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话题二 人与自我 人间亲情
亲情友情类话题的读后续写是热考话题之一,2021年新高考Ⅰ卷主题为给妈妈做母亲节早餐,体现了家庭成员之间的爱。
1.It was then that I came to the realization that families are connected not by blood but by love.
就在那时,我意识到,家人不是由于血缘而是因为爱联结在一起。
2.I nodded firmly,knowing kindness and friendship bloom in both of our hearts.
我坚定地点了点头,知道善良和友谊之花在我们的心中盛开。
3.Although we are not blood relatives,the tie between us is even stronger than that.
虽然我们不是血亲,但我们之间的关系甚至比那更紧密。
4.Laughter burst out from the room constantly,and the whole family was surrounded by intense happiness.房间里不断传出笑声,整个家庭被包围在强烈的幸福中。
5.I put my right arm around his neck,and we laughed together.We were true family now.
我用右臂搂住他的脖子,我们一起笑。我们现在是真正的一家人了。
6.If we really value our friends and friendship,always cherish their presence and be willing to maintain and cultivate this relationship.
如果我们真的重视我们的朋友和友谊,我们要一直珍惜他们的存在,并且愿意维护和培养这种关系。
7.If you take your friends for granted, you may not have friends for very long.如果你把朋友视为理所当然,那你也许不会有长久的友情。
(2025·江苏扬州模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sarah had unspeakable pain because she had to raise her children alone.But over time,she changed too much,looking skinny in the mirror,with dark bags under her eyes.She knew she had to stop burning herself out before it was too late.So she emailed her manager that she was taking an urgent day off.
It had to be the best day ever.Sarah hated instant coffee but didn't have time for anything else.But not now.Sarah placed her favorite coffee maker on the stove and walked to the kitchen windowsill,enjoying her company when her phone rang loudly from her bedroom.“Yes?” “Hello,Sarah! How are you doing?” “Natalie? Oh,my goodness! Is this really you?” ...Natalie was Sarah's friend,but they'd lost touch after Natalie and her husband moved to Europe.Unfortunately,Sarah got so carried away by the conversation that she completely forgot about her coffee on the stove.The weather turned harsh,and strong winds blew the window curtain toward the stove,causing it to catch fire.Sarah put the phone down immediately when she smelled something burning and the smoke caused her to cough.
Sarah's house was reduced to a pile of charred wreckage (残骸).Her neighbors looked at her pityingly and offered to shelter her until she could find a place to live.But Sarah couldn't take their favor.She knew no one wanted to see a swarm of children at home,especially in the current economy.Sarah and her children had been dragged to a shelter in the street.
A few months later,it was Sarah's birthday.She decided to take her children out for a good lunch and then get back to her work.But they didn't want to and had a strange request.They blindfolded (蒙住眼睛) her,guiding her out of the house.Sarah had no clue what her children had planned for her.She knew they were heading somewhere far from the homeless shelter since they were on a bus at some point.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
As Sarah did remove the blindfold, her hands went to her mouth in shock.
Her neighbors had actually built her a new home.
One possible version:
As Sarah did remove the blindfold,her hands went to her mouth in shock.She couldn't believe her children had brought her to the same place where her house had been engulfed in flames months ago.But now,a new,beautiful home stood before them.For a moment,Sarah felt like her mind was playing tricks on her.She even pinched herself to check if it was all real,and IT WAS! Right then,Sarah saw her neighbors pouring out of their houses,rushing toward her and her children,all singing “Happy Birthday” to her.Sarah burst into tears as she understood everything.
Her neighbors had actually built her a new home.They took Sarah's old house's design as a basis and rebuilt it with safety installations done.When the house was finally complete,they couldn't contact her because she wouldn't answer their calls.So they decided to surprise her by roping her children into their birthday party plan! “Oh god...” Sarah sobbed.“How...How am I supposed to thank you all? I will pay you back.I assure you!” A couple of days later,Sarah moved into the house with her kids and the entire neighborhood became like a big,loving family who shared their joys and sorrows.
【导语】 本文以人物为线索展开。莎拉独自抚养孩子,承受着难以言说的痛苦。一天,厨房意外失火,房屋被毁,邻居虽表同情并提供帮助,但莎拉担心连累他们,带着孩子们住进了收容所。数月后,在莎拉生日这天,孩子们为她准备了惊喜,蒙上她的眼睛带她外出,踏上了一场神秘而温馨的庆祝之旅。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当萨拉摘下眼罩时,她的手震惊地伸到嘴边。”可知,第一段可以描写具体让萨拉震惊的事情和动作。
②由第二段首句内容“她的邻居实际上给她建了一个新家。”可知,第二段可以描写得知真相后,萨拉的语言和感受。
2.续写线索:摘下眼罩—看到新家—得知真相—感谢—感悟。
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