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计划与愿望 [素养提升] 一、文体特点 计划与愿望的话题写作内容广泛，可包括学习、工作、班级活动、校级活动、团队活动、假期、节日、生日晚会、旅游、义工等社会活动的具体计划，还包括人生计划、奋斗目标或理想等长远打算，以及表达某种愿望或期待，如理想的大学、理想的专业、理想的生活、理想的工作等等。 命题人可以围绕以下主题命题：策划一次班会；打算为爸妈等买生日礼物；为假期旅游观光做计划；为庆祝爸妈等的生日做准备；准备将来当老师/医生/商人/军人/科学家；今年夏天去看海/山/草原/沙漠/湖泊/古建筑等；申请组织球队、乐队、志愿者服务小组；和老师、家长、校长等谈谈你计划的事情。 文章体裁一般采用书信或电子邮件的形式来传达要表达的内容。 二、语言特点 计划与愿望话题写作类文章，在突出主题的基础上，语言表达清楚，通俗易懂，要围绕where，when，what，how，why等要素进行描写。此类文章通常使用一般将来时和一般现在时，文中人称以第一人称为主。语言地道，句型正确，过渡自然。 三、结构特点 此类文章的结构并不复杂，一般为三段。 首段：表明希望之旅； 中段；旅行设想及准备工作； 尾段；预想效果和祝愿 四、知识储备 ★词汇必备 are planning to do 计划/打算做…… amazing 令人惊喜的 look forward to doing 期盼…… sightseeing n. 观光 the coming holiday 要到来的假期 sight n. 景点 visit vt.参观 attractive adj. 吸引人的 attraction n. 吸引力；吸引人的地方/景点 feel like doing 想要 decide/be determined to do 决定做 long/hope/wish to do 渴望/希望/想做 be prepared to do 准备好做…… make preparations for 为……做准备 mean/intend to do 计划做 have a desire to do 希望做 have a better understanding of 对……有更好的理解 improve one's communication skills 提高交际能力 experience...culture 体验……文化 benefit from 从……中受益 devote oneself to...献身于…… make our life better 使生活更加美好 join sb.for a visit to 和……一起参观…… make great contributions to 为……做出巨大贡献 ★常用句式 (1)It is my great honour to arrange. 很荣幸我来安排。 (2)I'm writing to tell you our/the plan for... 我写信告诉你……的计划。 (3)I'll tell you something about my plan for... 我将告知你有关……计划之事宜。 (4)．..which will be of great benefit to... ……这将对……大有益处。 (5)I'm sure we will strengthen the friendship... 我相信我们会巩固友谊…… (6)The scenery is charming. 风景很迷人。 (7)．..admire the natural beauty... 欣赏大自然之美 (8)Great changes have taken place in the past/recent years... 近几年，……(地方等)发生了巨大的变化。 [典题指导] 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团，你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。 1．上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等)； 2．中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等)； 3．下午与我校学生游览海河。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：海河the Haihe River Dear Mr.Smith， I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua ►[审题谋篇] 就本文的要点、行文和结构上看，文章可分为三段。在语言使用上长短结合，适当使用几个高档句型。 1．第一部分：自我介绍，总体告知计划内容 普通表达 高级表达 I'm Li Hua.I'm chairman of the Student Union.I study in Chenguang High School. I'm Li Hua，(who is)chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School. I will tell you the plan for the oneday activity for you. It is my honour/I feel greatly honoured to arrange oneday activity for you. 2.第二部分：说明具体安排 普通表达 高级表达 We will hold a discussion about school life between us. An informal discussion will be held about school life and culture difference between your students and the students from our school./There will be an informal discussion about... We can know about each other and respect each other. It is beneficial to know about each other and respect each other. Dumplings and noodles are Chinese food.You can enjoy both. We will prepare dumplings and noodles for you to enjoy，which are traditional Chinese food. We will visit Haihe River in the afternoon.That will make your students know more about Tianjin. In order to offer your students a good knowledge of Tianjin，we will pay a visit to Haihe River. 3.第三部分：表达美好祝愿 普通表达 高级表达 Finally，we are glad to hear your opinion about the plan. Finally，I'm eager to get your opinion about my arrangement and I'd appreciate it if you could give some good advice. ►[佳作展示] 　Dear_Mr.Smith，　 　I'm_Li_Hua,_chairman_of_the_Student_Union_from_Chenguang_High_School.　It is my great honour to arrange oneday activity for you in Tianjin on June 26.Our arrangements are as follows. In the morning，an informal discussion will be held about school life and culture differences between our schools.For lunch，we'll prepare dumplings and noodles，which are traditional delicious food in China.After lunch，in the afternoon，we will pay a relaxing visit to Haihe River in order to offer you a better knowledge of Tianjin.The river has witnessed the great changes of our city. I hope this activity will deepen our friendship.And I'd appreciate it if you could give some good advice. 　Yours_sincerely，　 　Li_Hua　 ►[名师点评] 该范文结构完整、合理，要点齐全，语言地道、流畅。 (1)文中使用了较为高档的词汇：honour，relaxing，a better knowledge of，witness，deepen ，appreciate等。 (2)过渡词句使用恰当，使文章流畅连贯。Our arrangements are as follows.自然引出下文。in the morning，for lunch，after lunch则明确交代了时间。 (3)文中使用了It is my great honour to arrange...，采用了动词不定式短语作主语，并采用了it替代。 which are traditional delicious food in China.为非限制性定语从句，句型自然升级高档。 [学以致用] 假如你是班长，国庆节你班将进行一次活动，请你安排一下，并以布告的形式通知全班同学。 内容：1.集合地点、时间，乘坐的交通工具； 2．上午参观一家大工厂； 3．下午到城西一个湖泊游玩； 4．提醒参观和游玩时的注意事项。 注意：1.以第一人称为主； 2．词数80左右。 [参考范文] The good news for us students of class is that we are planning a relaxing but meaningful activity.Here are our arrangements. At 7：00 in the morning，we will gather at the school gate.A large bus will pick us up and go to a large car factory.There we can witness the development of modern science and technology. In the afternoon，we will head for the beautiful lake in the west of our city.This site offers us a lot of pleasures，such as boating，fishing and so on.We are sure to have a good time. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$