内容正文:
话题四 学以致用
[参考范文]
Justthen,shesawaflashlightapproaching.Inthe
dimlight,EmilyrecognizeditwasnobodyelsebutZoe.
Herface wasfiled withconcern whenshesaw Emily
strugglinginthecold.“Ithoughtyoumightneedhelp,”
Zoesaidsoftly.EmilyseyeswidenedwithamixofsurG
priseandrelief.Withoutaword,Zoesteppedforwardand
examinedthetent.Sheexplainedthatshecouldfixitwith
thespareraincoatshehadbrought.AstheyworkedtoG
gether,theawkwardnessgradualymeltedaway.EmilyreG
alizedthatZoestil caredandtherainseemedtohave
washedawaythemisunderstandingsbetweenthem.
WithZoeshelp,theysoonfixedthetent.Backinside
thetent,Emilytookadeepbreathandsaid,“Iwassohurt
whenyouchoseDaisyfortheproject.”ZoelookedatheraG
pologeticalyandreplied,“Im sorry.Ijustthoughtit
wouldbebettertoincludethenew comer,butInever
meanttohurtyou.”Thatnight,theyhadanopenGhearted
conversation,clearingupaltheconfusion.Untilthendid
theyrealizethatfriendsneedopencommunicationandtheir
bondbecameevenstronger.Fromthenon,theyworetheir
matchingbraceletsagain,asymboloftheirunbreakable
friendship.
话题五 学以致用
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Guyotookadeepbreathandstretchedouthisarm.“I
candoit!Icandoit!”herepeated.Heclosedhiseyesand
forcedhishandintothehole.Nostings! Thesmoke
worked.Reachingasfarashecould,hepuledoutseveral
largepiecesofthehoneycombfiled withstickyhoney.
Grandfathersaid,“Thatsfine.Weneedtoleaveenough
forthebees.”Theybackedawayfromtheholejustasthe
beesstartedtomakenoiseagain.
Grandfatherputmostofthehoneycombinsidehis
container.HehandedGuyoapiece.“GivethistothehonG
eyguide.”Guyoplacedthepieceatthebaseofthetree
wherethehoneyguidesat.“Thankyouforsharingthis
treasurewithus.”Thehoneyguidedroppedtotheground
toeathisreward.Asthey walked home,Grandfather
placedahandonGuyosshoulder.“Welbeabletoselthe
honeyinthevilage.Itsagreathelphavingyouaround.”
Guyosmiled,“Iguessbeinglittleissometimesagood
thing.”
话题六 学以致用
[参考范文]
Hearinganoise,Alanfroze,feelingsomethingwas
thereinthedarkness.Arippleoffearcreptuponhimas
hecastaglancethere.Heartbeatingwildly,Alanmadehis
waytothenoise,withbothofhislegstremblingunconG
trolably.Acloserlookconvincedhimthatitwasonlya
rabbit,whichquicklydisappearedinthedark.Inrelief,he
feltthegentlebreezerubbinghisface.Themoonshedding
itssilverlightonthe woods,Alan wasgreetedbythe
soundofbirdsandinsects.Envelopedbyfragrantair,he
feltasifinthewonderland.
Thenextmorning,theofficeraskedforreports.
Othercampersbraggedabouttheiradventureinthedark—
howtheyranintosome “horrible”creaturesandbravely
scaredthemoff.Theofficer,wearingadoubtfullook,ofG
ferednocomments.WhenitwasAlansturn,hetoldthe
truththattherewerenoscaryanimalsbutbreathtakingscenery
tobeexplored.Asmileblossomedontheofficersface.
Thatwasexactlywhatthecampingwasalabout.OnlyafG
teroneovercamethefearinhisownheartcouldheembrace
therealbeautyofnature.
话题七 学以致用
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Withouthesitation,Mr.Chengaveusthemoneywe
neededtotakethebus.Inaddition,hepackedsomefood,
insistingthatwetakeithome.Mymom,deeplymoved,
expressedgratitudeandtoldhimwedtrytopayhimback
oneday.ButMr.Chenjustsmiledandsaid,“Youdont
needtopaymeback.Payitforwardinstead.”Hiswords
echoedinourhearts.Asthebuspuledawayfromthe
stop,Ilookedatthefalingsnow,feelingluckytobeheadG
inghomeinwarmth.MysisterandIheldthebagoffood
tightly,imagininghowdeliciousitwouldbe.
AsIenjoyedthefoodfrom Mr.Chen,thewords
“payitforward”crossed my mindagain.Mom also
sharedherthoughtsaboutMr.Chenskindness.“Wemay
nothavemuch,”shesaid,“butwecanalwaysfindwaysto
helpothers.RememberwhatMr.Chensaid—payitforG
ward.”Fromthatdayon,welookedforopportunitiesto
spreadkindness,justasMr.Chenhaddoneforus.Even
smalacts,likesharingoursnackswithclassmatesorhelpG
ingelderlyneighborswiththeirgroceries,becamemeanG
ingfulwaystohonorhisgenerosity.ThelessonMr.Chen
taughtuscontinuedtoguideouractions,creatingachain
ofkindnessthatwehopedwouldreachfarbeyondoursmal
apartment.
话题八 学以致用
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ThetailorseemedtounderstandwhatIwasthinking
atthemoment.“Doyoutrustfootbal,youngman?”InodG
ded.Hepointedtoashelflinedwithfootbals.“IlikecolG
lectingdiscardedfootbals.Repairingafootbal isquite
healing.Sewingoneisaschalengingasplayingit,forevG
erystitchcounts.Now,wouldyou...”Ihandedhim my
shirt.HeexaminedthetearandstartedhisworkprofesG
sionaly.Whilemending,heaskedaboutmyfavoritefootG
baler,andthepleasantchatperfectedtherepairing.
Suddenly,Inoticedaphotoofafootballteamnext
tothesewingmachine.Flashingaknowingsmile,heexG
plaineditwasalongtimeago,whenhewasthecaptainand
whenhedidnotundergotheoperationthatstoppedhis
dream.Hisstoryjustpushedmetospeakoutmine.He
toldmetopursuemydreamandactlikemyidol,Messi—
“thesmalestplayeronthepitchbutthegreatestplayerof
ourtime”.Ithankedhim,sayingthatnotonlydidhemend
myshirtwithhiscraftsmanshipbuthealsorepaired my
dreamwithsportsmanship.Giggling,heexclaimed,“Told
you! Alkindsofrepairsandservices!”
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话题六 探险旅行类
[典题示例](浙江高考)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.Hedecided
totakemeonatriptotheWildWest.
WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNew Mexico.WereachedAlbuG
querqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydadsfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportand
droveusuptohisfarminPecos.
HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.My
dadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrolG
ingdowntherivernearby.(潺潺流水,河中蛙鸣,利用非谓语动词进行环境描写,伏笔1)Very
earlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmy
farm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwent
withUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUncle
Paulridinghorses.Theylookedrealycool.
Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongas
mydadwentwithme.Iwasntgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandI
putonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.
“Dontbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudontgetlost!
(利用祈使句进行简单的语言描写,伏笔2)”
“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.
Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,and
thelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)
blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.(利用并列句进行环境描写)
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答.
Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.
Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.
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[五步续写]
第一步 把握原文大意 明主旨和两线
主旨
大意
作者和父亲去西部的 UnclePaul的农场,下午和父亲骑马出去享受骑行的乐趣,欣赏美
好的自然风景
原文
两线
情节线:到达农场,晚上听蛙叫和水声→清晨早饭后体验农场生活→看父亲和叔叔骑马
→请求和父亲一起骑马→骑马欣赏自然美景
情感线:peaceful→happy→impressed→eager→happy
写作
意图
讲述作者在西部山中和父亲有惊无险的一次骑马经历
第二步 根据首句信息 定续写方向
两段首句
定一框
①由续写第一段首句“Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse”
可知,应描述马见到突然出现的兔子的反应(受惊)或作者看到兔子的行为和心
理活动(吃惊或感兴趣);②尾句可利用第二段首句关键信息“hadnoideawhere
wewere”可逆推出该句应描述“迷路了”,与续写第二段首句呼应
二框二首
正能量
可利用原文的两处伏笔(河流、小路)推出“我们”最终找到路或沿着河流回到
农场
第三步 原、续两线同 加合理细节
◎高度融洽 续写部分两情线的发展应与原文两情线一致,达到“两情相悦”,续写部分情节线体
现的是:马受惊狂奔→努力保持平衡→马最终停下→迷路→保持安静听到水声→沿着河流返回
农场;情感线走向:shocked→frightened→relieved→calm→happy
◎添加细节 ①情感和动作细节:原文描述“我们”正在沿途欣赏静谧的景色,突然跳出一只兔
子,肯定会打破原本的平静.马、“我”和父亲的反应和心理活动发生的相应变化应在第一段体现
出来,增添故事的画面感;②环境细节:着重描述“我们”在天黑迷路时的环境,衬托人物的不安、
焦虑.
第四步 沿原语言特点 完美连贯表达
原文利用简单句、并列句、非谓语动词和从句描写环境、动作、心理等.续写部分可沿用该特点进
行动作和心理描写,突出描写马在遇到兔子后受惊奔跑,作者的动作和紧张害怕的心理等,或见
到兔子感到新奇,纵马追赶的动作和心理.对话描写可利用祈使句.
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第五步 临摹衡水字体 打造完美卷面
Suddenlyalitlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Thisunexpectedappearance
frightenedmyhorseanditstartedtorunlikecrazy.Iwasseizedbyfear.“Dontletgotherope!
Keepcalm!”yeledDad.Ididsoandtriedtokeepmybalancefromfalingof.Fortunately,it
stoppedslowly.Atthatmoment,Dadcameup.SeeingIwasOK,hewasrelieved.Butwesoon
foundwehadbeenofthebeatentrackandgotlost.
Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgetingdark.Iwasveryfrightened,butDad
wasnt.Hekeptsilentandlistenedverycarefuly.Wewerewanderingaroundwhensuddenlyhe
heardthesoundoftherunningwater.Thenwewentofinthedirectionandsoonarivercameinto
sight.Dadsaid,“Wecanfindourwaybacktothefarmhouseifwefolowtheriver.”Finaly,we
arrivedatUnclePaulshomesafelyalthoughitwasalitlelateforsupper.
(2025辽宁葫芦岛市高三一模)Alanandtheothercamperssataroundthefirechewing
meatchops.ItwouldbeAlansfirstnightinatent,andhewasexcitedbutalittlenervous.
Astheyate,theconservationofficerspoke,“MuchofthewildlifeinthisareacomesoutonG
lyatnight.Soaftersupper,letsstartanightwatch.Volunteerswiltaketurnstostaydown
herebythefire,awayfromthetents.Thosewhotakepartwilgetachancetoseeaworldthat
manyofyouneverknewexisted.”
Alansstomachtightened.Thenheheardtheofficercontinue,“TherearenodangerousaniG
malsclosetoCapeTown.Anyvolunteers?”
AtoughGlookingkidwithredhairmutteredsomethingaboutneedingagoodnightssleep.
Anotherboyspokeup,“Iltakeashift.”ThekidwhodsatnexttoAlanonthebusvolunG
teered.Alansattight.Thenoneofthegirlsraisedherhandwithagiggle.Alanfrowned.Ifa
girlcoulddoit,hecould,too.Hevolunteered.
Afewmorekidsraisedtheirhandsandthentheofficerexplained,“Thisishowitworks.
Whentherestofyougotobedinatent,thefirstwatchertakeshisorherplacebythefire.The
dutyofwatcheristokeepthefiregoinggently.Afterthirtyminutes,heorshewakesthenext
person.”
Alanheardhisvoiceasking,“Areyousureitsabsolutelysafe?”
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Theofficerlookedathim.“Thedangerisminimal.WewouldnthavetakenyouhereotherG
wise.Doyoustil wanttovolunteer?”Alannoddedbutfeltuneasy.
Earlierthatday,theofficerhadchalengedthecamperstospotanimaltracksalongtherivG
er.Thatwasfun.Butbeingaloneinthedarkwasnot.Alansflashlightwasalreadyfadingtoa
dimglowbecausehehadusedittoooften.Lookingaround,Alanthoughthesawalargebird
swooping(俯冲)andwonderedifitwasanowl.Hehadseensmalpawprintsinthesandbythe
river.Wastheowlhuntingforthecreaturethathadmadethem?
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答.
Hearinganoise,Alanfroze,feelingsomethingwasthereinthedarkness.
Thenextmorning,theofficeraskedforreports.
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