Module 4 模块写作指导九年级上册-【众相原创】2025-2026学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(外研版 广西专版)

2025秋广西 英 语 1 九年级上册 Module 4 Home alone 模块写作指导 2 话题概述 本模块以“独自在家”这一话题展开，介绍了一次独自在家的 经历及电影《小鬼当家》的剧情。该话题常见写作角度有： 1.独自在家的经历及感受：文体为记叙文，记叙在家的经历，用 一般过去时；表达自己的感受，可用一般现在时。 2.针对独自在家做出计划并表达希望：文体为说明文，介绍计划 内容用一般将来时；表达希望用一般现在时或一般将来时。 分层讲练册 典例探究 假如你的朋友们在即将到来的暑假将要独自一人待在家里， 请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍居家需要注 意的事项，为他们提供一些合理的建议。内容包括： 1.独自在家时安全的重要性； 2.怎样保持安全（充足睡眠、吃新鲜水果和蔬菜、坚持锻 炼……）； 3.你的感受。 On holidays many children have to stay at home alone. ________________________________________________________ 分层讲练册 四步法写作 ◆ 第一步：思路剖析 （一）仔细审题 ①文体：介绍独自待在家里的注意事项，本文是一篇________。 ②人称：介绍独自待在家里的注意事项，以__________为主。 ③时态：介绍独自待在家里的注意事项，以____________为主。 说明文 第二人称 一般现在时 分层讲练册 （二）篇章布局 Beginning：引入主题——独自在家时保持安全的重要性。 Body：具体介绍独自待在家里的注意事项：第一，有充足的睡 眠；第二，吃新鲜的水果和蔬菜；第三，每天锻炼，保持健康； 最后，外出时锁好门窗。 Ending：表达自己的感受。 分层讲练册 ◆ 第二步：推敲词汇 1._________________ 如何保持安全 how to keep safe 2.____________ 熬夜 stay up late 3.__________________ 有足够的睡眠 have enough sleep 4._____________________ 对我们的健康有好处 be good for our health 5._________________ 锻炼 do some exercise 6.____________ 保持健康 keep healthy 7.____________ 和……待在一起 stay with… 分层讲练册 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 7 8.________________________________ 让我们自己的生活安全 和幸福 make our own life safe and happy 分层讲练册 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ◆ 第三步：连词成句 1.你最好不要熬夜。（had better not do sth.） ___________________________ You'd better not stay up late. 2.确保吃大量的水果和蔬菜。（make sure to do sth.） ________________________________________________ Make sure to eat plenty of fresh fruit and vegetables. 3.每天锻炼保持健康是一个好主意。（It's a good idea to do st h.） ________________________________________________________ ____ It's a good idea to do some exercise every day to keep healthy. 分层讲练册 1 2 3 4 9 4.当你进门的时候要关门，出去的时候要锁好门。（when引导时 间状语从句） ________________________________________________________ Shut the door when you are in and lock it when you go out. 分层讲练册 1 2 3 4 ◆ 第四步：连句成篇 初阶范文 高阶范文 On holidays many children have to stay at home alone. We should know how to keep safe. Here are some of my ideas. First, don't stay up late. Have enough sleep. Second, you should eat plenty of On holidays many children have to stay at home alone. ①It's important to know how to keep safe. Here are some of my ideas. First, ②you'd better not stay up late. Have enough sleep. Second, ③make sure to eat 分层讲练册 11 初阶范文 高阶范文 fresh fruit and vegetables. They are good for our health. Third, do some exercise every day to keep healthy. Finally, be careful with the door. Shut it when you are in and lock it when you go out. plenty of fresh fruit and vegetables. They are good for our health. Third, ④it's a good idea to do some exercise every day to keep healthy. Last but not least, be careful with the door. Shut it when you are in and lock it when you go out. 续表 分层讲练册 12 初阶范文 高阶范文 Although we can't expect our parents to stay with us all the time, we can try our best to make our own life safe and happy. Although we can't expect our parents to stay with us all the time, we can try our best to make our own life safe and happy. 续表 分层讲练册 13 初阶范文 高阶范文 句式升格：①句中使用了It's+adj.+to do sth.句型；②句中使用 了You'd better not do sth.句型; ③句中使用了make sure to do sth; ④句中使用了It's a good idea to do sth.句型。 续表 分层讲练册 14 实战演练 每一次经历都是学习的体验、成长的积淀。近期你校英语报 Have Your Say栏目要举办以“Being home alone”为主题的征文 活动。请你写一篇英语短文，向校英语报投稿。内容包括： 1.介绍你独自在家的一次经历； 2.谈谈你的感受。 分层讲练册 15 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 分层讲练册 16 Being home alone I'd like to share one of my experiences at home alone with you today. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Last month my parents were on business for three days. During these three days I got up on time and went to school by bus. After school I did my homework first, and then I tried to cook. Although I burned my food, I still liked it. Also, I cleaned up the house. When my parents came back, they were so proud of me that I felt very happy! 分层讲练册 17 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ In my opinion, we should be careful with the safety at home. It is important to ensure the safety by locking the door and windows, and not opening the door to strangers. This experience taught me independence and responsibility. 分层讲练册 18 19 $$