第03讲 征文投稿（复习讲义）（天津专用）2026年高考英语一轮复习讲练测

第03讲 征文投稿 目录 01 1 02 体系构建·思维可视 2 03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 3 考点一 写作技巧 3 知识点1 命题规律 3 知识点2 写作技能提升 4 考点二 经典必背 4 知识点1 常用词汇 4 知识点2 必背开头句 5 知识点3 必背主题句 6 知识点4 必背结尾句 7 知识点5 满分必背模板 8 04 真题溯源·考向感知 8 考点要求 考察形式 2025年 2024年 2023年 征文投稿 选择题 非选择题 天津卷一考： The Power of Museums征文活动 北京卷： 外国好友Jim准备给校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。 浙江卷一考： 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 全国甲卷： 介绍中国历史人物 全国乙卷： 假期习得新技能 考情分析： 一、历年命题特征 文本类型多元：试题常创设真实交际场景（如校园媒体投稿、主题征文），侧重考查记叙与议论能力。 主题覆盖全面：内容紧密关联学生认知范畴，涵盖校园实践（例：英文报刊撰稿）、文化传承（如杰出历史人物推介）、成长经历（技能学习感悟）等维度。 任务指令清晰：题目明确限定写作要素，要求具体呈现事物特征、论证个人立场或发起行动倡议。 二、命题导向 聚焦青少年成长轨迹与社会发展动态，检验考生在多样化语境中运用英语叙述真实经历、系统阐释核心观点以及有效传递倡议主张的综合语言能力。 三、核心考查维度 语言精准度：熟练驾驭词汇语法规则，灵活运用复合句式提升表达层次 篇章逻辑性：通过段落分层设计与衔接手段（过渡词、指代关联）确保文脉贯通 内容完整性：严格遵循题目要点框架，确保核心信息无遗漏展开。 复习目标： 1. 提升语言能力：积累多样化的词汇和句式，能够根据不同话题灵活运用，实现准确、丰富的语言表达。 2. 强化逻辑思维：学会构建清晰的文章结构，合理组织内容，增强文章逻辑性与连贯性。 3. 提高任务完成能力：保证在考试中精准把握题目要点，完整、高效地完成写作任务。 征文投稿 考点一 写作技巧 知识点1 命题规律 区别于书信格式，征文类写作具有鲜明主题限定（如“校英文刊十周年纪念”“你最敬佩的人物评述”），需避免“I’ m writing to...”等信函式表达框架，直接构建完整主题语篇。其特点为： 结构范式：采用「主题导入——核心分层展开——升华收束」三段模型 信息分层： 主题句：凝练呈现现状背景/核心诱因/价值判断/解决路径等关键维度 拓展层：运用因果链、对比论证等逻辑手段，辅以衔接词实现论证递进 体裁倾向：以夹叙夹议为主要表达方式，融合经历描述与观点阐发 知识点2 写作技能提升 投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行的写作，所投稿件应紧贴主题，内容应新颖、创新、实用，符合词数要求等。具体写作结构为： 考点二 经典必背 知识点1 常用词汇 汉译 英文表达 旨在；以......为目的 be aimed at 出版 publish 文章的要求 requirements of the article 如果 on condition that 限制在......词 be limited to about ... words 是很受......欢迎的 be very popular with... 任何有关的事情 anything relevant to 大约120字就可以了 About 120 words would be fine 在......之前提交你的文章 submit your article before 体育专栏 sports column 娱乐专栏 entertainment column 栏目特点 characteristics of the column 语言风格 language style 改编自 be adapted from 延长截止日期 extend the deadline 同意，赞同 subscribe to 忠实的读者 faithful readers 表达自己的观点 voice their opinions 不遗余力地做某事 spare no efforts to do ... 共同努力做某事 make joint effort to do... 对...…有害 do harm to/be harmful to... 谈到、提到 When it comes to... 不可否认...... There is no denying that... 随着新学期的临近 With the new term approaching 面临考试 be faced with challenge exams 人们普遍认为.... It is universally acknowledged that... 很明显，明显地 It is obvious that.../obliviously 极为重要；强调...…的重要性... of great/crucial/vital significance/importance; 强调…的重要性 emphasize the importance of...; highlight the significance of...; attach importance to......… 知识点2 必背开头句 英文表达 汉译 We wonder if it is practicable to have it before next week. 我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。 The article is supposed to be within 400 words . 这篇文章应该在400字以内。 It carries articles written by foreign students concerning the culture of their country. 它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。 And here are some relevant details about the articles we are eager for. 这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。 Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. 有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。 Could you/Would you please write something concerning your school life? 你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？ I’d like to ask you to writr an article for our school’s English newspaper. 我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。 I would like to invite sb to write an article for... 我想邀请某人写一篇......文章 The long history of China has witnessed the flourishing of poetry and the brilliance of many exceptional poets, among whom I admire Du Fu most. 中国悠久的历史见证了诗歌的繁荣和许多杰出诗人的才华，其中我最欣赏杜甫。 Sb. is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to his/her accomplishments/achievements/impact. 某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响力/贡献。 In the long span of the Chinese history, the existence of the outstanding Confucius is like a shining pearl. 在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠。 Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns. 如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。 There are many people who I respect. As for me, my father is the one I respect. The reasons why I respect him are as follows. 近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。 When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life. 说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 An article in the newspaper caught my attention. 报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意 知识点3 必背主题句 英文表达 汉译 Faced with the challenge of being destroyed, missing or even being stolen, traditional Chinese relics are urgent to be protected. 面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。 Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others. 打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。 For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many kinds of animals. 首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。 Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future . 只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。 Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence. 此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。 My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework. 我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。 As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet. 作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。 知识点4 必背结尾句 英文表达 汉译 You’d better send your article to me next Sunday and about 120 words would be fine. 你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。期待您方便时尽快答复。 I believe that, with innovative ideas and perseverance, we human beings will be able to fly further and further not only from the Earth to the Moon, but to the Mars and beyond. 我相信，凭借创新的理念和坚持不懈的精神，我们人类不仅能够从地球飞向月球，还能飞向火星及更远的地方，飞得越来越远。 Encouraged by their spirits, I will go all out to pursue my dream. 在他们的精神鼓舞下，我将全力以赴去追逐我的梦想。 Personally, it is high time that we spared no effort to preserve traditional cultural relics. 就我个人而言，我们是时候不遗余力地保护传统文物了。 I sincerely hope that through more understanding of Confucius and his Confucianism, we can make the world filled with more love, justice and peace. 我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。 I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and have a promising future. 我衷心希望Youth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。 We hope that with all these measures taken,　eyesight problems can be greatly reduced. 我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。 I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience. 如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。 I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future. 我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。 I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience. 如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。 知识点5 满分必背模板 Dear Editor, When it comes to ___________________(当谈到...时） , it is widely acknowledged that________________________（众所周知）. For one thing ,_________________________（主题特色一）. Not only ______________________ but also_________________________________(具体特点) For anther, there is no doubt that _______________________________(主题特色二) I do hope that________________________. (表达期望). All in all, it is high time that .... (sb did sth) 1. （2025年天津卷一考） 5月18日为世界博物馆日，你校英语报正在征集主题为The Power of Museums的征文活动。请根据你搜集的以下图表信息。内容包括： 1.简单分析图表展示的现象； 2.简要分析该现象产生的原因。 注意： 1.写作词数应为100个左右； 2.作文题目已给出。 The Power of Museums ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.（2024年浙江卷1月） 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动； 2. 说明推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答： Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.（2024年北京卷） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4.（2023年全国甲卷） 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.（2023年全国乙卷） 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 点明主题 介绍基本情况 总结感想和祝愿 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 第03讲 征文投稿 目录 01 1 02 体系构建·思维可视 2 03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 3 考点一 写作技巧 3 知识点1 命题规律 3 知识点2 写作技能提升 4 考点二 经典必背 4 知识点1 常用词汇 4 知识点2 必背开头句 5 知识点3 必背主题句 6 知识点4 必背结尾句 7 知识点5 满分必背模板 8 04 真题溯源·考向感知 8 考点要求 考察形式 2025年 2024年 2023年 征文投稿 选择题 非选择题 天津卷一考： The Power of Museums征文活动 北京卷： 外国好友Jim准备给校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。 浙江卷一考： 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 全国甲卷： 介绍中国历史人物 全国乙卷： 假期习得新技能 考情分析： 一、历年命题特征 文本类型多元：试题常创设真实交际场景（如校园媒体投稿、主题征文），侧重考查记叙与议论能力。 主题覆盖全面：内容紧密关联学生认知范畴，涵盖校园实践（例：英文报刊撰稿）、文化传承（如杰出历史人物推介）、成长经历（技能学习感悟）等维度。 任务指令清晰：题目明确限定写作要素，要求具体呈现事物特征、论证个人立场或发起行动倡议。 二、命题导向 聚焦青少年成长轨迹与社会发展动态，检验考生在多样化语境中运用英语叙述真实经历、系统阐释核心观点以及有效传递倡议主张的综合语言能力。 三、核心考查维度 语言精准度：熟练驾驭词汇语法规则，灵活运用复合句式提升表达层次 篇章逻辑性：通过段落分层设计与衔接手段（过渡词、指代关联）确保文脉贯通 内容完整性：严格遵循题目要点框架，确保核心信息无遗漏展开。 复习目标： 1. 提升语言能力：积累多样化的词汇和句式，能够根据不同话题灵活运用，实现准确、丰富的语言表达。 2. 强化逻辑思维：学会构建清晰的文章结构，合理组织内容，增强文章逻辑性与连贯性。 3. 提高任务完成能力：保证在考试中精准把握题目要点，完整、高效地完成写作任务。 征文投稿 考点一 写作技巧 知识点1 命题规律 区别于书信格式，征文类写作具有鲜明主题限定（如“校英文刊十周年纪念”“你最敬佩的人物评述”），需避免“I’ m writing to...”等信函式表达框架，直接构建完整主题语篇。其特点为： 结构范式：采用「主题导入——核心分层展开——升华收束」三段模型 信息分层： 主题句：凝练呈现现状背景/核心诱因/价值判断/解决路径等关键维度 拓展层：运用因果链、对比论证等逻辑手段，辅以衔接词实现论证递进 体裁倾向：以夹叙夹议为主要表达方式，融合经历描述与观点阐发 知识点2 写作技能提升 投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行的写作，所投稿件应紧贴主题，内容应新颖、创新、实用，符合词数要求等。具体写作结构为： 考点二 经典必背 知识点1 常用词汇 汉译 英文表达 旨在；以......为目的 be aimed at 出版 publish 文章的要求 requirements of the article 如果 on condition that 限制在......词 be limited to about ... words 是很受......欢迎的 be very popular with... 任何有关的事情 anything relevant to 大约120字就可以了 About 120 words would be fine 在......之前提交你的文章 submit your article before 体育专栏 sports column 娱乐专栏 entertainment column 栏目特点 characteristics of the column 语言风格 language style 改编自 be adapted from 延长截止日期 extend the deadline 同意，赞同 subscribe to 忠实的读者 faithful readers 表达自己的观点 voice their opinions 不遗余力地做某事 spare no efforts to do ... 共同努力做某事 make joint effort to do... 对...…有害 do harm to/be harmful to... 谈到、提到 When it comes to... 不可否认...... There is no denying that... 随着新学期的临近 With the new term approaching 面临考试 be faced with challenge exams 人们普遍认为.... It is universally acknowledged that... 很明显，明显地 It is obvious that.../obliviously 极为重要；强调...…的重要性... of great/crucial/vital significance/importance; 强调…的重要性 emphasize the importance of...; highlight the significance of...; attach importance to......… 知识点2 必背开头句 英文表达 汉译 We wonder if it is practicable to have it before next week. 我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。 The article is supposed to be within 400 words . 这篇文章应该在400字以内。 It carries articles written by foreign students concerning the culture of their country. 它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。 And here are some relevant details about the articles we are eager for. 这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。 Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. 有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。 Could you/Would you please write something concerning your school life? 你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？ I’d like to ask you to writr an article for our school’s English newspaper. 我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。 I would like to invite sb to write an article for... 我想邀请某人写一篇......文章 The long history of China has witnessed the flourishing of poetry and the brilliance of many exceptional poets, among whom I admire Du Fu most. 中国悠久的历史见证了诗歌的繁荣和许多杰出诗人的才华，其中我最欣赏杜甫。 Sb. is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to his/her accomplishments/achievements/impact. 某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响力/贡献。 In the long span of the Chinese history, the existence of the outstanding Confucius is like a shining pearl. 在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠。 Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns. 如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。 There are many people who I respect. As for me, my father is the one I respect. The reasons why I respect him are as follows. 近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。 When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life. 说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 An article in the newspaper caught my attention. 报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意 知识点3 必背主题句 英文表达 汉译 Faced with the challenge of being destroyed, missing or even being stolen, traditional Chinese relics are urgent to be protected. 面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。 Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others. 打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。 For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many kinds of animals. 首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。 Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future . 只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。 Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence. 此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。 My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework. 我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。 As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet. 作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。 知识点4 必背结尾句 英文表达 汉译 You’d better send your article to me next Sunday and about 120 words would be fine. 你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。期待您方便时尽快答复。 I believe that, with innovative ideas and perseverance, we human beings will be able to fly further and further not only from the Earth to the Moon, but to the Mars and beyond. 我相信，凭借创新的理念和坚持不懈的精神，我们人类不仅能够从地球飞向月球，还能飞向火星及更远的地方，飞得越来越远。 Encouraged by their spirits, I will go all out to pursue my dream. 在他们的精神鼓舞下，我将全力以赴去追逐我的梦想。 Personally, it is high time that we spared no effort to preserve traditional cultural relics. 就我个人而言，我们是时候不遗余力地保护传统文物了。 I sincerely hope that through more understanding of Confucius and his Confucianism, we can make the world filled with more love, justice and peace. 我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。 I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and have a promising future. 我衷心希望Youth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。 We hope that with all these measures taken,　eyesight problems can be greatly reduced. 我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。 I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience. 如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。 I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future. 我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。 I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience. 如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。 知识点5 满分必背模板 Dear Editor, When it comes to ___________________(当谈到...时） , it is widely acknowledged that________________________（众所周知）. For one thing ,_________________________（主题特色一）. Not only ______________________ but also_________________________________(具体特点) For anther, there is no doubt that _______________________________(主题特色二) I do hope that________________________. (表达期望). All in all, it is high time that .... (sb did sth) 1. （2025年天津卷一考） 5月18日为世界博物馆日，你校英语报正在征集主题为The Power of Museums的征文活动。请根据你搜集的以下图表信息。内容包括： 1.简单分析图表展示的现象； 2.简要分析该现象产生的原因。 注意： 1.写作词数应为100个左右； 2.作文题目已给出。 The Power of Museums ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 The Power of Museums As shown in the chart, we can see that there has been an increasing number of people visiting museums in the last decade. It is worth analyzing the phenomenon that museum attendance has doubled. To begin with, museums, as one of the main approaches to preserve collections ranging from antiques to modern artifacts, document social transformation of social life and narrate those stories without words. Secondly, as exhibitions are diverse, museums cater to people from almost all walks of life and ages, allowing visitors to find displays that align with their interests. Additionally, visiting museums and engaging in their exhibitions not only can people’s lives be enriched, but also broaden their knowledge and perspectives. As far as I am concerned, museums play a crucial role in our society, and it’s high time we made visiting them a part of our leisure activities. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生使用图表中学校英文报开展的以The Power of Museums为题的讨论的调查结果，写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 增加的：increasing→growing 首先：to begin with→first of all 另外：additionally→besides 至关重要的：crucial→vital 2.句式拓展 改写同义句 原句：As far as I am concerned, museums play a crucial role in our society, and it’s high time we made visiting them a part of our leisure activities. 拓展句：As far as I am concerned, museums play such a crucial role in our society that it’s high time we made visiting them a part of our leisure activities. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It is worth analyzing the phenomenon that museum attendance has doubled.（运用了that引导同位语从句） 【高分句型2】 Secondly, as exhibitions are diverse, museums cater to people from almost all walks of life and ages, allowing visitors to find displays that align with their interests.（运用了that引导定语从句） 2.（2024年浙江卷1月） 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动； 2. 说明推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答： Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons. First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 厌倦：be tired of→be fed up with 首先：first→above all 减轻：combat→relieve 提高：improve→enhance 2.句式拓展 原句：This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. 拓展句：This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语) [高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句) 3.（2024年北京卷） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article. To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view. Looking forward to reading your article! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作任务。外国朋友Jim计划向其学校报纸的Asia Today专栏投稿。得知今年是新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，并请求考生通过电子邮件给予他一些建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 很好的：great →wonderful 成就：achievement→ accomplishment 建议：suggestion →advice 此外：In addition → what’s more 2.句式拓展 原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 4.（2023年全国甲卷） 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond. Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 著名的：well-known → famous 人物：figure → person 强调：emphasize → stress 基础：foundation → basis 2.【句式拓展】 原句：Confucius is a well - known figure in Chinese history. 拓展句：Confucius, who is one of the most influential thinkers in Chinese history, is a renowned figure. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony.（运用平行结构，使表意更清晰有力 ） [高分句型2]The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated.（运用双重否定表肯定，加强语气 ） [高分句型3]He stressed the self - cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast - paced and interconnected world.（使用which引导非限制性定语从句 ） 5.（2023年全国乙卷） 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 机会：opportunity → chance 使沮丧：demoralize → discourage 满意的：satisfied → content 空闲的：leisure → spare 2. 句式拓展 原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. 拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. 点睛 【高分句型1】 When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】 Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句) 点明主题 介绍基本情况 总结感想和祝愿 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$