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Make it happen!
writing
教学目标:
1.分析文章结构,学习运用举例论证的写作手法阐述观点;模仿文章结构,运用 to - infinitive 和 - ing 作宾语的语法知识,写一篇关于某种品质对成功重要性的短文。
2.借助思维导图和写作框架,整理写作思路,提高写作的逻辑性和条理性。
重点、难点
重点:熟练运用 to - infinitive 和 - ing 作宾语的语法结构进行写作。
难点:在写作中灵活运用所学知识,使文章内容丰富、论证有力,避免逻辑混乱和语法错误。
教学过程
1、 激趣导入:观看一个科技改变生活的小短片。
2、 合作探究:小组共同梳理文章结构,大概梳理文章脉络。
3、 教学过程
结构分析:再次展示文章结构,详细讲解每个部分的写作要点:
· 提出观点:在文章开头明确提出要论述的观点,简洁明了,吸引读者注意力。
· 举例论证:选择具体、典型的事例来支撑观点,描述事例时要突出与观点相关的内容,如在论述好奇心时,要强调好奇心如何引发行动和带来成果。
· 总结升华:在文章结尾总结观点,升华主题,可适当发表自己的感悟或对读者的建议。
语法运用:以文章中的句子为例,如 “He did lots of research to try to understand it. His curiosity led him to invent the lightning rod.”,讲解 to - infinitive 和 - ing 作宾语在写作中的应用,强调正确使用语法结构可以使文章表达更准确、丰富。让学生用这两种语法结构进行简单的句子改写练习,如将 “He wanted to know more about space. He spent a lot of time reading books.” 改写成 “He was curious about space and enjoyed spending a lot of time reading books.”
1. 写作思路拓展:引导学生思考除了好奇心,还有哪些品质对成功很重要,如坚持(perseverance)、勇敢(bravery)、创新(creativity)等。让学生选择一个品质,通过小组讨论的方式,收集相关事例,为写作做准备。
练习反馈:Invention and life
There are famous inventions like the TVs, computers and bicycles. Among them, I think the most useful for me is the bicycle.①Bicycles are not only cheap, but also very environmentally friendly. In addition, riding a bike is great for our health. ②It keeps us active and makes us strong. Moreover, cycling can be fun. I often ride with my friends, and we enjoy chatting and laughing together. ③In my opinion, bicycles will become more popular in the future. ④As more people care about their health and the environment, the demand for bikes will grow. Besides, our government is encouraging everyone to drive less and choose greener transportation methods. ⑤We all look forward to enjoying clear skies and fresh air in the future.⑥Bicycles are truly a wonderful invention that benefits both people and the planet.
五、过关达标:写一篇关于发明和科学家的作文。
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