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Unit 5 What are the shirts made of ?
(中国制造)
单元写作精练
写作主题
识
写作主题:中国制造
本单元涉及的话题是“中国制造的东西”,而话题作文常涉及民间艺术及文化传承。这是一个适合记叙、说明两种体裁相结合的话题,同时也是学生喜欢写,有话写的题材。写好这类文章,最重要的是准确捕捉写作“精髓”,有条理地把要描述的某一事物展现出来,此类话题的写作要立足事实,表达真情实感。
素材积累
【开头篇】
1、 …is invented by…
2、It is believed that the first…is invented by…in…
3、It is invented when sb was…
4、Sb.al always have difficulty in doing sth., so he invented this.
5、It is used for…
【中间篇】
1、 It is made of…
2、It looks like…
3、It has…
4、Not only can it help you…, but also it can help you…
【结尾篇】
1、 I have never worried about my…, since I had this….
2、Nowadays, it has become so popular in the world and a lot of people like to used it.
3、It has made great contribution to the progress of the society.
真题示例:
(2024·山东枣庄·中考真题)为了培养学生的发明和创新精神,学校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假定你是李华,你准备发明一件物品,参加本次大赛。请你以“I want to invent ________”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的发明物。内容包括:
注意:(1)请先补全标题;
(2)短文须全面反映图文信息;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(4)词数 80~100。
I want to invent ________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
②I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective.(省略that的宾语从句)
1.学校英文网站最近正在举行主题为“My favorite invention”的征文比赛。假设你是王华,打算参加这次比赛。请根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语短文,不少于80词。
light bulb
Inventor
Thomas Edison,美国发明家
Time
1879年10月21日
Material
玻璃和金属
Use
照明,让人们在夜晚工作或学习成为可能
Development
节能(save energy),环保,便宜
My favorite invention
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.发明改变世界。请你根据表格,以 “The Most Useful Invention”为题,写一篇短文介绍手机的发明时间、人物,手机的至少三个用途,并至少谈两点作为青少年的你们如何合理地使用手机,使它真正成为最有用的发明之一。
The Most Useful Invention
Invention
The mobile phone
Inventor
American, Martin Cooper
Time
1973
Usage (用途)
1. talk with people
2. ...
3. ...
Your opinions about how to use them well
1. ...
2. ...
要求:
(1) 短文必须包含所有提示信息;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等;
(3) 80词左右 (开头部分已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Most Useful Invention
Mobile phones are one of the most useful inventions. ___________________________________________
3.为践行科教兴国战略,为国家培养创新型科技人才,在日常学习生活中激发学生的发明和创新精神,我校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假如你是李华,准备参加本次大赛。请你以“I want to invent ________”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你所发明的物品。内容包括:
参考词汇:be used for, look like, convenient, make a difference to …
要求:1. 请先补全标题,再写正文内容;
2. 正文必须包含思维导图中的要点信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整、规范;
4. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
5. 词数:不少于70。(部分内容已给出,但不计入总词数。)
I want to invent ________
An invention competition will be held in our school. I can’t wait to join in it. _________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.近年来,汉服在国内越来越受欢迎。假如你是李华——汉服爱好者,你的外国朋友Jane对此很感兴趣。请你根据提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,向她介绍汉服(Han Costume)及你喜欢汉服的原因。
由棉、丝绸等制成,有各种不同的装饰
汉族的传统服装,代表中华文化
有四千多年的历史,不同的朝代,汉服款式也不一样
不同于西式服装,影响其它亚洲国家的服装
参考词汇:汉族 Han nationality,代表 represent,朝代 dynasty
要求:1. 内容必须包含提示的所有要点;可适当发挥;注意语言的多样性;
2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、卷面整洁、书写规范;
3. 文章不能出现真实姓名。词数100左右。
Dear Jane,
How are you these days? I know you are interested in the Han costume in China. Now, let me tell you something about it.____________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友John发邮件给你,他说他非常喜欢放风筝,想了解潍坊风筝及潍坊国际风筝节的有关情况。请你根据下面的提示,给他回一封电子邮件,做相关介绍。
History
over 2, 000 years
Materials
bamboo, paper/silk
Features (特征)
different sizes, shapes and colors
Weifang International Kite Festival
start in 1984; once a year; famous around the world; usually in April or May
注意:
1. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your email. __________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友David对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请选择你喜欢的一种传统工艺品或者传统美食,用英语写一篇短文,与他分享中国传统文化。词数80词以上。
1.这种传统工艺品 (artwork) 或者传统美食是什么?
2.制作的材质,制作步骤或相关故事,象征意义等;
3.你使用/制作这种工艺品或这种传统美食的一次经历,感想。
要求:
1.参考提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的人名、校名和班级。
Dear David,
I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture. _____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.我们的家乡富阳以造纸而闻名。至今已经有1900年的历史。请结合下面的相关信息,以“Paper Made in FuYang’”为题写一篇英语短文来介绍富阳的纸,可适当发挥。
产地:浙江富阳;材料:木头和竹子为主;特点:纸质薄、软;用途:书法、作画、日常生活……
Paper Made in FuYang
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8.学校“创新发明”社团将在下周举行创新发明资格选拔,作为参赛选手,请以“I want to invent ________”为题写一篇短文,向组委会介绍你的发明项目。先把题目补充完整,再结合下列提示问题进行写作。
1. What kind of thing do you want to invent?
2. Why?(Give at least two reasons)
3. What can it be used for?
写作要求:1.紧扣主题,适当发挥,语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯;
2.书写工整,不少于80词。请考生将题目写在答题卡相应处。
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(校名,姓名,地名等)。.
I want to invent ________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.“苟日新,日日新,又日新”古有四大发明,今有科技创新。从造纸术、指南针到新能源汽车和AI人工智能,都给我们的生活带来了改变和便利。学校校刊正在举办科技节英文征文活动,请你以“My Favorite Invention” 为题,根据下面表格内容写一篇短文,参加英语校刊活动。
My favorite invention
What is your favorite invention? (smartphone, AI car, Deepseek... )
What is it used for?
What can it do?
Why do you like it best?
Something more you want to say.
写作要求:
1. 根据表格问题提示,适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
3. 词数90词左右,开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Invention
There are many great inventions in our daily life. _______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.请你根据下面的提示, 以 “A Useful Invention—Nubrella” 为题, 写一篇90词左右的英语短文。
A Useful Invention—Nubrella
Name
Nubrella: 世界上第一款真正的免手持 (hands-free) 伞
Inventor
艾伦·考夫曼 (Alan Kaufman)
Features
and uses
1.阻止雨、风和雪, 并可以保持用户的头部、面部和头发干燥;
2.很方便: 戴着, 而不是拿着;
3.有肩带 (shoulder straps), 让人完全不用手;
4.比传统的伞更安全, 因为它没有尖锐的点 (sharp points)。
Your opinion...
A Useful Invention—Nubrella
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Unit 5 What are the shirts made of ?
(中国制造)
单元写作精练
写作主题
识
写作主题:中国制造
本单元涉及的话题是“中国制造的东西”,而话题作文常涉及民间艺术及文化传承。这是一个适合记叙、说明两种体裁相结合的话题,同时也是学生喜欢写,有话写的题材。写好这类文章,最重要的是准确捕捉写作“精髓”,有条理地把要描述的某一事物展现出来,此类话题的写作要立足事实,表达真情实感。
素材积累
【开头篇】
1、 …is invented by…
2、It is believed that the first…is invented by…in…
3、It is invented when sb was…
4、Sb.al always have difficulty in doing sth., so he invented this.
5、It is used for…
【中间篇】
1、 It is made of…
2、It looks like…
3、It has…
4、Not only can it help you…, but also it can help you…
【结尾篇】
1、 I have never worried about my…, since I had this….
2、Nowadays, it has become so popular in the world and a lot of people like to used it.
3、It has made great contribution to the progress of the society.
真题示例:
(2024·山东枣庄·中考真题)为了培养学生的发明和创新精神,学校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假定你是李华,你准备发明一件物品,参加本次大赛。请你以“I want to invent ________”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的发明物。内容包括:
注意:(1)请先补全标题;
(2)短文须全面反映图文信息;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(4)词数 80~100。
I want to invent ________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I want to invent a special pen
I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently.
It looks like a normal pen. This pen will have a built-in dictionary and translation function, allowing students to look up words and translate sentences instantly. It will also have a voice recording feature, so students can record lectures and listen to them later. The pen will be lightweight and easy to carry, making it perfect for use in classrooms, libraries, and at home.
I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,想要发明一种特殊的钢笔;
第二步,具体介绍发明这种钢笔的原因、外观和用途、使用场合;
第三步,进行评价。
[亮点词汇]
①look like 看起来像
②look up 查阅
[高分句型]
①I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently.(定语从句)
②I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective.(省略that的宾语从句)
1.学校英文网站最近正在举行主题为“My favorite invention”的征文比赛。假设你是王华,打算参加这次比赛。请根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语短文,不少于80词。
light bulb
Inventor
Thomas Edison,美国发明家
Time
1879年10月21日
Material
玻璃和金属
Use
照明,让人们在夜晚工作或学习成为可能
Development
节能(save energy),环保,便宜
My favorite invention
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My favorite invention
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Hua. There are lots of great inventions in the world. They have changed our world a lot. However, my favorite invention is the light bulb. It was invented by Thomas Edison, a great American inventor. And it was invented on October 21, 1879. The first light bulb was made of glass and metal. It was used for providing people with light and the invention made it possible for people to work and study at night. Now the invention has been improved a lot. People are making better lighting products. They can help to save energy and protect the environment. What’s more, they are cheaper.
I hope it will become more and more useful in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息,写短文介绍自己最喜欢的发明。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,点出自己最喜欢的发明是什么;
第二步,详细地介绍发明家,发明的时间、材料、用途及其发展;
第三步,提出自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of 许多
②be made of 由……制成
③provide sb. with sth. 给某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①There are lots of great inventions in the world.(There be句型)
②I hope it will become more and more useful in the future.(省略that的宾语从句)
2.发明改变世界。请你根据表格,以 “The Most Useful Invention”为题,写一篇短文介绍手机的发明时间、人物,手机的至少三个用途,并至少谈两点作为青少年的你们如何合理地使用手机,使它真正成为最有用的发明之一。
The Most Useful Invention
Invention
The mobile phone
Inventor
American, Martin Cooper
Time
1973
Usage (用途)
1. talk with people
2. ...
3. ...
Your opinions about how to use them well
1. ...
2. ...
要求:
(1) 短文必须包含所有提示信息;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等;
(3) 80词左右 (开头部分已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Most Useful Invention
Mobile phones are one of the most useful inventions. ___________________________________________
【答案】 The Most Useful Invention
Mobile phones are one of the most useful inventions. It was invented by an American called Martin Cooper in 1973.
I should say that the mobile phones have really changed our lives. First, it’s more convenient to communicate with others by using the mobile phones. Second, people are used to taking photos with mobile phones instead of cameras. And we can even go shopping, listen to music and watch movies on the phone. Third, we can easily learn something useful by surfing online. In this way, it helps us study.
In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to use mobile phones, but not on weekdays. And it’s necessary to use them in the right way with the help of our teachers and parents.
【详解】【总体分析】
题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
时态:一般现在时。
提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容,可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍手机发明时间及发明者。
第二步,介绍手机的用途。
第三步,谈论如何合理地利用手机。
【亮点词汇】
①be invented by sb.由某人发明
②communicate with sb.与某人交流
③be used to doing sth习惯做某事
④instead of而不是
【高分句型】
And it’s necessary to use them in the right way with the help of our teachers and parents. (It的固定句型)
3.为践行科教兴国战略,为国家培养创新型科技人才,在日常学习生活中激发学生的发明和创新精神,我校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假如你是李华,准备参加本次大赛。请你以“I want to invent ________”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你所发明的物品。内容包括:
参考词汇:be used for, look like, convenient, make a difference to …
要求:1. 请先补全标题,再写正文内容;
2. 正文必须包含思维导图中的要点信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整、规范;
4. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
5. 词数:不少于70。(部分内容已给出,但不计入总词数。)
I want to invent ________
An invention competition will be held in our school. I can’t wait to join in it. _________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I want to invent a special pen
An invention competition will be held in our school. I can’t wait to join in it.
I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently. It looks like a normal pen.
This pen will have a built-in dictionary and translation function, allowing students to look up words and translate sentences instantly. Write a sentence in your native language, then double-tap the pen. It’ll translate your text into over 20 languages. For example, write “Hello” in English, and it becomes “Hola” in Spanish!
I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、补全标题,引出话题;
第二步、具体介绍发明这种钢笔的原因、外观和如何使用;
第三步、进行评价。
[亮点词汇]
①look like看起来像
②look up查阅
③translate…into把……翻译成
[高分句型]
I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently. (定语从句)
4.近年来,汉服在国内越来越受欢迎。假如你是李华——汉服爱好者,你的外国朋友Jane对此很感兴趣。请你根据提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,向她介绍汉服(Han Costume)及你喜欢汉服的原因。
由棉、丝绸等制成,有各种不同的装饰
汉族的传统服装,代表中华文化
有四千多年的历史,不同的朝代,汉服款式也不一样
不同于西式服装,影响其它亚洲国家的服装
参考词汇:汉族 Han nationality,代表 represent,朝代 dynasty
要求:1. 内容必须包含提示的所有要点;可适当发挥;注意语言的多样性;
2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、卷面整洁、书写规范;
3. 文章不能出现真实姓名。词数100左右。
Dear Jane,
How are you these days? I know you are interested in the Han costume in China. Now, let me tell you something about it.____________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jane,
How are you these days? I know you are interested in the Han costume in China. Now, let me tell you something about it.
Hanfu is made of cotton, silk and so on. It has all kinds of different decorations. It is a traditional costume of the Han nationality and represents Chinese culture. It has a history of more than 4,000 years, and the styles of Hanfu are different in different dynasties. It is different from Western clothing and influences the clothing of other Asian countries.
Hanfu becomes popular because the government is developing traditional culture. Period dramas have also helped develop the public’s interest in traditional Chinese clothes. In modern China, people in different fields are interested in wearing Hanfu from history lovers to students and even young workers.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示信息写作,不得遗漏要点,可适当增加细节,使行文更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明文章主题;
第二步,详细阐述汉服的材料、款式、意义及影响等;
第三步,介绍汉服被人喜欢的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制成
②all kinds of各种各样的
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①It has a history of more than 4,000 years, and the styles of Hanfu are different in different dynasties.(并列复合句)
②Hanfu becomes popular because the government is developing traditional culture.(原因状语从句)
5.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友John发邮件给你,他说他非常喜欢放风筝,想了解潍坊风筝及潍坊国际风筝节的有关情况。请你根据下面的提示,给他回一封电子邮件,做相关介绍。
History
over 2, 000 years
Materials
bamboo, paper/silk
Features (特征)
different sizes, shapes and colors
Weifang International Kite Festival
start in 1984; once a year; famous around the world; usually in April or May
注意:
1. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your email. __________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your email. In your e-mail, you said you were interested in kites in my hometown. Now let me tell you something about them.
Weifang is famous for making and flying kites. The history of making kites can date back to over 2,000 years ago. Kites are usually made of bamboo and paper. They have different sizes, shapes and colors. The Weifang International Kite Festival is held once a year. It started in 1984. It is the most famous kite sports event around the world. It is usually in April or May. A large number of Chinese and foreign kite fans come to Weifang to take part in the competition.
Flying kites is exciting. I hope you can come to China and fly kites with me some day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,主要包括向朋友详细介绍风筝的历史、制作材质、特征以及潍坊国际风筝节的概况,写作的过程中注意使用表格里所给单词、短语。可以适当增加细节,行文要连贯,注意字数。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对朋友进行问候;
第二步,向朋友详细介绍风筝的历史、制作材质、特征以及潍坊国际风筝节的概况;
第三步,希望朋友来中国和自己一起放风筝。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而著名
②date back to追溯到
③be made of由……制成
④a large number of许多,大量
⑤take part in参加
[高分句型]
①It is the most famous kite sports event around the world.(the+形容词的最高级+范围)
②A large number of Chinese and foreign kite fans come to Weifang to take part in the competition.(动词不定式作目的状语)
6.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友David对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请选择你喜欢的一种传统工艺品或者传统美食,用英语写一篇短文,与他分享中国传统文化。词数80词以上。
1.这种传统工艺品 (artwork) 或者传统美食是什么?
2.制作的材质,制作步骤或相关故事,象征意义等;
3.你使用/制作这种工艺品或这种传统美食的一次经历,感想。
要求:
1.参考提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的人名、校名和班级。
Dear David,
I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture. _____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture. China has a long history and colorful traditional culture. I introduce our typical food—dumplings to you today.
We call dumplings jiaozi. We eat jiaozi on many holidays, such as the Spring Festival, the Winter Solstice and so on. Because jiaozi is a symbol of luck and happiness. How do we make it? Put the water and flour into a bowl and make a smooth dough. Then cut up the meat and vegetables we like and add all kinds of relish to it, mix them. Next put filling on the wrapper and fold it. Finally, boil jiaozi. Making it is not easy. I wasted all the flour and vegetables when I made it for the first time. I was so sad that I hadn’t try it for a long time. Now I can make it well. Jiaozi is very delicious. Welcome to my home to eat it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意弄清“信息提示”中“选择一种传统工艺 品或者传统美食”的要求,二选一即可,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出为对方介绍传统文化代表食物——饺子;
第二步,具体阐述为什么介绍饺子及它的意义和制作步骤;
第三步,介绍自己制作饺子的经历和感想,并邀请对方来中国吃饺子。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in...对……感兴趣
②colorful traditional culture丰富的传统文化
③ such as例如
④ add...to...把……加到……里
[高分句型]
①Then cut up the meat and vegetables we like and add all kinds of relish to it. (含有定语从句)
②I was so sad that I hadn’t try it for a long time. (含有结果状语从句)
7.我们的家乡富阳以造纸而闻名。至今已经有1900年的历史。请结合下面的相关信息,以“Paper Made in FuYang’”为题写一篇英语短文来介绍富阳的纸,可适当发挥。
产地:浙江富阳;材料:木头和竹子为主;特点:纸质薄、软;用途:书法、作画、日常生活……
Paper Made in FuYang
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【答案】 Paper Made in Fuyang
Our hometown Fuyang is famous for making paper. It has a history of 1900 years. Fuyang paper is usually made of wood and bamboo. This paper is thin and soft. It feels good to write on it. So it’s very popular. It is usually used for calligraphy and painting. It is also widely used in daily life. I’m proud of my hometown.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文。
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据提示简单介绍下富阳的纸,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍富阳以造纸而闻名;
第二步,介绍纸的产地、材料、特点以及用途;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②be made of由……制造
③be proud of因……而骄傲
[高分句型]
It is also widely used in daily life.(一般现在时的被动语态)
8.学校“创新发明”社团将在下周举行创新发明资格选拔,作为参赛选手,请以“I want to invent ________”为题写一篇短文,向组委会介绍你的发明项目。先把题目补充完整,再结合下列提示问题进行写作。
1. What kind of thing do you want to invent?
2. Why?(Give at least two reasons)
3. What can it be used for?
写作要求:1.紧扣主题,适当发挥,语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯;
2.书写工整,不少于80词。请考生将题目写在答题卡相应处。
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(校名,姓名,地名等)。.
I want to invent ________
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【答案】
I want to invent a new kind of shoes
I want to invent a new kind of shoes which is specially designed for the old. It has some advantages. These shoes are equipped with devices that can detect and report falls. The shoes can alarm the wearer when there is some danger on the roads. When a wearer falls on the road, the shoes will report the fall to his family members so that they can come to help him immediately. Furthermore, if the old wear this kind of shoes, it will make them out of danger when they fall down. To sum up, inventing this new kind of shoes is useful for the old to keep safe. Let’s ‘tech’ a look into the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据题目要求补充标题并围绕三个提示问题展开,注意语言准确性和逻辑连贯性,避免语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍发明的物件名称;
第二步:详细介绍发明对象(智能防摔鞋)及两大原因(预防跌倒、及时报警);
第三步:阐述具体功能(危险预警、跌倒自动通知家人)。
[亮点词汇]
①be equipped with配备
②detect and report检测并报告
③out of danger脱离危险
[高分句型]
①I want to invent a new kind of shoes which is specially designed for the old. (which引导定语从句)
②When a wearer falls on the road, the shoes will report the fall to his family members so that they can come to help him immediately. (when引导时间状语从句;so that引导目的状语从句)
9.“苟日新,日日新,又日新”古有四大发明,今有科技创新。从造纸术、指南针到新能源汽车和AI人工智能,都给我们的生活带来了改变和便利。学校校刊正在举办科技节英文征文活动,请你以“My Favorite Invention” 为题,根据下面表格内容写一篇短文,参加英语校刊活动。
My favorite invention
What is your favorite invention? (smartphone, AI car, Deepseek... )
What is it used for?
What can it do?
Why do you like it best?
Something more you want to say.
写作要求:
1. 根据表格问题提示,适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
3. 词数90词左右,开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Invention
There are many great inventions in our daily life. _______________________________________________
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【答案】
My Favorite Invention
There are many great inventions in our daily life. My favorite invention is the smartphone. A smartphone is widely used for communication, learning, and entertainment. It allows us to call friends, search for information online, take photos, and even pay bills quickly.
What I like most is its convenience. With it, I can study anytime by watching educational videos or reading e-books. It also helps me connect with family and friends through social media. Life feels faster and smarter because of this invention.
However, smartphones should be used wisely. Spending too much time on them might waste our energy. Let’s enjoy technology but also focus on real-life activities!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要材料中的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图,介绍最喜欢的发明是什么;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“用途和原因”入手,重点自己为什么喜欢这项发明;
③第三步,书写结语,要正确使用这一发明。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
②search for搜索,搜寻
③because of因为,由于
④focus on集中于
[高分句型]
①What I like most is its convenience.(what引导的主语从句)
②However, smartphones should be used wisely.(含情态动词的被动语态)
10.请你根据下面的提示, 以 “A Useful Invention—Nubrella” 为题, 写一篇90词左右的英语短文。
A Useful Invention—Nubrella
Name
Nubrella: 世界上第一款真正的免手持 (hands-free) 伞
Inventor
艾伦·考夫曼 (Alan Kaufman)
Features
and uses
1.阻止雨、风和雪, 并可以保持用户的头部、面部和头发干燥;
2.很方便: 戴着, 而不是拿着;
3.有肩带 (shoulder straps), 让人完全不用手;
4.比传统的伞更安全, 因为它没有尖锐的点 (sharp points)。
Your opinion...
A Useful Invention—Nubrella
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【答案】
A Useful Invention—Nubrella
With the development of technology and science, more and more kinds of umbrellas appear, including Nubrella, which is the earliest hands-free umbrella around the world.
It was invented by Alan Kaufman by accident. It has so many features and uses. It could prevent rain, wind and snow so that people can keep their heads, faces and hair dry. Besides, it is safer than traditional umbrellas because it doesn’t have sharp points. What’s more, it doesn’t need to be taken by hand, because its shape is like a hat with shoulder straps.
In my opinion, Nubrella is really a useful invention and I believe it will be improved by people who are creative to make it better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先介绍一下免手持伞的发明者和特点用途;
第二步,再写一下自己对免手持伞的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①around the world 全世界
②by accident 偶然
③in my opinion 在我看来
[高分句型]
It could prevent rain, wind and snow so that people can keep their heads, faces and hair dry.(so that引导结果状语从句)
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