UNIT 3 Section Ⅳ Writing（Word教参）-【优化指导】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册（北师大版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing [对应学生用书P120] 描述事件 1．人称 描述事件时一般以第一或第三人称角度来叙述。用第一人称表示由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻，它的优点在于能把事件的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。 用第三人称叙述的优势在于描述事件时不受活动范围的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，使文章的客观性更强。 2．时态和顺序 描述已经发生的事件，其基本时态为一般过去时。在描述事件时，我们可以采用顺叙、倒叙、插叙三种叙述方式。 3．过渡 过渡在文章中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用，往往会用在地点转移，时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述上。 4．叙述与对话 引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是描述事件时提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以更客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，从而使文章生动、有趣，内容更加充实、具体。 5．基本要领 (1)头绪分明，脉络清晰。 (2)突出重点，详略得当。 (3)语言活泼，准确生动。 1．aboard prep. 　　　　　 上(车) 2．welcome vt.& n. 欢迎 3．achievement n. 成就；功业；伟绩 4．delighted adj. 高兴的；快乐的 5．enrich v. 使丰富；使充实 6．arrival n. 到达；来到 7．a great number of 许多；大量的 8．chat with 和……聊天 9．a sense of achievement 成就感 10．receive a warm welcome 受到热烈欢迎 11．do voluntary work 做义工 12．take part in 参加 1．We had an opening ceremony in which our headmaster announced the start of the festival. 我们举行了开幕式，校长宣布文化节开始。 2．The next day，we had an English Karaoke Contest in the morning，which attracted those who love to sing English songs to show their talent. 第二天早晨，我们举办了英语卡拉OK大赛，吸引了许多爱好音乐的同学来秀才艺。 3．You can't imagine how wonderful the contest is. 你无法想象这次比赛有多么好。 4．What attracted us most was the English Word Contest，which let us realize the pleasure of memorizing words. 最吸引我们的是英语单词大赛，让我们意识到了记忆单词的乐趣。 5．We benefited a lot from the activity，which not only enriched our school life but also made us more interested in English. 这次活动让我们受益很多，不仅丰富了我们的校园生活，而且让我们对英语感兴趣了。 假定你是李明，去年曾赴美国加州帕萨迪那市的一所中学进行短期参观访问，住在Peter家。今年寒假Peter要来北京，将住在你家。请根据下列信息给Peter发个电子邮件。 提示：1.到机场接机； 2．举办欢迎家宴； 3．参观长城、天安门广场等名胜古迹。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．对紧扣主题的发挥不予扣分。 Step 1　审题谋篇 体裁 记叙文 时态 一般将来时为主 主题 活动安排 人称 第三人称为主 结构 结构首段：提出写信目的；第二段：活动安排；第三段：期盼。 Step 2　词汇运用 1．a couple of　　　　　　　　　 几个；一对 2．look forward to 渴望 3．feel honored 感到荣幸 4．stay with 呆在一起；陪着 5．get everything ready 一切准备就绪 6．so as to 为了 7．make...feel at home 让……感觉在家一样 8．have a party 举办聚会 9．the traditional Chinese food 传统的中国食物 10．show...around 领某人参观 11．places of interest 名胜古迹 12. be known as 作为……而出名 13．have much fun 玩的非常愉快 Step 3　句式表达 1．Glad to learn you're coming to Beijing in a couple of days. 很高兴知道你几天后要来北京。 2．We feel honored you can stay with us while you are in Beijing． 我们很荣幸你在北京期间和我们待在一起。 3．We have got everything ready for you so as to make you feel at home． 我们已经为您准备好了一切，让您有宾至如归的感觉。 4．I'm sure you will like all the traditional Chinese food． 我相信你会喜欢所有的中国传统食物。 5．Tian'anmen Square is a scenic spot we can't miss． 天安门广场是一个我们不能错过的景点。 6．I believe we will have much fun together. 我相信我们会玩得很高兴。 Step 4　连句成篇 November 26th，2024 Hi! It's Li Ming here. Glad to learn you're coming to Beijing in a couple of days.My family and I are looking forward to your visit and we feel honored you can stay with us while you are in Beijing.We have got everything ready for you so as to make you feel at home. On the day you arrive, my father and I will meet you at the airport and in the evening we will have a nice dinner party at home.I'm sure you will like all the traditional Chinese food. During the following days, I will show you around many places of interest in Beijing，including the Great Wall, which is known as one of the seven wonders of the world.And Tian'anmen Square is a scenic spot we can't miss. I believe we will have much fun together.Well, see you soon.Bye! Yours， Li Ming 课时作业(12)　A卷　基础巩固 [对应学生用书P208] Ⅰ.阅读理解 Danielle Steel, America's sweetheart, is one of the hardest working women in the book business. Unlike other productive authors who write one book at a time, she can work on up to five. Her research long before writing takes at least three years. Once she has fully studied her subjects, ready to dive into the book, she can spend twenty hours nonstop at her desk. Danielle Steel comes from New York and was sent to France for her education. After graduation, she worked in the public relations and advertising industries. Later she started a job as a writer which she was best fit for. Her achievements are unbelievable: 390 million copies of books in print, nearly fifty New York Times best­selling novels, and a series of “Max and Martha” picture books for children to help them deal with the real­life problems of death, new babies and new schools. Her 1998 book about the death of her son was shot to the top of the New York Times best­selling list as soon as it came out. Twenty­eight of her books had been made into films. She is listed in the Guinness Book of World Records for one of her books being the Times best­seller for 381 weeks straight. Not satisfied with a big house, a loving family, and a view of the Golden Gate Bridge, Danielle Steel considers her readers to be the most important resource and has kept in touch with them by e­mail. While she is often compared to the heroines of her own invention, her life is undoubtedly much quieter. But, if she does have anything in common with them, it is her strength of will and her inimitable (独特的) style. There is only one Danielle Steel. [语篇解读]　文章介绍美国的畅销书作者Danielle Steel的出生家庭和写作生涯，以及写作风格和一些代表作。 1．Danielle Steel is different from other writers because ． A．she can write several books at the same time B．she often does some research before writing a book C．she is one of the most popular American women writers D.she can keep writing for quite a long time without a break A　[推理判断题。根据第一段“Unlike other productive authors who write one book at a time, she can work on up to five.”可知，她和其他高产作家不同的是她可以同时写几本书。] 2．Children who have read“Max and Martha” picture books may know ． A．how to deal with affairs at school B．what to do if Max and Martha die C．what to do when new babies are born into their families D.how to solve the difficult problems in their writing classes C　[推理判断题。根据第二段“...a series of ‘Max and Martha’ picture books for children to help them deal with the real­life problems of death, new babies and new schools.”可知，“Max and Martha”这套书可以教给孩子如何对待新生儿。] 3．One of Danielle Steel's achievements is that ． A．some TV plays were based on her books B．her picture books attracted a lot of young men C．one of her books became a best­seller in 1998 D．she wrote the Guinness Book of World Records C　[推理判断题。根据第二段“Her 1998 book about the death of her son was shot to the top of the New York Times best­selling list as soon as it came out.”可知，她的一本书在1998年成为最畅销的书。] 4．We can learn from the passage that Danielle Steel ． A．lives an exciting life B．values her readers a lot C．writes about quiet women D．is pleased with her achievements B　[推理判断题。根据最后一段“Danielle Steel considers her readers to be the most important resource and has kept in touch with them by e­mail.”可知，Danielle Steel把她的读者当成最重要的资源，所以她很珍视这些读者。] Ⅱ.七选五 Your children are watching you. 1 According to the Health Program, developing healthy habits is an important part for your children. And when it comes to developing healthy habits, parents influence their children more than anyone else. 2 What happens during those early years can influence children for the rest of their lives. This includes some eating and exercise habits. Children are very careful, even at a young age. Children watch what others do carefully and imitate the behaviors of those closest to them. As parents, you should do the following: 3 If you do that, your children are more likely to be enthusiastic about developing theirs. Let your children see you taking care of your own physical health by eating fruits and vegetables. Talk to them about healthy habits in appropriate terms and at a proper time. 4 5 Computers, televisions and other forms of technology are a major part of life in the 21st century. Unfortunately, as the use of technology in the home increases, so does the time spent watching TV or playing on the computer. So as parents, you should also arrange the time for your children wisely. A．Take part in physical activities and exercise regularly. B．Don't get rid of technology, but use it wisely. C．Be enthusiastic about developing healthy habits of your own. D．Your actions are speaking to them louder than your words will. E．Children prefer to imitate their parents rather than listen to them. F．This can be helpful to teach your children to form good eating habits. G．It's easy for the children to form their healthy habits when they are young. [语篇解读]　本文主要讲述了父母如何在孩子小的时候使孩子养成良好的习惯，由于那个时候的小孩子喜欢模仿大人的动作，所以父母用自己的行动来说明比语言说明更有效。 1．D　[由前文的“Your children are watching you.”可知，孩子在看着你，小孩子不会说话的时候你的所有动作都比说话有效。] 2．G　[由“What happens during those early years can influence children for the rest of their lives.”可知，这个年龄段所发生的一切都会影响他的余生，也就是说在这个年龄段孩子比较容易形成习惯，包括好的和坏的习惯。] 3．C　[前文“As parents, you should do the following”父母要做以下的事，后文“If you do that, your children are more likely to be enthusiastic about developing theirs.”如果你这样做，你的孩子更有可能热衷于发展他们的(习惯)。可推知空格处是讲父母要发展哪些习惯，故C项“积极培养自己的健康习惯。”承接上下文内容。] 4．F　[由段首句“Let your children see you taking care of your own physical health by eating fruits and vegetables.”可知，本段与饮食习惯有关。] 5．B　[此空在最后一段的开头，作为总领句，最后一段讲述的是科技比如电脑、电视的广泛使用，只有B选项涉及到科技。] Ⅲ.语法填空 Chrysanthemums (菊花) come from China and were recorded in some Chinese books as early as the 5th century BC. The flower 1. (introduce) to Japan during the Tang Dynasty. It usually begins to bloom (开花) in the 9th lunar month, lending a festive atmosphere to the Double Ninth Festival. That's why the month is also referred to 2. “the month of chrysanthemum”． The flower has been favored by 3. (poet) through the ages, because it is one of the only flowers that bloom in late autumn. Du Fu, a great poet of Tang Dynasty, wrote more than ten poems singing the praise of the flower. Chinese people 4. (be) fond of enjoying chrysanthemums on the Double Ninth Festival long before. Chrysanthemum displays were usually held immediately after 5. day in some regions of China in the Qing Dynasty. People in Beijing began to stick chrysanthemums on doors and windows 6. (get) rid of the bad luck and bring in the good one，7. was an alteration (改变) of the custom of 8. (wear) chrysanthemums on people's heads. Nowadays at these displays family members accompany their elders to have a relaxing day in a natural atmosphere while wishing for good health and 9. (happy) for them. The displays are often 10. (live) with a sea of visitors. [语篇解读]　本文是说明文。文章讲述了菊花的历史、文化及相关的一些活动及意义。 1．was introduced　[句中主语The flower和动词introduce是被动关系，指这种花被介绍，在句中作谓语用被动语态，根据时间状语the Tang Dynasty可知，用一般过去时的被动语态。故填was introduced。] 2．as　[句意：这就是为什么九月被叫做菊花月的原因，表示作为，应使用介词as。故填as。] 3．poets　[句中poet是可数名词，此处泛指古往今来的诗人们，用复数形式。故填poets。] 4．were　[根据时间状语long before可知，此处用过去时，与主语Chinese people保持一致用复数。故填were。 ] 5．the　[此处是特指Double Ninth Day用定冠词，表示重阳节之后。故填the。] 6．to get　[此处是不定式表目的，指人们把菊花贴在门窗上是为了摆脱坏运气。故填to get。] 7．which　[句中包含非限制性定语从句，用which引导指代前面句子。故填which。] 8．wearing　[句中介词of后用动词的­ing形式作宾语。故填wearing。] 9．happiness　[与and前的名词health并列也用名词，指健康和幸福。故填happiness。 ] 10．lively　[此处是形容词作表语，指这种展览有大量的游客是生气勃勃的。故填lively。] 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$