Unit 3 Same or Different？谈论相同与不同（单元写作精练）英语人教版2024八年级上册

Unit 3 Same or Different? 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元以“谈论相同点与不同点”为话题，此类话题常见的写作角度涉及： 话题① 从外貌、性格、兴趣爱好等方面描述自己过去和现在的变化，人称用第一人称时态，主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，恰当运用比较级进行比较。 话题②描述自己和好朋友之间的不同或者讨论“朋友应相似还是不同？”，针对这一话题，我们可以围绕与朋友的相似点与差异及其利弊展开讨论。此类文章一般为一般现在时态，以说明文和议论文为主，恰当运用比较级进行比较。 与话题①相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 外貌变化：grow taller（长高）、，lose weight（减肥）、be thinner（变瘦）、wear glasses（戴眼镜）、cut one’s hair short（剪短发） 性格变化：become more outgoing（变得更外向）、confident（自信）、brave（勇敢）、energetic（有活力） 爱好变化：quit a hobby（放弃一个爱好）、take up a new hobby（开始一项新爱好）、be interested in（对......感兴趣）、not...any more/longer (不再......)，，be crazy about...（热衷于……），switch from...to...（从……转向……），develop an interest in（培养对……的兴趣） 句型 ①I used to be... but now I am... 我过去…但现在… ②In the past,... However, now... 过去…然而，现在… ③There have been many changes in my life.：我的生活发生了许多变化。 ④It's hard to believe that I have changed so much.：很难相信我改变了这么多。 ⑤The biggest change in me is...：我最大的变化是…… ⑥These changes have made me a better person.：这些变化让我成为了一个更好的人。 名言 The only constant in life is change. 生活中唯一不变的就是变化。 与话题②相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 描述外貌：tall（高的），short（矮的），medium height（中等身高），slim（苗条的），fat（胖的），thin（瘦的），well-built（体格健壮的） ，long hair（长发），short hair（短发），curly hair（卷发），straight hair（直发），big eyes（大眼睛），small eyes（小眼睛），bright eyes（明亮的眼睛），high nose（高鼻梁），straight nose（挺直的鼻子），round face（圆脸），square face（方脸），wear glasses（戴眼镜） 描述性格：outgoing（外向的），funny（搞笑的）、friendly（友好的）、hard-working（努力的）、smart（聪明的）、lazy（懒惰的） 描述友谊：companionship（陪伴）， understanding each other（相互理解），trust（信任） 短语 in my opinion（在我看来）， while（然而）、 on the one hand...on the other hand...（一方面……另一方面……）， be similar to（与……相似）， have something in common（有共同之处）， be different from（与……不同）， be talented in （在.......有天赋）、 be serious about （对.......认真） care about （关心） work hard（努力学习） play sports（做体育运动） be good at （擅长） as...as（与.......一样） bring out （使显示） the same as （和.......相同） as long as（只要） cherish friendship（珍惜友谊）， a true friend（一个真正的朋友） 句型 ① In my opinion, I think...... ②It’s not necessary to be the same没必要一样。 ③I think friends are like books, you don’t need a lot of them as long as they are good.我觉得朋友像书-不需要太多只要足够好。 ④My friend truly cares about me.我的朋友真的很关心我。 ⑤We can talk about and share everything.我们可以互相交谈并且分享一切。 ⑥In some ways，they look the same. And in some ways，they look different. 在一些方面他们看起来是相同的；在一些方面他们又是不同的。 ⑦I hope we will be good friends forever.我希望我们将永远是好朋友。 名言 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 ②Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投，志同道合。 ③True friends are always there for you.真正的朋友会一直陪在你身边。 ④A friend is easier lost than found.   得朋友难，失朋友易。 ⑤rue friendship lasts forever. 真正的友谊地久天长。 ⑥A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人生在世无朋友，犹如生活无太阳。 写作步骤 懂 话题① 一、Before-writing 1、思考以下问题 Did you change a lot after you entered junior high school? 2、 搭建写作框架 开头 点明主题，总述自己发生显著变化 用总起句引入主题，如 Time flies! I’ve changed a lot since I entered middle school. 正文 分点描述外貌、性格、爱好的变化，可使用连接词增强逻辑性 I used to be short and thin. But now, I’ve grown much taller and stronger. I didn’t like swimming before, but now I am interested in it. I go swimming with my friends every weekend. The biggest change in me is that I have become more independent. 结尾 总结变化带来的影响，或表达对未来的期待 These changes have made me a better person. 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型以及比较级，注意正确使用时态。 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换初稿，标注亮点表达，提出补充建议（如增加具体的变化细节）。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示，强调人称时态以及表达变化前后的连接词。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 话题② 一、Before-writing 1. Should friends be similar or different? What is your opinion? Opinion Reason example Friends should be similar Friends should be different I don’t mind 2、 搭建写作框架 开头 表明观点 Should friends be similar or different? Different students have different opinions. 观点①For me, friends who are different make me better. We can learn from each other. 观点② I think a good friend is like a mirror. We can understand each other better if we have a lot in common. 正文 举例论证 Here are my reasons, first,....Second, .... What’s more,...(on the one hand, .... On the other hand,....) One reasons is that.... Another reason is... That is why I think... 可使用连接词：First of all, Moreover, What’s more, 结尾 总结升华 In a word, I think.... All in all, it’s ...to.... 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型以及比较级，注意正确使用时态。 I think that . For example, my friend is .When 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换作文，注意是否有单词语法的错误，标注亮点表达，提出补充论据。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示，学习好词好句，连接词。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 写作真题 赏 （一） 随着时光的流逝，不知不觉中我们已经长大，变成健康阳光的青少年；从懵懂无知的孩子变成学有所成的初二学生——这便是成长的收获。请你以“Great Changes in My Growth”为题，谈谈自己成长过程中的转变和收获，并表明对未来的打算。 in the past now in the future 1. be short and thin 2. play sports after class 3. didn’t care about English, 4. be not polite, be quiet 5. … 1. be strong and healthy 2. study all the time 3. become more interested in English 4. help parents with housework 5. … 注意： (1) 根据上面表格中的提示，并适当发挥； (2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名； (3) 词数：70左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。) 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章开头，介绍文章的主题； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，详细介绍自己过去和现在的变化； 第三步，展望未来，并收尾。 Great Changes in My Growth As time goes by, I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 Great Changes in My Growth As time goes by, I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be. In the past, I was short and thin, but now, I am strong and healthy. I used to play sports after school but now I don’t have the time anymore. I have to study all the time. In the past, I didn’t care about studying English very much, but now I find that English is much more interesting than before. So I’m much more interested in studying English. What’s more, I used to be impolite and quiet. Now, I often help my parents with housework. Finally, I always played computer games in my free time in the past. Now, I become interested in reading books. In the future, I hope I can become better and let my parents be proud of me. Besides, I will work harder to get good grades and get into the ideal high school. （二） 每个人都有自己的好朋友，或许两人相似，或许截然不同。贵阳市第四十中学八年级的同学正在开展以“Should friends be the same or different?”为主题的班会，请根据提供的信息谈谈你的观点。 要求：1.表明自己的观点。 2.对比自己和好朋友，说出自己的感受。 3.不少于70词。 4.文中不出现真实校名和姓名。 【总体分析】 ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； [写作步骤] 本文分为三段式： 第一段表明自己的观点并介绍自己和朋友的不同之处； 第二段介绍自己和朋友的相同之处； 第三段总结概括。 写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 I think it doesn’t matter whether my friends are the same as me or different from me. I only care if my friends truly care about me. My favorite saying is “A good friend is my nearest relation.” Helen is one of my best friends and she is quite different from me. I’m short but she is quite tall. As for the personality, I’m more outgoing than her, although I’m quieter than most kids. But we also have one thing in common. We both study hard. She is better at English, so she always helps with my English. I like my friends because they help me when I am in trouble. In my eyes, a true friend should always be there to help when I’m in trouble. I will also care about my friends and help them in life and study. 题型通关 练 1．上周育英中学开展了以“Should friends be different or the same?”为主题的调查活动，下面是他们对全校 500 个学生的调查结果，请你根据调查表格和下面信息写一篇短文。 内容包括以下几点： 1. 简要描述表格内容以及你对交友的观点; 2. 介绍一位你的好朋友，并描述你和好朋友在外貌，性格和爱好方面的相同和不同之处; 3. 你和好朋友谁的生活方式更健康，为什么？（至少两条理由） 要求：字数 70字左右，文中不得出现真实的人名。 开头已给出，不计入字数。 Should friends be different or the same? Last week Yuying high school asked this questionamong 500 students. Here are the results.________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．有一句非常著名的英语谚语：A friend in need is a friend indeed（患难见真情），请以“My Friend and I”为题写一篇作文。内容需包括以下方面： 1. 简要对比一下你和朋友的异同点； 2. 写出一件你与朋友共同经历的事情，要求能体现该谚语的含义； 3. 你对交朋友的观点。 要求： 1. 内容连贯，书写工整，不少于 70 词； 2. 作文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 My Friend and I _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 3．进入初中以来，同学们在外貌、性格、爱好等方面都感受到了自己的变化和进步，同时在生活和学习中也会遇到一些问题。我校英语角正在以“My Changes (我的变化)”为题进行征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图提示，用英语写一篇谈论自己变化的文章。 要求: 1. 词数：70词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数; 2. 文章不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校名称。 参考信息: My Changes I’m changing a lot in Grade Eight. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．你的老师上了一节关于朋友的课，希望你想想你最好的朋友。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一下你最好的朋友和你。内容提示： What is your best friend like? What are the differences and similarities between you and your friend? Do you like your best friend? Why? Something more about you and your best friend. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数70字左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My best friend and I Hello, everyone! Today I want to tell you something about my best friend and me. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．以“How I have changed!”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好等来描述你自己的成长蜕变过程。 内容要求：1.变化前后分别是什么样子？ 2.促成你转变的原因是什么？3. 词数70字左右 How I have changed! My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是Zhang Ming，在班会上用英语分享自己和好朋友Liu Dong相同和差异。写作要点如下： 项目 内容 相同点 1. 都留短发 2. 爱好打球，看书，周末常一起去图书馆 不同点 1. 你比他更瘦；Liu Dong更外向； 2. 他的朋友更多，(补充对待朋友的观点)； 3. 他经常帮父母做家务，一周四次； 4. …… 要求： 1. 短文应包含要求的所有信息，可以在此基础上适当发挥。 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名信息。 3. 词数80词左右。(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Dear classmates, Let me tell you something about my good friend. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks! 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 Same or Different? 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元以“谈论相同点与不同点”为话题，此类话题常见的写作角度涉及： 话题① 从外貌、性格、兴趣爱好等方面描述自己过去和现在的变化，人称用第一人称时态，主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，恰当运用比较级进行比较。 话题②描述自己和好朋友之间的不同或者讨论“朋友应相似还是不同？”，针对这一话题，我们可以围绕与朋友的相似点与差异及其利弊展开讨论。此类文章一般为一般现在时态，以说明文和议论文为主，恰当运用比较级进行比较。 与话题①相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 外貌变化：grow taller（长高）、，lose weight（减肥）、be thinner（变瘦）、wear glasses（戴眼镜）、cut one’s hair short（剪短发） 性格变化：become more outgoing（变得更外向）、confident（自信）、brave（勇敢）、energetic（有活力） 爱好变化：quit a hobby（放弃一个爱好）、take up a new hobby（开始一项新爱好）、be interested in（对......感兴趣）、not...any more/longer (不再......)，，be crazy about...（热衷于……），switch from...to...（从……转向……），develop an interest in（培养对……的兴趣） 句型 ①I used to be... but now I am... 我过去…但现在… ②In the past,... However, now... 过去…然而，现在… ③There have been many changes in my life.：我的生活发生了许多变化。 ④It's hard to believe that I have changed so much.：很难相信我改变了这么多。 ⑤The biggest change in me is...：我最大的变化是…… ⑥These changes have made me a better person.：这些变化让我成为了一个更好的人。 名言 The only constant in life is change. 生活中唯一不变的就是变化。 与话题②相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 描述外貌：tall（高的），short（矮的），medium height（中等身高），slim（苗条的），fat（胖的），thin（瘦的），well-built（体格健壮的） ，long hair（长发），short hair（短发），curly hair（卷发），straight hair（直发），big eyes（大眼睛），small eyes（小眼睛），bright eyes（明亮的眼睛），high nose（高鼻梁），straight nose（挺直的鼻子），round face（圆脸），square face（方脸），wear glasses（戴眼镜） 描述性格：outgoing（外向的），funny（搞笑的）、friendly（友好的）、hard-working（努力的）、smart（聪明的）、lazy（懒惰的） 描述友谊：companionship（陪伴）， understanding each other（相互理解），trust（信任） 短语 in my opinion（在我看来）， while（然而）、 on the one hand...on the other hand...（一方面……另一方面……）， be similar to（与……相似）， have something in common（有共同之处）， be different from（与……不同）， be talented in （在.......有天赋）、 be serious about （对.......认真） care about （关心） work hard（努力学习） play sports（做体育运动） be good at （擅长） as...as（与.......一样） bring out （使显示） the same as （和.......相同） as long as（只要） cherish friendship（珍惜友谊）， a true friend（一个真正的朋友） 句型 ① In my opinion, I think...... ②It’s not necessary to be the same没必要一样。 ③I think friends are like books, you don’t need a lot of them as long as they are good.我觉得朋友像书-不需要太多只要足够好。 ④My friend truly cares about me.我的朋友真的很关心我。 ⑤We can talk about and share everything.我们可以互相交谈并且分享一切。 ⑥In some ways，they look the same. And in some ways，they look different. 在一些方面他们看起来是相同的；在一些方面他们又是不同的。 ⑦I hope we will be good friends forever.我希望我们将永远是好朋友。 名言 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 ②Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投，志同道合。 ③True friends are always there for you.真正的朋友会一直陪在你身边。 ④A friend is easier lost than found.   得朋友难，失朋友易。 ⑤rue friendship lasts forever. 真正的友谊地久天长。 ⑥A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人生在世无朋友，犹如生活无太阳。 写作步骤 懂 话题① 一、Before-writing 1、思考以下问题 Did you change a lot after you entered junior high school? 2、 搭建写作框架 开头 点明主题，总述自己发生显著变化 用总起句引入主题，如 Time flies! I’ve changed a lot since I entered middle school. 正文 分点描述外貌、性格、爱好的变化，可使用连接词增强逻辑性 I used to be short and thin. But now, I’ve grown much taller and stronger. I didn’t like swimming before, but now I am interested in it. I go swimming with my friends every weekend. The biggest change in me is that I have become more independent. 结尾 总结变化带来的影响，或表达对未来的期待 These changes have made me a better person. 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型以及比较级，注意正确使用时态。 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换初稿，标注亮点表达，提出补充建议（如增加具体的变化细节）。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示，强调人称时态以及表达变化前后的连接词。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 话题② 一、Before-writing 1. Should friends be similar or different? What is your opinion? Opinion Reason example Friends should be similar Friends should be different I don’t mind 2、 搭建写作框架 开头 表明观点 Should friends be similar or different? Different students have different opinions. 观点①For me, friends who are different make me better. We can learn from each other. 观点② I think a good friend is like a mirror. We can understand each other better if we have a lot in common. 正文 举例论证 Here are my reasons, first,....Second, .... What’s more,...(on the one hand, .... On the other hand,....) One reasons is that.... Another reason is... That is why I think... 可使用连接词：First of all, Moreover, What’s more, 结尾 总结升华 In a word, I think.... All in all, it’s ...to.... 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型以及比较级，注意正确使用时态。 I think that . For example, my friend is .When 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换作文，注意是否有单词语法的错误，标注亮点表达，提出补充论据。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示，学习好词好句，连接词。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 写作真题 赏 （一） 随着时光的流逝，不知不觉中我们已经长大，变成健康阳光的青少年；从懵懂无知的孩子变成学有所成的初二学生——这便是成长的收获。请你以“Great Changes in My Growth”为题，谈谈自己成长过程中的转变和收获，并表明对未来的打算。 in the past now in the future 1. be short and thin 2. play sports after class 3. didn’t care about English, 4. be not polite, be quiet 5. … 1. be strong and healthy 2. study all the time 3. become more interested in English 4. help parents with housework 5. … 注意： (1) 根据上面表格中的提示，并适当发挥； (2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名； (3) 词数：70左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。) 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章开头，介绍文章的主题； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，详细介绍自己过去和现在的变化； 第三步，展望未来，并收尾。 Great Changes in My Growth As time goes by, I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 Great Changes in My Growth As time goes by, I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be. In the past, I was short and thin, but now, I am strong and healthy. I used to play sports after school but now I don’t have the time anymore. I have to study all the time. In the past, I didn’t care about studying English very much, but now I find that English is much more interesting than before. So I’m much more interested in studying English. What’s more, I used to be impolite and quiet. Now, I often help my parents with housework. Finally, I always played computer games in my free time in the past. Now, I become interested in reading books. In the future, I hope I can become better and let my parents be proud of me. Besides, I will work harder to get good grades and get into the ideal high school. （二） 每个人都有自己的好朋友，或许两人相似，或许截然不同。贵阳市第四十中学八年级的同学正在开展以“Should friends be the same or different?”为主题的班会，请根据提供的信息谈谈你的观点。 要求：1.表明自己的观点。 2.对比自己和好朋友，说出自己的感受。 3.不少于70词。 4.文中不出现真实校名和姓名。 【总体分析】 ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； [写作步骤] 本文分为三段式： 第一段表明自己的观点并介绍自己和朋友的不同之处； 第二段介绍自己和朋友的相同之处； 第三段总结概括。 写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 I think it doesn’t matter whether my friends are the same as me or different from me. I only care if my friends truly care about me. My favorite saying is “A good friend is my nearest relation.” Helen is one of my best friends and she is quite different from me. I’m short but she is quite tall. As for the personality, I’m more outgoing than her, although I’m quieter than most kids. But we also have one thing in common. We both study hard. She is better at English, so she always helps with my English. I like my friends because they help me when I am in trouble. In my eyes, a true friend should always be there to help when I’m in trouble. I will also care about my friends and help them in life and study. 题型通关 练 1．上周育英中学开展了以“Should friends be different or the same?”为主题的调查活动，下面是他们对全校 500 个学生的调查结果，请你根据调查表格和下面信息写一篇短文。 内容包括以下几点： 1. 简要描述表格内容以及你对交友的观点; 2. 介绍一位你的好朋友，并描述你和好朋友在外貌，性格和爱好方面的相同和不同之处; 3. 你和好朋友谁的生活方式更健康，为什么？（至少两条理由） 要求：字数 70字左右，文中不得出现真实的人名。 开头已给出，不计入字数。 Should friends be different or the same? Last week Yuying high school asked this questionamong 500 students. Here are the results.________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： Should friends be different or the same? Last week Yuying High school asked this question among 500 students. Here are the results. 35% of the students thought friends should be the same, while 30% said friends should be different and the rest 35% didn’t care if friends are the same or different. For me, I also don’t mind the differences between friends. But I think a true friend should reach for your hand and touch your heart. My best friend Lily is as tall as me but I am heavier than her. We both like talking with others, but Lily is more outgoing and friendlier than me. We both like sports, but I only like watching sports on TV. Lily likes to play it every day, because she says it is healthy for the body and the mind. She also likes to eat healthy food while I enjoy fast food, so I think Lily is much healthier than me. I should learn from her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体说明图表内容以及你和好朋友之间的相同与不同之处并做出评价； 第三步，表达你和好朋友谁的生活方式哪个更健康以及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①reach for one’s hand帮助某人 ②touch one’s heart打动某人 ③as ... as和……一样…… ④talk with和……交谈 [高分句型] ①But I think a true friend should reach for your hand and touch your heart. (宾语从句) ②My best friend Lily is as tall as me but I am heavier than her. (并列句) 2．有一句非常著名的英语谚语：A friend in need is a friend indeed（患难见真情），请以“My Friend and I”为题写一篇作文。内容需包括以下方面： 1. 简要对比一下你和朋友的异同点； 2. 写出一件你与朋友共同经历的事情，要求能体现该谚语的含义； 3. 你对交朋友的观点。 要求： 1. 内容连贯，书写工整，不少于 70 词； 2. 作文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 My Friend and I ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Friend and I I have a good friend named Li Hua. Despite our different personalities, we get along well and have a lot in common. For example, we both enjoy sports and are passionate about learning new things. However, we also have our differences. While I am more outgoing and talkative, Li Hua is more reserved and thoughtful. One memorable experience that we shared was during our high school years. However, we supported each other through these tough times, helping each other with our homework and giving each other words of encouragement. It was during this period that we truly understood the meaning of the proverb. We realized that a true friend is someone who is there for you when you need them the most, someone who will pick you up when you are down and celebrate your successes with you. In my opinion, a true friend is someone who is always there for you, through good times and bad. A friend in need is indeed a friend indeed. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步， 简要对比一下你和朋友的异同点； 第二步，写出一件你与朋友共同经历的事情； 第三步，最后表达你对交朋友的观点。 [亮点词汇] ① get along well相处融洽 ② help each other互相帮助 ③ in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①One memorable experience that we shared was during our high school years.（定语从句） ②We realized that a true friend is someone who is there for you when you need them the most, someone who will pick you up when you are down and celebrate your successes with you.（宾语从句，定语从句，时间状语从句） 3．进入初中以来，同学们在外貌、性格、爱好等方面都感受到了自己的变化和进步，同时在生活和学习中也会遇到一些问题。我校英语角正在以“My Changes (我的变化)”为题进行征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图提示，用英语写一篇谈论自己变化的文章。 要求: 1. 词数：70词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数; 2. 文章不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校名称。 参考信息: My Changes I’m changing a lot in Grade Eight. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Changes Since I entered middle school, I have experienced many changes. I have become taller and more outgoing. I used to be shy, but now I enjoy communicating with others. My eating habits have also improved. I eat more fruits and vegetables, and I do sports regularly to keep fit. I have developed some hobbies. I like playing sports and singing songs. They make me happy and relaxed. However, I have some problems. I sometimes have difficulties in my study and arguments with my friends. But I have plans to solve these problems. I will study harder and try to be more understanding to my friends. I believe I will become better and better in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文。 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”、“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”穿插。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意时态的转换以及动词的变形。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“自从我进入中学以来，我经历了很多变化”引出下文。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌和性格、兴趣、习惯、问题和计划”几个方面描述我的变化。 第三步，书写结语。表达“我相信我将来会变得越来越好”进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①improve 提高 ②However 然而 ③argument 争论 [高分句型] ①Since I entered middle school, I have experienced many changes. (Since引导的时间状语从句) 4．你的老师上了一节关于朋友的课，希望你想想你最好的朋友。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一下你最好的朋友和你。内容提示： What is your best friend like? What are the differences and similarities between you and your friend? Do you like your best friend? Why? Something more about you and your best friend. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数70字左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My best friend and I Hello, everyone! Today I want to tell you something about my best friend and me. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My best friend and I Hello, everyone! Today I want to tell you something about my best friend and me. My best friend is Simon. We are in the same class. We both have black eyes and black hair, but his hair is shorter than mine. He often exercises so he is stronger and healthier than me. We both like sports, but he plays basketball better than me. Besides, he studies harder than me so he always gets good grades. I’m weak in English so he always reaches his hand and helps me with it. I really like Simon because he is supportive and always encourages me to do my best. Our friendship means the world to me, and I hope it lasts forever. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的朋友是谁； 第二步，具体阐述自己和朋友的不同之处和相似之处； 第三步，表达对朋友的喜爱及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①be weak in不擅长 ②reach his hand伸出手 ③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①He often exercises so he is stronger and healthier than me. (so引导的结果状语从句) ②I really like Simon because he is supportive and always encourages me to do my best. (because引导的原因状语从句) 5．以“How I have changed!”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好等来描述你自己的成长蜕变过程。 内容要求：1.变化前后分别是什么样子？ 2.促成你转变的原因是什么？3. 词数70字左右 How I have changed! My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I have changed! My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be a fat and shy girl who didn’t like doing sports，so I easily got sick. What’s more, I didn’t have many friends and felt lonely. Luckily, my dad noticed my problem and asked me to get up early and go jogging with him every day.  At first, I couldn’t run very fast and had to take a rest every five minutes. However, I am able to run for 45 minutes without stopping after running for 1 year.  I fall in love with jogging and begin to play badminton too. The more I do sports, the healthier I become. I am no longer a frequent visitor to the hospital. Besides, it’s easy for me to learn at school and I have made progress in my studies. Now, I am a strong and confident girl with many friends. I’m grateful to my dad for developing my habit of jogging! If you are unsatisfied with your life, go running. It will definitely change your life and make it better! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时态”和“一般现在时态”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意写出前后变化的样子和转变原因，前后对比注意时态不同。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写出过去的样子。可从外貌、性格、爱好等来写； 第二步，写出转变的原因和转变后的样子。注意时态变化和连词使用； 第三步，写出自己对变化的感想。总结点题。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be曾经是 ②due to由于 ③focus on专注于…… ④unsatisfied不满意的 [高分句型] ①I used to be a fat and shy girl who didn’t like doing sports. （定语从句） ②If you are unsatisfied with your life, go running. （条件状语从句） 6．假如你是Zhang Ming，在班会上用英语分享自己和好朋友Liu Dong相同和差异。写作要点如下： 项目 内容 相同点 1. 都留短发 2. 爱好打球，看书，周末常一起去图书馆 不同点 1. 你比他更瘦；Liu Dong更外向； 2. 他的朋友更多，(补充对待朋友的观点)； 3. 他经常帮父母做家务，一周四次； 4. …… 要求： 1. 短文应包含要求的所有信息，可以在此基础上适当发挥。 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名信息。 3. 词数80词左右。(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Dear classmates, Let me tell you something about my good friend. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks! 【答案】例文 Dear classmates, Let me tell you something about my good friend. We have a lot in common. Both of us keep our hair short, which makes us look tidy. We both like playing ball games and reading books. On weekends, we often go the library together. However, we also have our differences. I’m a bit thinner than him, while he is more outgoing and has more friends. He believes in treating friends with sincerity and always being there for them, which I deeply admire. Liu Dong often helps his parents with housework four times a week. As for me, I may not be as active in housework, but I will do my part when needed. Although we have many differences, we always help each other. Thanks. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍两者的共同点； 第二步，具体阐述两者的不同点； 第三步，最后表达总结。 [亮点词汇] ①in common共同之处 ②treating friends with sincerity真诚对待朋友 ③help each other互相帮助 [高分句型] ①Both of us keep our hair short, which makes us look tidy. （定语从句） ②Although we have many differences, we always help each other.（让步状语从句） 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$