Module 12 模块写作指导九年级上册-【众相原创】2025-2026学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(外研版 广西专版)

2025秋广西 英 语 1 九年级上册 Module 12 Save our world 模块写作指导 2 话题概述 本模块围绕“拯救我们的地球”这一话题展开，介绍了保护环 境的措施。该话题常见写作角度有： 1.介绍环境污染的现状及如何保护环境：文体是说明文，时态以 一般现在时为主。 2.介绍参与保护环境的活动的经历：文体为记叙文，时态以一般 过去时为主。 分层讲练册 典例探究 节约资源，保护环境，从身边的小事做起。为了号召同学们 参与环保行动，你校英语角将组织一次题为“Going green starts with small things”的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内 容包括： 1.环保的具体方法； 2.你的感受。 分层讲练册 Going green starts with small things As we live on the Earth, it's our duty to protect the environment. ______________________ 分层讲练册 四步法写作 ◆ 第一步：思路剖析 （一）仔细审题 ①文体：介绍保护环境的方法，本文是一篇________。 ②人称：介绍保护环境的方法，以__________为主。 ③时态：介绍保护环境的方法，以____________为主。 说明文 第一人称 一般现在时 分层讲练册 （二）篇章布局 Beginning：引入主题——保护环境。 Body：具体阐述保护环境的方法：第一，骑自行车或步行去学 校；其次，节约用电和水；最后，逛街时不使用塑料袋。 Ending：表达自己的看法。 分层讲练册 ◆ 第二步：推敲词汇 1.___________ 骑自行车 ride a bike 2.________ 关掉 turn off 3.________________________ 节约电和水 save electricity and water 4.___________ 刷牙 brush teeth 5.________________ 最后但同样重要的是 last but not least 6._______________ 使用塑料袋 use plastic bags 7.____________ 购物 go shopping 8._______________ 对……有害 be harmful to… 分层讲练册 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 8 ◆ 第三步：连词成句 1.我们最好骑车或步行去学校，因为这是一种不会污染空气的绿 色方法。（had better do sth.; which引导定语从句） ________________________________________________________ _______________________________ We'd better ride a bike or walk to school because it's a green way which doesn't pollute the air. 2.对我们来说，节约水和电是有必要的。（It's +adj.+for sb. to do sth.） _____________________________________________ It's necessary for us to save electricity and water. 分层讲练册 1 2 3 9 3.如果我们坚持这样做，我相信环境会变得越来越好。 （if引导条件状语从句） _________________________________________________________ If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better. 分层讲练册 1 2 3 10 ◆ 第四步：连句成篇 初阶范文 高阶范文 Going green starts with small things As we live on the Earth, it's our duty to protect the environment.. .To go green, we should start with small things around us. Going green starts with small things As we live on the Earth, it's our duty to protect the environment. To go green, we should start with small things around us. 分层讲练册 11 初阶范文 高阶范文 First, we'd better ride a bike or walk to school because it's a green way. What's more, we should save electricity and water in daily life. We should turn off the light when going out and turn off the ①First, we'd better ride a bike or walk to school because it's a green way which doesn't pollute the air. ②What's more, it's necessary for us to save electricity and water. We should turn off the light when going out. 续表 分层讲练册 12 初阶范文 高阶范文 tap when brushing teeth. Finally, don't use plastic bags when you go shopping because plastic is harmful to the environment. Turning off the tap when brushing teeth can save a lot of water. Last but not least, don't use plastic bags when you go shopping because plastic is harmful to the environment. 续表 分层讲练册 13 初阶范文 高阶范文 It's important for us to protect the environment. If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better. ③How important it is for us to protect the environment! If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better. 续表 分层讲练册 14 初阶范文 高阶范文 句式升格：①句中which引导定语从句，修饰先行词way;②句中 使用It's +adj.+for sb. to do sth.句型；③句中使用感叹句，起 强调作用。 续表 分层讲练册 实战演练 假如你是李华，上周你参加了以“World Environment Day” 为主题的实践活动，请给你的英国笔友John写一封信，分享此次 活动。内容包括： 1.活动的目的； 2.活动的内容（种树、听讲座、制作海报……）； 3.你的感受及计划。 分层讲练册 16 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：awareness（n. 意识）, expert（n. 专家）, inspired（adj. 有灵感的） 分层讲练册 17 Dear John, How is everything going? I am writing to tell you about our practice week, with the theme “World Environment Day”. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ The activity's aim is to raise environmental protection awareness. We took part in many kinds of activities. We planted trees in the morning. What's more, we listened to a speech given by an expert. At last, we made a poster to call on people to protect the environment. It was a meaningful day and made me realize the importance of caring for our planet. 分层讲练册 18 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua After the activity, I felt very inspired. I plan to recycle more and reduce waste in my daily life. I also want to encourage my friends and family to join me in these efforts. 分层讲练册 19 20 $$