Module 3 模块写作指导九年级上册-【众相原创】2025-2026学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(外研版 广西专版)

2025秋广西 英 语 1 九年级上册 Module 3 Heroes 模块写作指导 2 话题概述 本模块以“英雄”这一话题展开，主要介绍了在各行各业做出 突出贡献的英雄。该话题的命题角度为介绍自己心目中的英雄及 他们对自己的影响，介绍英雄时常介绍他们的成长经历及英雄事 迹，常用一般过去时或一般现在时。介绍他们对自己的影响，常 用一般现在时或现在完成时。 分层讲练册 典例探究 一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄，一个有前途的国家不能没 有先锋。现你校正在开展以 “The hero in my heart”为题的征文 活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.你心目中的英雄是谁； 2.你为什么崇拜他/她； 3.你打算怎样做，从而成为一个像他/她一样的人。 分层讲练册 参考词汇：high-yield hybrid rice（高产杂交水稻）, responsibility（n. 责任感） The hero in my heart Everyone has a hero in their hearts. ___________________ ________________________________________________________ 分层讲练册 四步法写作 ◆ 第一步：思路剖析 （一）仔细审题 ①文体：介绍自己心目中的英雄，本文是一篇________。 ②人称：介绍自己心目中的英雄，主要以__________为主。 ③时态：介绍自己心目中的英雄的事迹，以____________为主； 介绍自己的计划，可用____________。 说明文 第三人称 一般过去时 一般将来时 分层讲练册 （二）篇章布局 Beginning：引入主题——介绍自己心目中的英雄。 Body：详细介绍原因及他/她对自己的影响。 Ending：阐明自己未来要如何成为他/她那样的人。 分层讲练册 ◆ 第二步：推敲词汇 1._____________________________ 作为……而出名 be known/famous/well-known as 2.___________________________ 为……做出巨大贡献 make great contributions to… 3.________________________ 花费……做某事 spend…（in）doing sth. 4._________________________ 想成为一个更好的人 want to be a better person 5.____________________________________ 培养一种强烈的责 任感 develop a strong sense of responsibility 分层讲练册 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 8 8._________________ 有影响；起作用 make a difference 6._____________________尽我最大努力去做某事 try my best to do sth. 7._____________________ 以……为榜样 follow the example of 分层讲练册 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ◆ 第三步：连词成句 1.他一生都在努力工作，致力于开发高产杂交水稻。 ________________________________________________________ ___________ He spent his whole life working hard to develop high-yield hybrid rice. 2.它已经帮助解决了数百万人的粮食问题。 ______________________________________________________ It has helped solve the food problem for millions of people. 3.我会培养一种强烈的责任感，尽自己最大的努力为社会做贡献。 ________________________________________________________ __________________________________ I will develop a strong sense of responsibility， and try my best to make contributions to society. 分层讲练册 1 2 3 10 ◆ 第四步：连句成篇 初阶范文 高阶范文 The hero in my heart Everyone has a hero in their hearts. My hero is Yuan Longping. He is known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. The hero in my heart Everyone has a hero in their hearts. My hero is Yuan Longping, who is known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. 分层讲练册 11 初阶范文 高阶范文 He has made great contributions to the world. He spent his whole life working hard to develop high-yield hybrid rice. And it has helped solve the food problem for millions of people. ①I admire him because he has made great contributions to the world. He spent his whole life working hard to develop high-yield hybrid rice. And it has helped solve the food problem for millions of people. 续表 分层讲练册 12 初阶范文 高阶范文 I want to be a person like him, so I will study hard and get more knowledge. I will develop a strong sense of responsibility, and make contributions to society. I believe that we can ②To become a person like him, I will study hard to get more knowledge. I will develop a strong sense of responsibility, and try my best to make contributions to society. ③I believe that as long as we 续表 分层讲练册 13 初阶范文 高阶范文 do something for the world by following the examples of our heroes and working hard. follow the examples of our heroes and work hard, we can all make a difference in the world. 句式升格：①句中because引导原因状语从句；②句中to do作目 的状语；③句中as long as引导条件状语从句; 使用make a difference短语。 续表 分层讲练册 14 实战演练 在你的生活中，一定有榜样影响着你。他们或许是科学家， 或许是你身边的亲人、老师、朋友。某英文网站正在开展以“My role model”为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容 包括： 1.你的榜样是谁； 2.他/她所做的哪件或哪些事影响了你； 3.你从他/她身上学到了什么。 分层讲练册 15 注意: 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 分层讲练册 16 My role model Everyone has a role model. My role model is _______________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ my friend Tom. He is very kind and caring. At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams. However, I don't do well in studying, so he always helps me with my study. With Tom's help, I make great progress and I thank him very much. 分层讲练册 17 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ And I hope I will learn from Tom to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others. I think I am lucky to have such a good friend. From now on, I will do my best to study better and better. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 分层讲练册 19 $$