U1 写作升格-【创新教程】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第一册五维课堂同步Word教案（人教版2019）

人物描写

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一、文本特点

人物描写属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。

二、语言特点

1．具体，人物描写通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、性格、教育背景、工作经历、专业、爱好、主要事迹等，在写作时要根据提示信息，写作语言要具体， 真实。

2．准确，人物描写中出现的数字、地点等要准确到位，避免生编乱造，才能具有公信度和说服力。

3．简练，人物描写时，要注意生动，简练，切勿繁庸拖沓， 扯得太远。要抓住主干事迹信息。

三、结构特点

此类文章一般分为四部分

1．标题式题目

文章的标题通常在写作时已给出。自拟题目式标题时，要设定一个概括文章的主要内容。可以是词组， 也可是一个句子， 不必过度考查句型的语法结构，采用省略的方式。

2．开头：介绍出生及主要事迹和成就

3．主体：介绍人物的经历

4．结尾：简短评论，照应开头

四、知识储备

►[常用词语]

描述人物性格特征的词语有：

warmhearted热心的　　　　　considerate体贴的

generous 大方的；宽宏大量的

strongwilled意志坚强的

aggressive好斗的  ambitious有雄心的

learned有学问的，博学的  reliable可靠的

depressed意志消沉的  determined坚决的

easygoing随和的  outgoing外向的

enthusiastic热情的，热烈的  diligent勤奋的

►[常用句型]

1．年龄

He was born in 1996 and is 24 years old now.

Born in 1999, he is now a 21yearold student, studying in a university.

He began to make a living at an early age.

In his fifties, he began to feel his age.

2．外貌特征

She is a lovely girl, with big eyes, white teeth and long hair.

He is a handsome man, with a thick moustache.

He is a tall man, with blue/bright eyes and blond/brown hair...

3．家庭背景、教育状况

He was born into a poor/rich family and lived a hard/happy life...

He started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.

He went to study in Peking University in 2004 and graduated 4 years later.

He got his bachelor's /master's / doctor's degree in mathematics from...

4．生平事迹

He devoted his lifetime to...

He won a prize in...

He made up his mind to...

He made great progress in...

5．对人物的评价

He is one of the most outstanding persons...

He is honoured/regarded/considered as...

He has made great contributions to...

He sets an example to...

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►[写作任务]

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