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第2课时 写作提能课
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CONTENTS
学教材佳句,写亮句子
积主题语素,写美语段
课时作业(二)
学教材佳句,写亮句子
(说明:句中的蓝体词汇为单元复现词汇)
句式1 so ...that ...引导结果状语从句
|解|读|规|则|
(1)so ...that ...意为“如此……以至于……”,引导结果状语从句时,常用于以下句式中:
(2)such ...that ...意为“如此……以至于……”,引导结果状语从句时,常用于以下句式中:
such+
(3)当“so+形容词/副词”及“such ...”放在句首时,主句要用部分倒装。
|习|练|规|则| (变换句式)
①(2023·全国甲卷)Their recovery has been successful.As a result, the U.S.Fish and Wildlife Service has twice attempted to delist grizzlies.
→Their recovery has been _________________the U.S.Fish and Wildlife Service has twice attempted to delist grizzlies.(用so ...that ...升级)
→Their recovery has been ______________________the U.S.Fish and Wildlife Service has twice attempted to delist grizzlies.(用such ...that ...升级)
so successful that
such a great success that
②The impact is so powerful that it can melt rock, creating the volcanoes.
→__________________________ it can melt rock, creating the volcanoes.(用倒装结构升级)
So powerful is the impact that
|应|用|写|美|
③(话题写作之网络科技)然而,一些学生对网络上瘾,这对他们的学习和生活产生了负面影响。
However, some students _________________________________it has a negative effect on their study and life.
④(神情描写)听到这些话,她非常高兴以至于面露喜色,灿烂的笑容照亮了房间。
Hearing the words, _______________________her face beamed with joy and her bright smile lit up the room.(倒装)
are so addicted to the network that
so glad was she that
句式2 make+it+adj.+for sb.to do sth.
|解|读|规|则|
(1)当不定式短语或从句等作宾语时,多用it作形式宾语,构成的句型主要有:
①make it+adj./n.+that从句
②make it+adj./n.+to do sth.
③make it+no good/no use ...+doing sth.
(2)常用于这种句型的动词还有:think、 consider、 find、 feel等。
|习|练|规|则| (变换句式)
①With the advance of technology, we find that it is convenient to stay in touch with others.
→With the advance of technology, we __________________________
___________________.(it作形式宾语)
②You should make doing some exercise on a daily basis a regular part of your life, which is really rewarding.
→You should _________________________________________________
_____________, which is really rewarding.(it作形式宾语)
find it convenient to stay in
touch with others
make it a regular part of your life to do some exercise on
a daily basis
|应|用|写|美|
③(倡议书)为了帮助提高学习英语的效率,我呼吁我们班所有的学生养成每天早上读英语的习惯。
Aimed at helping improve the efficiency of learning English, I make an appeal to all of the students in our class to _______________
_________________________________.
make it a habit to
do English reading every morning
④(心理描写)我曾经理所当然地认为父母应该在我需要的时候给我钱,但在那个时刻我觉得我有责任为家庭尽自己的一份力。
I used to take it for granted that parents should give me money whenever I needed it, but at that time ___________________________
for the family.
I felt it my duty to do my part
句式3 “疑问词+-ever”引导的从句
|解|读|规|则|
(1)“疑问词+-ever”既可以引导让步状语从句,又可以引导名词性从句。引导让步状语从句时,“疑问词+-ever”与“no matter+疑问词”可以互换。
(2)“no matter+疑问词”只可引导让步状语从句,不能引导名词性从句。
|习|练|规|则| (变换句式)
①No matter how busy we are, it is typical of us to admire the full moon and enjoy mooncakes together in Mid-Autumn Festival.
→_________________________, it is typical of us to admire the full moon and enjoy mooncakes together in Mid-Autumn Festival.
②Please take my suggestion into account, and whatever your decision is, please let me know.
→Please take my suggestion into account, and ________________
________________, please let me know.
However busy we are
no matter what
your decision is
|应|用|写|美|
③(2023·全国甲卷书面表达)从徐霞客身上我学到,无论做什么事情,我们都要亲力亲为,并且勇敢地去探索未知世界。
I have learned from Xu Xiake that_________________, we should do them in person and explore the unknown world bravely.
④(2025·浙江1月高考写作)无论我们走到哪里,我们都可以看到一些学生在拍摄短视频,无论是在教室、图书馆,甚至是在讲座期间。
________________, we can see some students filming short videos, whether it is in the classroom, library, or even during lectures.
whatever we do
Wherever we go
⑤(心理描写)无论我怎样仔细地解释,她还是不明白,因此我渐渐失去了耐心。
____________________________, she still didn't understand so I gradually lost patience.
However carefully I explained
积主题语素,写美语段
建构主题语义场
子语境(一) 互联网的功能
1.pay bills 支付账单
2.change one‘s life 改变某人的生活
3.share information 分享信息
4.have a profound impact on 有深远影响
5.have easier access to information 更容易获取信息
6.bring us convenience 给我们带来便利
7.Mobile apps have also made it easier for us to stay connected with friends and family.
移动应用程序也让我们更容易与朋友和家人保持联系。
子语境(二) 网上交友的利与弊
1.chat online 网上聊天
2.be beneficial to 得益于
3.bring people closer together 让人们更亲近
4.make communication more fun 让交流变得更有趣
5.provide useful suggestions or information
提供有用的建议或信息
6.a waste of time 浪费时间
7.get cheated online 在网上受骗
8.make people self-centred 使人们以自我为中心
9.Going online can be particularly dangerous for people who are easily influenced or too trusting.
对于那些容易受影响或过于信任他人的人来说,上网尤其危险。
子语境(三) 纸质阅读材料与电子阅读材料的对比
1.take up little space 占据很少的空间
2.be harmful to eyes 对眼睛有害
3.environmentally friendly 环保的
4.gain ever-increasing popularity 越来越受欢迎
5.bring comfortableness to readers 为读者带来舒适
6.offer different reading experiences 提供不同的阅读体验
7.With the development of science and technology, electronic books are becoming increasingly popular.
随着科技的发展,电子书正变得越来越受欢迎。
8.To sum up, under no circumstances will physical books be replaced by e-books.
总之,在任何情况下,实体书都不会被电子书取代。
子语境(四) 网络安全
1.turn to 求助于
2.go viral 迅速传播
3.face hidden dangers 面对隐藏的危险
4.be cautious about online information 谨慎处理网上信息
5.don't give away your personal information
不要泄露你的个人信息
6.protect you from being a target for cyberbully
保护你避免成为网络欺凌的目标
7.Another tip is to keep your personal information private.
另一个建议是你的个人信息要保密。
主题语段微写作
一、运用单元所学补全语段(蓝体字为单元词汇的复现)
Nowadays, we can move around the world and still ①_______________
____________(与人们保持联系) that we want to remain friends with.
The digital age ②__________________ (使我们能发现) the people who share our interests other than our family members and relatives, such as collecting model cars or playing an unusual instrument, ③_______________
_____________(给我们带来便利).④_______________ (此外), the Internet can make us know what is happening at home and abroad.
stay in touch with
the people
enables us to find
which brings us
convenience
In addition
However, some people ⑤_________________ (表达他们的关心) about the effect/impact of making friends online.They think we need to keep in mind that what we see on social media is often not the whole truth about a person.A young person could be old; a woman could be a man; we could even be sharing our information with criminals who may ⑥_______________________ (伤害我们).
Though technology has disadvantages, we should ⑦____________
______________ (专注于它的优点).
show their concern
harm us/do harm to us
focus on its
advantages
二、对标单元主题创写语段
辛迪膝盖受伤,在前往佛罗里达州的途中,一个叫迈克尔的陌生人主动帮助她提行李。她给儿子杰米发短信,告诉他关于好心人的事迹。杰米立即在社交媒体上寻求帮助找到这位好心人。请你根据所给首句提示,写一个片段,描写寻找迈克尔的过程及结果。注意要有场景、动作及心理描写。
Cindy texted her son to tell him all about that “nice guy” from Lafayette.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文:
Cindy texted her son to tell him all about that “nice guy” from Lafayette.Jamie decided to turn to social media for help to find him.He also told the heartwarming story on his blog.With thousands of shares across platforms, Jamie's post went viral and had quickly spread through the social media.People spoke highly of the kind stranger and made heartwarming comments on the story.Some were eager to help find that “nice guy” from Lafayette.It took just a little over a day to find him.When they met each other, Cindy was able to express her heartfelt thanks, and Michael stressed that he was just doing what he thought was right in the right place at the right time.
课时作业(二)
Ⅰ.阅读七选五
(2025·沧州模拟)Social media truly can affect one's life.Below are some ways how this new interactive technology can affect your life.
·Cyberbullying (网络暴力).
_____.This has led to cyberbullying, where people use the electronic communication to send messages in a threatening nature.
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Cyberbullying can be a serious issue where the victim can experience a huge amount of stress that leads to a decline in mental health.There are also cases where cyberbullying have led to suicide cases and caused death.
·Distraction and drop in productivity.
Do you know that social media is a huge distraction and it can interrupt your life in every level? Try to imagine you are writing an important article and suddenly someone gives you a message online, which will distract your focus.Many studies have found that the more people engage with social media, the less the person is able to focus on his work. ___.
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·Tiredness and stress.
What do you think would happen if you stare at your computer screen or your cell phone for a long period? ____.Plus, when you are checking social media, you are constantly switching from one task to another because there are so many things to check out and to see.This information overload will wear out your brain power and make you feel tired.
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·Peer (同辈) pressure and the desire to compare.
Another common way how social media can affect your life is through peer pressure.People are afraid to miss out and they love to compare themselves with other people. _____.This is why you are using the social network in the first place.
·Other related health issues.
Apart from all that being mentioned, there will be other related health issues such as blurry vision due to strain eyes as the result of long hours watching the screen. _______, you may suffer back and neck pain issue as you have to consistently bend down your neck to look at your phone.
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A.It will decrease work efficiency
B.You will feel tired and stressed
C.Over compare will create anxiety
D.And if you are using social media via a cell phone
E.You want to become part of the community and part of the group
F.Social media addiction is a growing problem that needs to be solved
G.People can say anything they want and still get away on the Internet
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了沉迷社交媒体的危害。
1.选G 由下文“This has led to cyberbullying”可知,空处应讲导致网络欺凌的原因。故G项(人们可以说任何他们想说的话,但仍然可以在互联网上逍遥法外)符合语境,为后文This指代内容,衔接下文。
2.选A 由上文可知,社交媒体会让人们不能专注于工作。故A项(这会降低工作效率)承接上文,符合语境,其中“It”指代上文“the more people engage with social media, the less the person is able to focus on his work”。
3.选B 由上文“What do you think would happen if you stare at your computer screen or your cell phone for a long period?”可知,空处应回答上文问题。故B项(你会感到疲惫和压力)承接上文,符合语境,既是对上面问句的回答,也和本段小标题对应。
4.选E 由上下文可知,同辈压力会让人们参与他们的活动。故E项(你想成为社区和团队的一分子)承上启下,符合语境。
5.选D 下文介绍了低头看手机的危害,D项(如果你通过手机使用社交媒体)既为条件状语从句与下文构成主从复合句,也与上文所讲的健康问题呼应。
Ⅱ.完形填空
(2025·威海模拟)Jessica Cox is the world's first licensed armless pilot.
Born without arms, Cox never let her _____become her disadvantage.She learned at a young age how to use her feet as her hands.And after eleven years of wearing prosthetic arms (假肢), she decided to be “the real Jessica” and _____the arms.This was the start of her new life.
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Cox loved swinging because it was something that she could control and _____flying over everything.And this ______her determination to become a pilot.
She had her first ______of being a pilot during a trip to Mexico in a small plane.She had the _____to place her foot on the yoke (操纵杆) and feel the experience of being in the air.After that, her childhood ______of planes disappeared.The feeling of the freedom was more ______than her horror.On that day, she decided to ______her dream of becoming a pilot.
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This was not without ______though.Finding an instructor was a challenge.A lot found it _____to teach and qualify an armless pilot.Cox didn't give up and eventually found herself a(n) _____.Her dream became a reality in 2008 when she took her first solo flight.
Cox is not only a pilot but also a ______for people with disabilities.As a motivational speaker, she has traveled across the world to ______others.She is a fighter for the ______of persons with disabilities, which gives them access to education, health care, and the same advantages she had growing up.
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语篇解读:本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了杰西卡·考克斯是世界上第一位获得执照的无臂飞行员以及她的励志故事。
6.A.disability B.shyness
C.experience D.gender
解析:根据上文“Born without arms”可知,考克斯生来没有双臂,但她从不让残疾成为自己的劣势。
7.A.get rid of B.put up with
C.get used to D.take care of
解析: 根据上文“And after eleven years of wearing prosthetic arms, she decided to be ‘the real Jessica’”可知,她决定做“真正的杰西卡”,即摆脱假臂。
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8.A.admit B.practice
C.consider D.imagine
解析:根据下文“flying over everything”可知,考克斯喜欢荡秋千,因为这是她可以控制和想象飞越一切的事情。
9.A.showed B.renewed
C.launched D.strengthened
解析:根据下文“her determination to become a pilot”可知,这激发了她成为一名飞行员的决心。
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10.A.taste B.lecture
C.licence D.mission
解析:根据下文“during a trip to Mexico in a small plane”可知,她第一次体验到了当飞行员的滋味。
11.A.freedom B.struggle
C.invitation D.opportunity
解析:根据下文“and feel the experience of being in the air”可知,她有机会把她的脚放在操纵杆上,感受在空中的体验。
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12.A.fear B.puzzle
C.dream D.memory
解析:根据下文“The feeling of the freedom was more than her horror.”可知,她儿时对飞机的恐惧消失了。
13.A.distant B.natural
C.powerful D.complicated
解析:根据上文“The feeling of the freedom”以及下文“her horror”可知,自由的感觉比她的恐惧更强大。
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14.A.announce B.pursue
C.defend D.share
解析:根据下文“her dream of becoming a pilot”可知,她决定去追求她成为一名飞行员的梦想。
15.A.risks B.barriers
C.failures D.possibilities
解析:根据下文“Finding an instructor was a challenge.”可知,这并非没有障碍。
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16.A.busy B.uncomfortable
C.irresponsible D.tired
解析:根据下文“teach and qualify an armless pilot”可知,很多人都感觉教一个没有手臂的飞行员是棘手的。
17.A.plane B.assistant
C.partner D.teacher
解析:根据上文“Cox didn't give up”可知,考克斯没有放弃,最终她找到了一名教练。
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18.A.trainer B.leader
C.champion D.volunteer
解析:根据下文“She is a fighter for the of persons with disabilities”可知,考克斯也是残疾人的捍卫者(champion)。
19.A.serve B.fund
C.inspire D.interest
解析:根据上文“As a motivational speaker”以及下文“She is a fighter for the of persons with disabilities”可知,作为一名励志演说家,她周游世界激励他人。
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20.A.jobs B.rights
C.fame D.safety
解析:根据下文“which gives them access to education, health care, and the same advantages she had growing up”可知,她是捍卫残疾人权利的斗士。
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Ⅲ.应用文写作
(2025·南宁模拟)你校英文报本期的主题为“Digital Reading”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.电子设备阅读的优点与缺点;
2.合理使用电子设备阅读的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
精品课件·名师析题
Digital Reading
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参考范文:
Digital Reading
Nowadays, digital reading is increasingly popular.It provides great convenience, allowing access to countless books on a single device.However, one coin has its two sides.
The lack of print books takes away the unique experience in reading.Spending too much time on the screen will affect readers' eyesight and distract their mind.In my opinion, we should strengthen self-control on digital reading and occasionally add traditional print books into our reading to strike a balance.
Besides, taking regular breaks is of great importance to our eyes.By enjoying the benefits and reducing the negative impact, we can fully enjoy digital reading.
I hope that we can benefit from digital reading.
so+
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