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主题写作(7)　投稿报道 “三步”写作流程 [典题示例] (2023·全国乙卷改编)学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1．简要描述；　2.体验和感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Learning a New Skill ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、写全要点——保基本分 (一)显性要点题干找 1．在假期中学到的新技能(以弹电子琴为例)： ①To enrich my holiday life, I learned how to play the electronic organ this summer and this was very good to me. 2．我的收获和感受： ②I am proud of this experience. ③It enabled me to enjoy music from a new perspective and taught me to be more focused and patient. ④It was a wonderful experience that I will always remember. (二)隐性要点关联好 1．学习过程： ⑤I familiarized myself with every key on the instrument. ⑥I took an online course to learn the basic techniques. 2．克服困难： ⑦I practiced diligently, even though I kept making mistakes. 3．取得成果： ⑧My persistence paid off. ⑨I was able to be skilled in playing some popular songs. 二、打造亮点——增能力分 (一)高级词汇抓住眼(升格①③⑥句中的加蓝词汇) 1．good→___________　　2.enjoy→____________ 3．took→___________ (二)高级句式点亮篇(按要求升级句子) 1．用定语从句改写句① To enrich my holiday life, I learned how to play the electronic organ this summer, which was very beneficial to me. beneficial appreciate attended 2．用not only ...but also ...及because升级合并②③句 I am proud of this experience because it not only enabled me to appreciate music from a new perspective but also taught me to be more focused and patient. 3．用when引导的状语从句合并⑧⑨句 My persistence paid off when I was able to be skilled in playing some popular songs. 三、打造高颜值——“语”顺“形”美 (誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范) Learning a New Skill To enrich my holiday life, I learned how to play the electronic organ this summer, which was very beneficial to me. Firstly, I familiarized myself with every key on the instrument. Then, I attended an online course to learn the basic techniques and practiced diligently, even though I kept making mistakes. Finally, my persistence paid off when I was able to be skilled in playing some popular songs. I am proud of this experience because it not only enabled me to appreciate music from a new perspective but also taught me to be more focused and patient. Overall, it was a wonderful experience that I will always remember. [高分评点] (一)学谋篇布局 本文是“总—分—总”的语篇结构。首段开门见山介绍了自己学习的技能；主体段落描述了学习的过程、克服的困难以及取得的成果；尾段则抒发了自己的感想，升华了主题。整篇作文围绕技能学习展开，上下文之间层次清晰，逻辑严密，浑然一体。 (二)学靓丽表达 1．本文在描述技能学习时，先用even though引导的让步状语从句引出学习过程中遇到的困难，用when引导的时间状语从句讲述了取得的成果，又用because引导的原因状语从句及并列结构not only ...but also ...阐明了自己的收获和感悟。 2．在前后连贯上，本文使用了衔接词firstly，then, finally介绍了学习的过程，运用得恰到好处。 高分素材储备 一、内化写作范式，确保形体规范 (一)征文投稿(叙事类) Recently, I have (点明主题), which _______(说明意义)． Firstly, I (开始). Then, I (经过)．I ________(做出的努力) even though I (遇到的挑战). Finally, my persistence paid off when I was able to (取得的成果)． From this experience I not only but also (收获与感悟). In a word, it was an unforgettable experience that I will always keep in mind. (二)活动报道 (标题) In order to (组织活动的目的), our school is organizing (活动). (活动) is held (时间、地点). What matters most is that (细节1). Most of the students (细节2), which provides .Besides, __________ (补充说明)． Through the (活动), not only can you ， but you also_____ (总结)． 二、写好开头、结尾，力求吸人眼球 (一)征文投稿(叙事类) 开头部分：介绍投稿的目的和主题 1．With the purpose of ..., our school held ... 2．In order to ..., I/we ..., which ... 3. ... was significant to me as I had the opportunity to ... 结尾部分：总结投稿的内容和评价 1．The activity is ..., because ... 2．In my opinion, the activity ... More importantly, ... 3．The ...confirmed that ... (二)活动报道 开头部分：介绍报道的核心内容 1．Last Sunday, some students ... 2．..., our school organized an activity ... 3．Last Sunday witnessed ..., which ... 结尾部分：对报道的认识和评价 1．The activity .../All of us think highly of the activity. 2．Undoubtedly, not only can this event ... but it also offers us ... 3．The activity promoted/strengthened the friendship among us. 三、多积鲜活佳句，做到意蕴丰富 1．In order to enrich our campus life, our school organized a 5km cross­-country running race last Sunday. 为了丰富我们的校园生活，我们学校于上周日组织了一场5公里越野跑比赛。 2．The activity was so attractive that more than 1,000 students signed up for it.这次活动有如此大的吸引力，1 000多名学生报名参加。 3．Teachers and students who are interested in traditional Chinese culture participated in the activity. 对中国传统文化感兴趣的老师和学生参加了这次活动。 4．Everyone thinks highly of this activity, for it is a good chance to get close to nature. 每个人对该活动的评价都很高，因为这是一个亲近大自然的好机会。 5．It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised. 正是通过这次活动，我们充分认识到应该提高尊老意识。 $$