内容正文:
观点对比类议论文
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一、文本特点
观点对比类议论属于议论文写作的一种文体。 对于同一件事情,正反双方各自发表不同的甚至完全相反的观点,对两种不同的观点逐项进行对比论述,不同的原因导致不同的结果。
二、语言特点
1.具体。观点对比类议论要针对事情或现象中的what 把握精准具体,涉及别的对象中(who) 要明确,群体中的态度(how) 要准确,事出有因(why) 要有说服力。
2.对应。此类文章两种相反的观点要一一对应,“叙”对“叙”,“议”对“议”,“析”对“析”, “评”对“评”,并有机结合在一起。
3.简练。语言使用要具有说服力,使读者一目了然,切忌拖沓,观点要铿锵有力。
三、结构特点
此类文章分为三部分
1.首段:提出问题或现象
2.主体:列举不同的观点,并对两种观点的论据(理由)进行逐一对比。
3.尾段:给出自己的观点,并简要说明理由。
四、知识储备
(一)介绍讨论的主题(开头句)
①Recently we've had a discussion about whether we should...
②Nowadays, many parents send their children to study abroad.
③With the development of ...,most factories ... which ... production more efficient.
(二)表示不同观点的常用语
1.总起过渡句
①Opinions are divided on this topic.
②Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
③People have different opinions on this problem/topic.
④People have/hold different attitudes towards this question.
⑤Opinions on this topic vary from person to person.
⑥Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter.
⑦Different people, however, think quite differently on this matter.
⑧The opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.
2.陈述一方的观点及理由
①...some of them hold the opinion that...
②...some of them are in favour of the idea that...
③A majority of people approve of the idea that...
④People who are for the idea think...
⑤Some people think that...According to them...
⑥Some students agree to the point that...
3.陈述另一方的观点及理由
①However, ...some of them hold a different view.
②However, some people differ in their opinions on this matter.
③They hold the view that...
④Others argue that...In their opinion...
⑤Others prefer to ...
⑥However, others believe that...
⑦Those who are against the idea think that...
4.进一步陈述双方观点的连接词
①What's more,...
②In addition,...
③Besides,...
④To begin with,...
⑤First,...Second, ...Third,...
⑥On the one hand...on the other hand ...
⑦For one thing...for another...
5.表明个人的观点或阐述个人的做法
①Personally (speaking)...
②In my opinion...
③As for me...
④For my part...
⑤As far as I'm concerned...
⑥From my point of view...
[典题指导]
►[写作任务]
随着科技的发展,微信学习群越来越受到人们的欢迎。对此,不同的人持有不同的观点。请你根据以下提示,用英语给某英语报刊写一篇短文,并谈谈你的看法。
赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
1.获得新知识;
2.利用闲暇时间学习;
3.……
1.学习群管理不善;
2.浪费时间;
3.……
……
注意:1.短文须包括所有要点,不要简单翻译,可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:WeChat study group微信学习群
Nowadays, WeChat study groups are more and more popular among people. However, different people hold different opinions.____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
►[审题谋篇]
第一步:确定文体——议论文
第二步:确定人称、时态和段落
①人称:第三人称
②时态:一般现在时为主
③段落:共分三段
第三步:确定简要要点
第一部分:提出问题;
第二部分:分析赞成和反对两种观点;
第三部分:自己的观点。
►[佳作展示]
Nowadays,_WeChat_study_groups_are_more_and_more_popular_among_people._However,_different_people_hold_different_opinions.
Some people support studying in WeChat groups. Their reasons are as follows. Firstly, people can learn new things they can't get from the books. Secondly, learners can make full use of their spare time to study wherever they are. However, others don't think so. They argue that the groups are poorly managed, which leads to much false information. Besides, studying by joining the WeChat groups is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully.
In my opinion, using WeChat groups to study is a good form, which can bring us great benefit. Taking everything into consideration, I approve of studying in WeChat groups.
►[名师点评]
本文要点全面,层次分明,过渡自然,语言精准,句式多变,不失为一篇好文章。
(1)Their reasons are as follows. 过渡句,自然引起下文要陈述的内容。
(2)...they can't get from the books. 是定语从句,彰显句型的复杂与高档。
(3)...wherever they are. 为状语从句,巧妙地道出,WeChat 的方便性
(4)They argue that...运用了较高性的名词性从句作宾语。
(5)studying by joining the WeChat groups is a ....
本句使用了动名词短语作主语,使句型异于其他句式。
[学以致用]
最近你班同学就你市政府拟开发一处历史遗址的话题展开了激烈的讨论。请就此话题并参考下面的表格写一篇80词左右的英语短文,介绍讨论的情况并发表的看法。
赞成方
应开发利用以便吸引
更多的游客来旅游观光
反对方
应保持原样,避免遭到人为的破坏
你的看法
……
参考词汇:历史遗址a historic site
[参考范文]
Recently, students in our class have held a heated debate on whether the government should explore a historic site in our city.
Some students are in favour of the idea. They think the historic site is worth exploring, which will make people learn more about history. What is more, it can attract more visitors to our city, which will improve our tourism. However, others think that we should keep it as it is and protect it properly. Only in this way can it not be destroyed by tourists.
As for me, I think we should ask experts for advice to find a better way to make good use of this site.
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