Module 9 模块写作指导九年级上册-【众相原创】2025-2026学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(外研版 广西专版)
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内容正文:
2025秋广西
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九年级上册
Module 9 Great inventions
模块写作指导
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话题概述
本模块围绕“伟大的发明”这一话题展开,介绍了历史及生活
中一些重要的发明。该话题常见写作角度有:
1.介绍一项发明:文体为说明文,介绍发明过程用一般过去时;
介绍发明概况用一般现在时。
2.介绍自己想发明的东西、用途及原因:文体为说明文,时态以
一般现在时为主。
3.介绍自己对某一发明的观点或看法:文体为议论文,时态用一
般现在时。
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典例探究
科技创新,就像撬动地球的杠杆,总能创造出令人意想不到
的奇迹。为鼓励青少年探索,你校英语报正发起“I want to
invent __________”为题的征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文投
稿。内容包括:
1.你想发明的物品;
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2.你想发明这件物品的原因;
3.这件物品的作用。
I want to invent __________
As we know, great inventions have brought great changes
to our life, but we still need creative ideas to make our world
better. _________________________________________________
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四步法写作
◆ 第一步:思路剖析
(一)仔细审题
①文体:介绍自己的一项发明,本文是一篇________。
②人称:介绍自己的一项发明,以__________为主;表达自己对
这项发明的看法,可用__________。
③时态:介绍自己的一项发明,以____________为主。
说明文
第三人称
第一人称
一般现在时
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(二)篇章布局
Beginning:引入主题——介绍自己的一项发明。
Body:介绍自己发明这件物品的原因、这项发明的特别之处及
这项发明的用途。
Ending:表达自己对这项发明的看法。
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◆ 第二步:推敲词汇
1.___________________ 梦想做某事
dream of doing sth.
2._____________ 公共场所
public places
3._________ 看起来像
look like
4._______________ 从……中获得能源
get energy from
5.______________ 收集垃圾
collect rubbish
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9.______________________ 扔垃圾
throw away the rubbish
6.________________ 与此同时
7._____________ 一……就……
as soon as…
8._________ 对……说
speak to
at the same time
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◆ 第三步:连词成句
1.它看起来像是街上常见的那种,所以价格不太昂贵。
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It looks like a common one on the street, so it doesn't cost too much.
2.它可以从太阳和风中获得能源。
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It can get energy from the sun and wind.
3.只要有人随地乱扔垃圾,它就会立刻清理干净。
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As soon as people litter around, it will clean it up at once.
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◆ 第四步:连句成篇
初阶范文 高阶范文
I want to invent a smart
box
As we know, great
inventions have brought great
changes to our life, but we
still need creative ideas to
make our world better.. .I
have always dreamed of
inventing a smart box. I want to invent a smart box
As we know, great
inventions have brought great
changes to our life, but we still
need creative ideas to make our
world better.. .I have always
dreamed of inventing a smart box.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Nowadays, it's a little
difficult to keep public
places clean and tidy. The
smart box can help solve
this problem. It looks like a
common one on the street,
so it doesn't cost too much.
And it can get energy from ①Nowadays, how to keep
public places clean and tidy is
still a problem. The smart box
can help solve this problem. It
looks like a common one on the
street, so it doesn't cost too
much. And it can get energy
from the sun and wind. It can
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the sun and wind. It can
collect rubbish on its own.
And it will clean litter up
quickly. At the same time,
the smart box can speak to
the one who is throwing
away the rubbish—No
Littering. collect rubbish on its own. ②As
soon as people litter around, it
will clean it up at once. At the
same time, the smart box can
speak to the one who is
throwing away the rubbish—No
Littering.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
I believe my invention
can work well to protect the
environment. My invention can work
well. ③Don't you think so?
句式升格:①句中使用疑问词+动词不定式作主语升格句子;②
句中用as soon as引导时间状语从句;③句中使用反问句,引发
读者思考和共鸣。
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实战演练
科技改变生活,发明无处不在。你校英文报正以“Invention
and life”为题进行征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.介绍一项你觉得最有用的发明(外形、功能、用途……);
2.它如何影响你的学习和生活;
3.你对这项发明的预期。
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注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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Invention and life
Inventions have changed our lives, and among them, I
think ___________________________________________________
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the smartphone is the most useful one. It allows us to make phone calls, search for information, take photos and even shop online.
For me, the smartphone has greatly influenced my life. For
example, I use it to check online dictionaries to learn English
more efficiently. When I meet problems in math, I watch
videos or search for answers online. Also, I use apps to manage
my study schedule and organize tasks.
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In the future, I expect that smartphones will become
smarter and more modern. I believe smartphones will make life
even more convenient and enjoyable.
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