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2025年1月浙江首考读后续写真题及解析
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Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
注意:
(1) 续写词数应为150左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
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Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
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【文章情节梳理】
1. 背景铺垫:12岁的Kevin因父母忙碌,被托付给邻居Hill夫人照看,他本性乖巧但偶尔想尝试冒险,因觉得无聊而期待有趣的事发生。
2. 事件发生:Kevin发现街对面Green夫妇家(两人均已上班)有陌生男子闯入,他先紧张地打电话报警,又担心嫌犯逃脱,便持树枝冲进屋内喝止。
3. 冲突与发展:男子见到瘦小的Kevin后放松警惕,解释自己是前房主之子,来取父亲遗留在地板下的手表;此时警车赶到,男子惊慌逃跑,被警方追捕并逮捕。
4. 结尾悬念:Kevin回到Hill夫人家,对自己的行为产生怀疑,觉得男子的话听起来很可信,不确定是否做错了。
【续写情节线索(基于给定开头)】
- Paragraph 1:Green夫妇回家后,Kevin主动告知事情经过,提及男子“取父亲手表”的说法;Green夫妇确认房子曾是男子父母的住所,且记得老房主确实有块珍贵手表遗落,众人在男子所说的地板下找到了手表,证实男子所言非虚。
- Paragraph 2:Kevin和Green先生带着手表前往警局,说明情况;警方核实后释放男子,男子向Kevin道谢并解释因着急取表才未提前告知;Kevin释然,既为自己的勇敢感到欣慰,也学会了遇事需更周全判断。
【原文短语和句型解析】
1. was left in the care of
- 短语含义:被托付给……照顾
- 例句:He was left in the care of Mrs. Hill.(他被托付给希尔夫人照顾。)
- 结构解析:被动语态 "be left in the care of sb." 表示“被置于某人的照料之下”。
2. though sometimes he wanted to do risky things
- 句子结构:though 引导让步状语从句,意为“尽管;虽然”
- 含义:尽管有时他想做些冒险的事
- 用法:though 可置于句首或句中,此处用于句中表转折。
3. a movement outside caught his eye
- 短语含义:外面的一个动静引起了他的注意
- 解析:"catch one's eye" 是固定搭配,意为“引起某人的注意”,相当于 "draw one's attention"。
4. With his heart in his mouth
- 短语含义:(因紧张、害怕而)心提到嗓子眼儿
- 用法:介词短语作伴随状语,描述紧张的状态。
- 例句:With his heart in his mouth, he opened the dark door.(他心提到嗓子眼儿,打开了那扇黑门。)
5. get away with whatever he wanted
- 短语含义:带着他想要的东西逃脱
- 解析:"get away with sth." 意为“做某事(通常指坏事)而未受惩罚/逃脱处罚”,此处引申为“带着某物逃脱”。
6. grabbed a branch from a cut-down tree
- 短语含义:从一棵被砍倒的树上抓起一根树枝
- 解析:"cut-down" 是过去分词作定语,修饰 "tree",表示“被砍倒的”。
7. froze for a second
- 短语含义:愣了一下;僵住了一秒钟
- 解析:"freeze" 此处意为“(因惊讶、害怕等)呆住;僵住”,过去式为 "froze"。
8. breathed a sigh of relief
- 短语含义:松了一口气
- 固定搭配:"sigh of relief" 表示“如释重负的叹息”,"breathe a sigh of relief" 是常用表达。
9. trying to lift a floorboard
- 短语含义:试图撬开一块地板
- 解析:"lift" 此处意为“抬起;撬开”,"floorboard" 指“地板(块)”;现在分词短语 "trying to..." 作伴随状语。
10. the sounds of a police car echoed in the air
- 句子结构:主+谓+状,意为“警车的声音在空中回响”
- 解析:"echo" 作动词,意为“回响;回荡”,常用搭配 "echo in the air"(在空中回响)。
11. stood up in a panic
- 短语含义:惊慌地站起来
- 解析:"in a panic" 是固定短语,意为“惊慌地;恐慌地”,作状语修饰动作。
12. pursued and arrested the man
- 短语含义:追捕并逮捕了那个男人
- 解析:"pursue" 意为“追捕;追赶”,"arrest" 意为“逮捕”,两个动词用 and 连接表顺承动作。
13. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing
- 句子结构:Somehow 引导的主从复合句,"he had done the right thing" 是宾语从句
- 含义:不知怎么地,他不确定自己做的是对的
- 解析:"somehow" 意为“不知怎么地;莫名其妙地”,常用于表达模糊的感受。
14. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing
- 句子结构:主+系+表,"sounded" 是感官系动词,后接形容词作表语
- 含义:那个男人的话听起来很有说服力
- 解析:"convincing" 意为“有说服力的;令人信服的”,修饰“话语”时表示“听起来可信”。
【情节发展顺序写作素材】
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
1. Kevin主动沟通,讲述事件细节
- 短语/表达:
- approach them nervously(紧张地走近他们)
- start with an apology(以道歉开头)
- relay the man’s exact words(转述男子的原话)
- express his doubt(表达他的怀疑)
- feel guilty about what happened(对所发生的事感到内疚)
- 句式:
- Kevin walked over, his voice trembling slightly: “I need to tell you something about what happened today.”(Kevin走过去,声音微微颤抖:“我得告诉你们今天发生的事。”)
- He didn’t omit a single detail, especially emphasizing how the man had begged him to believe...(他没遗漏任何细节,尤其强调男子如何恳求他相信……)
2. Green夫妇回忆与确认
- 短语/表达:
- pause in surprise(惊讶地愣住)
- ring a bell(听起来耳熟)
- the former resident(前住户)
- pass away a few years ago(几年前去世)
- a family heirloom(一件传家宝)
- 句式:
- Mrs. Green’s eyes widened: “That must be Tom—he was the son of Mr. and Mrs. Brown, who lived here before us!”(Green夫人眼睛睁大:“那一定是Tom——他是Brown夫妇的儿子,他们之前住在这里!”)
- Mr. Green added, “I remember Mr. Brown saying he’d hidden his favorite watch under the floorboard before he moved.”(Green先生补充道:“我记得Brown先生说过他搬家前把他最爱的手表藏在地板下了。”)
3. 寻找并发现手表
- 短语/表达:
- rush into the house(冲进房子)
- locate the exact spot(找到准确位置)
- a rusty pocket watch(一块生锈的怀表)
- with initials carved on it(上面刻着首字母)
- match the description(与描述相符)
- 句式:
- They knelt down and pried up the floorboard, and sure enough, there it was.(他们跪下撬开地板,果然,它就在那儿。)
- The watch, though old, was in good condition, proving that every word the man said was true.(这块手表虽旧但状态良好,证明男子说的每句话都是真的。)
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
1. 前往警局说明情况
- 短语/表达:
- set off for the police station(动身去警局)
- meet with the officer in charge(会见负责警官)
- present the evidence(出示证据)
- clear up the confusion(厘清 confusion)
- provide background information(提供背景信息)
- 句式:
- Upon arriving, they asked to speak to the officer who had handled the arrest.(一到那里,他们就要求见处理逮捕的警官。)
- Mr. Green explained the whole story, while Kevin showed the watch as proof.(Green先生解释了整个经过,Kevin则出示手表作为证据。)
2. 警方核实与男子释放
- 短语/表达:
- conduct a thorough check(进行彻底核查)
- match the records(与记录相符)
- release sb. from custody(将某人从拘留中释放)
- offer an apology(表示歉意)
- shake hands with relief(如释重负地握手)
- 句式:
- After verifying the information, the police admitted the mistake and hurried to release the man.(核实信息后,警方承认错误,赶紧释放了男子。)
- The man, when freed, looked at Kevin and said, “Thank you for clearing this up—I should have explained better earlier.”(男子获释后看着Kevin说:“谢谢你澄清了这件事——我早该好好解释的。”)
3. Kevin的感悟
- 短语/表达:
- a weight off his shoulders(如释重负)
- learn from the experience(从这次经历中学习)
- balance courage with caution(在勇气与谨慎间取得平衡)
- value communication(重视沟通)
- grow a little wiser(变得更明智一点)
- 句式:
- Kevin felt a mix of embarrassment and relief, realizing that acting bravely also meant listening carefully.(Kevin既尴尬又释然,意识到勇敢行动也意味着仔细倾听。)
- As he walked home, he thought: next time, I’ll try to understand first before taking action.(走回家时,他想:下次,我会先尝试理解再行动。)
【写作练习】
【答案】One possible version:
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained how he had witnessed the strange man entering their house and how he was arrested. Mr. and Mrs. Green listened attentively, with a mixture of surprise and gratitude on their faces. Mrs. Green hugged Kevin, thanking him for his bravery. Mr. Green, however, looked thoughtful. He asked Kevin to describe the man in detail and then revealed that the man was indeed his younger brother, who had come to retrieve a watch their father had left behind. Kevin's eyes widened in shock.
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. On the way, Mr. Green explained that the watch was a family heirloom, passed down from generation to generation. At the police station, they explained the situation to the officers, who were surprised but understanding. The man, who had been released after his identity was verified, was waiting outside. He smiled weakly at Kevin, who felt a mix of embarrassment and relief. Mr. Green handed over the watch to his brother with a pat on the back, and they all agreed to keep in touch. Kevin learned an important lesson that day: always verify the facts before taking action, but never hesitate to help those in need.
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