必修2 U5 第2课时 写作提能课（课件）-【新高考方案】2026年高考英语一轮总复习（北师大版）

第2课时　写作提能课 目录 CONTENTS 学教材佳句，写亮句子 积主题语素，写美语段 课时作业（二） 学教材佳句，写亮句子 (说明：句中的蓝体词汇为单元复现词汇) 句式1　the＋比较级 ..., the＋比较级 ... |解|读|规|则| (1)the＋比较级 ...，the＋比较级 ...意为“越……，就越……”，主、从句的两个谓语是同时进行的，表示一方随另一方程度的变化而变化； (2)从结构上看，第一个“the＋比较级”是表示条件的状语从句(在表示将来意义时，从句用一般现在时表示将来)；第二个“the＋比较级”是主句。此结构可以用省略形式。 (3)其他类似结构： ①“比较级＋and＋比较级”意为“越来越……”，表示本身程度的变化。 ②“the more ..., the less ...”意为“越……，越不……”。 |习|练|规|则|　(单句语法填空) ①The more roads and parking lots we pave, the ________(little) water can flow into the ground to become groundwater. ②One of the most mysterious things about the spring is that the colder the temperature gets, the _______(hot) the spring! ③The more efforts you put into the exploration, the____________ (cheerful) you will feel. less hotter more cheerful |应|用|写|美| ④(建议信)如果你能尽快适应新环境，它将对你更有益。 _____________you can get used to the new environment,________ _________it will become to you. ⑤(心理描写)她越想这件事就越害怕，手掌冒汗，心跳加速。 ___________________________,_________________________, her palms sweating and her heart pounding wildly. The sooner the more beneficial The more she thought about it the more frightened she felt 句式2　the reason why ...is/was that ... |解|读|规|则| (1)The reason why ...is/was that ...意为“……的原因是……”，why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句。 (2)That's why ...意为“那就是……的原因”，why引导表语从句。 (3)That's because ...意为“那是因为……”，because引导表语从句。 注意：(1)在“The reason why ...is/was that ...”句型中，表语从句只能用that引导，不能用because； (2)在“That's why/because ...”句型中，why后强调结果，because后强调原因。 |习|练|规|则|　(变换句式) 　I like swimming so much.Swimming can help build up my body and form the habit of exercising. ①_________________________________________it can help build up my body and form the habit of exercising. ②I like swimming so much._______________ it can help build up my body and form the habit of exercising. ③Swimming can help build up my body and form the habit of exercising.______________ I like swimming so much. The reason why I like swimming so much is that That's because That's why |应|用|写|美| ④(申请信)我认为我能胜任一名志愿者的原因是，我不仅善于与这些留学生相处，而且我的英语也很好。 _____________________________________________________not only am I good at getting along with these overseas students but also I have a good command of English. ⑤(建议信)你练习得越多，英语就能说得越流畅，这是因为熟能生巧。 The more you practise speaking English, the more fluently you'll speak it.______________________________________ The reason why I think I'm equal to be a volunteer is that This is because practice makes perfect. 句式3　完全倒装 |解|读|规|则| 为了保持句子平衡或为了强调表语或状语，常使用完全倒装结构。使用规则如下： (1)out、 in、 down、 up、 away、 here、 there、 now、 then、 next等表示方位和时间的副词位于句首，且主语是名词时，句子用完全倒装； (2)表示地点的介词短语位于句首，且主语是名词时，句子用完全倒装； (3)作表语的形容词、分词短语或介词短语等提到系动词前面时，句子用完全倒装； (4)代词such位于句首，且在句中作表语时，句子用完全倒装。 注意：当主语是人称代词时，不用倒装语序。 |习|练|规|则|　(变换句式) ①The door opened and the children rushed out. →The door opened and______________________. ②A young man and his wife, who were enjoying the beautiful landscape outside, sat by the window. →__________________________________________, who were enjoying the beautiful landscape outside. out rushed the children By the window sat a young man and his wife ③Some admirable scientists from China, who have made great achievements in medicine, are present at the meeting. →______________________________________________________ ________, who have made great achievements in medicine. Present at the meeting are some admirable scientists from China |应|用|写|美| ④(场景描写)其他赛跑选手们跑远了。大卫虽然落后，但他坚持跑，大家都为他鼓掌。 ___________________________.Though David fell behind, he kept on running.Everyone clapped him. ⑤(主旨升华句)这就是成功的秘诀——多一点点努力，多一点点决心，就能创造出多一点点奇迹。 _______________________— a little bit more efforts and a little bit more determination will create a little bit more miracle. Away went the other runners Such is the key to success 积主题语素，写美语段 建构主题语义场 子语境(一)　野生动物保护 1．appeal to　　　　　　　　　 呼吁 2．illegal hunting 非法捕猎 3．take strict measures 采取严厉措施 4．on the edge of extinction 在灭绝的边缘 5．take good care of the animals 好好照顾动物 6．raise the awareness of wildlife preservation 提高野生动物保护意识 7．Your small actions can also make a big difference. 你小小的行动也可以产生很大的影响。 8．Through collective efforts, we can secure a future where humans and wildlife live together harmoniously. 通过共同努力，我们可以确保人类和野生动物和谐共处的未来。 子语境(二)　自然灾害场景 1．in ruins　　　　　　　　　　 沦为废墟 2．be caught in a terrible fire 遇到可怕的火灾 3．result in 10 deaths 导致10人死亡 4．sink into despair 陷入绝望 5．cause great damage to 造成巨大破坏 6．be faced with a tough situation 面对艰难处境 7．In a flash, with a burst of thunder, rain poured down once again, beating heavily against the window. 刹那间，伴随着一阵雷鸣，大雨再次倾盆而下，重重地击打在窗户上。 8．The wind was roaring, uprooting a bunch of trees like a wild beast. 风呼啸着，像野兽一样把一堆树连根拔起。 子语境(三)　灾难救援 1．spare no efforts　　　　　　　 不遗余力 2．come to rescue 来救援 3．without any hesitation 毫不迟疑 4．be thankful/grateful for 感激 5．offer support and comfort 提供支持和安慰 6．enhance the fire safety awareness 强化消防安全意识 7．I'm grateful for the solidarity and compassion shown during this difficult time. 我很感激大家在这段困难时期表现出的团结和同情。 8．With donations in large amounts and joint efforts of all the people, it is believed that the city will revive itself and get back up on its feet soon. 有了大量的捐款和所有人的共同努力，相信这个城市很快就会复苏并重新站起来。 主题语段微写作 一、运用单元所学补全语段(蓝体字为单元词汇的复现) Over past ten years, ①___________________________________ _________ (很多野生动物物种的消失) has caused great concern.Man and nature, as we all know, coexist in harmony.②__________________ ______________________________(人类对环境造成的破坏) and the endless hunting of wild animals result in their extinction，with more ③__________________________ (在灭绝的边缘), and in turn it ④___ __________________________________(不可避免影响人类的生存)． the disappearance of many species of wildlife The damage to the environment caused by humans on the edge of extinction has an inevitable effect on human survival Therefore, protecting wild animals really matters.It always comes first for the government ⑤_____________________ (采取严厉的措施) accordingly.High technology should also be applied to the improvement of the habitats for the wild animals.⑥________ _________(同样重要的) is everyone's involvement in wildlife protection.Your small actions ⑦___________________________ (能够产生巨大影响)． to take strict measures Equally important can make a big difference 二、主题语段的细节描写训练 1．描述自然灾害 In a small coastal town, an ordinary day ①______________ (变成) a nightmare when ②____________________ (火山喷发) brought about a massive tsunami. Houses and streets ③____________ (被淹没) in an instant. The once crowded town was now ④_________ (破败不堪), with nothing left but ⑤__________________________ (幸存者震惊的面孔)．The earth trembled and buildings collapsed, trapping many people in the ruins. turned into a volcanic eruption were flooded in ruins shocked faces of the survivors The whole city was ⑥_________ (震惊), and the air was filled with dust and ⑦______________________________ (被困者的尖叫声) and those who couldn't find their loved ones. in shock screams of those trapped people 2．描述灾难救助的场景 In the midst of the disaster, the local people had to ①________ _________ (迅速反应). ②______________________________________ (一些人在露天建造临时避难所), using whatever materials they could find. Others organized rescue groups to find missing people, hoping to find them alive. ③___________________________ (尽管形势严峻), the spirit of the community was not swept away. With every breath filled with dust, they began their efforts ④____________________________ (营救那些被困的人). Some built temporary shelters in the open air respond quickly In spite of the severe situation to rescue those trapped people They used pipes to communicate with those beneath the ruins, listening for faint whistles and tapping sounds. Meanwhile，⑤___________ _________________________ (临时诊所也建立起来) to treat those injured. In face of this emergency, they ⑥_____________ (保持镇静)． temporary clinics were also set up remained calm 课时作业（二） Ⅰ.阅读七选五 Camping Tips &Tricks for a Fun Trip Many people idealize camping trips as being this easy, effortless encounter with destinations rich with natural landscapes and nights under the stars twinkling in the sky above. ______That's why we've prepared the best camping tips for you! Plan accordingly, and then plan again.When you're out in the middle of nowhere, you have to be equipped to nature's challenges. _____Therefore, a plan for unexpected weather changes is essential to a successful camping trip.For example, consider packing extra supplies like blankets. 1 2 While that might seem like a huge inconvenience, the biggest and real issue occurs when you need something you don't have. Know what you need. _____Not all beginner campers will need the top-of-the-line, latest supplies.But you should have at least the basics! That includes a decent tent with enough room for people camping with you, a good sleeping bag appropriate for the season, and other supplies like food and water.You'd better create a convenient checklist that lays out everything that you should consider. 3 _______When you're far away from the major conveniences we rely upon like an urgent care center, police stations, and emergency rooms, you should always remember that safety is your first priority! _______A first aid kit is a great starting point, but it's certainly not the end of maximizing your safety efforts.Depending on where you plan to camp, you'll want to grab these items that cover you in most emergency situations: a pocket knife, a fire starter, and a safety whistle. Ready to go camping? Now you know what to expect and how to prepare for your next camping trip, so you actually have fun — rain or shine! 4 5 A．Always choose a safe campsite. B．Never leave home without safety in mind. C．We encourage you to create a safety supply kit. D．Camping doesn't have to be complicated or expensive. E．A clear 3-day forecast can easily shift into a sudden heavy rain. F．To maximize your comfort, always bring appropriate clothes for cold and rain. G．But for beginner campers, those expectations can rapidly turn into a mess of reality. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了几条露营技巧。 1．选G　后文讲述的是结果：准备露营小贴士，设空句应讲述这样做的原因，呼应“why”。故G项(但对于初学露营的人来说，这些期望很快就会变成现实的混乱)解释了原因，且在句意上与前文构成转折关系，前后衔接紧密。 2．选E　前文提到了自然的挑战，后文提到了不可预料的天气变化，因此，设空句应同样涉及“天气”话题，故E项(原本清晰的未来三天的天气预报很容易就会变成突然而至的暴雨天气)承上启下，符合语境。 3．选D　根据主旨句“Know what you need.”可知，该段讲述的是对于露营物资方面的准备，且后文“Not all beginner campers will need the top-of-the-line, latest supplies.But you should have at least the basics！”讲述了“适当”这一原则，因此设空句要呼应主题“露营物质”和“适当”。故D项(露营不必复杂或昂贵)贴合主题。 4．选B　根据后文可知，该段强调的是“露营的安全”，设空句作为主旨句，应突出“安全”。故B项(离开家时将安全牢记在心)符合语境，可以作为主旨句。 5．选C　根据上下文可知，作者在这里强调了外出的安全，并且提到了急救箱。由此推知，空处内容应与急救箱有关，故C项(我们鼓励你创建一个安全供应包)符合语境。 Ⅱ.完形填空 (2025·日照模拟)I'd been exploring the 40-hectare woods around our cottage my whole life and I knew the way well.So it was a _____when I found myself lost there. One dull cold February afternoon, I had a sudden _____to hike the hill with my two daughters.Putting on our snowshoes, we immediately ______northwestward.While making our way up the hill, my daughters stopped occasionally to investigate unknown plants and to look at the abandoned deer beds ... These really made their _____. 6 7 8 9 As the shadows started to ______， we moved further up.Soon, weariness began to _____enthusiasm.We decided to return.Instead of backtracking over our _____route, I chose to walk down the steep (陡峭的) side of the hill, ______my general sense that ahead of us lay the stream that would guide us to the road.But as the terrain (地形) leveled out, I had my first major moment of _____： Where was the stream? Were we off course? 10 11 12 13 14 I instinctively (本能地) pulled out my phone to get my location, but it _____in my hand in the cold air. ______， I started feeling a bit panicky.However, I quickly _____myself, reassuring my daughters to continue walking.Focusing on the landmarks, I spotted a familiar tree and eventually ____the road. That winter's day taught me a valuable lesson about habitual reliance on technology.If my phone had _____then, I might have directly followed the GPS, ignoring the old ______of depending on surroundings and life skills. 15 16 17 18 19 20 语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者和两个女儿一起探索树林，返回时迷路了，但他依靠对环境的观察找到了回家的路。这次经历让他意识到过度依赖科技可能会忽视传统的生存技能和环境观察能力。 6．A.challenge　　　　　　 B．shock C．reward D．reminder 解析：根据上文“I knew the way well”可知，作者很熟悉这里的路，因此当发现自己迷失在那里时，他会很震惊。 7．A.discovery B．response C．worry D．urge 解析：根据下文“to hike the hill with my two daughters”以及接下来叙述的他们的确去爬山了可知，作者是突然有一种冲动，想和两个女儿一起去爬山。 √ √ 8．A.escaped B．drove C．headed D．looked 解析：根据上文“to hike the hill with my two daughters”可知，作者是想和两个女儿一起去爬山，因此是向西北方向行进。 9．A.reputation B．dream C．day D．way 解析：根据上文“my daughters stopped occasionally to investigate unknown plants and to look at the abandoned deer beds”可推知，她们很开心。make one's day意为“让某人开心”。 √ √ 10．A.lengthen B．swing C．emerge D．fade 解析：根据上文“As the shadows started to”可推知，影子应该是开始拉长，表明时间在流逝，天色变晚。 11．A.fuel B．witness C．overlook D．outpace 解析：根据下文“We decided to return.”可知，他们准备返回，因此是疲倦开始超过热情。 √ √ 12．A.original B．rough C．offbeat D．roundabout 解析：根据下文“I chose to walk down the steep side of the hill”可知，作者选择沿着陡峭的山坡走下去，因此是没有沿着原来的路线折回。 √ 13．A.appreciating B．trusting C．envisioning D．assessing 解析：根据上文“I chose to walk down the steep side of the hill”和下文“my general sense that ahead of us lay the stream that would guide us to the road”可推知，作者选择一条新的路线是因为相信自己的直觉，认为可以沿着小溪走向大路。 √ 14．A.curiosity B．comparison C．doubt D．anticipation 解析：根据下文“Where was the stream? Were we off course？”可知，作者有很多问题，对自己产生了怀疑。 15．A.died B．slipped C．flashed D．rang 解析：根据下文“in the cold air”可推知，手机在冰冷的空气中死机了。 √ √ 16．A.Reportedly B．Admittedly C．Seemingly D．Surprisingly 解析：根据上文“I instinctively pulled out my phone to get my location, but it in my hand in the cold air.”可知，作者原本想用手机导航，但是手机应该是无法使用，因此不可否认地，他的确有点恐慌。 √ 17．A.exposed B．composed C．defended D．behaved 解析：根据下文“reassuring my daughters to continue walking”可知，他应该是让自己镇定下来了。compose oneself意为“使自己镇定下来”。 18．A.got off B．laid down C．came across D．made out 解析：根据上文“I spotted a familiar tree”可知，作者发现了一棵熟悉的树，因此可以辨认出回去的那条路。 √ √ 19．A.worked B．remained C．changed D．overheated 解析：根据下文“I might have directly followed the GPS”可知，此处是指如果那时手机还能工作的话，就会直接跟着GPS走。 √ 20．A.theory B．standard C．practice D．routine 解析：根据上文“Focusing on the landmarks, I spotted a familiar tree”可知，作者是通过盯着路标发现熟悉的树，再结合下文“of depending on surroundings and life skills”可推知，此处指依赖环境和生活技能的传统做法。 √ Ⅲ.应用文写作 假定你是某中学学生李华，你在The Evening News上看到一篇关于改造你所在的城市的文章，文中提到了将河边的一块空地改造成自然保护区(nature reserve)的方案。你认为这个改造方案不受年轻人欢迎，请写一封信给该报的编辑，谈谈你的看法，内容包括： 1．你不赞同建自然保护区的原因； 2．提出一个替代的方案并说明原因。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 精品课件·名师析题 Dear editor， I am Li Hua, a high school student.Here I am writing to respond to your article about establishing a nature reserve by the river.　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  　I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua 参考范文： Dear editor， I am Li Hua, a high school student.Here I am writing to respond to your article about establishing a nature reserve by the river. I don't think it will be welcomed by young people.Although a nature reserve can be beneficial in providing habitats for wild animals and plants and protecting our environment, it should be acknowledged that a city with such a large population cannot afford to spare a vast space to function simply as a nature reserve. A recreational wetland park, I believe, is an alternative.In this park, for one thing, the wildlife, especially those birds, can seek shelters and the water quality can be improved.For another, the citizens, especially the teenagers, not only can appreciate the natural ecology but also enjoy various activities such as biking, hiking and camping. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua $$