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写一篇读后感
[写作指导]
本单元的写作项目是读后感。读后感是读书笔记的一种形式,是在阅读了一篇文章、一本书等后而写下的表达自己的理解、感想以及受到的启发的文章。写读后感前要认真思考、分析,对自己的感想加以提炼,选择自己感受最深的地方去写。可以抓住原作的中心思想来写,也可以抓住文中自己感受最深的一个情节、一个人物、一句闪光的语言来写,最好是突岀一点,深入挖掘,写岀自己的真情实感。
读后感中既要写“读”,又要写“感”,既要叙述,又要说理。叙述是议论的基础,议论又是叙述的深化,二者必须结合。在表现方法上,可用夹叙夹议的写法,议论时应注重分析说理。在结构上,一般在开头概括地提示“读”,并从中引岀“感”,在着重抒写感受后,结尾处回扣“读”。
◆[审题谋篇]
体裁: 读后感
时态: 一般过去时为主
人称: 第三人称
◆[文章构架]
首段:概括阅读内容
中段:阐述个人想法
尾段:得出结论
◆[词句积累]
1.亮点词汇
①view 态度;看法
②specific 明确的;特殊的
③idea 观点;意见
④feelings 感情
⑤fact 事实
⑥concrete 具体的
⑦moved 感动的
2.经典句式
★吸睛开头句
① The story tell us about...这个故事告诉我们……
② As the author put it,...正如文中所说的……
③I feel that I have learned a lot from the book.
我感觉我从书中获益良多。
④I learn what selfconfidence is by reading the book.
通过读这本书,我学到了什么是自信。
★亮点结尾句
① We should be friendly to our family and friends,according to the author,for they are people who are always supporting and accompanying us.
按照作者观点,我们应该善待家人和朋友,因为他们是一直支持和陪伴我们的人。
② I learn that I should never give up my dream,no matter how hard it is to come true.
我明白了永远不要放弃梦想,不管它有多难实现。
③ We should cherish what we own now and never let it go or we would regret for a lifelong time,as the author told us in the book.
正如作者在文中所说,我们应该珍惜我们现在所拥有的永远不要让它消失,不然我们将会遗憾终生。
④ We should realize who we are and what we want to be from the leading character in the book.
我们应该像书中主角那样明白我们是谁,我们想成为谁。
⑤ What a wonderful and meaningful article it is!
这是一篇多么发人深省的好文章啊!
[实战演练]
读下面的故事,根据你对故事的理解,写一篇读后感。
Once there was an old man,who was broke,living in a tiny house and owned a beatup car.He was living off $99 Social Security checks.At 65,he decided that things had to change.So he thought about what he had to offer.His friends talked about his chicken recipe.He decided that this was his best shot at making a change.
He left Kentucky and traveled to different states to try to sell his recipe.He offered the recipe to them for free,just asking for a small percentage for the items sold.Sounds like a good deal,right? Unfortunately,not to most of the restaurants.
He heard NO over 1,000 times.Even after all of those rejections,he didn't give up.He believed his chicken recipe was something special.He got rejected 1,009 times before he heard his first YES.
With that one success,Colonel Harland Sanders changed the way Americans eat chicken.Kentucky Fried Chicken,popularly known as KFC,was born.
◆[要点词汇]
1. motivate v. 激励;激发
2. likewise adv. 同样地
3. constantly adv.经常地;不断地
4. rely_on 依靠;依赖
5. throw_in_the_towel 认输
◆[完成句子]
1.65岁时,Colonel 不满足于依靠社会保障金生活。
At 65,Colonel wasn't content with relying on the Social Security checks to live_life .
2.在他朋友的激励下,他决定卖掉他的鸡肉食谱。
Motivated_by_his_friends ,he decided to sell his chicken recipe.
3.他被拒绝了许多次,但是他没有认输。
He was rejected many times,but he_didn't_throw_in_the_towel .
4.最后,他的努力得到了回报。
Finally, his_efforts_paid_off .
5.被拒绝了1,009 次后,他得到了第一个肯定。
After being_turned_down 1,009 times,he received the first YES.
6.他的坚持使得肯德基人人皆知,并风靡全世界。His persistence made KFC known_to_everyone and so popular around the world.
7.在生活中,不管情况多么糟糕,我们都不应该轻易地放弃希望。
In life, no_matter_how_terrible the situation is,we shouldn't give up hope easily.
8.当我们面对困难的时候,我们应该保持积极并继续克服它们,直到将来有一天我们成功。
When we are_faced_with difficulties,we should keep_positive and continue to overcome them until we succeed someday.
9.只要我们勇敢地面对它们,采取措施来自我提升,我们就一定会成功地解决它们,并成为我们想成为的人。
So long as we face them bravely and take measures to improve ourselves,we will surely succeed_in_solving_them and become the person who_we_hope_to_be .
◆[句式升级]
10.用含有非谓语动词的句子改写句3
Being_rejected_many_times,he_didn't_throw_in_the_towel.
11.用强调句改写句6
It_was_his_persistence_that_made_KFC_known_to_everyone_and_so_popular_around_the_world.
12.用省略句改写句8
When_faced_with_difficulties,we_should_keep_positive_and_continue_to_overcome_ them until_we_succeed_someday.
◆[连句成篇]
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[参考范文]
The story tells us how the founder of KFC made his chicken recipe accepted.At 65,Colonel was not content with relying on the Social Security checks to live life.Motivated by his friends,he decided to sell his chicken recipe.He was rejected constantly,but he didn't throw in the towel.Instead,he kept trying.Finally,his efforts paid off.After being turned down 1,009 times,he received the first YES.
It was his persistence that made KFC known to everyone and so popular around the world.Likewise,in life,no matter how terrible the situation is,we shouldn't give up hope easily.When faced with difficulties,we should keep positive and try to overcome them until we succeed someday.With the nevergiveup attitude,we are the winners in life.As teenage students,in the process of growth,we will meet with some challenges.So long as we face them bravely and take measures to improve ourselves,we will surely succeed in solving them and become the person who we wish to be.
Remember that never give up and always believe in yourself in spite of difficulties and challenges.
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