UNIT 6 写作表达升格-【创新教程】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第二册五维课堂同步Word教案（北师大版2019）

主题写作——概要写作 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Why do earthquakes happen? Scientists believe that the surface of the earth is covered by a number of moving plates.Sometimes two plates move towards and push against each other.Sometimes they stop for years but at other times they jump and an earthquake is felt.Because of the movements of these plates, China, California of America and Japan have a lot of earthquakes.You can see the result in San Francisco where the Pacific plate meets the North American plate.When the 1906 earthquake happened, the Pacific plate jumped 5 to 6 metres to the north. China is a country where many earthquakes happen.The Pacific plate is pushing China from the east and the Indian plate is pushing China from the southwest.The power of this movement created the Himalayas and Mount Qomolangma.It now causes earthquakes in China.We cannot stop earthquakes but we can do things to make sure they do not destroy the whole city.First it is not a good idea to build houses along the line where two plates meet.Second, if you think there may be an earthquake, make sure to build houses on rocks rather than on sands.Third，you must make the houses as strong as possible. Weak buildings will fall down in earthquake, but strong ones may stay up. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ●[写作思路] 本文是一篇说明文，是典型的“总分”结构，全文共分为两段。每段的中心大意如下： 第一段：介绍了地震发生的原因； 第二段：介绍了中国是一个地震频发的国家及其原因，并介绍了减少地震损害的措施。 [筛选、整合信息] 在读懂原文并抓住大意的基础上，定位每个段落的主要内容。 第一段：Sometimes two plates move towards and push against each other.Sometimes they stop for years but at other times they jump and an earthquake is felt. 第二段：We cannot stop earthquakes but we can do things to make sure they do not destroy the whole city. [转换表达] 要点1　第一段的前半部分内容可概括为要点1，该要点含有时间先后顺序，可用when引导的时间状语从句来表述，例如，可同义转换为“When two plates move towards and push against each other, an earthquake just happens.”可提炼概括为“Earthquakes happen when two moving plates jump and push against each other.” 要点2　第一段的后半部分内容可概括为要点2，该要点是对要点1的简单举例说明，可用副词thus与要点1衔接，即“Thus, because of the movements of these plates, China, California of America and Japan have a lot of earthquakes.”可同义转换为“Thus, in areas, like China, California of America and Japan, earthquakes happen a lot.”结合“You can see the result in San Francisco where the Pacific plate meets the North American plate.”可利用定语从句将前面总结的句子转换为“Thus, in areas, like China, California of America and Japan, where different plates meet, earthquakes happen a lot.” 要点3　第二段内容可概括为要点3，该要点具体介绍了减少地震损害的一些措施。文中采用列举的方式提出三种措施：结合“Weak buildings will fall down in an earthquake, but strong ones may stay up.”用非谓语结构及省略句式概括为“To protect our cities from this deadly power, we'd better build houses in the regions with few earthquakes or on more solid bases if necessary, making them strong enough to survive earthquakes.” ●[连句成篇] ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Earthquakes happen when two moving plates jump and push against each other.(要点1 )Thus, in areas, like China, California of America and Japan, where different plates meet, earthquakes happen a lot.(要点2)To protect our cities from this deadly power, we'd better build houses in the regions with few earthquakes or on more solid bases if necessary, making them strong enough to survive earthquakes.(要点3 ) 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Many years ago，when I was fresh out of school，I was driving to my parents' home in Missouri for Christmas.I stopped at a gas station about 50 miles from Oklahoma City.While I was standing in line at the cash register (收款台)，I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas. I took off，but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car.I stopped and wondered what I should do.A car pulled up behind me.It was the couple.They said they would take me.We chatted and when I got out of the car，the husband gave me his business card.I wrote them a thank­you note.Soon afterward，I received a Christmas present from them.Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful. Years later，I drove to a meeting in the morning.In the late afternoon I found that I'd left the lights on all day，and the battery was dead.Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership was right next door.I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom. “Just how friendly is Friendly Ford？” I asked and explained my trouble.They quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it.They would accept no payment，so later，I wrote them a note to say thanks.I received a letter back from one of the salesmen.No one had ever written him and say “thank you”， and it meant a lot，he said. “Thank you” — two powerful words.They're easy to say and mean so much. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] In this passage，the author described two of his experiences where he was helped by the strangers.(要点1) And during the two experiences，the author expressed his thanks to the strangers who had given him a hand when there was something wrong with his car.(要点2)Through the two experiences，he realized that saying “thank you” was easy but meant so much.(要点3) [附]话题常用表达句式 1．economic losses 经济损失 2．come to one's rescue 挽救某人 3．be trapped in ruins 被困在废墟中 4．The earthquake caused structural damage to the buildings.地震对建筑物结构造成了破坏。 5．The global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe. 全球水资源短缺(问题)正变得日益严重。 6．A severe earthquake destroyed almost everything.一场剧烈的地震几乎毁了一切。 7．People are more and more aware of the importance of the protection of the environment. 人们越来越意识到环境保护的重要性。 8．It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten our lives.它不仅影响我们的日常生活，还有可能威胁我们的生命。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$