主题写作(1) 事情告知（课件）-【新高考方案】2026年高考英语一轮总复习（北师大版）

主题写作(1)　事情告知 “三步”写作流程 [典题示例] (2024·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1．你完成的作品；　2.你的感想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Chris， I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 　 Yours， Li Hua　 一、写全要点——保基本分 (一)显性要点题干找 1．写信事由：①I am writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. 2．完成作品：②During the class, I painted a landscape. 3．个人感想：③It was a truly amazing experience! (二)隐性要点关联好 1．说明作品细节： ④The painting featured the towering green trees, the clear blue sky, and a family of ducks which were swimming in the lake. ⑤The painting represented the scene, and showed the peacefulness I was feeling. 2．说明具体感想： ⑥Creating artwork in the park was a different break from the usual classroom setting. ⑦The fresh air and the sound of birds singing added a calming effect to the whole process. ⑧I want to show you my creation in person and we can enjoy a similar experience together. 二、打造亮点——增能力分 (一)高级词汇抓住眼(升格⑤⑥⑧句中的加蓝词汇) 1．showed→__________ 2．different→___________ 3．want→___________ (二)高级句式点亮篇(按要求升级句子) 1．用分词作定语和with复合结构作状语合并②④句 During the class, I painted a landscape featuring the towering green trees and the clear blue sky, with a family of ducks swimming in the lake. mirrored refreshing can't wait 2．用not only ...but also ...改写句⑤ The painting not only represented the scene but also mirrored the peacefulness I was feeling. 三、打造高颜值——“语”顺“形”美 (誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范) Dear Chris， I am writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. During the class, I painted a landscape featuring the towering green trees and the clear blue sky, with a family of ducks swimming in the lake.The painting not only represented the scene but also mirrored the peacefulness I was feeling. Creating artwork in the park was a refreshing break from the usual classroom setting. The fresh air and the sound of birds singing added a calming effect to the whole process.It was a truly amazing experience! I can't wait to show you my creation in person and perhaps we can enjoy a similar experience together. Yours， Li Hua [高分评点] (一)学谋篇布局 本文呈现了告知信的常规写作模式： (二)学靓丽表达 1．文中多处使用了非谓语动词，如“featuring, towering, creating, refreshing, calming”等。这些非谓语动词在句中不仅使句子结构丰富、多变，而且让表达生动、灵活，增添了文采。 2．I can't wait to do ...句式的使用，表达了写信人想分享作品的迫切心情。 3．“It was a truly amazing experience！”短句铿锵有力；truly一词画龙点睛。 高分素材储备 一、内化写作范式，确保形体规范 Dear ， How is everything going? I'm writing to inform you of___________________ (某事/某情况). In order to/To (说明某事/某情况的目的), we will (事情或情况的内容一). Besides, (事情或情况的内容二). Anyway, (补充某事/某情况的其他细节)． Wish you all the best./Looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua 二、写好开头、结尾，力求吸人眼球 (一)开头部分：简要说明告知内容 1．I'd like to tell you something concerning ... 2．I'm eager/excited to inform you of ... 3．I'd like to share the related information with you in detail. 4．Learning that you desire/would like to ...，I'm writing to inform you of/get you informed of relevant information./I'm writing to let you know that ... (二)结尾部分：表达期待、祝愿或补充说明 1．Hopefully, what I stated above would be of great help to you. 2．If you prefer to know more detailed information, please don't hesitate to let me know. 3．I firmly believe that ... will live up to your expectations. 4．If there is anything I can do for you, please let me know and I would be more than glad to help you. 三、多积鲜活佳句，做到意蕴丰富 1．The activity aims to appeal to more people and social organizations to help and care for those children. 这次活动旨在呼吁更多的人和社会组织帮助和照顾那些孩子。 2．At first, we will make some slogans to call on everyone to take responsibility to protect the environment. 首先，我们将制作一些标语来号召每个人都承担起保护环境的责任。 3．After that, we will hold an exchange meeting about cultural differences between New Zealand and China. 之后，我们将举办一个关于新西兰和中国之间的文化差异交流会。 4．I am sure you will be content with all the arrangements and have fun learning Chinese. 我确信你将会对所有的安排感到满意，并在学习中文中得到乐趣。 5．This activity not only benefited us a lot, but it also made us realize the importance of protecting the environment. 这次活动不仅使我们获益匪浅，也使我们意识到保护环境的重要性。 6．Last weekend, I participated in a volunteer activity organized by a local charity center. I am writing to tell you something about it. 上周末，我参加了一个由当地慈善中心组织的志愿者活动。我写信想告诉你一些情况。 $$