Unit 6 Plan for Yourself 自我规划（单元写作精练）英语人教版2024八年级上册

Unit 6 Plan for Yourself 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元的主要话题是“自我规划”，谈论对于自己或他人未来的职业和理想生活的打算，或者对新年或新学期的决心，写此类文章时，文体多为记叙文，人称多用第一人称，使用一般将来时be going to do的句型结构。叙述要条理清晰、逻辑清楚。先描述未来的职业和理想生活，再描述打算采取的行动。结尾要谈一谈自己对于实现理想的决心或希望。 相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 engineer, designer, director, painter, lawyer, resolution, goal, promise, achieve, keep, improve, develop, master, learn, healthy, balanced, quit, form, 短语 take measures/steps to do sth.（采取措施做某事） take up a hobby (培养一种爱好) get into the habit of doing sth.（养成做某事的习惯） in order to/so as to（为了） overcome challenges（克服挑战） look forward to（期待） Set a goal of doing sth. （树立目标做某事） Make up one's mind to do sth. （下定决心做某事） stick to（坚持） improve one's relationships with…（改善……和……的关系） get good grades （取得好成绩） make a weekly plan （制定周计划） 句型 ①As the New Year comes, I decide to...（新年到来，我决定……） ②One of my resolutions is to..., because...（我的一个决心是……，因为……） ③To make it come true, I will...（为了实现它，我会……） ④I think that by doing..., I can...（我认为通过……，我能……） 名言 ①A good beginning is half done.（良好的开端是成功的一半。） ② Actions speak louder than words.（行动胜于言语。） ③A year's plan starts with spring. (一年之计在于春。) ④ Where there is a will, there is a way. (有志者事竟成。) ⑤ Little by little, one goes far. (千里之行，始于足下。) 写作步骤 懂 一、Before-writing 1. Write down the things you want to improve and your resolutions. To improve... My resolution 1. 2. 3. 思考方向：从3个核心维度发散思路，确定2-3个具体决心： 1、个人成长（学习、技能、兴趣） 2、生活习惯（健康、作息、时间管理） 3、人际关系（家人、朋友、沟通） 2. 搭建写作框架 Beginning 用一句话点明新年的意义，引出决心 The New Year brings a chance to start fresh, and I’ve made some resolutions to become better. Body 逐个介绍决心，每个决心需包含： 1. 具体内容（是什么决心） 2. 制定原因（为什么选这个决心） 3. 实施计划（如何实现） ①My first resolution is about improving... ...eat more vegetables and fruit.../ ...get more exercise... ②My second resolution is ..., because... ...take up the same hobby.../ care about my parents.../spend more time with... ③My last resolution is about... ...do the homework on time.../ read more/ ask the teacher or classmate for help if ... ④I plan to spend 40 minutes reviewing math notes every evening, so I can improve my grades in the final exam. ⑤I think that by doing..., I can... Ending 表达坚持的信心或对新年的期待。 I know it won’t be easy, but I’ll try my best to keep these promises. I am sure my resolutions can come true ./ Where there is a will, there is a way. I am sure I can keep my resolutions through ... 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型，注意正确使用连接词和be going to句型。 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换初稿，标注亮点表达，检查每个决心是否有具体细节支撑，避免笼统（比如把“锻炼身体”细化为“每周跑步3次，每次30分钟”），提出补充建议。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 写作真题 赏 “一艘没有目标的船，任何方向的风都是逆风”。提前做好规划并严格实施对每个人来说都非常重要。新的一年即将来到，学校准备举办一次迎新英文演讲比赛，请以 “My New Year’s Resolutions”为题，根据下方思维导图的内容写一篇演讲稿。 写作要点： 1. 自我介绍； 2. 根据思维导图介绍你的新年规划，包含所有要点； 3. 制定计划的重要性。 写作要求： 1. 书写工整，语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My New Year’s Resolutions A new year is coming. It is a good time to make resolutions. My first resolution is about my physical health. Swimming is a good way to exercise. This year, I will take up swimming. Of course, I also want to eat healthy food. I will also try my best to help my parents do some housework. Next, I promise myself that I will be more hard-working at school than before because I want to get better grades. Then, I will make a resolution that has to do with my hobby. I love writing very much. Last year, I wrote about 30 short stories. This year, I plan to try my best to finish a novel. My dream job is to be a writer. At last, I promise to keep all those resolutions although it is difficult for me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：要求根据思维导图介绍你的新年规划，学生不要遗漏思维导图中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍生活方面的决心； 第二步，介绍学习上的决心； 第三步，介绍自己梦想中的工作。 [亮点词汇] ①take up doing sth.开始做某事 ②get better grades取得更好的成绩 ③plan to do sth.计划做某事 ④try one’s best to do sth.尽某人的努力做某事 [高分句型] ①Next, I promise myself that I will be more hard-working at school than before because I want to get better grades.（that引导的宾语从句、because引导的原因状语从句） ②I promise to keep all those resolutions although it is difficult for me.（although引导的让步状语从句） 题型通关 练 1．你的理想与热情，是你航行的舵和帆。每个人都有自己的梦想，你梦想中的未来工作是什么样的？请以“My Dream Job”为题，介绍你未来想要从事的工作及其原因，并谈谈为了未来的理想工作，你将做哪些准备。 提示问题： What is your dream job? Why do you want to do this job? What will you do to prepare for your dream job? My Dream Job Rich or poor, young or old, we all dream about our future jobs. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Dream Job Rich or poor, young or old, we all dream about our future jobs. For me, my dream job is to become a successful writer. Writing has always been a passion of mine since I was young. I love how words can be used to express emotions, ideas, and stories. It fascinates me how a simple combination of letters can create something so powerful and meaningful. To achieve my dream job, I know that I need to work hard and be dedicated. I need to read and write as much as I can, and constantly improve my skills. I also need to be open to criticism and feedback, and learn from my mistakes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“我梦想的工作”话题； 第二步，具体介绍工作名称、选择这份工作的原因、如何准备做好工作； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①passion热情 ②meaningful有意义的 ③need to do sth.需要做某事 [高分句型] To achieve my dream job, I know that I need to work hard and be dedicated.(that引导宾语从句) 2．随着新年的钟声响起，每个人都怀揣着一份美好的新年愿望和坚定的新年决心。假如你是李华，请根据思维导图提示，用英语给你的美国笔友Lily写一封电子邮件，谈谈你的新年决心。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear Lily, How time flies! I have many resolutions for the new year. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Lily, How time flies! I have many resolutions for the new year. Firstly, I’m determined to improve my health. I plan to exercise regularly and have a healthier diet. I believe that a healthy body can make us have a happy life. Secondly, I will do more reading because I can learn a lot from books. I will learn to make better use of my time. I will try my best to keep balance between study and entertainment. Lastly, I will do some volunteer work in my free time. I plan to help the old and clean up our city parks. I wish I can keep these resolutions. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍你的新年决心，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据思维导图详细介绍自己的新年决心； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①plan to do sth.计划做某事 ②make better use of更好地利用 ③try my best尽我最大的努力 ④clean up清理 [高分句型] ①I believe that a healthy body can make us have a happy life. (that引导的宾语从句) ②I will do more reading because I can learn a lot from books. (because引导的原因状语从句) 3．假如你是王建，请根据邮件的内容和所给提示，给你的笔友John回复一封邮件，并表达收到来信很开心。 Dear Wang Jian, I am lucky to be your pen pal. I’m very interested in designing and building things. So I want to be an engineer in the future. What about your dream job? Tell me the reasons and how you will make your dream come true . By the way, what will you do this summer holiday? Tell me your plans. Wait for your reply. Yours, John 写作要求： (1)短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥。 (2)词数：70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名。 Dear John, How’s everything going?________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Wang Jian 【答案】例文： Dear John, How’s everything going? I’m so glad to receive your letter! It’s great to know you want to be an engineer. My dream is to be a teacher because I love sharing knowledge with others. To achieve this, I will study hard and improve my communication skills. This summer, I plan to visit my grandparents in the countryside and learn to cook. Maybe I can even teach them some English! What about your summer plans? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Jian 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：内容要点已给出，考生需涵盖梦想职业、实现方式及暑假计划，适当添加细节，注意语言流畅和逻辑连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候，并回应对方收到信的感受。 第二步，描述自己的职业理想及原因，并简述实现的方式。 第三步，介绍自己的暑假计划，并反问对方计划以保持互动。 第四步，结尾。 [亮点词汇] ① be glad to do很高兴做某事 ② communication skills沟通能力 ③ looking forward to期待 [高分句型] ①My dream is to be a teacher because I love sharing knowledge with others.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②To achieve this, I will study hard and improve my communication skills.（不定式作目的状语） 4．假如你是李华，你的好朋友Peter前不久给你来信，告诉你他在学习、生活中遇到的以下4个问题。请你用英语写一封回信，就Peter遇到的问题，给他提供一些合理建议，能简单说明理由更好。 Peter’s problems He can’t get on well with his parents. He has no friends. He often has a cold. He gets too much stress from his schoolwork. 要求：1.内容应包括所有提示要点，可以适当发挥； 2.不包括所给开头以及结尾，词数不少于80词。 Dear Peter, I am sorry to hear about your problems. It’s normal for teenagers to meet these problems in life. Here is my advice for you. ___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice will help you out soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, I am sorry to hear about your problems. It’s normal for teenagers to meet these problems in life. Here is my advice for you. For getting on well with parents, try to communicate more. Share your ideas and listen to theirs. Understanding each other can reduce conflicts. To make friends, be active in group activities. Show your kindness and enthusiasm. People will be more willing to befriend you. Regarding frequent colds, do more exercise and keep a balanced diet. A strong body can resist diseases. For schoolwork stress, plan your time well. Break tasks into small parts and complete them step by step. This can make study more manageable. I hope my advice will help you out soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主； ③提示：需涵盖针对4个问题的建议及理由，词数不少于80词，开头结尾已给，要完整覆盖问题，建议合理且可适当拓展。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借开头自然回应Peter来信，引出要提建议的内容，开启书信主体。 第二步，具体阐述内容。针对每个问题依次提建议并说明理由，并覆盖全部问题，建议具体且有逻辑。 第三步，书写结语。表达对Peter的期待，简洁自然。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate more多沟通 ②be active in积极参与 ③balanced diet均衡饮食 ④break tasks into拆分任务 [高分句型] To make friends, be active in group activities. Show your kindness and enthusiasm.（不定式表目的） 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 6 Plan for Yourself 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元的主要话题是“自我规划”，谈论对于自己或他人未来的职业和理想生活的打算，或者对新年或新学期的决心，写此类文章时，文体多为记叙文，人称多用第一人称，使用一般将来时be going to do的句型结构。叙述要条理清晰、逻辑清楚。先描述未来的职业和理想生活，再描述打算采取的行动。结尾要谈一谈自己对于实现理想的决心或希望。 相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 engineer, designer, director, painter, lawyer, resolution, goal, promise, achieve, keep, improve, develop, master, learn, healthy, balanced, quit, form, 短语 take measures/steps to do sth.（采取措施做某事） take up a hobby (培养一种爱好) get into the habit of doing sth.（养成做某事的习惯） in order to/so as to（为了） overcome challenges（克服挑战） look forward to（期待） Set a goal of doing sth. （树立目标做某事） Make up one's mind to do sth. （下定决心做某事） stick to（坚持） improve one's relationships with…（改善……和……的关系） get good grades （取得好成绩） make a weekly plan （制定周计划） 句型 ①As the New Year comes, I decide to...（新年到来，我决定……） ②One of my resolutions is to..., because...（我的一个决心是……，因为……） ③To make it come true, I will...（为了实现它，我会……） ④I think that by doing..., I can...（我认为通过……，我能……） 名言 ①A good beginning is half done.（良好的开端是成功的一半。） ② Actions speak louder than words.（行动胜于言语。） ③A year's plan starts with spring. (一年之计在于春。) ④ Where there is a will, there is a way. (有志者事竟成。) ⑤ Little by little, one goes far. (千里之行，始于足下。) 写作步骤 懂 一、Before-writing 1. Write down the things you want to improve and your resolutions. To improve... My resolution 1. 2. 3. 思考方向：从3个核心维度发散思路，确定2-3个具体决心： 1、个人成长（学习、技能、兴趣） 2、生活习惯（健康、作息、时间管理） 3、人际关系（家人、朋友、沟通） 2. 搭建写作框架 Beginning 用一句话点明新年的意义，引出决心 The New Year brings a chance to start fresh, and I’ve made some resolutions to become better. Body 逐个介绍决心，每个决心需包含： 1. 具体内容（是什么决心） 2. 制定原因（为什么选这个决心） 3. 实施计划（如何实现） ①My first resolution is about improving... ...eat more vegetables and fruit.../ ...get more exercise... ②My second resolution is ..., because... ...take up the same hobby.../ care about my parents.../spend more time with... ③My last resolution is about... ...do the homework on time.../ read more/ ask the teacher or classmate for help if ... ④I plan to spend 40 minutes reviewing math notes every evening, so I can improve my grades in the final exam. ⑤I think that by doing..., I can... Ending 表达坚持的信心或对新年的期待。 I know it won’t be easy, but I’ll try my best to keep these promises. I am sure my resolutions can come true ./ Where there is a will, there is a way. I am sure I can keep my resolutions through ... 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型，注意正确使用连接词和be going to句型。 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换初稿，标注亮点表达，检查每个决心是否有具体细节支撑，避免笼统（比如把“锻炼身体”细化为“每周跑步3次，每次30分钟”），提出补充建议。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 写作真题 赏 “一艘没有目标的船，任何方向的风都是逆风”。提前做好规划并严格实施对每个人来说都非常重要。新的一年即将来到，学校准备举办一次迎新英文演讲比赛，请以 “My New Year’s Resolutions”为题，根据下方思维导图的内容写一篇演讲稿。 写作要点： 1. 自我介绍； 2. 根据思维导图介绍你的新年规划，包含所有要点； 3. 制定计划的重要性。 写作要求： 1. 书写工整，语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My New Year’s Resolutions A new year is coming. It is a good time to make resolutions. My first resolution is about my physical health. Swimming is a good way to exercise. This year, I will take up swimming. Of course, I also want to eat healthy food. I will also try my best to help my parents do some housework. Next, I promise myself that I will be more hard-working at school than before because I want to get better grades. Then, I will make a resolution that has to do with my hobby. I love writing very much. Last year, I wrote about 30 short stories. This year, I plan to try my best to finish a novel. My dream job is to be a writer. At last, I promise to keep all those resolutions although it is difficult for me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：要求根据思维导图介绍你的新年规划，学生不要遗漏思维导图中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍生活方面的决心； 第二步，介绍学习上的决心； 第三步，介绍自己梦想中的工作。 [亮点词汇] ①take up doing sth.开始做某事 ②get better grades取得更好的成绩 ③plan to do sth.计划做某事 ④try one’s best to do sth.尽某人的努力做某事 [高分句型] ①Next, I promise myself that I will be more hard-working at school than before because I want to get better grades.（that引导的宾语从句、because引导的原因状语从句） ②I promise to keep all those resolutions although it is difficult for me.（although引导的让步状语从句） 题型通关 练 1．你的理想与热情，是你航行的舵和帆。每个人都有自己的梦想，你梦想中的未来工作是什么样的？请以“My Dream Job”为题，介绍你未来想要从事的工作及其原因，并谈谈为了未来的理想工作，你将做哪些准备。 提示问题： What is your dream job? Why do you want to do this job? What will you do to prepare for your dream job? My Dream Job Rich or poor, young or old, we all dream about our future jobs. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．随着新年的钟声响起，每个人都怀揣着一份美好的新年愿望和坚定的新年决心。假如你是李华，请根据思维导图提示，用英语给你的美国笔友Lily写一封电子邮件，谈谈你的新年决心。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear Lily, How time flies! I have many resolutions for the new year. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．假如你是王建，请根据邮件的内容和所给提示，给你的笔友John回复一封邮件，并表达收到来信很开心。 Dear Wang Jian, I am lucky to be your pen pal. I’m very interested in designing and building things. So I want to be an engineer in the future. What about your dream job? Tell me the reasons and how you will make your dream come true . By the way, what will you do this summer holiday? Tell me your plans. Wait for your reply. Yours, John 写作要求： (1)短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥。 (2)词数：70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名。 Dear John, How’s everything going?________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Wang Jian 4．假如你是李华，你的好朋友Peter前不久给你来信，告诉你他在学习、生活中遇到的以下4个问题。请你用英语写一封回信，就Peter遇到的问题，给他提供一些合理建议，能简单说明理由更好。 Peter’s problems He can’t get on well with his parents. He has no friends. He often has a cold. He gets too much stress from his schoolwork. 要求：1.内容应包括所有提示要点，可以适当发挥； 2.不包括所给开头以及结尾，词数不少于80词。 Dear Peter, I am sorry to hear about your problems. It’s normal for teenagers to meet these problems in life. Here is my advice for you. ___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice will help you out soon. Yours, Li Hua 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$