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高频话题05 计划与安排
同步写作课讲义
计划安排类文章一般来说会要求考生对某个学期、假期、未来的高中、长大成人的生活进行计划和安排,应使用第一人称,一般将来时态。
计划安排类文章一般可以按总·分-总结构进行写作。即开篇先交待要对哪个阶段的生活进行计划和安排;然后具体介绍计划的内容;最后部分可以表达自己的决心。
毕业在即,为了解同学们中考结束后两周内的计划,你校就此开展了一次问卷调查。假如你是李华,请根据下表中的信息,给你的外国笔友Tom写一封英文电子邮件,告诉他你的计划并期待他的假期分享。
Activities
Reasons
1. learn to make a dish 2. learn to sing a song
3. learn to do a sport 4. practise handwriting
5. travel with classmates 6. read a book
7. learn paper-cutting 8. stay with families
要求:
1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
2)从表中列举的活动中任意选择1—2项内容并陈述理由。
3)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
How are you going? Graduation is coming. Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I’m writing to tell you mine.
My plan is to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your vacation plans.
Yours,
Li Hua
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写作指导
Step 1 审好题,定方向
定体裁:本文是一封邮件,介绍假期计划。
定时态:介绍假期计划及陈述理由,以一般现在时为主。
定人称:介绍自己的假期计划,需用第一人称。
定选材:①learn how to make a dish
Step 2 列框架,谋布局
运用三段式“开头—中间—结尾”写作模式,列出思维导图,形成初步写作框架。
开头:文章已给出。
Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I’m writing to tell you mine.
②learn how to do a sport
结尾:文章已给出。
I’m looking forward to your vacation plans.
Step 3 巧衔接,成篇章
Dear Tom,
How are you going? Graduation is coming. Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I’m writing to tell you mine.
My plan is to learn how to make a dish. ①When my parents are not at home, I can cook by myself. ①At the same time, I can develop my independence ability well. ①By cooking food, I can also help myself and my parents eat healthily.
①阐述学习做菜的情况及益处时句式多样,连接顺畅,且语言优美(when引导时间状语从句,at the same time作时间状语,by doing sth.作方式状语)。
I also want to learn to do a sport. ②One of my favorite athletes is Ma Long, so I want to learn how to play table tennis. ③For one thing, this sport can exercise my body and is good for my eyes. For another, I can make more friends.
I’m looking forward to your vacation plans.
Yours,
Li Hua
②one of + n.(复数)句式的运用使文章更加高级。
③灵活使用for one thing和for another来列举两个理由,清晰明了。
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新学年计划
subject学科;科目 decide 决定;选定 promise承诺;诺言 exercise锻炼;练习 term学期
hobby业余爱好 activity活动 resolution决心;决定 grade成绩等级;评分等级
try尝试;设法;努力 year年 body身体 take up(通常作为爱好)开始学习,开始练习
活动计划与安排
plan计划 decision决定 purpose目的 wish愿望 begin开始 hope希望 depend依靠
achieve 达到 visit拜访 invite邀请 prepare for ...为……做准备 look forward to盼望
make up one's mind某人下定决心 dream of doing sth.梦想做某事 would like to do sth.想要做某事 volunteer to do sth. 自愿做某事 plan to do sth.计划做某事 be going to do sth.打算做某事
假期与周末计划
holiday/vacation假期 weekend周末 farm农场 countryside乡村 mountain高山
camp扎营;搭帐篷 fish钓鱼 dance跳舞 sing唱歌 climb the mountains爬山
go on a trip去旅行 go to the beach去海滩 visit the science museum参观科技博物馆
play basketball/football/volleyball打篮球/踢足球/打排球
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[假期计划]
1.In the afternoon I'm going out with my family and friends. [用现在进行时表示将来的计划]
2.I'm making some plans to work in an old people's home this summer.[用不定式说明具体的计划]
3.We are going to have a picnic on the beach this summer holiday.[用be going to表示打算]
4.My parents and I are going to visit some friends in Shandong Province and will stay there until the end of the holiday.[用一般将来时表示计划]
5.I am taking a trip to Hainan at the end of this year to enjoy my winter holiday.我打算年底去海南旅行来享受我的寒假。[用现在进行时表示将来的计划]
6.I am making a plan to borrow some science books from the city library this weekend.我正在制订这个周末去市图书馆借一些科学书籍的计划。[用不定式说明具体的计划]
[活动安排]
1.And on 1st May we're going to collect litter in the park near my friend's house. [说明具体时间]
2.Our class is trying to come up with some ideas to cheer up sick children because they are often sad. [用高分短语come up with]
3.I would also like to invite each parent to bring one book as a gift for the new library. [用would like to do sth.表示活动安排]
4.Tomorrow we're going to visit a famous palace and take a boat tour on the River Seine.[用be going to表示打算]
5.Our new foreign students are going to arrive very soon, and here are some ways to welcome them.[用 be going to 表示活动安排]
6.I would like to invite your family to come to my house for my birthday party this Saturday.我想邀请你们一家于这周六来我家参加我的生日派对。[用would like to do sth.表示活动安排]
7.We will have a party in the classroom on the morning of 26th June.我们将在6月26日上午在教室举行一个聚会。[说明具体时间]
8.We need to come up with a plan to tell people about the city park cleanup.我们需要想出一个计划来告诉人们关于城市公园清理的事情。[用高分短语come up with]
[制定目标]
1·Not everyone knows what they want to be. Just make sure you try your best.[说明实现方法]
2·My friend and I want to be singers. We're going to take singing lessons.[说明具体方式]
3.When we make resolutions at the beginning of the year,we hope that we are going to improve our lives. [用when说明时间]
4.When you want to give up,it's a good idea to listen to some encouraging songs.当你想放弃的时候,听听励志的歌曲是个好主意。[用when说明时间]
5.I will work hard in the new year.I will pay more attention in class.
6.I will spend more time with my family.
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暑假快到了,面对即将到来的九年级,如何过一个充实而有意义的暑假呢?请你写一篇演讲稿,向你的同学介绍一下你的暑假计划。
学习安排:
制定计划按时完成作业;阅读五本英语故事书,并通过阅读可以……
运动安排:
每天锻炼一小时;精力充沛地准备接受新学期的挑战
兴趣安排:
观看科学电视节目,我认为现代工厂发展很快,污染了很多河流与土地,…… (举一例可以解决污染的方法)
活动安排:
在广场组织慈善义卖。
要求:
1. 字数80-90左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总数;
2. 要点齐全,不要逐字翻译,可适当增加使文章连贯通顺。
参考词汇:a charity sale慈善义卖
How to have a meaningful summer holiday
Dear classmates,
It is June now. The summer holiday is coming. How to have a meaningful summer holiday? Today, I’ll share my plan with you.
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Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday.
【答案】例文
How to have a meaningful summer holiday
Dear classmates,
It is June now. The summer holiday is coming. How to have a meaningful summer holiday? Today, I’ll share my plan with you.
First, I will make a plan for my study, and finish my homework on time. I’m going to read a lot. Through reading, I can gain more knowledge. Second, I plan to do exercise for one hour every day. It is a good way to make me energetic and confident to meet the challenge in the new term. Third, I will spend some time doing something I’m interested in, for example, watching TV programmes on science. I think modern factories have developed rapidly, polluting many rivers and land. In order to reduce pollution, I don’t think we should pour waste water into the river. Finally, I will organize a charity sale on the square. And I plan to make a speech in our neighborhood to teach how to sort the garbage, because it is useful for environmental protection.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目要求写一篇演讲稿。在写作时应承接短文开头,根据提示,向你的同学介绍一下你的暑假计划。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容;时态采用一般将来时为主;讲述暑期计划分四个方面来写,叙述要完整,条理要清晰,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
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书面表达
假如你是班长,你负责制定你们班五月份的志愿者活动计划。请你写一篇80—100词的发言稿,代表班委会向全班的志愿者介绍一下该月的活动安排。
要求:1. 活动计划中有两项内容需自拟。
2. 发言稿的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入要求词数。
时间
活动计划
5月10日
去火车站清理垃圾
5月17日
去养老院……
5月24日
去人民公园……
5月31日
帮助某社区的小学生学习,给他们讲故事
Attention, please! I’d like to tell you something about our plan for the volunteer work in May.
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That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Attention, please! I’d like to tell you something about our plan for the volunteer work in May.
We’ll go to the train station to clean up the litter on May 10. On May 17, we’ll go to the old people’s home to help them wash their clothes and clean up their rooms. After that we’ll give performances to cheer them up. On May 24, we’ll go to the People’s Park to fix up bicycles and radios for people in need. We’ll go to Guangming Community near our school on May 31. We’ll help the children there study and tell them stories. I’m sure we’ll have a meaningful May.
That’s all. Thank you
【详解】这是一篇发言稿,根据表格中列举的活动安排,制定五月份的志愿者活动计划。人称为第一人称,时态为一般将来时。写作中要紧扣表格所提供的时间以及活动安排,有两项内容需要自由发挥。写作中会多次用到动词不定式作目的状语这一用法,注意在某月某日用介词on,如:We’ll go to the train station to clean up the litter on May 10. On May 17, we’ll go to the old people’s home to help them wash their clothes and clean up their rooms.写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,条理清晰,语句通顺。
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学校英文报正在征集以“我的暑假计划”为主题的征文。假如你是李明,你的暑假有丰富的安排,包括学习、旅行、运动和帮助家人。请根据以下提示问题,写一篇英语短文介绍你的计划。
1. What do you plan to do during the summer vacation?
2. Why is this plan important to you?
3. How will you carry out your plan?
4. Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Summer Vacation Plan
My name is Li Ming, and I’m excited to share my summer plan after finishing the senior high school entrance exam!
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【答案】One Possible Version
My Summer Vacation Plan
My name is Li Ming, and I’m excited to share my summer plan after finishing the senior high school entrance exam!
First, I will study for two hours every morning to preview new lessons. This helps me stay prepared for Senior One. Besides studying, I plan to visit Hainan with my family. Swimming in the sea and trying local foods will help me relax after hard work. Also, I will exercise daily by swimming and playing basketball to keep healthy. Of course, I’ll do chores like cooking meals to thank my parents for their support.
This plan is meaningful because it balances learning, fun, health, and family time. To make it work, I’ll create a timetable and set daily goals.
In short, my summer will be busy but full of joy and growth! (112 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、介绍自己的暑假计划,这个计划很重要的原因以及如何执行这项计划;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①prepared for准备
②keep healthy保持健康
③do chores做家务
④full of充满
[高分句型]
①This plan is meaningful because it balances learning, fun, health, and family time.(because引导原因状语从句)
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假如你是李华,你校将与国外学生代表团举办一次文化交流活动,为此,学校征求学生们的建议。请你提供一个文化交流活动的计划(包括具体地点和活动安排等),并说明理由。
注意:(1)词数80~100,开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)不能出现真实的姓名及学校名称。
My name is Li Hua. I am in Class 2, Grade 9.
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【答案】参考范文
My name is Li Hua. I am in Class 2, Grade 9. I have some ideas for the coming activity. Here are the details.
First, we should show them around our school so that they can get a good impression.
Then, we should lead the team into our school hall and have a discussion with them on a certain topic, such as the similarities and differences of our school life. If time is permitted, we can show them some Chinese traditional art forms, like our paper cutting and clay arts.
It is a meaningful activity both for them and for us, and it is also a way to build the friendship between us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、给出具体的地点和活动安排并说明理由;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①show sb. around带某人四处看看
②have a discussion进行讨论
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①First, we should show them around our school so that they can get a good impression.(so that引导目的状语从句)
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寒假即将来临,你有哪些计划和安排呢?假如你是李华,请你给英国朋友Jack写一封信,告诉他你的假期安排。
去年寒假
待在家里看电视、玩电脑游戏
今年的寒假计划
至少读完三本书;
学会游泳,而且每周锻炼身体三次;
每周看一部英语电影,提高英语水平;
帮父母做家务。
要求:1.包含表格中所有要点,可以适当发挥;
2.70词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
The winter vacation is coming soon.
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What’s your plan for the winter vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
The winter vacation is around the corner. Last holiday, I just stayed at home to watch TV and play computer games. It was meaningless. For this time, I make the meaningful plans. First, I am going to read at least three books. I’m going to learn to swim and exercise three times a week. In order to improve my English, I plan to watch an English movie every week. I also plan to help my parents with the housework.
What’s your plan for the winter vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,简单介绍去年寒假所做的事情。
第二步,介绍今年的寒假计划。
第三步,书写结语,表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at home待在家里
②play computer games玩电脑游戏
③at least至少
④three times a week一周三次
[高分句型]
①Last holiday, I just stayed at home to watch TV and play computer games.(and连接的动词短语)
②In order to improve my English, I plan to watch an English movie every week.(in order to引导的目的状语)
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新年快到了,同学们一定有很多的想法。请结合下面的提示内容谈谈自己在学习、运动与健康、家务、旅游等方面的计划与安排,并针对自身的不足之处,写一篇短文说说你打算怎么做。
2025
New Year Plan
□1. get good grades
□2. read more books
□3. eat healthy food
□4. help with housework
□5. go on trips with friends
注意:
1. 短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 意思连贯,符合逻辑,词数80左右(短文首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
New Year is coming soon and I have a plan for the new year.
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【答案】参考例文:
New Year is coming soon and I have some plans for the new year. I am going to study hard and get good grades. I will make an effort to come up with some ideas about study. I will read more books. It can help me improve myself. I will have some exercise in the New Year. A good body is the source of everything. I should get rid of junk food and eat healthy food, such as fish, water, vegetables, fruits and so on. When I am at home, I plan to help with housework because my parents can relax. Travelling with my best friends may be a good idea because it can make us happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己在学习方面的计划;
第二步,介绍自己在健康方面的计划;
第三步,介绍自己在家务劳动方面的计划;
第四步,介绍自己在旅游方面的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①get rid of摆脱
②come up with提出
③make an effort努力
[高分句型]
When I am at home, I plan to help with housework because my parents can relax. (时间状语从句)
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五一劳动节(the May day holiday)很快就要来了,打算如何度过呢?请写一篇文章,说出你的五一计划。
写作要点提示:1.帮父母做一些家务;2.学习方面的计划;3.娱乐活动安排。
要求:字数不少于80字。开头已给出,不计入总词数,
The May day holiday is coming!
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【答案】例文:
The May day holiday is coming! I want to do something meaningful in my May day holiday. Here is my plan.
First, I will spend more time with my parents. I will help them do more housework. Besides, I want to read some books I am interested in. I will listen to English every day to improve my English. In addition, there are many people in need. I will do some voluntary work to help them with my friends. At last, I plan to keep a dog as my pet because it can help me leam how to care for others.
I am looking forward to my May day holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏给出的三个要点提示,写短文介绍自己的五一计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,具体介绍自己的计划;
第三步,期待假期的来临。
[亮点词汇]
①do housework 做家务
②be interested in 对……感兴趣
③in addition 此外
④look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①Besides, I want to read some books I am interested in.(省略that的定语从句)
②At last, I plan to keep a dog as my pet because it can help me leam how to care for others.(because引导原因状语从句;疑问词+动词不定式)
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“赠人玫瑰,手留余香”。为了弘扬 “奉献爱心,助人为乐” 的校园文化,你们计划把八年级同学的集体生日派对也安排在那里,希望现场能筹集一些资金来资助贫困的孩子们重返校园。请你以 “A Special School Food Festival” 为题,描述一下你们的活动计划和愿望。80词左右,可适当发挥。
A Special School Food Festival
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【答案】例文
A Special School Food Festival
In order to help poor children back to school, there will be a food festival in our school next week. At the same time, all the schoolmates who have the same birthday in Grade 8 will have a birthday party together. Now my classmates and I are busy preparing for this special school food festival.
First, we will discuss the time and the place with each other. Second, we will make a poster to let more people know the purpose of the activity. Then we’re going to prepare all kinds of food and birthday cakes as many as possible.
All of us hope the food festival will be successful so that we can raise enough money for the poor children.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。以“一个特殊的学校美食节”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式:第一段介绍美食节的时间;第二段介绍美食节的活动;最后说明美食节的目的。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
【中考真题链接】
1. (2024·甘肃白银·中考真题)
假期对学生来说是一段放松自己、关心家人、充实自我的时间。对于即将到来的暑假你有什么计划和安排?根据以下思维导图提示,以“My ________ Holiday Plans”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的假期计划。
要求:1.先补全题目,并将题目抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域;
2.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;
3.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
4.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息;
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【答案】例文:
My Wonderful Holiday Plans
A holiday is a special time for students to take a break from school and relax. It’s a chance to enjoy some free time after working hard in classes.
During my holiday, I plan to spend wonderful time with my family by having picnics in the park, playing board games together, and cooking meals with my parents. I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores, such as washing dishes or tidying up the house. Additionally, I want to do much reading. Reading makes a full man. Besides, travelling is another good choice for such a long holiday. If I have time, I also want to volunteer in our neighborhood.
I look forward to creating lasting memories with my family, reading more, learning new things, and showing more love to the world during this holiday. By completing these plans with joy, I’m sure I’ll return feeling happy, connected, and ready for new experiences.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作时首先补全所给题目;写作要点已给出,写作时注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,介绍假期的含义以及对学生来说假期是什么;
第二步,介绍“我”自己的假期计划,以及假期计划怎样帮助“我”成长;
第三步,阐述个人的期望以及假期计划的完成会给自己带来什么。
[亮点词汇]
①take a break休息一下;
②by doing sth.通过做某事
③tidy up整理
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
If I have time, I also want to volunteer in our neighborhood.(if引导条件状语从句)
2. (2025·四川资阳·中考真题)
你校微信公众号英语专栏正开展以“我的职业规划”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你想从事的职业;
2.你选择该职业的理由(至少两点);
3.你实现职业规划的措施(至少两条)。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
My Career Plan
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【答案】例文:
My Career Plan
I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. There are two main reasons for my choice. First, I love English and enjoy sharing knowledge with others. Second, teachers can help shape young minds, which is very meaningful.
To achieve my goal, I will work hard to improve my English skills by reading more English books. I also plan to practice public speaking to become a better communicator. With these efforts, I believe I can make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要用一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:要根据题干内容写短文谈谈自己的职业规划,包含职业选择、两点理由和两条措施。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明职业选择并阐述两点理由;
第二步,提出两条措施并表达信心。
[亮点词汇]
①shape young minds 塑造年轻心灵
②public speaking 公开演讲
③communicator 交流者
④make one’s dream come true 实现某人的梦想
[高分句型]
①There are two main reasons for my choice. (There be句型)
②Second, teachers can help shape young minds, which is very meaningful. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
③With these efforts, I believe I can make my dream come true.(省略that的宾语从句)
3. (2024·四川眉山·中考真题)
假定你是李华,打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行,请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封邮件,分享你的旅行计划。
注意:
1. 词数 100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear David,
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Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear David,
How’s it going?
With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing. Now I’d like to share my travel plan with you.
We’ll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. During that period, we’re going to visit the Palace Museum to know about stories of the past. Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. We’re going to take a walk there and admire how great we Chinese are!
I believe we’ll enjoy ourselves in Beijing. What about your summer plan?
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,介绍文章的主题,即暑假去北京的旅行计划;
第二步,介绍什么时间出发、旅行的方式、和谁一起去以及计划待几天;
第三步,具体介绍计划在北京做什么活动以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①promise to do sth.承诺做某事
②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某事
③admire钦佩
[高分句型]
①With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing.(that引导宾语从句)
②Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world.(which引导定语从句)
4. (2023·江苏南通·中考真题)
热心公益,积极为社会作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你从以下社会行为中选择一种或另选一种相关活动,用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。要求表达清楚“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
注意:1. 词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
参考词汇:responsibility n. 责任;义务
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity.
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【答案】例文:
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity. I’m going to take part in a voluntary activity in Old People’s Home.
First, I can talk to the old about something interesting or take a walk with them. Then, I may give them a great performance. Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old.
I believe these activities will not only make the old happy but also help me learn a lot. Isn’t it meaningful?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应选择一种社会行为,介绍今年暑假准备做的社会实践活动,要包含要点“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,介绍做什么,为何做;
第二步,介绍怎么做;
第三步,再次点明活动的益处,暗含这么做的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②such as 例如
③fold clothes 叠衣服
④not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old.(whatever引导宾语从句)
②Isn’t it meaningful?(否定疑问句)
5. (2023·湖北随州·中考真题)
紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了,你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下图中的提示,以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的假期计划。
写作要求:1. 短文必须包含图中的全部信息,并适当发挥;
2. 词数:80词左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
My Summer Vacation Plan
The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it.
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All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation.
【答案】例文:
My Summer Vacation Plan
The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it.
First, it’s important to have healthy eating habits. I’ll eat more fruit and vegetables, and try to eat less junk food. At the same time, I’ll keep exercising and get enough sleep every day. Second, I plan to take up some hobbies, like taking photos or playing the guitar. Besides, I’ll spend more time reading books to improve myself. If possible, I’ll travel with my friends. Last, I am going to help my parents with housework, such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and so on.
All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据文章开头提示,提出自己的暑期计划。
第二步,详细介绍关于健康、爱好和家庭作业的计划。
第三步,总结对暑假的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do 试着做
②at the same time 与此同时
[高分句型]
First, it’s important to have healthy eating habits.(it is+adj. to do sth.句型)
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高频话题05 计划与安排
同步写作课讲义
计划安排类文章一般来说会要求考生对某个学期、假期、未来的高中、长大成人的生活进行计划和安排,应使用第一人称,一般将来时态。
计划安排类文章一般可以按总·分-总结构进行写作。即开篇先交待要对哪个阶段的生活进行计划和安排;然后具体介绍计划的内容;最后部分可以表达自己的决心。
毕业在即,为了解同学们中考结束后两周内的计划,你校就此开展了一次问卷调查。假如你是李华,请根据下表中的信息,给你的外国笔友Tom写一封英文电子邮件,告诉他你的计划并期待他的假期分享。
Activities
Reasons
1. learn to make a dish 2. learn to sing a song
3. learn to do a sport 4. practise handwriting
5. travel with classmates 6. read a book
7. learn paper-cutting 8. stay with families
要求:
1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
2)从表中列举的活动中任意选择1—2项内容并陈述理由。
3)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
How are you going? Graduation is coming. Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I’m writing to tell you mine.
My plan is to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your vacation plans.
Yours,
Li Hua
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写作指导
Step 1 审好题,定方向
定体裁:本文是一封邮件,介绍假期计划。
定时态:介绍假期计划及陈述理由,以一般现在时为主。
定人称:介绍自己的假期计划,需用第一人称。
定选材:①learn how to make a dish
Step 2 列框架,谋布局
运用三段式“开头—中间—结尾”写作模式,列出思维导图,形成初步写作框架。
开头:文章已给出。
Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I’m writing to tell you mine.
②learn how to do a sport
结尾:文章已给出。
I’m looking forward to your vacation plans.
Step 3 巧衔接,成篇章
Dear Tom,
How are you going? Graduation is coming. Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I’m writing to tell you mine.
My plan is to learn how to make a dish. ①When my parents are not at home, I can cook by myself. ①At the same time, I can develop my independence ability well. ①By cooking food, I can also help myself and my parents eat healthily.
①阐述学习做菜的情况及益处时句式多样,连接顺畅,且语言优美(when引导时间状语从句,at the same time作时间状语,by doing sth.作方式状语)。
I also want to learn to do a sport. ②One of my favorite athletes is Ma Long, so I want to learn how to play table tennis. ③For one thing, this sport can exercise my body and is good for my eyes. For another, I can make more friends.
I’m looking forward to your vacation plans.
Yours,
Li Hua
②one of + n.(复数)句式的运用使文章更加高级。
③灵活使用for one thing和for another来列举两个理由,清晰明了。
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新学年计划
subject学科;科目 decide 决定;选定 promise承诺;诺言 exercise锻炼;练习 term学期
hobby业余爱好 activity活动 resolution决心;决定 grade成绩等级;评分等级
try尝试;设法;努力 year年 body身体 take up(通常作为爱好)开始学习,开始练习
活动计划与安排
plan计划 decision决定 purpose目的 wish愿望 begin开始 hope希望 depend依靠
achieve 达到 visit拜访 invite邀请 prepare for ...为……做准备 look forward to盼望
make up one's mind某人下定决心 dream of doing sth.梦想做某事 would like to do sth.想要做某事 volunteer to do sth. 自愿做某事 plan to do sth.计划做某事 be going to do sth.打算做某事
假期与周末计划
holiday/vacation假期 weekend周末 farm农场 countryside乡村 mountain高山
camp扎营;搭帐篷 fish钓鱼 dance跳舞 sing唱歌 climb the mountains爬山
go on a trip去旅行 go to the beach去海滩 visit the science museum参观科技博物馆
play basketball/football/volleyball打篮球/踢足球/打排球
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[假期计划]
1.In the afternoon I'm going out with my family and friends. [用现在进行时表示将来的计划]
2.I'm making some plans to work in an old people's home this summer.[用不定式说明具体的计划]
3.We are going to have a picnic on the beach this summer holiday.[用be going to表示打算]
4.My parents and I are going to visit some friends in Shandong Province and will stay there until the end of the holiday.[用一般将来时表示计划]
5.I am taking a trip to Hainan at the end of this year to enjoy my winter holiday.我打算年底去海南旅行来享受我的寒假。[用现在进行时表示将来的计划]
6.I am making a plan to borrow some science books from the city library this weekend.我正在制订这个周末去市图书馆借一些科学书籍的计划。[用不定式说明具体的计划]
[活动安排]
1.And on 1st May we're going to collect litter in the park near my friend's house. [说明具体时间]
2.Our class is trying to come up with some ideas to cheer up sick children because they are often sad. [用高分短语come up with]
3.I would also like to invite each parent to bring one book as a gift for the new library. [用would like to do sth.表示活动安排]
4.Tomorrow we're going to visit a famous palace and take a boat tour on the River Seine.[用be going to表示打算]
5.Our new foreign students are going to arrive very soon, and here are some ways to welcome them.[用 be going to 表示活动安排]
6.I would like to invite your family to come to my house for my birthday party this Saturday.我想邀请你们一家于这周六来我家参加我的生日派对。[用would like to do sth.表示活动安排]
7.We will have a party in the classroom on the morning of 26th June.我们将在6月26日上午在教室举行一个聚会。[说明具体时间]
8.We need to come up with a plan to tell people about the city park cleanup.我们需要想出一个计划来告诉人们关于城市公园清理的事情。[用高分短语come up with]
[制定目标]
1·Not everyone knows what they want to be. Just make sure you try your best.[说明实现方法]
2·My friend and I want to be singers. We're going to take singing lessons.[说明具体方式]
3.When we make resolutions at the beginning of the year,we hope that we are going to improve our lives. [用when说明时间]
4.When you want to give up,it's a good idea to listen to some encouraging songs.当你想放弃的时候,听听励志的歌曲是个好主意。[用when说明时间]
5.I will work hard in the new year.I will pay more attention in class.
6.I will spend more time with my family.
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暑假快到了,面对即将到来的九年级,如何过一个充实而有意义的暑假呢?请你写一篇演讲稿,向你的同学介绍一下你的暑假计划。
学习安排:
制定计划按时完成作业;阅读五本英语故事书,并通过阅读可以……
运动安排:
每天锻炼一小时;精力充沛地准备接受新学期的挑战
兴趣安排:
观看科学电视节目,我认为现代工厂发展很快,污染了很多河流与土地,…… (举一例可以解决污染的方法)
活动安排:
在广场组织慈善义卖。
要求:
1. 字数80-90左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总数;
2. 要点齐全,不要逐字翻译,可适当增加使文章连贯通顺。
参考词汇:a charity sale慈善义卖
How to have a meaningful summer holiday
Dear classmates,
It is June now. The summer holiday is coming. How to have a meaningful summer holiday? Today, I’ll share my plan with you.
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Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday.
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书面表达
假如你是班长,你负责制定你们班五月份的志愿者活动计划。请你写一篇80—100词的发言稿,代表班委会向全班的志愿者介绍一下该月的活动安排。
要求:1. 活动计划中有两项内容需自拟。
2. 发言稿的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入要求词数。
时间
活动计划
5月10日
去火车站清理垃圾
5月17日
去养老院……
5月24日
去人民公园……
5月31日
帮助某社区的小学生学习,给他们讲故事
Attention, please! I’d like to tell you something about our plan for the volunteer work in May.
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That’s all. Thank you.
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学校英文报正在征集以“我的暑假计划”为主题的征文。假如你是李明,你的暑假有丰富的安排,包括学习、旅行、运动和帮助家人。请根据以下提示问题,写一篇英语短文介绍你的计划。
1. What do you plan to do during the summer vacation?
2. Why is this plan important to you?
3. How will you carry out your plan?
4. Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Summer Vacation Plan
My name is Li Ming, and I’m excited to share my summer plan after finishing the senior high school entrance exam!
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假如你是李华,你校将与国外学生代表团举办一次文化交流活动,为此,学校征求学生们的建议。请你提供一个文化交流活动的计划(包括具体地点和活动安排等),并说明理由。
注意:(1)词数80~100,开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)不能出现真实的姓名及学校名称。
My name is Li Hua. I am in Class 2, Grade 9.
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寒假即将来临,你有哪些计划和安排呢?假如你是李华,请你给英国朋友Jack写一封信,告诉他你的假期安排。
去年寒假
待在家里看电视、玩电脑游戏
今年的寒假计划
至少读完三本书;
学会游泳,而且每周锻炼身体三次;
每周看一部英语电影,提高英语水平;
帮父母做家务。
要求:1.包含表格中所有要点,可以适当发挥;
2.70词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
The winter vacation is coming soon.
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What’s your plan for the winter vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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新年快到了,同学们一定有很多的想法。请结合下面的提示内容谈谈自己在学习、运动与健康、家务、旅游等方面的计划与安排,并针对自身的不足之处,写一篇短文说说你打算怎么做。
2025
New Year Plan
□1. get good grades
□2. read more books
□3. eat healthy food
□4. help with housework
□5. go on trips with friends
注意:
1. 短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 意思连贯,符合逻辑,词数80左右(短文首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
New Year is coming soon and I have a plan for the new year.
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五一劳动节(the May day holiday)很快就要来了,打算如何度过呢?请写一篇文章,说出你的五一计划。
写作要点提示:1.帮父母做一些家务;2.学习方面的计划;3.娱乐活动安排。
要求:字数不少于80字。开头已给出,不计入总词数,
The May day holiday is coming!
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“赠人玫瑰,手留余香”。为了弘扬 “奉献爱心,助人为乐” 的校园文化,你们计划把八年级同学的集体生日派对也安排在那里,希望现场能筹集一些资金来资助贫困的孩子们重返校园。请你以 “A Special School Food Festival” 为题,描述一下你们的活动计划和愿望。80词左右,可适当发挥。
A Special School Food Festival
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【中考真题链接】
1. (2024·甘肃白银·中考真题)
假期对学生来说是一段放松自己、关心家人、充实自我的时间。对于即将到来的暑假你有什么计划和安排?根据以下思维导图提示,以“My ________ Holiday Plans”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的假期计划。
要求:1.先补全题目,并将题目抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域;
2.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;
3.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
4.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息;
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2. (2025·四川资阳·中考真题)
你校微信公众号英语专栏正开展以“我的职业规划”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你想从事的职业;
2.你选择该职业的理由(至少两点);
3.你实现职业规划的措施(至少两条)。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
My Career Plan
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3. (2024·四川眉山·中考真题)
假定你是李华,打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行,请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封邮件,分享你的旅行计划。
注意:
1. 词数 100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear David,
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Li Hua
4. (2023·江苏南通·中考真题)
热心公益,积极为社会作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你从以下社会行为中选择一种或另选一种相关活动,用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。要求表达清楚“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
注意:1. 词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
参考词汇:responsibility n. 责任;义务
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity.
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5. (2023·湖北随州·中考真题)
紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了,你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下图中的提示,以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的假期计划。
写作要求:1. 短文必须包含图中的全部信息,并适当发挥;
2. 词数:80词左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
My Summer Vacation Plan
The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it.
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All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation.
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