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应用文写作+读后续写
Saturday
Week 12
一、应用文写作
假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。
得知今年是新中国成立T6周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你
用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)建议投稿内容;
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:
(1)词数80左右:
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)可适当增加细节使内容连贯。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
二、读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The sun was setting over the school's football field,casting a golden glow on the last day of
the annual track and field meet.The students of Crestwood High were gathered,their eyes fixed on
the track where the final event of the day was about to take place-the 4X400m relay race.The
race was highly anticipated and the school's pride was attached to this game.
The competition was fierce,and the race was expected to be a nail-biter.The first three legs of
the relay were about to begin,and the team's star runner,Jake,was set to run the anchor leg(
)However,as the starting gun fired,a gasp went through the crowd.Jake had tripped at the
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应用文写作+读后续写
starting line,falling hard and scraping his knee.
Coach Harris rushed to Jake's side,his face a mask of concern.Jake was in pain,but his eyes
were filled with determination."I can still run,"he insisted,but Coach Harris knew better.The
race was too important to risk injury.
As the first runner from Crestwood took off,Coach Harris turned to the team."We need a
substitute for Jake,"he announced.The team members exchanged glances,but no one stepped
forward.They were all aware of the pressure and the responsibility that came with running the
anchor leg.
Then,from the sidelines,a figure emerged.It was Emily,the team's equipment manager,who had
never been part of the race team before.She was known for her dedication to the team,but her athletic
abilities were untested."I'll do it,"she said,her voice steady despite the uncertainty in her eyes.
Coach Harris looked at her,surprised but grateful."Are you sure?"he asked.Emily nodded,her
gaze resolute."I've been training with you guys every day.I know I can do this."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右:
(2)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已给出。
As the third runner handed off the baton()to Emily,she was in fourth place,with
a significant gap between her and the leading runner.
The crowd was on its feet now,the cheering deafening as Emily inched closer to the
leader.
144英语·00训练高二上上个月为一名阿拉巴马州女性移植了基因编辑的猪肾,使她从透析中
解脱出来,是康状况得到改善。
l.B细节理解题.第二段最后一句“The unusually high levels of
harmful antibodies in her blood made a devastating form of
transplant rejection likely..”这句话说明有害抗体水平高是导致
Looney找到合适的臀脏匹配困雅的原因,故选B.
2.C细节理解题。第四段最后一句“Six human transgenes were
added to make the gene-edited pig kidney more compatible with the
human recipient.”这句话说明对猪臂进行编辑的目的是提高与人类
的相容性,故选C,
3.C推理判断题,根据最后一段“,with challenges to overcome,.
Advocates hope this approach can help address the severe organ
shortage in the United States,”可知异种移楨虽然存在风险,但有
助于解决美国器官短缺的问题,既有风验又有益处,故选C。
4.D标题归纳题。文章第一段第一句意为“上个月,纽约大学朗格
尼健康中心的医生为一名阿拉巴马州女性移植了基因编辑的猪肾,
使她从透析中解脱出来,健康状况得到改善”,这句话是文章的主旨
句,后文围绕这句话展开,说明这篇文章主要讲述了基因编辑的猪
肾移被手术成功的事情,故选D。
Saturday
一、应用文写作
四参考范文
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear you're planning to write about China's
achievements on the occasion of the 76th anniversary of the founding
of this country.Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with,talk about China's cconomic growth and
technological advancements,which have been the highlights in the
past few decades.Then,projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make
a good topic to discuss because it showeases China's determination to
build a shared future with the world.In addition,you can also mention
China's role in helping solve global issues such as the global warming,
offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
母语言积累
高级表达
L,economic growth经济增长
2.determination to的决心
3.1 n addition而且
4.0 n the occasion of在…之际
5.the Belt and Road Initiative一带一路但议
高级句型
1.To begin with,talk about China's economic growth and
technological advancements,which have been the highlights in the
past few decades.(运用了which引平的非限制性定语从句)
2.Then,projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to
discuss because it showcases China's determination to build a shared
future with the world.(适月了because引乎的原图状语从句)
二、读后续写
®前特回顾
本文以人物为线素,接力赛上,承担最后一棒的明星运动员Jk©
被绊倒受伤,教练询问队员中是否有人愿意替补,但没有人愿意承担
这份压力,最终队里的设备经理Emily站了出来.
高二上
9思路点发
L.由续写第一段首句“当第三名选手将接力棒交给Eily时,地在第
四名位置,与领先的选手之间存在明显差距”可知,第一段可以播
述Eiy从落后位置慢慢缩小差距的经过,
2.由续写第二段首句“人群现在站起来了,当Emily慢慢靠近领先者
时,欢呼声展耳欲聋,”可知,第二段可以描写Emy成功超越领先
选手,第一个神过终点线,赢得了所有人的欢呼。
伞词类激活
行为类
①握住:grip/hold
②突然发出:erupt into/burst into
③证明:prove/confirm
情绪类
①怀疑:doubt/suspicion
②震惊:shock/urprise
四参考范文
Paragraph 1:
As the third runner handed off the baton to Emily,she was in
fourth place,with a significant gap between her and the leading
runner.But as she took the baton,a spark ignited in her eyes.The air
was thick with the scent of vietory and the undereurrent of doubt.
Gripping the baton,Emily's heart pounded in her chest.She could feel
the weight of the team's hopes resting on her shoulders.As she kept
running.she could feel the wind whipping past her ears,and the
cheers of the crowd became a distant roar.Emily's determination
fueled her steps.She could see the other runners'figures growing
larger as she closed the gap.
Paragraph 2:
The crowd was on its feet now,the cheering deafening as Emily
inched closer to the leader.It was a neck-and-neck race.the two
runners so close that it was impossible to tell who would cross the
finish line first.With one last,desperate lunge,Emily crossed the
finish line first.The audience erupted into cheers and applause.Emily's
teammates rushed onto the track,their faces a mixture of shock and
pride.They lifted her onto their shoulders,celebrating their
unexpected victory.Emily,the quiet equipment manager,had become
the hero of the day,proving that sometimes,the greatest victories
come from the most unlikely places.
中语言积累
高级表达
L.heart pounds in chest心脏在胸腔里副烈跳动
2.fuel one's step使某人加速
3.erupt into cheers and applause爆发出欢呼声和掌声
高级句型
1.It was a neck-and-neck race,the two runners so close that it was
impossible to tell who would cross the finish line first.(使用了独立
主格结构、s0.that.…引导结果状语从句,its十adj.十t0d0结
构、wh0引导宾语从句》
2.Emily,the quiet equipment manager,had become the hero of the
day,proving that sometimes,the greatest victories come from the
most unlikely places..(使用了现在分诃作款语、that引导宾语从句)
Sunday
高频词积累
1.complaint 2.stare 3.light 4.addiction 5.fluent:flueney
6.generation 7.containment;container 8.committed;commit
9.edge 10.point 11.vision 12.reject 13.insistence 14.dedicate
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