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Unit 4 Information Technology
同步写作课讲义-北师大版2019必修第二册
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⭐话题解读⭐
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个人简介
个人简介是简明扼要介绍自己情况的一种写作方式。写作时,要根据题目要求,介绍自己的个人信息,并说明自己的性格爱好。如果是为了申请加入某个社团、活动或者申请某个岗位,要说明自己的个人优势,语气应该诚恳而有礼貌。
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⭐写作任务⭐
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1.介绍写信的目的或者说明信息的来源。
2.简单介绍自己的个人情况,包括年龄、职业、爱好或者个人优势等。要有所选择地介绍自己,不要写成流水账式的作文。
3.表达自己的期望。如求职则表示希望早点收到回复。
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⭐审题指导⭐
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假如你是李华,你从网站上得知国际马拉松赛组委会将在你居住的城市招募志愿者,请写信介绍自己并申请成为一名志愿者。内容包括:
1.个人的基本情况;
2.个人的优势;
3.表达获选的愿望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:the Organizing Committee组委会 recruit vt.招募
Dear Sir or Madam,
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写作步骤
◆ 步骤一:点明主题,表明写作目的
◆ 步骤二:介绍个人情况
◆ 步骤三:表明愿望
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词汇积累
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(1) 单词
application n. 申请;
applicant/candidate n. 申请人;
position n. 职位;
competent adj. 足以胜任的,有能力的;
hardworking/diligent adj. 勤奋的;
enthusiastic adj. 热情的;
creative adj. 有创造力的;
intelligent adj. 聪明的
(2)短语
1.have a number of hobbies有很多业余爱好
2.be fond of reading喜欢看书
3.enjoy communicating/talking with others喜欢与其他人交流
4.be ready to help others乐于助人
5.be eager to make friends with others渴望与其他人交朋友
6.enjoy outdoor activities喜欢户外运动
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句型积累
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第一段:点明主题,表明写作目的
1.I am writing to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for this voluntary job to help the homeless.我写信推荐自己为这项志愿工作的合格人选,为无家可归者提供帮助。
2.Your advertised position of...interests me, so I'm writing to you for it.我对你们招聘……的广告很感兴趣,所以我给你写信应聘这一职位。
第二段:介绍个人的基本情况及优势
1.As a passionate and outgoing student, I get on well with my classmates.作为一名热情外向的学生,我和同学们相处得很好。
2.I'm kind by nature, easy-going and always ready to help others.我生性善良、随和、乐于助人。
3.Compared to other applicants, I know the animals better, which is the basis of being a spokesman.与其他申请人相比,我更了解动物,这是作为代言人的基础。
4.Having studied English for almost ten years, I am quite good at the language, especially at delivering English speeches and communicating with foreigners.学习了近十年的英语,我非常擅长这门语言,尤其是在发表英语演讲和与外国人交流方面。
5.Working as a volunteer guide during the Beijing Olympic Games has helped me gain the ability to handle emergency situations possible to occur.在北京奥运会期间担任志愿导游的经历帮助我获得了处理可能发生的紧急情况的能力。
第三段:表达获选的愿望
1.Any favorable consideration of my application would be appreciated.如果你优先考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。
2.If there is anything more you want to know about me, please feel free to contact me.如果你想了解更多关于我的信息,请随时联系我。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I learned the news from the website which says that the Organizing Committee of the International Marathon will recruit volunteers in our city. I hope I can have a chance to do something for it.
I am an 18-year-old student in senior high school. In my free time, I like watching English movies, so I can speak English fluently. Besides, I like sports and also like to read a variety of books about sports. In addition, I am outgoing and I am always ready to help others.
Hopefully, I can be chosen to be one of them.
Yours,
Li Hua
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变式提升训练
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(1)
假定你是李华,正在悉尼参加暑期课程。你得知当地博物馆要举办中国
瓷器展并且正在招募志愿者。请根据以下要点写一封英文申请信。内容包括:
1.说明写信目的;
2.陈述个人优势和能做的事情;
3.表达希望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:瓷器 porcelain
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
(2)
假如你是李华,某国际青少年文学俱乐部(Literature Club)正面向全球招收会员。请你根据以下要点提示给该俱乐部负责人写一封申请信。要点如下:
1.个人条件:英语好,阅读广泛,善于与人交流;
2.目的:结交朋友,了解西方文学,提高自己的英语水平。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
(3)
(23-24高一上·福建·期末)假设你是李华,目前正在英国学习。你从网站上了解到某在线教育机构拟招聘一名中文老师,向该国学生讲授中国传统文化,如节日、京剧、剪纸艺术、武术等。作为一名中国留学生,你想应聘这个职位。请你用英语写一封申请信,并介绍个人情况及优势。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student aged 18.
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I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(4)
(24-25高二上·贵州黔西·期末)假定你是光明中学高二学生李华,得知黔西南州博物馆正在招募暑假期间做英文讲解的志愿者,向外国游客介绍贵州汉代历史文物。请你用英文给相关负责人写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.自我介绍以及陈述申请意愿;
2.个人优势;
3.希望批准。
参考词汇:黔西南州博物馆 Qianxi’ nan Prefecture Museum;招募 recruit;汉代历史文物 Han Dynasty artifacts
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(5)
(23-24高一·全国·假期作业)假定你是李华,在意大利留学期间,你在网上看到一家公司招聘兼职销售员,请你给该公司负责人Kelly写一封邮件,申请这个职位。
内容包括:1.写信目的;2.你的条件;3.表示愿望。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kelly,
I am writing in response to the job advertisement on your website for the position of salesperson.
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I think I’m qualified for this job. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(6)
(23-24高一下·福建·期中)假定你是李华,作为交换生在英国交流学习。你听说学校流行音乐俱乐部正在招收新成员,想加入该俱乐部。请用英文给负责俱乐部的学生John写一封申请信,要点如下:
(1)简要介绍自己;
(2)加入俱乐部的目的。
注意:
(1)词数 80 左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 流行音乐俱乐部 pop music club
Dear John,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(7)
(23-24高二上·浙江·阶段练习)你校将于2024年5月1日至5月4日在学校举行运动会,为了确保运动会圆满举办,你校发起志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华,也希望成为其中一员,请用英文写一封申请信。
内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 自身优势。
参考词汇:运动会sports meeting
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam.
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Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写
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⭐审题指导⭐
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Secret of Flowers
[2024广东省四校期末联考]Anna worked with her mother in their vegetable garden every day. This was how they made their living. Anna helped her mother tend the garden, so the vegetables would be healthy and ready for the market. Anna often pretended the plants she tended were beautiful roses, like Mrs. Brown's prize flowers.
The only person in the village who made money by selling flowers was Mrs. Brown. She grew roses and sold them to flower shops in the city. Every year she joined the City Rose Festival. People thought that Mrs. Brown used magic to grow her roses. How else could she win first prize twenty years in a row?
Anna loved to tend flowers. Moreover, she often dreamed about growing her own roses and winning first prize in the festival. With the prize money, she would also be able to lighten the burden of her family. However, roses were too expensive for her to start.
One day, Anna visited Mrs. Brown to see her flowers. Mrs. Brown was whispering to her roses when Anna arrived. "Spying on me again!" Mrs. Brown frowned.
"I only come to see your flowers, Mrs. Brown," Anna took a deep breath and said. "I wish I could grow beautiful roses and win a prize at the festival like you."
"I have experience passed down for generations," Mrs. Brown laughed. "Stick to vegetables, child. Leave flowers to those who know the secret of flowers."
Mrs. Brown returned to her gardening, ignoring the sad look on Anna's face. Then she pulled up a dried-up rose, and threw it over the fence. "A plant in bad condition. Unworthy of my time," Mrs. Brown mumbled(嘟哝).
Anna smiled, as she had an idea. She bowed farewell to Mrs. Brown and went out of the garden gate. Mrs. Brown was busy minding her prize roses. Anna quickly bent over and grabbed the abandoned rose before rushing home. She remembered a quiet spot behind her cottage. It was the perfect place for her little rose to grow. Now, she had a chance for the festival.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Paragraph 1:
Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully.
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Paragraph 2:
On the morning of the festival, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw Anna's beautiful rose.
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【解题导语】Anna和妈妈种蔬菜谋生,Anna喜欢花,梦想能够种植自己的玫瑰并在玫瑰节中获得一等奖,这样也能减轻家里的负担。然而,她买不起玫瑰,村里唯一以卖花谋生的是Brown女士,她养的玫瑰连续20年获得玫瑰节的一等奖。有一天,Anna把Brown女士扔掉的一株玫瑰拿回家种植,因此也有了参加玫瑰节的机会……
【写作指导】
续写线索
Anna精心照顾玫瑰—玫瑰恢复生机—Anna参加玫瑰节—Anna获奖—Brown女士询问养花秘诀—Anna的母亲感到骄傲
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Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully. She nurtured it every day: watering it just right and making sure that it received plenty of sunlight.【高分句型一】 She talked to it softly, much like Mrs. Brown did with her roses, hoping her words would encourage it to bloom beautifully. Weeks passed, and Anna's rose began to show signs of improvement.Its leaves grew greener, and a few buds formed at the ends of its stems. (Anna悉心照料玫瑰花,它逐渐地绽放出生机和活力)
On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose. Mrs. Brown couldn't hide her shock. Anna carried it to the festival, where it stood out among the rows of roses.【高分句型As the prizes were announced, Anna's flower won the hearts of all. Mrs. Brown's mouth dropped open at the result and came to ask what her secret of planting flowers was.Anna mentioned it was being able to do something she enjoyed and trying her best. Shocked and proud, her mother said excitedly in a whisper "Proud of you and your dream."(Mrs.Brown很惊讶,最终Anna的玫瑰花获奖,安娜提到成功的秘诀是能够做自己喜欢的事情并尽自己最大的努力)
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变式提升训练
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(24-25高二下·湖南·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The cold weather forced the large red dog to bend into a tighter ball. Old Red lived outside Larry’s barbershop, sleeping on a small carpet. He had stayed there for a hot summer.
Old Red once had a friend—a black dog. But one night, his friend disappeared and Old Red was alone again. I always wished Old Red had his home. I would have adopted him in a minute. But we lived in a small apartment with our kids and we were unable to spare money for a dog’s medicine and food. I wondered who was feeding Old Red daily.
One day I found it out. “My husband even buys the most expensive food for Old Red,” Larry’s wife smiled. “He wants to bring him home, but his old mother living with us fears dogs extremely.” I then thanked Larry for his care. He brushed aside my thanks, insisting the dog meant nothing to him. During a snowstorm, Old Red disappeared. I asked Larry where he could be. “I’m glad he’s gone. He was a bother,” Larry said, busily cutting a customer’s hair. Later, his wife told me Larry was actually looking for the dog
On the third day, the dog reappeared. But I felt his nose: hot and dry. Bursting into the barbershop, I yelled, “Larry, Old Red is sick!” Larry replied, “I know. He won’t eat.”
I left the shop; for hours I tried to get someone to help Old Red, but in vain. My husband asked with pity, “Do you want me to go and look at that dog with you?” Quickly grabbing a blanket and antibiotics (抗生素) one of our children had been taking, we piled our kids in the car, driving to Larry’s shop. To my shock, Old Red was gone and couldn’t be found.
The next day I took the boys in for a haircut. Old Red was back, but looked worse than ever. After feeling his hot nose, I ran into the barbershop.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Looking at him, I said anxiously, “Larry, I’m afraid the dog is suffering too much.”
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“Then the vet gave him a shot. He’s improving now,” Larry’s wife added excitedly.
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Unit 4 Information Technology
同步写作课讲义-北师大版2019必修第二册
(
⭐话题解读⭐
)
个人简介
个人简介是简明扼要介绍自己情况的一种写作方式。写作时,要根据题目要求,介绍自己的个人信息,并说明自己的性格爱好。如果是为了申请加入某个社团、活动或者申请某个岗位,要说明自己的个人优势,语气应该诚恳而有礼貌。
(
⭐写作任务⭐
)
1.介绍写信的目的或者说明信息的来源。
2.简单介绍自己的个人情况,包括年龄、职业、爱好或者个人优势等。要有所选择地介绍自己,不要写成流水账式的作文。
3.表达自己的期望。如求职则表示希望早点收到回复。
(
⭐审题指导⭐
)
假如你是李华,你从网站上得知国际马拉松赛组委会将在你居住的城市招募志愿者,请写信介绍自己并申请成为一名志愿者。内容包括:
1.个人的基本情况;
2.个人的优势;
3.表达获选的愿望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:the Organizing Committee组委会 recruit vt.招募
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作步骤
◆ 步骤一:点明主题,表明写作目的
◆ 步骤二:介绍个人情况
◆ 步骤三:表明愿望
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⭐写作框架⭐
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⭐素材宝库⭐
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词汇积累
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(1) 单词
application n. 申请;
applicant/candidate n. 申请人;
position n. 职位;
competent adj. 足以胜任的,有能力的;
hardworking/diligent adj. 勤奋的;
enthusiastic adj. 热情的;
creative adj. 有创造力的;
intelligent adj. 聪明的
(2)短语
1.have a number of hobbies有很多业余爱好
2.be fond of reading喜欢看书
3.enjoy communicating/talking with others喜欢与其他人交流
4.be ready to help others乐于助人
5.be eager to make friends with others渴望与其他人交朋友
6.enjoy outdoor activities喜欢户外运动
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句型积累
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第一段:点明主题,表明写作目的
1.I am writing to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for this voluntary job to help the homeless.我写信推荐自己为这项志愿工作的合格人选,为无家可归者提供帮助。
2.Your advertised position of...interests me, so I'm writing to you for it.我对你们招聘……的广告很感兴趣,所以我给你写信应聘这一职位。
第二段:介绍个人的基本情况及优势
1.As a passionate and outgoing student, I get on well with my classmates.作为一名热情外向的学生,我和同学们相处得很好。
2.I'm kind by nature, easy-going and always ready to help others.我生性善良、随和、乐于助人。
3.Compared to other applicants, I know the animals better, which is the basis of being a spokesman.与其他申请人相比,我更了解动物,这是作为代言人的基础。
4.Having studied English for almost ten years, I am quite good at the language, especially at delivering English speeches and communicating with foreigners.学习了近十年的英语,我非常擅长这门语言,尤其是在发表英语演讲和与外国人交流方面。
5.Working as a volunteer guide during the Beijing Olympic Games has helped me gain the ability to handle emergency situations possible to occur.在北京奥运会期间担任志愿导游的经历帮助我获得了处理可能发生的紧急情况的能力。
第三段:表达获选的愿望
1.Any favorable consideration of my application would be appreciated.如果你优先考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。
2.If there is anything more you want to know about me, please feel free to contact me.如果你想了解更多关于我的信息,请随时联系我。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I learned the news from the website which says that the Organizing Committee of the International Marathon will recruit volunteers in our city. I hope I can have a chance to do something for it.
I am an 18-year-old student in senior high school. In my free time, I like watching English movies, so I can speak English fluently. Besides, I like sports and also like to read a variety of books about sports. In addition, I am outgoing and I am always ready to help others.
Hopefully, I can be chosen to be one of them.
Yours,
Li Hua
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⭐写作拓展⭐
)
(
变式提升训练
)
(1)
假定你是李华,正在悉尼参加暑期课程。你得知当地博物馆要举办中国
瓷器展并且正在招募志愿者。请根据以下要点写一封英文申请信。内容包括:
1.说明写信目的;
2.陈述个人优势和能做的事情;
3.表达希望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:瓷器 porcelain
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
I know from the Internet that your center is
looking for volunteers.I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.(写信目的)I have the following advantages. First of all, I'man exchange student from China, so Chinese ismy mother tongue.【高分句型一】 Second,I'm friendly and helpful, which allows me to get along well with others.【高分句型二】More importantly, I have worked as a volunteer before, so I know what is expected of a volunteer.(自身优势)
I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance. Please take my application into consideration.(希望获准)
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)
假如你是李华,某国际青少年文学俱乐部(Literature Club)正面向全球招收会员。请你根据以下要点提示给该俱乐部负责人写一封申请信。要点如下:
1.个人条件:英语好,阅读广泛,善于与人交流;
2.目的:结交朋友,了解西方文学,提高自己的英语水平。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from China. I'd like to be a member of the Literature Club. I do well in English and I'm very interested in Western culture, especially literature. I've read lots of great works written by famous writers, such as Treasure Island and Pride and Prejudice. I'm good at communicating and expressing myself.
By joining the club, I hope I can make friends with teenagers from all over the world so that we can share our thoughts on different books. I'd like to know more about Western literature and make great progress in learning English.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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(23-24高一上·福建·期末)假设你是李华,目前正在英国学习。你从网站上了解到某在线教育机构拟招聘一名中文老师,向该国学生讲授中国传统文化,如节日、京剧、剪纸艺术、武术等。作为一名中国留学生,你想应聘这个职位。请你用英语写一封申请信,并介绍个人情况及优势。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student aged 18.
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I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student aged 18. I’ve just read your advertisement for a Chinese teacher on the website and I have great interest in it. So I’m writing to apply for this position.
To start with, Chinese is my native tongue and I have a good command of English, which makes it helpful for me to communicate with students. What’s more, I’m friendly and patient, so I can get along well with students easily. What is more important is that I’m familiar with Chinese traditional culture, such as Chinese festivals, Peking Opera, paper cutting, kung fu and so on.
I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇申请信。要求考生以李华的身份,向某在线教育机构申请向英国学生讲授中国传统文化的职位。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:important→ significant
机会:chance → opportunity
兴趣:interest→ fascination
有益的:be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student aged 18.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua who is a Chinese student aged 18.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To start with, Chinese is my native tongue and I have a good command of English, which makes it helpful for me to communicate with students.(运用了which引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】What is more important is that I’m familiar with Chinese traditional culture, such as Chinese festivals, Peking Opera, paper cutting, kung fu and so on.(运用了what引导主语从句,和that引导表语从句)
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(24-25高二上·贵州黔西·期末)假定你是光明中学高二学生李华,得知黔西南州博物馆正在招募暑假期间做英文讲解的志愿者,向外国游客介绍贵州汉代历史文物。请你用英文给相关负责人写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.自我介绍以及陈述申请意愿;
2.个人优势;
3.希望批准。
参考词汇:黔西南州博物馆 Qianxi’ nan Prefecture Museum;招募 recruit;汉代历史文物 Han Dynasty artifacts
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
Learning you are recruiting volunteers, I am writing to apply for a volunteer position for Qianxi’ nan Prefecture Museum. I am enthusiastic about Guizhou Han Dynasty artifacts. I dream of spending a whole summer vacation in a museum. Besides, I am outgoing, responsible and have a good command of communication, which will help me to introduce the beautiful history to the customers. With a willing heart to help, I can surely do my duty.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给相关负责人写一封信,申请黔西南州博物馆暑假期间英文讲解志愿者,向外国游客介绍贵州汉代历史文物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知:learn→hear
另外:besides→moreover
考虑我的申请:consider my application→take my application into account
答复:reply→response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
同义句替换
原句:Learning you are recruiting volunteers, I am writing to apply for a volunteer position for Qianxi’ nan Prefecture Museum.
拓展句:Because I learn you are recruiting volunteers, I am writing to apply for a volunteer position for Qianxi’ nan Prefecture Museum.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I am outgoing, responsible and have a good command of communication, which will help me to introduce the beautiful history to the customers. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
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(23-24高一·全国·假期作业)假定你是李华,在意大利留学期间,你在网上看到一家公司招聘兼职销售员,请你给该公司负责人Kelly写一封邮件,申请这个职位。
内容包括:1.写信目的;2.你的条件;3.表示愿望。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kelly,
I am writing in response to the job advertisement on your website for the position of salesperson.
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I think I’m qualified for this job. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Kelly,
I am writing in response to the job advertisement on your website for the position of salesperson.
I am a business student and have had a three-month sales experience. During this time, I developed strong customer service skills and learned how to effectively communicate with customers to understand their needs and recommend products. Besides, I have good communication skills and I can speak Italian, English and Chinese so that I can deal with various potential customers. At last, I am a quick learner and am always eager to learn new skills. I am confident that I can quickly adapt to your company’s policies and procedures and provide excellent service to your customers.
I think I’m qualified for this job. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。就“在意大利留学期间,你在网上看到一家公司招聘兼职销售员”一事,要求考生给该公司负责人Kelly写一封邮件,申请这个职位。
【详解】1.词汇积累
了解:understand→have an understanding of
此外:besides→what’s more
各种各样的:various→a variety of
卓越的:excellent→extraordinary
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:At last, I am a quick learner and am always eager to learn new skills.
拓展句:At last, I am a quick learner, who is always eager to learn new skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I have good communication skills and I can speak Italian, English and Chinese so that I can deal with various potential customers. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】I am confident that I can quickly adapt to your company’s policies and procedures and provide excellent service to your customers. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
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(23-24高一下·福建·期中)假定你是李华,作为交换生在英国交流学习。你听说学校流行音乐俱乐部正在招收新成员,想加入该俱乐部。请用英文给负责俱乐部的学生John写一封申请信,要点如下:
(1)简要介绍自己;
(2)加入俱乐部的目的。
注意:
(1)词数 80 左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 流行音乐俱乐部 pop music club
Dear John,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student. Hearing pop music club is admitting new members, I am writing to join it.
Firstly, let me introduce myself. As for me, I am outgoing and have many interests, including music. I am fond of singing pop songs and people tell me my voice sounds beautiful. In addition, I am totally aware of team spirit and understand how to get along with others. I want to improve my oral English and share music with the local students by joining the club. Last but not least, I firmly believe that I can make many friends here.
If you consider I’m qualified for your club, please contact me at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于“学校流行音乐俱乐部正在招收新成员,你想加入该俱乐部”这一情况,用英文给负责俱乐部的学生John 写一封申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢:be fond of → be keen on
此外:In addition → What’s more
意识到:be aware of → be conscious of
提高,增强:improve → enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As for me, I am outgoing and have many interests, including music.
拓展句:As for me, I am outgoing and have many interests, which include music.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last but not least, I firmly believe that I can make many friends here. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If you consider I’m qualified for your club, please contact me at your earliest convenience. (运用了If引导的条件状语从句和省略that引导的宾语从句)
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(23-24高二上·浙江·阶段练习)你校将于2024年5月1日至5月4日在学校举行运动会,为了确保运动会圆满举办,你校发起志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华,也希望成为其中一员,请用英文写一封申请信。
内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 自身优势。
参考词汇:运动会sports meeting
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer of the sports meeting which will be held from May 1 to May 4, 2024. I have several advantages.
Above all, I once worked as a volunteer in a musical festival, which is to say I have some valuable experiences. Second, I have enough enthusiasm to assure that the school sports meeting will be held successfully.
I am convinced that I am the suitable person for this position and if I am selected, I will do my best to complete the tasks.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将于2024年5月1日至5月4日在学校举行运动会,为了确保运动会圆满举办,学校发起志愿者招募活动,要求考生写一封英文申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→launch
优点:advantage→strength
首先:above all→ first of all
完成:complete→finish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: I have several advantages.
拓展句: I have several advantages which are listed below.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer of the sports meeting which will be held from May 1 to May 4, 2024. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Second, I have enough enthusiasm to assure that the school sports meeting will be held successfully.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及一般将来时的被动语态)
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Secret of Flowers
[2024广东省四校期末联考]Anna worked with her mother in their vegetable garden every day. This was how they made their living. Anna helped her mother tend the garden, so the vegetables would be healthy and ready for the market. Anna often pretended the plants she tended were beautiful roses, like Mrs. Brown's prize flowers.
The only person in the village who made money by selling flowers was Mrs. Brown. She grew roses and sold them to flower shops in the city. Every year she joined the City Rose Festival. People thought that Mrs. Brown used magic to grow her roses. How else could she win first prize twenty years in a row?
Anna loved to tend flowers. Moreover, she often dreamed about growing her own roses and winning first prize in the festival. With the prize money, she would also be able to lighten the burden of her family. However, roses were too expensive for her to start.
One day, Anna visited Mrs. Brown to see her flowers. Mrs. Brown was whispering to her roses when Anna arrived. "Spying on me again!" Mrs. Brown frowned.
"I only come to see your flowers, Mrs. Brown," Anna took a deep breath and said. "I wish I could grow beautiful roses and win a prize at the festival like you."
"I have experience passed down for generations," Mrs. Brown laughed. "Stick to vegetables, child. Leave flowers to those who know the secret of flowers."
Mrs. Brown returned to her gardening, ignoring the sad look on Anna's face. Then she pulled up a dried-up rose, and threw it over the fence. "A plant in bad condition. Unworthy of my time," Mrs. Brown mumbled(嘟哝).
Anna smiled, as she had an idea. She bowed farewell to Mrs. Brown and went out of the garden gate. Mrs. Brown was busy minding her prize roses. Anna quickly bent over and grabbed the abandoned rose before rushing home. She remembered a quiet spot behind her cottage. It was the perfect place for her little rose to grow. Now, she had a chance for the festival.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Paragraph 1:
Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully.
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On the morning of the festival, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw Anna's beautiful rose.
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【解题导语】Anna和妈妈种蔬菜谋生,Anna喜欢花,梦想能够种植自己的玫瑰并在玫瑰节中获得一等奖,这样也能减轻家里的负担。然而,她买不起玫瑰,村里唯一以卖花谋生的是Brown女士,她养的玫瑰连续20年获得玫瑰节的一等奖。有一天,Anna把Brown女士扔掉的一株玫瑰拿回家种植,因此也有了参加玫瑰节的机会……
【写作指导】
续写线索
Anna精心照顾玫瑰—玫瑰恢复生机—Anna参加玫瑰节—Anna获奖—Brown女士询问养花秘诀—Anna的母亲感到骄傲
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Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully. She nurtured it every day: watering it just right and making sure that it received plenty of sunlight.【高分句型一】 She talked to it softly, much like Mrs. Brown did with her roses, hoping her words would encourage it to bloom beautifully. Weeks passed, and Anna's rose began to show signs of improvement.Its leaves grew greener, and a few buds formed at the ends of its stems. (Anna悉心照料玫瑰花,它逐渐地绽放出生机和活力)
On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose. Mrs. Brown couldn't hide her shock. Anna carried it to the festival, where it stood out among the rows of roses.【高分句型As the prizes were announced, Anna's flower won the hearts of all. Mrs. Brown's mouth dropped open at the result and came to ask what her secret of planting flowers was.Anna mentioned it was being able to do something she enjoyed and trying her best. Shocked and proud, her mother said excitedly in a whisper "Proud of you and your dream."(Mrs.Brown很惊讶,最终Anna的玫瑰花获奖,安娜提到成功的秘诀是能够做自己喜欢的事情并尽自己最大的努力)
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(24-25高二下·湖南·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The cold weather forced the large red dog to bend into a tighter ball. Old Red lived outside Larry’s barbershop, sleeping on a small carpet. He had stayed there for a hot summer.
Old Red once had a friend—a black dog. But one night, his friend disappeared and Old Red was alone again. I always wished Old Red had his home. I would have adopted him in a minute. But we lived in a small apartment with our kids and we were unable to spare money for a dog’s medicine and food. I wondered who was feeding Old Red daily.
One day I found it out. “My husband even buys the most expensive food for Old Red,” Larry’s wife smiled. “He wants to bring him home, but his old mother living with us fears dogs extremely.” I then thanked Larry for his care. He brushed aside my thanks, insisting the dog meant nothing to him. During a snowstorm, Old Red disappeared. I asked Larry where he could be. “I’m glad he’s gone. He was a bother,” Larry said, busily cutting a customer’s hair. Later, his wife told me Larry was actually looking for the dog
On the third day, the dog reappeared. But I felt his nose: hot and dry. Bursting into the barbershop, I yelled, “Larry, Old Red is sick!” Larry replied, “I know. He won’t eat.”
I left the shop; for hours I tried to get someone to help Old Red, but in vain. My husband asked with pity, “Do you want me to go and look at that dog with you?” Quickly grabbing a blanket and antibiotics (抗生素) one of our children had been taking, we piled our kids in the car, driving to Larry’s shop. To my shock, Old Red was gone and couldn’t be found.
The next day I took the boys in for a haircut. Old Red was back, but looked worse than ever. After feeling his hot nose, I ran into the barbershop.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Looking at him, I said anxiously, “Larry, I’m afraid the dog is suffering too much.”
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“Then the vet gave him a shot. He’s improving now,” Larry’s wife added excitedly.
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【答案】
Looking at him, I said anxiously, “Larry. I’m afraid the dog is suffering too much.” The words slipped out of my mouth with a mix of frustration and desperation. Larry replied with inappropriate calmness, “I know, I haven’t seen him move all morning.” I couldn’t understand how Larry, who had cared for the dog all this time, could remain so indifferent to his fate. I then left the shop with a heavy heart. Driving home, my kids kept asking me whether Old Red would be okay. I nodded sympathetically, and we all prayed for him. One day later Larry’s wife called, “Guess what?” “After you left that day, Larry found a vet online,” she said and paused.
“Then the vet gave him a shot. He’s improving now.” Larry’s wife added excitedly. On hearing these words, I sighed with relief. I thanked her for the good news and joked, “Your husband is really sharp-tongued but tender-hearted.” With Larry’s continual help, Old Red’s tail wagged weakly again. Seeing Larry kneel beside the dog, gently offering him food, his mother, though initially fearful, was touched and softened. It was love that broke barriers, proving that compassion could melt even the coldest fears. From that day on, Old Red had not only just a carpet by the shop, but a home where he belonged—a testament to the power of kindness to transform lives.
【导语】本文以Old Red这只流浪狗为线索展开,讲述了理发店老板Larry表面冷漠实则关心狗狗,最终在大家帮助下让Old Red恢复健康并获得新家的温暖故事。通过人物对话和细节描写展现了人性中的善良与温情。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句“我跑进理发店。我看着他,焦急地说:‘Larry,我担心这只狗太痛苦了。’”可知,第一段描写了“我”发现Old Red病情严重后与Larry的焦急对话,以及后续发展。通过Larry表面冷静实则暗中联系兽医的反差,展现人物性格。
②由第二段首句“‘然后兽医给它打了一针。他现在好多了。’Larry的妻子兴奋地补充道。”可知,第二段描写了狗狗康复过程和Larry一家态度转变,最终Old Red获得新家的圆满结局。
2. 续写线索: 发现病情 → 焦急求助 → 暗中救治 → 康复过程 → 态度转变 → 获得新家
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①关心照顾:care for/take care of/show concern for
②态度转变:soften/change attitude/melt one’s fear
情绪类
①焦急:anxiously/with desperation/frustration
②欣慰:sigh with relief/feel relieved
③感动:be touched/be moved
【点睛】【高分句型1】I couldn’t understand how Larry, who had cared for the dog all this time, could remain so indifferent to his fate. (关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It was love that broke barriers, proving that compassion could melt even the coldest fears.(强调句型以及现在分词作状语)
【高分句型3】From that day on, Old Red had not only just a carpet by the shop, but a home where he belonged—a testament to the power of kindness to transform lives. (not only...but also...并列结构以及where引导的定语从句)
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