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第2课时　写作提能课 目录 CONTENTS 学教材佳句，写亮句子 积主题语素，写美语段 课时作业（二） 学教材佳句，写亮句子 (说明：句中的蓝体词汇为单元复现词汇) 句式1　it作形式主语，that引导的从句作真正的主语 |解|读|规|则| (1)在“It is＋过去分词＋that从句 ...”句型中，it为形式主语，真正的主语为后面的that从句。句型类似的结构还有： It's said that ... 　　　　 据说…… It's thought that ... 人们认为…… It's believed that ... 人们相信…… It's reported that ... 据报道…… It's hoped that ... 人们希望…… It is supposed that ... 据推测…… It is well-known that ... 众所周知…… (2)该句型也可以转化为简单句：sb./sth.is/was＋过去分词＋to do ...。(It's hoped that ...不能转化) |习|练|规|则|　(变换句式) ①It is said that the ancient building, where people put up red lanterns, represents a local tradition. →The ancient building, where people put up red lanterns,_______ _____________a local tradition. ②This festival is believed to be held in memory of a national hero who sacrificed his own life to fight against invaders. →__________________this festival is held in memory of a national hero who sacrificed his own life to fight against invaders. is said to represent It is believed that |应|用|写|美| ③(话题写作之语言学习)其次，人们认为听英语歌曲是学习英语最受欢迎的方式。 Next, _________________listening to English songs is the most popular way to learn English. ④(话题写作之节日介绍)人们相信，谁能在这一天把鸡蛋立起来，谁就会在新的一年里有好运气。 _________________whoever can make the egg stand on that day will have good luck in the year to come. it is thought that It is believed that 句式2　the moment引导时间状语从句 |解|读|规|则| (1)the moment用作连词，引导时间状语从句，意为“一……就……”，相当于as soon as，从句谓语常用一般现在时或一般过去时。 (2)名词词组用作连词而且能引导时间状语从句的有： the＋瞬间名词(moment/minute/instant/second) 一……就…… every time 每次 the＋序数词＋time 第……次 any time 任何时候 next time 下次 (the) last time 上次   |习|练|规|则|　(变换句式) ①As soon as I arrived at the room, I was impressed by the beautiful decorations there. →_________________________________________________, I was impressed by the beautiful decorations there. ②We knew nothing about what we would meet when we went abroad for the first time. →We knew nothing about what we would meet _______________ ________________. The moment/minute/instant/second I arrived at the room the first time we went abroad |应|用|写|美| ③(动作描写)他一拿到那只漂亮的盒子，就冲进前门，把它放在莎莉手里。 __________________________________, he burst through the front door and placed it in Sally's hand. ④(对话描写)卡特走向父亲说道：“这辆车对我来说很特别。每次看到它，我就会想起你。” Carter stepped toward Father and said, “This car is special to me. ____________________, I'm going to think of you.” The moment he got the beautiful box Every time I see it 句式3　强调句型 |解|读|规|则| (1)强调句型的基本结构：It is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who ＋句子其他部分 (2)强调句型的一般疑问句：Is/Was it＋被强调部分＋that/who ＋句子其他部分？ (3)强调句型的特殊疑问句：特殊疑问词＋is/was it＋that ＋句子其他部分？ (4)“not ...until ...”结构的强调句型：It is/was not until ＋被强调部分＋ that ＋ 句子其他部分。 注意：(1)当被强调的部分指人时，可用that/who引导，强调其他则用that。 (2)当被强调的部分为主语时，句子谓语动词的数与被强调的主语保持一致。 (3)强调句型通常用来强调句子的主语、宾语、状语等，不能强调谓语。对句子的谓语动词进行强调时用“do/does/did＋动词原形”。 (4)判断句子是否为强调句型的方法：把it is/was和that/who去掉，再把被强调部分归位到它本来的位置，若句子完整，则为强调句型。 |习|练|规|则|　(变换句式) ①(2024·新高考Ⅰ卷写作)The fresh air and the sound of birds singing added a calming effect to the whole process. →_______________________________________________ added a calming effect to the whole process.(强调主语) It was the fresh air and the sound of birds singing that ②He didn't realize that he was so fortunate to have so many good friends until he was in great trouble. →______________________________________ he realized that he was so fortunate to have so many good friends.(强调时间状语) It was not until he was in great trouble that |应|用|写|美| ③(2023·全国甲卷书面表达)听了他生动的介绍，我突然意识到，是袁隆平的辛勤劳动养活了地球上这么多人。 After his vivid introduction, the idea that _____________________ ______________________________________________struck me. ④(2023·浙江1月高考写作)直到它飞得更近些，我才看到它尖利的嘴里叼着的树莓。 ______________________________I saw the raspberries held in her sharp mouth. it is Yuan Longping's intense efforts that feed so many people on Earth It was not until she got closer that 积主题语素，写美语段 建构主题语义场 子语境(一)　传统节日与习俗 1．fall on　　　　　　　　　　　 (节日)适逢某日 2．get together 团聚 3．get ready for 为……做好准备 4．date back to 追溯到 5．let off fireworks 燃放烟花 6．scare away the monster Nian 吓走年兽 7．put up lanterns 挂灯笼 8．The Spring Festival, the biggest one in China, is a traditional festival for us to enjoy reunion with our families. 春节是中国最大的节日，是我们与家人团聚的传统节日。 子语境(二)　庆祝节日的活动 1．have hotpot　　　　　　　　　 吃火锅 2．clean the house 清扫房子 3．enjoy a big family dinner 享受一顿丰盛的家庭晚餐 4．watch the Spring Festival Gala 看春晚 5．open the presents 打开礼物 6．full of small toys and sweets 装满玩具和甜点 7．be filled with curiosity and happiness 充满好奇和快乐 8．To celebrate the Lantern Festival, we decorate our windows with balloons and posters. 为了庆祝元宵节，我们用气球和海报装饰窗户。 子语境(三)　庆祝节日的意义 1．in memory of　　　　　　　 为了纪念 2．be highly valued 高度重视 3．stand for family reunion 代表家人团聚 4．the joy of a family gathering 家庭团圆的喜悦 5．symbolize good luck and happiness 象征着好运和幸福 6．pass down from generation to generation 一代代传下来 7．wish for health and happiness in the coming year 祝福来年健康幸福 8．With the celebrations of these festivals, younger generations learn to honour fine Chinese values. 在这些节日的庆祝活动中，年轻一代学会了尊重中国优秀的价值观。 主题语段微写作 一、运用单元所学补全语段(蓝体字为单元词汇的复现) Dear Jim， I know you're curious to know about some of the unique festivals in my country. Now let me tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival. The Mid-Autumn Festival, which falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, is an extremely awesome occasion. People ①_____________________________ (挂上漂亮的装饰品) everywhere to create a festive atmosphere. Families ②__________ (相聚) on this special day. The mooncakes, ③_______________ (塞满了) delicious fillings like lotus seed paste and red bean paste, ④_________ ________ (代表团圆). ⑤_________________________ (在我看来), it is not only a time to enjoy delicious food but also a time to remember our traditions and pay tribute to our ancestors. put up beautiful decorations get together stuffed with represent reunion As far as I'm concerned On the eve of the festival, families surround each other, sharing stories and laughter. ⑥________________________________________ ______________________ (我真的很幸运能够体验这个美好的节日) with my family. It is a time filled with warmth and happiness. If you have any questions about the Mid-Autumn Festival, feel free to ask. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua I am truly fortunate to be able to experience this wonderful festival 二、主题语段的细节描写训练 1．春节庆祝活动(表达逻辑：准备→庆祝) The Chinese Spring Festival, which ①_______________________ _________________________ (在农历1月1日), is regarded as the most significant festival among Chinese. A number of things are done before the festival. One of these is cleaning the house. Another important custom is to ②_________________________________ (用红对联装饰大门), which symbolize a prosperous new year. falls on January 1st of Chinese lunar calendar decorate the doors with red couplets The greatest moment is ③________________________ (丰盛的家庭晚餐) on the New Year's Eve, when the whole family enjoy a big dinner together, while ④______________________________ (看春晚). The next day, people will visit relatives and friends to give their best wishes. the big family dinner watching the Spring Festival Gala 2．庆祝母亲节(表达逻辑：惊讶→感动) The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ①______________________________ (他们紧紧地拥抱着母亲) and yelled，“Happy Mother's Day, dear Mummy！”The mother hugged the twins. ②__________________________________________ (一看到早餐托盘，她就睁大了眼睛). She shook Father who was pretending to snore. They hugged their mother tightly Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray ③__________________________________________ (他看到早餐时表现得很惊讶). Mother bit into a sandwich and said ④_______________ _________________(这是她吃过的最好吃的三明治). Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite, too. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each other secretly. He acted astonished when he saw the breakfast it was the best one she had ever tasted 课时作业（二） Ⅰ.阅读七选五 (2025·重庆模拟)Celebrations, after the pattern of Thomas Alva Edison's famous quote, often appear to be one percent inspiration and 99 percent preparation. People around the world take celebrating seriously. ___ Exactly when and where human beings began coming together in public to celebrate as a group is unknown and unknowable. Logic suggests that the first public celebrations were related to the patterns of existence. 1 ______The earliest parades may have been processions of successful hunters returning to a joyful welcome by their thankful families. As civilizations developed, such celebrations became more regular and formal and served a broader social purpose. ______In some places, the commercial aspect has made us forget the original reason for the celebration. Carnival celebrations in Venice, Italy, were a festival on the day before the solemn six-week religious period known as Lent. In the current version of Carnival, hundreds of thousands of visitors attend the celebrations in Venice. 2 3 _____But their purchases of meals, accommodations, and Carnival masks bring great sums of money into the economy of the city. One cannot blame the tourists. They are attracted by Venice's unique and undeniable magic. Throughout history, across countries and cultures, the experience of a heartfelt celebration is always worth the often significant amount of time and money spent planning, preparing, organizing, and carrying out an event. ____ 4 5 A．There are records of religious parades and processions dating back to 3000 BCE. B．This does not mean, however, that modern celebrations are not socially conscious. C．Most of the city's inhabitants would leave the city's public areas to the crowds of tourists. D．Parades and other public celebrations have also become important economic events worldwide. E．Many of them are willing to go to great effort and expense to plan and attend public celebrations. F．In hunter gatherer societies, success in the search for food and shelter must have triggered the need to celebrate together. G．The priority given to celebrating seems to put it alongside food, shelter, love, and freedom as a fundamental need of humanity. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要讲述了庆祝活动的起源、经济作用以及组织庆祝活动的意义。 1．选E　上文提到世界各地的人们都很重视庆祝，空格处应解释说明人们如何认真对待庆祝，故E项(他们中的许多人愿意花费巨大的精力和费用来计划和参加公众庆祝活动)符合语境，选项中的“them”指代上文中的“people around the world”。 2．选F　上文提到最早的公共庆祝活动与存在的模式有关，下文提到最早的游行庆祝可能是成功的猎人返回，受到他们感激的家人的欢迎，空处应对人类早期社会庆祝的起源进行猜测，故F项(在狩猎采集社会中，寻找食物和住所的成功一定引发了一起庆祝的需要)承上启下，符合语境，选项中的“success in the search for food and shelter”与下文的“processions of successful hunters”对应。 3．选D　空处为段落主旨句。根据下文可知，本段主要讲述了庆祝的经济作用，故D项(游行和其他公共庆祝活动也成为世界范围内重要的经济活动)符合语境，选项中的“economic”与下文的“commercial”对应。 4．选C　根据上文“In the current version of Carnival, hundreds of thousands of visitors attend the celebrations in Venice.”可知，因为游客众多，所以要把城市的公共区域留给游客。故C项(大多数城市居民会把城市的公共区域留给成群结队的游客)承接上文，符合语境，选项中的“crowds of tourists”和上文的“hundreds of thousands of visitors”对应。 5．选G　根据上文可知，此处解释庆祝活动的意义。故G项(给予庆祝的优先权似乎把它与食物、住所、爱和自由并列，作为人类的基本需求)符合语境。 Ⅱ.完形填空 (2025·蚌埠模拟)During holiday dinner, my grandmother would ask us to share a story of a person we were grateful to during the past year. And then she would ask，“Did you ______that person？” She encouraged us to show our gratitude by our ______. I will always remember the warm and happy _____I had as a child, the miracle of being at my grandmother's table, eating her food, and listening to those I _______tell what they were thankful for. 6 7 8 9 I believe it made a big ______in my life. It helped all of us shift from being ______focused to being externally focused. When I got married and Jesselie and I started our own festival _______， a few memories _______. We used to live in Piedmont, California when our children were still young. To give Jesselie time to _______the dinner without ________， I took the children over to San Francisco to look at the beautiful holiday windows. Our children have always remembered that _______， and Jesselie has never ________that dinner because as we sat down to a cornucopia (丰富) of _________， including Williamsburg sweet potato pudding and sausage stuffing, our children said, “Can we just go to get a hamburger instead？” 10 13 11 12 14 15 16 17 18 I hope all of us can start a new tradition — a tradition of assessing our lives and actions, ______our unconscious biases (偏见), and committing to be more _____and better appreciate our differences. 语篇解读：本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。文章主要讲述了节日聚餐时，祖母让作者一家人分享他们要感激的人的故事，这一传统对作者影响很大。作者希望大家开启新传统，审视自己的行为，消除偏见，更加包容。 19 20 6．A.like　　　　　　　　 B．thank C．encounter D．inform 解析：根据上文“my grandmother would ask us to share a story of a person we were grateful to during the past year”可知，分享要感激的人的故事之后，祖母会询问是否感谢了那个人。 √ 7．A.support B．principle C．actions D．negotiations 解析：根据上文“She encouraged us to show our gratitude by our”以及常识可知，表示感激应用行动，而不是空谈。 8．A.feelings B．vacations C．parties D．comments 解析：根据上文“the warm and happy”以及语境可知，此处表示作者记得小时候温暖和幸福的感觉。 √ √ 9．A.loved B．greeted C．invited D．helped 解析：根据上文“my grandmother would ask us to share a story of a person we were grateful to during the past year”以及下文“tell what they were thankful for”可知，此处表示与家人共享节日晚餐时分享故事，分享故事的家人是作者爱的人。 √ 10．A.point B．turn C．mess D．difference 解析：根据下文“It helped all of us shift from being focused to being externally focused.”可知，这对作者产生了很大影响。make a big difference表示“产生很大影响”。 11．A.intentionally B．entirely C．internally D．frequently 解析：根据下文“to being externally focused”以及语境可知，此处表示从专注于内部转变为专注于外部。 √ √ 12．A.challenges B．traditions C．discussions D．standards 解析：根据下文“a few memories ”以及语境可知，此处表示当作者结婚后有了自己的节日传统。 13．A.died down B．got along C．stood out D．took off 解析：根据下文语境可知，此处表示一些特别的记忆浮现出来。stand out表示“突出，显眼”。 √ √ 14．A.fix B．enjoy C．share D．deliver 解析：根据下文“the dinner”以及常识可知，节日需要准备晚餐，所以此处表示作者带孩子们出去，让Jesselie可以准备晚餐。 √ 15．A.delay B．permission C．hesitation D．interruption 解析：根据下文“I took the children over to San Francisco to look at the beautiful holiday windows”以及常识可知，作者将孩子们带出去，是为了让Jesselie准备晚餐时不被打扰。 16．A.gift B．reminder C．discovery D．experience 解析：根据上文语境可知，此处表示孩子们一直记得那次经历。 √ √ 17．A.missed B．promised C．touched D．forgotten 解析：根据上文“Our children have always remembered that ， and Jesselie has never”可知，孩子们一直记得那次经历，Jesselie也从未忘记。 √ 18．A.purchase B．food C．fruits D．colors 解析：根据下文“including Williamsburg sweet potato pudding and sausage stuffing”可知，此处表示一家人坐下来吃丰盛的食物。 √ 19．A.removing B．explaining C．representing D．assessing 解析：根据上文“I hope all of us can start a new tradition — a tradition of assessing our lives and actions”以及下文“our unconscious biases”可知，此处表示消除无意识的偏见。 20．A.regular B．influential C．inclusive D．relaxing 解析：根据下文“and better appreciate our differences”以及语境可知，消除偏见后，应更加包容。 √ √ Ⅲ.应用文写作 (2025·南宁模拟)假定你是李华，你的同学Chris作为交换生来中国已经一年了，他对中国传统节日很感兴趣。恰逢今年春节他在中国，请你给他写一封邀请函，邀请他去你家欢度春节。内容包括： 1．表达你诚挚的邀请； 2．节日简介(庆祝时间、主要活动安排)。 精品课件·名师析题 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Chris，_____________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Your sincerely, Li Hua 参考范文： Dear Chris， Knowing that you have a keen interest in traditional Chinese festivals, I'm writing to extend a sincere invitation to you to come over to my house to celebrate the upcoming Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, apart from enjoying a feast, we will spend the day visiting relatives and friends, setting off fireworks, or watching the Spring Festival Gala on TV.Generally, children will get lucky money. We are expecting your arrival.Your presence would add to the warmth and happiness of our family gathering.If you are available, please let me know at your earliest convenience. Your sincerely, Li Hua $$