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第2课时 写作提能课
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学教材佳句,写亮句子
积主题语素,写美语段
课时作业(二)
学教材佳句,写亮句子
(说明:句中的蓝体词汇为单元复现词汇)
句式1 “do/does/did+动词原形”强调谓语动词
|解|读|规|则|
(1)“do/does/did+动词原形”结构用于强调谓语动词,即在动词原形前加助动词do、 does或did,表示“的确,确实,真的”。
(2)这种强调结构只有一般现在时和一般过去时两种,且没有疑问形式和否定形式。
(3)在祈使句中运用“do+动词原形”形式,往往不表示命令,而表示强烈的请求,有时表达更加客气的语气。
|习|练|规|则| (强调谓语动词)
①You know, every afternoon after class, I play basketball together with my classmates, and it makes a difference to me.
→You know, every afternoon after class, I play basketball together with my classmates, and it_____________________________.
②Wang intended to help Chen and her family.He scratched his head and was lost in thought.
→Wang ________________________and her family.He scratched his head and was lost in thought.
does make a difference to me
did intend to help Chen
|应|用|写|美|
③(建议信)我希望你能根据我的推荐,完全沉浸在文化之旅中。
_______________you can entirely immerse yourself in the culture tour based on my recommendation.
④(对话描写)爸爸语重心长地说,“你确实赚了钱,但是我最希望的是你能快乐,学会独立。”
Dad said earnestly, “_____________________, but what I want more than anything is for you to be happy and to learn to be independent.”
I do hope that
You did earn the money
句式2 部分否定
|解|读|规|则|
(1)all、 both、 every、 everybody、 everyone、 everything、 everywhere、 always、 often、 whole、 entirely等具有总括意义的代词、形容词和副词与not搭配使用时,表示部分否定,意为“并非都;并非两个都;不是每个都;并非总是”。在这种部分否定结构中,不论not放在这些词前面还是后面,它们都表示部分否定。
(2)no、 none、 never、 nobody、 nothing、 neither、 no one、 nowhere等表示否定意义的词与肯定式谓语一起使用时构成全部否定。
|习|练|规|则| (同义句转换)
①Both of the two math problems are not very challenging.
→_______________________________________ very challenging.
②Every student does not realize the importance of setting a goal.
→_________________________ the importance of setting a goal.
Not both of the two math problems are
Not every student realizes
|应|用|写|美|
③(恐惧心理描写)不幸的是,我们在泥泞的山路上迷路了。更糟糕的是,我们两人都没带手机,不知所措,眼睛里充满了恐惧。
Unfortunately, we got lost on a muddy mountain path.Worse still, ____________________________and we were at a loss, with eyes full of horror.
neither of us took a cellphone
④(写作增分句)你绝不应该放弃越野赛。只要你坚持你的目标,没人会嘲笑你。毕竟,并不是每个孩子都和你一样勇敢,一样意志坚定。
Never should you give up the cross-country run.As long as you insist on your target,________________________________.After all,
___________________as brave and determined as you.
nobody/no one will laugh at you
not every/each kid is
积主题语素,写美语段
建构主题语义场
子语境(一) 新生活方式带来的困难
1.feel stressed 感到焦虑
2.lose confidence 失去信心
3.tend to feel lonely 容易感到孤独
4.suffer from great stress 遭受巨大压力的折磨
5.arise from carelessness 由粗心引起
6.He felt it difficult for him to accustom himself to senior high school.
他觉得自己很难适应高中生活。
子语境(二) 适应新生活方式的建议
1.believe in oneself 相信自己
2.make more friends 结交更多朋友
3.get along well with 相处得好
4.take an active part in 积极参与
5.turn to the teachers for help 求助老师
6.You should take an active part in various activities, through which you may make more friends. 你应该积极参加各种活动,通过这些活动你可以交到更多的朋友。
子语境(三) 生活方式改变的意义和影响
1.adapt to 适应
2.pay off 得到回报
3.get ahead 取得进步
4.feel grateful to 对……表示感激
5.regain confidence 重获自信
主题语段微写作
一、运用单元所学补全语段(蓝体字为单元词汇的复现)
Dear Mr Smith,
I'm now writing to express my appreciation to your teaching, without which I wouldn't be able to ①______________________ (适应英语学习) so smoothly in senior high school.I am so blessed to meet many classmates ②________________________ (与之相处得好) and teachers whose inspiration ③_______________ (为之感激).It is in my class that I can truly feel included.
adapt to English learning
whom I get along well with
I feel grateful to
However, I recently ④____________________________________________
__________________(发现记住这么多的英语单词和短语具有挑战性).How can I ⑤ _________________________(处理这个问题) in such tight schedules? Besides, I'm about to participate in an English speech competition, but ⑥___________________________ (我无法克服我的紧张) in the rehearsal.
I wonder if you could possibly give me some tips, which ⑦___________
_____________________________ (一定会对我产生巨大影响). Yours,
Li Hua
found it challenging to memorize so many English
words and phrases
deal with the problem
I can't get over my tension
are sure to
make a great difference to me
二、主题语段的细节描写训练
1.直面挑战,迎接新生活(表达逻辑:期待→挑战)
Now ①______________________________ (我是一名高中生).It is the start of a new chapter in my life, which is ②___________________
_________(比我想象的更有活力).We have more subjects than before.This has ③__________________________ (成为我的一大挑战) as I have oceans of homework to do.I ④_____________________ (遭受巨大压力) when I feel like I don't have enough time to finish all the work.
I am a senior high school student
more dynamic than I
expected
become a big challenge for me
suffer from great stress
2.改变态度,重拾自信(表达逻辑:鼓励→自信)
Two months later, Tom ①_____________________________________ (自信满满地从学校回来).He rushed into the house and couldn't wait to tell Jackson the good news that he was praised by the teacher, ②________
______________________________________(她的鼓励帮助他重获自信).“Thanks to my teacher, she helped me ③________________________
__________________________(摆脱了我的困境并适应新的班级).④_____ ______________________________(她的确对我影响很大),” said Tom.“No, it is you ⑤_______________________________ (你应该感激自己).Always remember, just ⑥_____________ (不要放弃)!” said Jackson.
returned from school with confidence
whose
inspiration helped him regain confidence
get rid of my trouble and
adapt to the new class
She
does make a difference to me
whom you should feel grateful to
don't give up
课时作业(二)
Ⅰ.阅读七选五
(2025·黄山模拟)Life is filled with numerous victories and downfalls. ______Here's how you can create a new chapter in your life.
Draw a Line Mentally
Life is going to throw a lot of problems your way, so you need to be mentally prepared for each and every situation. _______In order to be better than before, you need to leave that guilt and shame in the past and emerge as someone new.The secret here is to never stop trying.Once you stop trying, you are already defeated.
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Learn From Others
It is an effective approach to find people that have gone through the same trials as you have. ________They can assist you better since they know the hardships.Always seek out people who are truly free of their issues, as they will be able to help you genuinely.
Do What Actually Works
_______Don't follow the path to anger and destroy what is good for you.Actively engaging in battles and struggles can be challenging, but being stuck in pain and self-resentment will be even harder.
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Picture your goals in your mind and take sensible steps towards them with each passing day. _____Let nothing stand in your way.
A.What truly matters is how you react to them.
B.Live in reality and make wise choices for yourself.
C.You can learn from their experiences and successes.
D.In such situations, drawing a mental line can be helpful.
E.Find those who have successfully overcome similar challenges.
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F.It is essential to stay positive and focus on what brings you joy.
G.Nothing should prevent you from achieving your dreams and goals.
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了面对生活中的起伏,应该如何作出反应。
1.选A 上文提到生活充满了胜利和失败,接下来的内容应该强调如何对待这些情况的重要性。故A项“你如何对待它们才是真正重要的”承接上文,符合逻辑。
2.选D 本段标题为“Draw a Line Mentally”,强调在面对生活中的问题时,要在心理上有所准备。D项中的“drawing a mental line”与标题相呼应,故D项“在这种情况下,在脑海中画一条线是有帮助的”符合语境。
3.选C 上文提到从他人身上学习是一个有效的方法,因为他们已经经历过类似的考验,了解其中的困难。故C项“你可以从他们的经历和成功中学习”直接体现了这一思想。
4.选B 本段标题为“Do What Actually Works”,强调要活在现实中,做出明智的选择。故B项“活在现实中,为自己做出明智的选择”直接对应了标题和后文段落内容。
5.选G 上文强调要在心中描绘目标,并朝着它们迈出明智的步伐。故G项“没有什么能阻止你实现你的梦想和目标”与这一意思相符,强调了实现目标的决心和信心,同时与下文衔接。
Ⅱ.完形填空
(2025·广州模拟)From the age of eight, I attended a little boarding school on the Derbyshire-Staffordshire border.On Sunday afternoons, the _____would leave us to wander the edge of the grounds where we were supposed to ______time chatting or playing sports but my ___was to climb over the fences and disappear into the landscape.Often, much to the teachers' annoyance, no one knew where to ____me.
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That was the point.To walk to a(n) ____place and, for a moment, feel the world as something new brought with it a feeling I would desire.The habit ______with me.By my mid-20s, I was a ______walker.Walking became a way of life that, _______, gave shape to a wandering decade and I would ease myself into new ____the world over by setting out on foot to get _______and then find myself again in the backstreets of Ahmedabad or Isfhanan, Ramallah or Bari.
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Now I have established my home in the landscape of Devon.Here, walking ____me and my dog Dharma as an essential daily practice.The world outside our front door is an _____the tiring, routine aspects of our lives.It's a place where we watch the seasons change and _____the movement of the sun and the light around the moon.We walk the same ______, day after day, but every minute of every hour can feel like ______.
语篇解读:本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者从小就喜欢探索不熟悉的地方,感知自然,体会新鲜的感觉。
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6.A.rescuers B.parents
C.teachers D.artists
解析:根据上文“I attended a little boarding school on the Derbyshire-Staffordshire border”可知,作者在小型寄宿学校上学,因此是受到老师们的管理。
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7.A.record B.waste
C.save D.pass
解析:根据下文“time chatting or playing sports”可推知,作者这样的学生本应该是在操场的边缘聊天或做运动,以此消磨周日下午的时间。
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8.A.job B.habit
C.ambition D.response
解析:根据下文“to climb over the fences and disappear into the landscape”可推知,爬过围栏,消失在风景中是作者那时常做的事情,是他的习惯。habit在下文有同词复现。
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9.A.find B.catch
C.meet D.put
解析:根据上文“to climb over the fences and disappear into the landscape”可知,作者会爬过学校的围栏,消失在风景中,因此没有人知道在哪里可以找到他。
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10.A.bare B.solid
C.illegal D.unfamiliar
解析:根据下文“feel the world as something new”可知,作者感觉这个世界是全新的,因此是走到不熟悉的地方。
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11.A.conflicted B.changed
C.stuck D.started
解析:根据下文“Walking became a way of life”可知,徒步成了作者的一种生活方式,因此这个习惯一直伴随着他。固定短语stick with表示“紧跟,跟……在一起”。
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12.A.tired B.gifted
C.committed D.complicated
解析:根据下文“Walking became a way of life”可知,徒步成了作者的一种生活方式,即常常去徒步,因此他是坚定的徒步旅行者。
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13.A.in turn B.in fact
C.in particular D.in addition
解析:根据上文“Walking became a way of life”再结合下文“gave shape to a wandering decade”可推知,这种生活方式反过来塑造了他四处漂泊的十年,两者是因果关系。
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14.A.apartments B.locations
C.opportunities D.challenges
解析:根据上文“a wandering decade”可知,作者有十年的时间是四处漂泊的;再结合下文“the world over”可推知,他是在世界各地的新地方放松自己。
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15.A.involved B.engaged
C.paid D.lost
解析:根据下文“and then find myself again”可知,作者又找到自己,因此先是迷路(get lost)。
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16.A.accepts B.serves
C.treats D.strikes
解析:根据下文“It's a place where we watch the seasons change”可知,作者通过散步去缓解日常生活的疲惫,观察自然,因此散步是起到了有益的作用,作为日常惯例帮助了作者和他的狗狗。
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17.A.influence on B.escape from
C.interest in D.entry to
解析:根据下文“the tiring, routine aspects of our lives”可推知,去外面散步让作者得以逃离生活中累人的例行公事。
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18.A.block B.control
C.adjust D.sense
解析:根据上文“watch the seasons change”再结合下文“the movement of the sun and the light around the moon”可推知,他也可以感知太阳的运动和月亮周围的光线。
19.A.direction B.speed
C.path D.campus
解析:根据上文“walk the same”可推知,作者和他的狗狗散步时走同样的路径。
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20.A.new B.free
C.real D.complete
解析:根据上文“We walk the same , day after day”和表示转折的“but”可推知,虽然作者每天重复同样的路线,但是会有新鲜的感觉。new在上文有同词复现。
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Ⅲ.应用文写作
(2025·衡水模拟)假定你是某中学的李华,你的加拿大朋友Peter即将作为交换生来你校学习,发邮件向你了解学校的相关情况。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.校园环境; 2.校园生活。
精品课件·名师析题
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter,
I hope this message finds you well.___________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Peter,
I hope this message finds you well.
I want to take a moment to describe my school to you.Our campus is attractive with green grass, tall trees and modern buildings.The atmosphere is inviting and perfect for both studies and leisure.Campus life here is lively and diverse.From dynamic classrooms to engaging clubs and sports activities, there's always excitement around.
What makes it even better is the friendly communication among students.We support each other like a big family.
I'm confident that you'll have a fulfilling and enjoyable experience at our school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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