终于成功了。他发明了一种特殊的箱子（Magic Dustbin）。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍李华的发明。 提示：1、用途：装垃圾；2、功能：会说不同的语言，它会把人们乱扔的垃圾打扫干净，并提醒人们不要乱扔垃圾。3、评价：有用、便宜、节约人力和财力。 要求： 1、包括上述所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2、根据所给题目， 写一篇短文，字数80-100。 3、文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的真实名称。 4、语句通顺，字迹工整。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（24-25九年级上·河南开封·期末）科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如电脑、汽车、手机、电子书、机器人、因特网等等。请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。 要求： 1. 词数110左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等！相关信息。 Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, __________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（22-23九年级上·四川巴中·期末）电脑是一种发明，它改变了人们的生活，但是电脑有优点，也有缺点。请你以“A Invention—Computer”为题写一篇短文，发表一下对学生玩电脑游戏的看法。词数100词左右。 内容提示： 1.电脑游戏为学生带来娱乐。 2.学生们玩游戏，锻炼了他们的反应能力，扩展了想象力。 3.但有些学生整日整夜地玩，家长们非常担心，因为这会影响学生们的学习和视力。 A Invention—Computer ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（23-24九年级上·广东广州·期末）学校科技节即将来临，请根据以下思维导图准备一份演讲稿，介绍一款名叫“天猫精灵”（Tmall Genie）的语音助手。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 （参考词汇：remind 提醒） My Smart Friend: Tmall Genie Hello, everyone! Here I’d like to introduce my smart friend: Tmall Genie.___________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期末）学校英语社团下周活动主题为“My invention”。假设你是社团成员李华，你计划向同学介绍你的发明。请你根据以下表格完成一篇短文。 我的发明 My invention 名称 智能雨伞 具体介绍 1. 外形： 和普通雨伞一样； 有一个照相机 2. 特点： ①可以拍照及播放音乐：②……(请补充一个特点)： 3.运行方式： ①声音控制；②…… (请补充一点运行方式。) 对发明的评价 1. 实用；2. ……(请补充一点评价) 【要求】 1. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和学校； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 【参考词汇】 common 常见的，普通的 My invention My invention is a smart umbrella. __________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）科学技术日新月异，新发明给人们的生活带来了很多便利。假定你家就有一台智能家用电器 (smart appliance) — 扫地机器人 (robot cleaner)，请你根据以下表格提示，写一篇关于它的英语短文，给同学们介绍一下它。 扫地机器人 (robot cleaner) 外形 (What does it look like?) 圆形的，像个大蛋糕 有轮子，可自由移动 特点 (What is special about it?) 像人一样聪明，能自动清洁地板 可用手机控制，使用方便 你的看法 (Your opinion …) (自行补充一个推荐它的理由) 要求： 1.    80-100词 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.    书写分2分； 3.    要点齐全，用词恰当，内容连贯，标点正确； 4.    文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（24-25九年级上·重庆铜梁·期末）2024年，9岁的重庆女孩徐紫琪发明“防地震桌椅”获得了国家专利，并在2024年宋庆龄少年儿童发明奖重庆赛区中荣获金奖。 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友迈克在网上了解到这个信息，想请你给他进一步介绍该发明。请你根据提示，给他写一封电子邮件。 参考信息： Name A set of earthquake-proof desk and chair Inventor Xu Ziqi, a 9-year-old girl from Chongqing What it looks like A set of normal desk and chair How it works Pull out the latch (拔掉插销) under the chair to make it a bed under the desk, pull the curtains (帘) around the desk to make a safe space Use To protect the students during the earthquake, to take a nap (小憩) after lunch 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校； 2. 词数：80词左右。文章开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m writing to tell you more about the invention that won the Soong Ching Ling Award for Children’s Invention this year._____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 6 When was it invented ? （发明与创造） 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：发明与创造 当前，科技发展日新月异，高新产业更是突飞猛进。现代科技改变了人们的生活，也激发了全民学科学、爱科学、用科学的热情，形成了“大众创业，万众创新”的科学热潮。本单元以“谈论发明物的历史及用途”为话题，涉及科普知识与技术等内容，是学生最感兴趣的话题之一。写作体裁多为说明文，写好这类文章一定要抓住事物的特征、功能和用途。在中考中，说明文一般要按照“总一分”结构或并列结构布局，而且在说明一件事物的时候，应按照一定的顺序：如时间顺序、空间顺序或逻提职序等。 素材积累 【开头句】 1. Science plays an important part in our life. 科学在我们的生活中起着重要作用。 2. … is an important/ useful invention. ……是一项重要的/有用的发明。 3. WeChat is widely used in the world. 微信在世界上被广泛使用。 4. Shared bikes are more and more popular now. 共享单车现在越来越受欢迎。 5. If I was an inventor. I want to invent a robot. 如果我是发明家。我想发明一个机器人。 6. Shopping online is very popular among young people. 网上购物在年轻人中非常流行。 【中间句】 1. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. 一般来说，其优势可以如下体现。 2. Computers can do most of the things people can do. 计算机可以做大多数人能做的事情。 3. Using smartphones distracts our attention from our lessons. 使用智能手机会分散我们对课程的注意力。 4. Some students spend too much time online, playing electronic games and sending text messages after class. 一些学生花太多时间上网，课后玩电子游戏和发短信。 【结尾句】 Through the above, I believe that the positive aspects overweight the negative ones. 通过上述内容，我相信积极方面超过了消极方面。 真题示例： （2024·山东青岛·中考真题）科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如computers，cars，smart phones，e-books，robots，Internet…请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。 要求: 1. 词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, __________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, the computer has become an important part . And it changed me a lot. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet. If I feel stressed from time to time, I can listen to music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online.       But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the Internet. This makes me lazy and too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。 ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：从题干所给的科技中选择一种，谈谈这个发明对自己的影响以及是如何改变自己的生活的。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，是哪一个发明改变了自己； 第二步，介绍这项发明是如何改变自己的生活的； 第三步，介绍自己的感受总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①with the help of在……的帮助下 ②search for寻找 ③from time to time不时 [高分句型] ①If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.（省略that的宾语从句） 1．（2025·河南驻马店·三模）AI (人工智能) 的发展催生出了许多智能产品，陪护机器人 (companion robot) 就是其中之一。如果你的父母不在家，你是否会选择和陪护机器人待在一起呢？请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下观点中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你对陪护机器人的观点。 YES NO ☆ wise and knows a lot ☆ can talk with me ☆ will never get tired ☆ expensive ☆ can’t look after me like a real person ☆ needs to be charged (充电) 写作要求： 1.文中须包含所选观点的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Will you choose to stay with a companion robot if your parents are not at home?_______________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文1 Will you choose to stay with a companion robot if your parents are not at home? As for me, I agree to have a companion robot at home. Here are my ideas about the robot. Firstly, the companion robot seems very wise and it knows a lot about all my subjects. When I have problems with my schoolwork, it will help me to solve the problems. Secondly, it can talk with me and then I won’t feel lonely when I stay at home alone. Thirdly, the robot will never get tired and it can keep playing with me until I get tired. In a word, it will be a great idea for me to stay with a companion robot if my parents are not at home. 例文2 Will you choose to stay with a companion robot if your parents are not at home? As for me, I refuse to have a companion robot at home. Here are my ideas about the robot. Firstly, the companion robot might be very expensive. I think my parents can’t afford to buy one. Secondly, the robot can’t look after me like a real person. If I fall ill, the robot can’t take care of me like my mother. Thirdly, the robot can’t work all the time. Sometimes it needs to be charged. It will lose its value if it has no power or battery. In all, I prefer to stay alone rather than stay with a companion robot if my parents are not at home. 【详解】以例文1为例 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：选择一个观点，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己的选择——和陪护机器人待在一起； 第二步，从陪护机器人的优点出发，阐述自己这种选择的理由； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①agree to do 同意做某事 ②have problems with 某方面有困难 ③keep doing 坚持做某事 [高分句型] ①When I have problems with my schoolwork, it will help me to solve the problems. (when引导时间状语从句) ②In a word, it will be a great idea for me to stay with a companion robot if my parents are not at home. (if引导条件状语从句，“主将从现”原则) 2．（2025·广东深圳·三模）假设你是李华，你设计的一项小发明在学校科技展览中荣获一等奖。请你写一篇发言稿，在学校英语角分享此项发明的功能特点，制作过程中遇到的挑战并发表获奖感想。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2.可以添加适当细节以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学习名称； 4.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My Little Invention Good morning, everyone! Today I’d like to talk about... __________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【答案】 My Little Invention Good morning, everyone! Today I’d like to talk about my invention—the Smart Desk Organizer, which won first prize at our school’s science and technology exhibition. This organizer has several useful functions. It has a built-in USB charger for electronic devices, so we can easily charge our phones or tablets. There are also adjustable compartments to keep books, notebooks and stationery tidy. When making it, I faced challenges. The biggest one was programming the charging system to work safely. I spent days researching and testing, and finally solved the problem with the help of my science teacher. Winning this prize makes me realize that innovation needs patience and effort. I hope my invention can inspire you to create too. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：作文要求写一篇发言稿，介绍自己设计的一项发明的功能特点、制作过程中遇到的挑战并发表获奖感想，注意正确用词，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，介绍自己的一项小发明——智能书桌整理器； 第二步，介绍其功能； 第三步，分享制作过程中遇到的挑战； 第四步，发表获奖感想； 第五步，表达感谢（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ① spend time doing 花费时间做某事 ② with the help of sb. 在某人的帮助下 ③ inspire sb. to do sth. 激励某人做某事 [高分句型] ① Today I’d like to talk about my invention—the Smart Desk Organizer, which won first prize at our school’s science and technology exhibition. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ② There are also adjustable compartments to keep books, notebooks and stationery tidy. (there be句式) ③ Winning this prize makes me realize that innovation needs patience and effort. (that引导宾语从句) 3．（24-25九年级上·云南昆明·期末）科技改变生活，发明无处不在。我们对许多发明都无比熟悉，例如 computers, cars, smartphones, e-books, robots, Internet, AI ……这些发明影响和改变着我们的学习生活。请你以“Invention and Life”为题，写一篇短文。内容包含以下方面： 1.介绍一项你觉得最有用的发明 (如外形、功能、用途等)。 2.结合你自己的经历，谈谈它与生活的关系。(它是如何影响和改变你的学习生活的? ） 3.你对这项发明的未来有怎样的预期？你觉得它未来会变成什么样？为什么？ 要求： 1.内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。 2. 文中不得出现真实信息 (姓名、校名等)。如用学校名，请使用Gumming Middle School。 3.词数不少于80词。 Invention and Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Invention and Life    Inventions have changed our lives, and among them, I think the smartphone is the most useful one. The smartphone is small and portable. It allows us to make phone calls, chat with friends, search for information, take photos and even shop online.     For me, the smartphone has greatly influenced my life. For example, I use it to check online dictionaries to learn English more efficiently. When I encounter problems in math, I watch videos or search for answers online. Moreover, I use apps to manage my study schedule and organize tasks.     In the future, I expect smartphones to become even smarter and more advanced. They may be able to recognize emotions and provide real-time assistance based on users’ needs. With such innovations, I believe smartphones will make life even more convenient and enjoyable. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：提出主题，选择认为最有用的发明，并描述其外形和功能； 第二步：结合实际生活，说明这项发明对日常学习或生活的影响； 第三步：对这项发明的未来预期，表达个人希望和理由。 [亮点词汇] ①portable便携的 ②search for information 搜索信息 ③real-time assistance 实时帮助 [高分句型] ①I use it to check online dictionaries to learn English more efficiently. (不定式作目的状语) ②With such innovations, I believe smartphones will make life even more convenient and enjoyable. (宾语从句) 4．（24-25九年级上·重庆忠县·期末）随着社会的发展，各种发明以及科技产品为我们的日常生活带来越来越多的便利。李华一直想发明一种可以改善环境的东西。两周前，他终于成功了。他发明了一种特殊的箱子（Magic Dustbin）。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍李华的发明。 提示：1、用途：装垃圾；2、功能：会说不同的语言，它会把人们乱扔的垃圾打扫干净，并提醒人们不要乱扔垃圾。3、评价：有用、便宜、节约人力和财力。 要求： 1、包括上述所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2、根据所给题目， 写一篇短文，字数80-100。 3、文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的真实名称。 4、语句通顺，字迹工整。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Since Li Hua was very young, he has dreamed of inventing something that can help to improve the environment. Two weeks ago, he achieved his dream. A special box was invented by him. It’s used for holding waste. It can speak different languages. If someone drops litter on the ground, it will be cleaned up by the box at once. At the same time, the person will be told not to do that again by the box. The special box makes the streets clean. It’s a very useful invention and it doesn’t cost much. By using it, more cleaners and money can be saved. What do you think of this invention? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文属于材料作文； ②时态：本文以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：按照要点进行阐述，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍李华的发明及其用途； 第二步，对李华的发明进行评价。 [亮点词汇] ①dream of doing sth梦想做某事 ②be used for doing sth用于做某事 [高分句型] ①Since Li Hua was very young, he has dreamed of inventing something that can help to improve the environment. (since引导的时间状语从句，that引导的定语从句) ②If someone drops litter on the ground, it will be cleaned up by the box at once. (if引导的条件状语从句) 5．（24-25九年级上·河南开封·期末）科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如电脑、汽车、手机、电子书、机器人、因特网等等。请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。 要求： 1. 词数110左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等！相关信息。 Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, __________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, the smartphone has the greatest impact on me. It’s like a magic wand that changes how I communicate, learn, and entertain myself. With a smartphone, I can chat with friends, no matter where they are, through social media or messaging apps. It also allows me to access a wealth of information and knowledge at my fingertips, which is helpful for my studies. Moreover, it’s a portal to the world of entertainment, with games, music, and videos that I can enjoy anytime, anywhere. The smartphone has truly become an extension of myself, making my life more convenient, connected, and colorful. It’s not just a device; it’s a companion that enriches my everyday experiences. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 本文是一篇话题作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：根据题干，选一项发明，谈谈其对自己的影响。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接给出的开头，点明手机对自己影响最大； 第二步，介绍手机是如何影响自己的生活的； 第三步，写出总结，表明手机对自己的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①has the greatest impact on 对……有最大的影响 ②chat with friends和朋友聊天 ③allows me to允许我做…… ④a wealth of很多的 ⑤Moreover另外 [高分句型] ①It’s like a magic wand that changes how I communicate, learn, and entertain myself. (that引导的限制性定语从句) ②It also allows me to access a wealth of information and knowledge at my fingertips, which is incredibly helpful for my studies. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 6．（22-23九年级上·四川巴中·期末）电脑是一种发明，它改变了人们的生活，但是电脑有优点，也有缺点。请你以“A Invention—Computer”为题写一篇短文，发表一下对学生玩电脑游戏的看法。词数100词左右。 内容提示： 1.电脑游戏为学生带来娱乐。 2.学生们玩游戏，锻炼了他们的反应能力，扩展了想象力。 3.但有些学生整日整夜地玩，家长们非常担心，因为这会影响学生们的学习和视力。 A Invention—Computer ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Invention—Computer It is believed that computer is a great invention that influences people’s life and changes the world. It has advantages as well as the disadvantages. Many people would like to play computer games because they can relax themselves and make new friends on the Internet. Some students think playing computer games will make them think differently and act quickly. It will also benefit their imagination. But for the students, it seems that computers bring more disadvantages because most of the students can’t control themselves and they can’t balance the study and the entertainment. Parents and teachers are also worried because playing computer games for too long will be bad for their study and eyes. All in all, computer is a great invention if people can use it properly. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文。从玩电脑游戏的利弊进行分析； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：从内容上分为玩游戏的优点，玩游戏的缺点，最后做总结，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，将文章分为总体引入，中间分析优点和缺点，最后总结三个部分； 第二步，初步形成文章，注意前后逻辑； 第三步，用适当的句型和短语对文章进行升级，并注意连接词的使用。 [亮点词汇] ①influences people’s life and changes the world影响人们的生活并改变世界； ②benefit their imagination有益于他们的想象力； ③balance the study and the entertainment平衡学习和娱乐。 [高分句型] ①It is believed that computer is a great invention that influences people’s life and changes the world.(it作形式主语) ②Some students think playing computer games will make them think differently and act quickly.(宾语从句) ③Parents and teachers are also worried because playing computer games for too long will be bad for their study and eyes. (原因状语从句) 7．（23-24九年级上·广东广州·期末）学校科技节即将来临，请根据以下思维导图准备一份演讲稿，介绍一款名叫“天猫精灵”（Tmall Genie）的语音助手。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 （参考词汇：remind 提醒） My Smart Friend: Tmall Genie Hello, everyone! Here I’d like to introduce my smart friend: Tmall Genie.___________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Smart Friend: Tmall Genie Hello, everyone! Here I’d like to introduce my smart friend: Tmall Genie. It is so small that it is convenient to carry wherever we go. Also, both its colours and pictures are beautiful. It can provide different kinds of service forus. Whenever we have problems with our life or study, just speak to it and it will offer us the help that we need. In addition, the music it plays can make us relaxed after a hard day’s work or study. Meanwhile, the children are easy to fall asleep by listening to the story that it tells. Also, it can remind you of important dates so that we can’t forget the important things we have to do. Every time we want to know what is happening, it will tell us some up-to-date information at home and abroad immediately. In general, I have found my life moreenjoyable and colourful since it came into my life. It is always with me like my closest friend. It can almost do whatever it is asked to. That is why I like it so much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：采用 “一般现在时” ； ③提示：要求包含思维导图中所有内容，并适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先承接开头引出主题——天猫精灵，并简单介绍其大小和颜色； 第二步，具体介绍它可以做的事情； 第三步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①both...and...两者都 ②different kinds of不同种类的 ③remind sb of sth提醒某人 ④so that为了 [高分句型] ①It is so small that it is convenient to carry wherever we go.  (so...that引导的结果状语从句；wherever引导的让步状语从句) ②Whenever we have problems with our life or study, just speak to it and it will offer us the help that we need. (whenever引导让步状语从句；that引导的定语从句) ③Also, it can remind you of important dates so that we can’t forget the important things we have to do. (so that引导目的状语从句) ④That is why I like it so much. (why引导表语状语从句) 8．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期末）学校英语社团下周活动主题为“My invention”。假设你是社团成员李华，你计划向同学介绍你的发明。请你根据以下表格完成一篇短文。 我的发明 My invention 名称 智能雨伞 具体介绍 1. 外形： 和普通雨伞一样； 有一个照相机 2. 特点： ①可以拍照及播放音乐：②……(请补充一个特点)： 3.运行方式： ①声音控制；②…… (请补充一点运行方式。) 对发明的评价 1. 实用；2. ……(请补充一点评价) 【要求】 1. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和学校； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 【参考词汇】 common 常见的，普通的 My invention My invention is a smart umbrella. __________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My invention My invention is a smart umbrella. The smart umbrella looks like a common umbrella. But there is a camera inside it. With it, we can use the umbrella to take photos. It can also play music for us. Besides, the umbrella can dry itself really soon, so it won’t make things wet on rainy days. We can just use our voice to control it. If we shout “open”, the umbrella will start to work. What’s more, the umbrella uses solar power instead of batteries. My invention is useful, convenient and green. It will help people live a better life in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你的发明的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“假设你是社团成员李华，你计划向同学介绍你的发明”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“名词、具体介绍、对发明的评价等”几个方面重点介绍你的发明的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“它将帮助人们在未来过上更好的生活”的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①look like看起来像； ②use…to do sth使用……去做某事； ③what’s more而且； ④instead of而不是。 [高分句型] ①But there is a camera inside it. (“there be”句型) ②We can just use our voice to control it. (动词不定式作宾语补足语) 9．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）科学技术日新月异，新发明给人们的生活带来了很多便利。假定你家就有一台智能家用电器 (smart appliance) — 扫地机器人 (robot cleaner)，请你根据以下表格提示，写一篇关于它的英语短文，给同学们介绍一下它。 扫地机器人 (robot cleaner) 外形 (What does it look like?) 圆形的，像个大蛋糕 有轮子，可自由移动 特点 (What is special about it?) 像人一样聪明，能自动清洁地板 可用手机控制，使用方便 你的看法 (Your opinion …) (自行补充一个推荐它的理由) 要求： 1.    80-100词 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.    书写分2分； 3.    要点齐全，用词恰当，内容连贯，标点正确； 4.    文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      With the development of science, new inventions make our life more convenient. In my home, there is a smart appliance — a robot cleaner.     My robot cleaner’s name is Le Le. She is round like a big cake. She has four wheels, so she can move freely. She is very clever like a person. When somewhere is dirty, I say, “Come here, LeLe.” She moves right now and cleans the place which is dirty. Also, she can go back where she should be by herself. She can do many things. We can use the smart phone to operate her and it is easy and convenient. With her help, I have a lot of time to do more important things.    I like my robot cleaner very much. Do you want a robot cleaner like her? 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“自行补充一个推荐它的理由”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明新发明对我们的影响，引出自己有一个扫地机器人； 第二步，具体介绍扫地机器人的外形和特点； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①with the development of science随着科学的发展 ②right now立刻 ③by oneself独力地 ④with one’s help在某人的帮助下 [高分句型] ①She moves right now and cleans the place which is dirty. (which引导定语从句) ②she can go back where she should be by herself. (where引导宾语从句) 10．（24-25九年级上·重庆铜梁·期末）2024年，9岁的重庆女孩徐紫琪发明“防地震桌椅”获得了国家专利，并在2024年宋庆龄少年儿童发明奖重庆赛区中荣获金奖。 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友迈克在网上了解到这个信息，想请你给他进一步介绍该发明。请你根据提示，给他写一封电子邮件。 参考信息： Name A set of earthquake-proof desk and chair Inventor Xu Ziqi, a 9-year-old girl from Chongqing What it looks like A set of normal desk and chair How it works Pull out the latch (拔掉插销) under the chair to make it a bed under the desk, pull the curtains (帘) around the desk to make a safe space Use To protect the students during the earthquake, to take a nap (小憩) after lunch 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校； 2. 词数：80词左右。文章开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m writing to tell you more about the invention that won the Soong Ching Ling Award for Children’s Invention this year._____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mike, I’m writing to tell you more about the invention that won the Soong Ching Ling Award for Children’s Invention this year. It’s a set of earthquake-proof desk and chair invented by Xu Ziqi, a 9-year-old girl from Chongqing. It looks just like normal desk and chair. When an earthquake happens, you can pull out the latch under the chair to make it a bed under the desk, and pull the curtains around the desk to create a safe space. It can protect students during an earthquake and also be used for taking a nap after lunch. Isn’t it amazing? Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏提示信息，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写信目的。 第二步，具体介绍徐紫琪发明的“防地震桌椅”外观、功能及使用方法等。 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①a set of一套…… ②look like 看起来像…… ③be used for 被用作…… [高分句型] ①It’s a set of earthquake-proof desk and chair invented by Xu Ziqi, a 9-year-old girl from Chongqing.（过去分词短语作定语） ②When an earthquake happens, you can pull out the latch under the chair to make it a bed under the desk, and pull the curtains around the desk to create a safe space.（when引导的时间状语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$