广东省深圳外国语学校2024-2025学年高二下学期期末学科能力测试英语试题

绝密★启用前 深圳外国语学校2024一2025学年度高二下期末学科能力测试 英语试题 试卷共8页，满分130分，考试时长120分钟。 注意事项： 1.答卷前，考生务必将自己的姓名、班级、准考证号码等信息填写在答题卡上。 2.作答时，务必将答案写在答题卡上，写在本试卷及草稿纸上无效。 3.考试结束后，将答题卡交回。 一、单项选择（共10小题；每小题0.5分，满分5分） 阅读下列各题，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。 1.With the teacher's words in Tommy's ears,the boy finally made a decision which would change his whole life. A.ringing B.ring C.to ring D.rang 2. sunlight for ten minutes daily allows our skin,bones,and heart well together for good health. A.To expose to;work B.Being exposed to;to work C.Exposed to;work D.Exposing to;working 3.She sat there still,her whole attention on the lecturer. A.fixing B.to fix C.fixed D.was fixing 4. their busy part-time jobs,the college students organized a weekend book donation for kids. A.Unless B Thus C.Therefore D.Despite 5.Yiyang Qianxi, 18-year-old singer,is one of most important members of the Chinese boy band TFBOYS. A.the;a B.an;the C.the;an D.a;the 6.If you adopt this method,I am sure you can do great job in your work,which means this method can do trick. A.a;the B.不填；a C.a;不填 D.the;the 7.The exchange students from Africa often share with us the news of their countries and of our country they find interesting. A.those B.them C.that D.ones 8.Nearly 730 million trips were made by Chinese travelers within China over the 2018 National Day holiday, cheaper tickets and high-quality travel services. A.regardless of B.thanks to C.but for D.rather than 9.The big oak tree, branches provide cool shade,is where we have lunch on hot afternoons. A.who B.whose C.which D.that 10.They have made a rule not to smoke in the room,but was beyond their expectation was that many people don't obey it. A.it;what B.that;what C.it;that D.that;why 高二英语第1页（共8页） 二、阅读（共两节，满分50分） 第一节（共15小题；每小题2.5分，满分37.5分） 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。 以 EDITOR'S NOTE A Century in Circulation This year's annual classics collection is particularly special,given it is the magazine's 100th anniversary year.Peeling back the covers of the thousands of editions,published in numerous countries,and dating back to the first issue in February 1922,is always a task we enjoy doing. This collection offers a wide range of different subjects.Each one we hope will inform, delight,amuse and perhaps even confound our readers:from stepping inside the French artist Pierre-Auguste's inner circle of friends(Page 84),to finding peace from depression in a solitary walk on the beach(Page 92)and meeting a cat who held a family together as they began to fall apart(Page 20).My favorite article,Exploits of Charles(Page 100),is written by a mother about the increasingly odd behavior of a little boy in her young son's kindergarten class.I am sure you'll enjoy this amusing account of a small boy adjusting to his new classmates and teachers.With an endless supply of wonderful stories.surprising insights and experiences to share,Reader's Digest remains a place to find fresh perspectives and a great read. Happy reading! Louise Waterson Editor-in-Chief Welcome to Contribute Funny Stories and Jokes $50-$100 Send in your real-life laugh for Life's Like That or All in a Day's Work.Got a joke?Send it in for Laughter is the Best Medicine! Smart Animals Up to 100 Share funny stories of unique pets or wildlife in up to 300 words. My Story $300 Do you have an inspiring or life-changing tale to tell?Submissions must be true. Health 200 Send your constructive tips in for World of Health. 11.What makes this issue of Reader's Digest so unique? A.A various range of subjects. B.Special anniversary collection. C.A countless supply of stories. D.Fresh viewpoints and insights. 12.On which page can readers find a funny story? A.Page 100.B.Page 92. C.Page 84. D.Page 20. 13.Which article can possibly get the highest payment? A.Secret World of a Wise Cat B.Four Tips to Prevent Vision Loss C.Reunited with My Rescuers,Two Fishermen D.What Kind of School do Giraffes Like to Go B In this fast-paced world,quiet moments are often spent staring at a phone screen.For those who have forgotten how to switch off and reconnect with themselves,Deborah Alma,a poet, may have just what the doctor ordered.She founded the first poetry pharmacy (in 高二英语第2页（共8页） Shropshire a decade ago,whose aim was to ease worry with words,allowing visitors to book poetry consultations for tailored advice or pick up a quick fix off the shelves.Last year,another poetry pharmacy opened its doors inside LUSH on London's Oxford Street,seeking to bring a little calm to the capital. Even before she had these two successful "practices",Deborah was aware of the power of poetry.She noticed how it could bring people a positive change.This inspired her to become the “Emergency Poet'”traveling the country in an ambulance to offer poetry prescriptions(处方). The 1950s ambulance,which was bought on eBay,carried 200 poems,each with advice like “take this poem with a cup of tea”or“listen to some birdsong”,. After about a decade of mobile medicine,Deborah parked up her practice for a permanent location in Shropshire.This became the world's first poetry pharmacy,and-unlike the ambulance-it had central heating.From a cozy coffee corner to an inspiring physic garden,the pharmacy is described as "a peaceful place to rest and dream"."What happens in the shops is that people are often buying things for others.That act of giving and thinking about someone else is heartwarming."The pharmacy also provides a more personalized service."We ask about people's reading habits,how they relax,rather than their problems.It should be a pleasure to answer these questions,"Deborah says. Despite never having done any online marketing,the poetry pharmacy has a dedicated following of creative souls,including Mark Constantine,CEO and co-founder of LUSH.We don't know what the future holds for the poetry pharmacy and its founder,but one thing is certain-the next chapter is bound to be a good one! 14.How many poetry pharmacies has Deborah opened? A.One. B.Two. C.Three. D.Four. 15.What can visitors do in the poetry pharmacy? A.Discuss poetry writing. B.Experience poetic healing. C.Offer medical prescriptions. D.Enjoy theatre performances. 16.What can be inferred from the last paragraph? A.The shop has gained acceptance. B.The shop needs some marketing. C.Deborah will open a new shop soon. D.Deborah has found some co-founders. 17.Which of the following best describes Deborah? A.Creative but inconsistent. B.Conventional but warm. C.Innovative and compassionate. D.Sociable and adventurous. C When Alexander Fleming returned to his lab in 1928,he found a bacteria culture he had grown was infected by fungus().The fungus killed any bacteria colonies it touched.Rather than simply starting over,Fleming switched his focus to the fungus.He identified the bacteria- killing substance,which he called“penicillin”,and created the new field of antibiotics(抗生素). That's how most people see innovation:A flash of brilliance and Eureka,a new world is born in an instant.The truth,however,is not that simple.It wasn't until 1943 that penicillin came into widespread use: To put Fleming's discovery in context,consider Ignaz Semmelweis,who pioneered hand washing in maternity wards(),significantly reducing childbed fever but receiving criticism 高二英语第3页（共8页） instead of fame.That was because in the 1850s,his ideas conflicted with the popular theory, which suggested that disease resulted from“bad airs'”.After his death in 1865,germ(病菌) theory was finally accepted,paving the way for Fleming's later work. Fleming was a gifted biologist but a poor communicator.When he published his results in 1929,few took notice.In 1935,Howard Florey and Ernst Chain discovered Fleming's paper, understood its importance,and developed methods to produce penicillin in quantity.By 1943, with World War II going on fiercely,the War Production Board asked 21 companies to mass- produce penicillin,saving countless lives and ushering in the new age of antibiotics.Fleming, Florey and Chain received the Nobel Prize for Medicine in 1945. Penicillin owes much of its success to government support.For many other groundbreaking innovations like the Internet and GPS,their innovators,while carving their own path,are often uncertain of where the opportunity lies until they team up with other informed officials and big firms that might have the resources to turn their ideas into reality quickly.So,look at any significant innovation and the myth of the lone genius,and the "eureka moment"breaks down. 18.What are the first two paragraphs mainly about? A.An account of a lab story. B.Redefinition of a traditional view. C.Correction of a popular misconception.D.An analysis of a scientific phenomenon. 19.What is the message conveyed in paragraph 3? A.Great minds think alike. B.The early bird catches the worm. C.Luck's got your back when it comes to success. D.Early work is a stepping stone to later breakthroughs. 20.What does the underlined part "ushering in"in paragraph 4 mean? A.Introducing.B.Predicting. C.Delaying. D.Transforming. 21.Which of the following can be the best title? A.Great Innovations:Individuals Are True Heroes B.From Failure to Success:The Story of Penicillin C.The Lone Genius:Fleming's Discovery of Penicillin D.The Long Road to Penicillin:How Innovation Happens D From rolling hills to mountain ranges,views make any road trip memorable,but for blind passenger this is part of the experience they miss.Motor company Ford tries to change that.It teamed up with GTB Roma and Aedo Project to develop a technology that will give those unfortunate passengers a way to feel nature's beauty through their car windows. The prototype()of the smart car window has a device with an outside-facing camera. With just a press of a button,the system takes a picture of the current view.The colorful picture is then turned into an image with different shades of grey through LED lights,which vibrate differently.As the finger passes over different regions of the image,its shaking movements provide feedback through the sense of touch to the person using it.The smart window also comes with a voice assistant that uses AI to identify the scene and help the passengers get information on what they're seeing. 高二英语第4页（共8页） "As the prototype started taking shape,we realized we were giving birth to a completely new language that would give blind people a new chance to visualize and experience traveling," Federico Russo,one director of GTB Roma,said."When the idea was at its first stage,we looked for suppliers all around the world to make it come to life."He believes the technology can be employed not just in cars."It could be introduced into schools and institutions for blind people as a tool that could be used in multiple ways." The technology may show up in a Ford autonomous vehicle.It's known that the companyis testing their technology and future business model and struggling to figure out how an autonomous vehicle gives different passengers the details needed to get from one destination to another.It's unclear when this technology will be made available.However,the idea of building something for the less advantaged is indeed a kind and influential action. 22.What is the function of the first paragraph? A.To list daily activities. B.To present research results. C.To introduce the main topic. D.To describe a specific scene. 23.How does the smart car window work? A.By changing shades of colors. B.By recording the view with a camera. C.By classifying shaking movements. D.By translating scenery into vibrations. 24.What does Federico Russo say about the technology? A.It will have wide application. B.It will be tested across the world. C.It will be used in schools first. D.It will understand many languages. 25.What do we know about Ford? A.It aims to develop brand new LED lights.B.It's a small-scale startup at its first stage. C.It has determined the timing of marketing.D.It hasn't employed the technology widely. 第二节（共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分） 阅读下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，选项中有两项为多余 选项。 In today's closely-connected world,most of us are flooded by an ocean of messages and social media feeds,from the moment we wake up to the instant we close our eyes.It's not just a matter of convenience or novelty anymore-fixation on screens has become our habit,a necessity,and even an addiction.26 Constant engagement not only consumes our time,but also steals us something far more important:peace of mind. Silence is as critical to mental health as vitamins are to physical well-being.People are particular about what foods they put in their bodies:whether organic,vegetarian,or fat-free. 27 The mental junk we absorb daily can be arguably harmful than the occasional cheeseburger or donut.The never-ending flood of sensory input taxes the brain's limited attention resources,leaving little room for deep thinking,reflecting,or creativity. 28 Quiet time helps the brain relax,sort through what it has taken in,and regain lost mental energy.As American artist Leonard Koren suggests in his book Wabi-Sabi,silence can be "an emptiness full of possibilities",a space where creativity and clarity emerge. Adding moments of quiet to your daily routine doesn't require dramatic changes.9 Better yet,research shows that brief exposure to nature,like a walk in the woods,lowers stress levels,reduces blood pressure,and sharpens focus.These benefits occur because green spaces and natural soundscapes provide a much-needed break from today's busy,stressful world. Digital life crowds out silence,making simply sitting in silence almost unthinkable-yet the very moments of stillness are what our minds really need.They let us listen to our thoughts, 高二英语第5页（共8页） reflect on our experiences,and connect with ourselves in a way that is impossiblen the noise o modern life.30 A.But rarely do we ask ourselves:at what cost? B.It can be as simple as pausing 30 seconds to watch clouds. C.So,shouldn't we make laws requiring quiet time every day? D Next time you reach for your phone,resist the urge and sit in silence. E.We check our phones 58 times a day,30%occurring during work hours. F.But they aren't as picky about what they are exposed to through the senses. C Just as our bodies need nutrition,our minds require silence to function well. 三、完形填空（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分） 阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。 The first time I went fishing was in Minnesota.As a city resident,the idea of fishing was both 31 and appealing to me.One early morning,with our fishing equipment 8?,we headed for a quiet spot by the lake.Little did I know that this 33 ordinary actixity would leave an unforgettable mark on me. On arrival,I urged my father to explain the 3:of fishing to me.He demonstrated how to cast the line,how to feel for a bite,and how to reel()in the catch.His 35 approach was reassuring,yet I could not shake off the 36 that came with the uncertainty of the experience. As I cast my line into the water for the first time,I was 3/with excitement.The initial excitement,however,soon 38 impatience.Minutes felt like hours as I sat there,staring at the 39 water,hoping for a sign of life.My father 40 my growing impatience and shared his wisdom."Fishing is about enjoying the process and being in the moment.Be 41 ;he said. His words 42 me,and I began to appreciate the peacefulness of the surroundings.The singing of birds and the gentle lapping of water against the shore 43 a symphony of natural sounds.Suddenly,I felt a pull on my line.My heart 44 as I struggled to reel in the catch. Fishing has since become my beloved hobby,45 in me a sense of patience and a profound appreciation for the natural world. 31.A.foreign B.popular C. sudden D.risky 32.A.repaired B. ordered C labelled D. packed 33.A.surprisingly B. partially C. seemingly D. previously 34.A.basics B. shortcuts C. benefits D.terms 35.A.theoretical B.transformative C. innovative D. methodical 36.A.tiredness B. anxiety C resistance D.embarrassment 37.A.faced B. impressed C. consumed D.mixed 38.A.gave way to B. gave rise to C. made up for D.threw light on 39.A.icy shallow C. pure D. still 40.A.tolerated B. challenged C. fueled D.sensed 41.A.mindful B. open C.patient D. flexible 42.A.astonished 以. struck C. confused D. disappointed 43.A.mirrored B. witnessed C. created D.featured 44.A.beat B. raced C.sank D. melted 45.A.instilling revealing C.involving D. restoring 高二英语第6页（共8页） 四、语法填空（共10小题：每小题1.5分，满分15分） 阅读下面短文，在空白处填人1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 As a demonstration sport at the 2024 Paris Olympic Games,pickleball()is rapidly gaining popularity across China,46 (unique)integrating fitness,friendship and fashion. Emerging as a beloved pastime for American seniors in the 1960s,pickleball has evolved 47 a dynamic sport.Playfully called the "fun cousin"of tennis,pickleball 48 (play)by two or four players on a badminton court with oversized ping-pong paddles.Its rules are straightforward,49 (require)minimal physical efforts in the form of running,making it accessible to players of all ages and skill levels.Its low barrier to entry-only a paddle set and ball,both of which are widely accessible and budget-friendly-50 (ensure)that anyone can have a try. Pickleball is also a sport centered around fun and friendship.Its social aspect can foster lasting friendships and 51 (tie)beyond the court.The inclusive and welcome nature of pickleball communities enhances overall well-being and a sense of 52 (belong). Currently,not only does pickleball enjoy popularity in first-tier cities like Beijing and Shanghai,but it's also expanding its presence into smaller cities across China.53 you're a seasoned athlete or a beginner seeking a new,sporty activity,pickleball provides an 54 (engage)experience for you.Ready to try?Find a local court and give it 55 try. 五、词汇（共两节，满分5分）】 第一节根据所给中文及单词首字母写出单词的正确形式。（共5小题；每小题0.5分，满分2.5分） 56.The d pattern on her wedding dress looked absolutely stunning under the soft light. 57.As the tallest and most experienced player,she quickly became the d (占支配地位 force on the basketball court. 58.Before submitting his final essay,he spent another hour p (修改；润色)the conclusion to make his argument clearer and more persuasive. 59.Only a q (符合资格的)doctor is allowed to perform such complex surgeries at this hospital. 60.Gardening is her favorite form of r (娱乐；消遣)after a long week of studying. 第二节根据句意，用所给单词的正确形式填空。（共5小题；每小题0.5分，满分2.5分） 61.Running a marathon requires incredible physical and mental (endure)to push through the pain and fatigue. 62. Under the (guide)of an experienced mentor,she felt much more confident about making important career decisions. 63.After a thorough investigation,the man was proven (innocence)of all charges and released. 64. His success in learning a difficult language like Mandarin was largely due to his (persevere)in the face of setbacks. 65. When I shared my problem with her,she was very (sympathy)and offered to listen whenever I needed to talk. 六、写作（共两节，满分40分） 第一节（满分15分） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办关于理想职业的征文比赛，请你以“My Future Career'” 为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 高二英语第7页（共8页） 1.理想职业： 2. 选择原因； 3. 你的打算。 注意 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My Future Career 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As the school year wrapped up and the first day of summer vacation stretched out before them,Max,Ava,and Sam had a perfect day planned at their usual community park.This tidy little park was their go-to spot for unwinding and just enjoying some precious leisure time. Max rushed ahead with a soccer ball under his arm,Ava and Sam trailing closely behind, full of energy.It was the kind of day that promised endless fun and carefree laughter.But as they stepped into the park,their hearts sank.The once-beloved playground was now a chaotic mess of discarded trash(乱扔的垃圾)一candy wrappers stuck in the slide's metal bars,plastic bottles rolling in the wind,and chip bags lying underfoot. "Look at this!"Ava shouted in disbelief as she pointed to the garbage near the swings. Max's face darkened with frustration.The three friends stood frozen,their eyes scanning the playground area.The once clean slides and swings were now buried under a layer of candy wrappers and plastic bottles.Ava cast a glance()at the walking trails,where garbage seemed to have taken over,with discarded bags and cans lying everywhere.Sam looked out at the grassy fields-a disaster.The park was vast,but every corner seemed to have been touched by the carelessness of others. "Who would be so thoughtless?"Max whispered,shaking his head. Sam kicked a plastic bottle in anger,sending it flying across the grass."It's not just thoughtless-it's disrespectful." Ava sighed thoughtfully,but suddenly her face lit up."We can't just leave it like this.Why don't we do something about it??We can,say,form a Cleanup Squad(清洁小分队)..”she said, her voice soft but determined. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Max and Sam exchanged an excited glance. Unexpectedly,other parkgoers joined in as they did the cleanup. 高二英语第8页（共8页） ·英语· 参考答案 参考答案 深圳外国语学校2024一2025学年度高二下期末学科能力测试英语 一、单项选择（共10小题：每小题0.5分，满分5分） In order to pave way for my future career,I plan 1-5 ABCDB 610 ACBBA to be dedicated to academic study,equipping myself 二、阅读（共两节，满分50分） with profound medical knowledge.I firmly believe 第一节（共15小题；每小题2.5分，满分37.5分） that with my constant efforts,I will have my dream 11-13 BAC 14-17 BBAC 1821 CDAD accomplished. 22-25 CDAD 第二节（满分25分） 第二节（共5小题：每小题2.5分，满分12.5分） Max and Sam exchanged an excited glance.Eyes 26-30 AFGBD sparkling with resolution,they exclaimed in chorus, 三、完形填空（共15小题：每小题1分，满分15分） "I'm in!"Rolling up the sleeves,the Cleanup Squad 31-35 ADCAD 36-40 BCADD 41-45 CBCBA sprang into action.Ava took the lead,crouching 四、语法填空（共10小题：每题15分，满分15分） down to grab the discarded bottles,while Sam and 46.uniquely 47.into 48.is played 49.requiring Max stretched up to reach the candy wrappers, 50.ensures 51.ties 52.belonging 53.Whether endeavoring to remove them from the metal bars. 54.engaging 55.a Despite the blazing sun and sweat-soaked shirts, 五、词汇（共两节，满分5分） they pressed on,knowing that each attempt counted. 第一节（共5小题；每小题0.5分，满分2.5分） Time ticking away,the dustbins which were filled 56.delicate 57.dominant 58.polishing 59.qualified 60.recreation with garbage witnessed their commitment to tidy up 第二节（共5小题；每小题0.5分，满分2.5分） their beloved park.Exhausted as they were,they 61.endurance somehow began to hum tunes,as if it were some 62.guidance 63.innocent kind of fun game. 64.perseverance 65.sympathetic 六、写作（共两节，满分40分） Unexpectedly,other parkgoers joined in as they 第一节（满分15分） did the cleanup.Scarcely had they caught sight of it My Future Career when a gust of astonishment surged through them. As is widely acknowledged,there are a variety Never in their wildest dream had they anticipated of careers in the world,each of which has its own that their spontaneous act of cleanup could lead to value.As for me,I would like to work as a doctor in such a heartwarming collective effort!Together with the future. the newly-joined volunteers,the Cleanup Squad The reasons why I choose doctor as my ideal transformed the messy park into a clean paradise career can be listed as follows.Above all,born in a again.Spotting the park sparkling with new vitality family with many doctors,I have been fascinated by again with children playing on the slides and swings, the job since my early childhood.Besides,it allows Max,Ava,and Sam cracked radiant smiles,filled me to help people in need with medical skills,easing with a sense of fulfillment and ecstasy.It was not their pain.Most importantly,being a doctor can until then that they realized through this cleanup work, provide me with a chance to contribute to our a new-found respect for the community park had been country's medical cause,making a meaningful awakened in the heart of every parkgoer who got difference to people's well-being. involved. 答案第1页，共2页 ·英语· 参考答案 ①黑体加粗的单词和短语是亮眼用词：②下划线是 ①第一段讲到Max和Sam交换了眼神，暗示 加分的语法现象；③斜体单词是呼应前文的细节。 支持Ava的提议。在写他们具体行动之前加一句 评分标准： “明面上的支持”会更加流畅。 1.本节满分25分，按5个档次给分，精确到1分。 ②第二段第一句有三个重要信息：Unexpectedly 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其档 (出乎意料地)”，“other parkgoers joined in(其他 次，然后以该档次要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最 人加入)”，“as they did the cleanup'”。因为是在“他 后给分。 们做清洁的时候(as they did the cleanup)"加入， 3.原则上，两段写作的词数可以不绝对均等，但总 所以，上一段应该聚焦写三个小朋友干得热火朝 词数为150左右。少于120的，可从总分中减去1分。 天，镜头应该是特写的，不应该出现in the following 如多于180，但都是有效表达，不扣分。篇幅不满， days”这类的表达。此类表达相当于把镜头拉远 酌情扣分。 了，开始以“全景”的模式叙事，与第二段第一句衔 4.评分时应关注与原文的融洽度（逻辑的严谨性）、 接不上。 内容的合理性、语言（应用词汇和语法结构）的丰 2.写作重点偏离 富性、准确性及上下文的连贯性。 ①第一段应该写三个小朋友干得热火朝天，如 5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确的一个方面。评分时 果要生动，则要有具体的动作描写，具体的描写可 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及 以与上文中提到的众多脏乱差问题呼应，形成闭 词汇用法均可接受。 环，如“candy wrappers”,bottles'等细节 6.如书写较差以致影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。 有同学纠结于“没有工具”这件事情，花大量笔 评分细则 墨写“回家拿”，“去店里买等等，显然是重点搞错 1.内容要点。(16分) 了，准备工具这件事可以一笔带过，但不应该赘述， 第一段： 抢占了三个小孩努力清洁的描写空间。 要点1：与提示句的衔接，Max和Sam交换眼神意味 ②第二段的描写中，部分同学没明白“other 着他们同意Ava的提议。(2分) parkgoers'”"出现的原因，只写了看到other parkgoers' 要点2：三人分工合作，打扫卫生的场景和细节描 加入后，三个小朋友干得更起劲、更卖力了，没有 写。(5分) 接着点出“更大范围的集体的努力”。 要点3：打扫卫生细节描写要呼应前文的部分线索， 是大家的努力让公园重焕生机，所以在第二段 candy wrappers,metal bars,plastic bottles,chip 的写作中不能完全把“other parkgoers'”的付出抹杀 bags,playground等线索的其中一部分。(2分) 掉。这也是主题的走向。 第二段： 3.主题的提炼 要点l:衔接提示句，简要提一下other parkgoers 三个小朋友是贯穿故事的主角，但他们的“作 干了什么，但无需太多，避免“抢占”主角“戏份”。 用”不应该止步于“努力干活”一他们的体力劳动 (2分) 改造了公园。文章第二段还应该提及他们对其他人 要点2：在other parkgoers和清洁小分队的共同努力 的“影响力”。在所给文章的倒数第二段里，Sam明 下，公园面貌发生了变化(3分) 确指出，公园之所以变得脏乱差，是因为“t's 要点3：看到公园焕然一新后，清洁小分队的反应 not just thoughtless-一it's disrespectful.."那些 和感想。(2分) parkgoers缺乏对公园的respect。所以第二段首句 2.全文内容衔接、连贯自然。(3分) 的parkgoers就是在提示考生注意思考这个 3.运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和高级句式。 (4分) “Cleanup Squad”的影响力，最后着笔于维持公园 4.卷面整洁、美观。(2分) 整洁的关键：通过清洁活动，人们心中对公园的 阅卷问题反馈WYL: respect'被重新唤醒了(awaken)。 1.衔接不当 答案第2页，共2页