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攻略1 词汇巧升级——笔下生风
2024年高考阅卷老师说:“我们通常在1分钟内阅完一篇作文并给分,由于长时间阅卷带来的疲劳,普通的词汇只会让我们产生视觉疲劳,但如果一篇作文中有几个不落俗套的高级词汇,会让我们眼前一亮。”
一、形容词(短语)升级
1.形容词是描述人或事物的特征、性质、属性及状态的一种开放性词类。形容词主要用来修饰名词和代词。英语作文中形容词短语的高级表达可以帮助提升文章的表达深度和丰富性。
典例
词汇升级
①景色令人叹为观止,给我带来了极大的启发。The scenery was very good,and it inspired me greatly.(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷,应用文)
very good→breathtaking
②这种锻炼促进了一种健康且积极的生活方式,这对于整体的良好状态而言十分重要。This kind of exercise promotes a healthy and active lifestyle,which is important for overall wellbeing.(2024·浙江卷1月,应用文)
important→essential
2.高中阶段常见的形容词及形容词短语类写作高级词汇
①令人惊奇的surprising→amazing/astonishing/shocking
②激动的excited→thrilled
③优秀的excellent→outstanding
④明显的obvious→apparent/evident
⑤困难的difficult→challenging
⑥高兴的glad→delighted/cheerful/joyful/enjoyable
⑦重要的important→vital/significant/of great importance/significance
⑧有趣的interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing
⑨小心谨慎的careful→cautious
⑩幸运的lucky→fortunate
⑪巨大的large→enormous
⑫合适的proper→appropriate
⑬丰富的rich→abundant
⑭古老的old→ancient
⑮唯一的only→unique
⑯全部的whole→entire
⑰富裕的rich→wealthy
⑱有意义的meaningful→rewarding
⑲许多的many→a large quantity of
⑳激动的excited→thrilled
用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分
1.(2025·山东日照高三校际联考)With the intention of heightening people's awareness of China's profound history and culture,a lot of regular activities are arranged.various/a wide variety of
2.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷,读后续写)I'm very happy to learn that David reached the finish line and won a medal for his persistence.more than delighted
3.(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)As far as I'm concerned,it's a meaningful and attractive meeting.rewarding;appealing
4.Such an unusual choice of media,but what an excellent result!outstanding
5.To our great joy,not only are our classes lively and interesting,but our school life is also rich and colorful.attractive/appealing
二、动词(短语)升级
1.高级动词短语的运用,可以使文章更加生动和正式。
典例
词汇升级
①他试图实施一系列改革使他的国家繁荣起来。He tried to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous.(2023·全国甲卷,书面表达)
tried→spared no effort
②各国应加强合作,共同制定切实可行的海洋保护方案。
Countries should team up with one another to make practical plans regarding ocean protection.(2022·全国甲卷)
make→work out
2.高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇
①看见see→catch sight of
②遇见meet→come across
③引起cause→lead to/result in/give rise to
④拥有have→possess
⑤提高develop/improve→promote
⑥替代replace→substitute
⑦面对face→be faced with
⑧决定decide→determine/make up one's mind
⑨考虑consider→take ...into account/consideration
⑩应该should→be supposed to
⑪理解understand→make sense of/figure out
⑫使用use→employ/make use of/take advantage of
⑬帮助某人help sb→do sb a favour
⑭节省save→set aside
⑮参观visit→pay a visit to
⑯分发hand out→distribute
⑰站起来stand up→get to one's feet
⑱习惯于be used to→be accustomed to
⑲一定be sure to→be bound to
用所给动词的高级词汇完成句子
1.(2022·全国乙卷,书面表达)However,from my point of view,what benefits students most is reading English books,for it can help students gain a deeper understanding of English.(understand)
然而,在我看来,对学生最有好处的是阅读英语书籍,因为它可以帮助学生对英语有更深的理解。
2.Last week,we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture,which turned out to be extremely rewarding.(prove)
上周,我们带着留学生到学校体验了地道的茶文化,这被证明收获颇丰。
3.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷,读后续写)“Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted with great passion.(succeed)
“加油!你能成功!我们为你感到骄傲!”他们满怀激情地喊道。
4.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷,读后续写)I looked around and finally spotted David,who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence.(discover)
我环顾四周,终于发现了大卫,他独自站在栅栏旁。
三、副词(短语)升级
1.在英语写作中,运用高级副词不仅可以提升文章的表达层次,还能使文笔更加流畅、精准,生动。根据具体语境选择合适的副词,以达到最佳的写作效果,从而可以提高文章的得分档次。
典例
词汇升级
首先,如果英语水平不同的学生可以有目的而不是随意地聚在一起,那就再好不过了。Firstly,it couldn't be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together on purpose rather than at random.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)
Firstly→To begin with;on purpose→deliberately
终于,比赛的日子到了。发令枪响彻天空,比赛如期开始了。
Finally,the day of competition arrived.With the sound of the starting gun piercing through the air,the race began as expected.(2025·河北石家庄调研)
Finally→In the end/Eventually
2.高中阶段常见的副词及副词短语类写作高级词汇
①突然suddenly→all of a sudden
②立即 immediately→in a flash
③有时sometimes→occasionally/once in a while/from time to time
④另外;况且besides→in addition/what's more/moreover
⑤因此so→therefore/consequently
⑥第一,首先 first→to begin/start with
⑦第二,其次 second→in addition/what's more
⑧最终 finally→eventually/at last
⑨和,也and→as well as
⑩大多数most→the majority
⑪许多 a lot of→a large quantity/amount of
⑫即将到来coming soon→around/round the corner
⑬事实上in fact→as a matter of fact/actually
⑭也too→as well
⑮故意 on purpose→deliberately/by design
⑯因为 because of→on account of/due to/owing to/thanks to
⑰总之 in a word→to sum up/in conclusion/in summary
⑱越来越多more and more→an increasing number of
⑲否则or→otherwise/or else
⑳如果if→suppose/supposing/on condition that
用所给词的高级词汇完成句子
1.I decided to follow them in a flash and did have lots of fun that day.(immediately)
我立即决定跟随他们,那天确实玩得很开心。
2.(2024·全国甲卷,书面表达)As a matter of fact,the introduction of highspeed trains has dramatically shortened travel time,making intercity travel faster and more comfortable.(in fact)
事实上,高速列车的引入极大地缩短了旅行时间,使城际旅行更快、更舒适。
四、名词(短语)升级
1.名词属于实词,用来表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称,分为普通名词和专有名词。英语作文中名词短语的高级表达可以通过使用特定的词汇短语来提升文章的层次和深度。
典例
词汇升级
①没过多久,他又振作起来,继续他的任务。It didn't take long before he picked himself up again and continued his task.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷,读后续写)
task→mission
②这个夏天对我来说意义重大,因为我有机会学习苏绣。This summer was significant to me as I had the chance to learn Suzhou embroidery.(2023·全国乙卷,书面表达)
chance→opportunity
2.高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇
①机会 chance→opportunity
②选择 choice→alternative
③课程 course→curriculum
④影响 effect→influence/impact
⑤后果result→consequence
⑥缺点shortcoming→drawback
⑦方法way→approach
⑧职业career→profession
⑨建议advice→guidance
⑩老人old people→the old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens
⑪青少年young people→youngster/youth/adolescent
⑫一个表现好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper way→a wellbehaved child
先用所给的词完成句子,然后对该词进行升级
1.(2021·浙江卷,读后续写)我别无选择,只好紧闭着眼睛一动不动,听着刀子在南瓜上移动的声音。
I had no choice but to keep still with my eyes tightly closed,listening to the knife moving on the pumpkin.(choice)
→I had no alternative but to keep still with my eyes tightly closed,listening to the knife moving on the pumpkin.
2.这场比赛在身体和精神上都对参赛者有很大的好处。所以我们对它的评价都很高,希望以后有更多这样的活动。
The race was of great benefit to the participants,physically and mentally.As a result,we all think highly of it,and expect more activities like this in the future.(result)
→The race was of great benefit to the participants,physically and mentally.As a consequence,we all think highly of it,and expect more activities like this in the future.
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