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2025秋广西
英 语
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九年级上册
Module 1 Wonders of the world
模块写作指导
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话题概述
本模块围绕“自然和旅游”这一话题展开,向我们展示了一些世界
奇观。本模块的作文类型以“自然与旅行”为话题,体裁丰富、灵
活多变。该话题常见写作角度有:
1.描述旅游经历或介绍旅游计划和安排等,体裁以记叙文为主。
通常用一般过去时描写旅游经历,介绍旅行的时间、地点、交通
工具、人物活动及感受等;而介绍旅游计划与安排时用一般将来
时。人称多用第一人称。
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2.介绍某个风景名胜或某地的自然风光,体裁以说明文为主。通常
用一般现在时描写,需要正确描述其地理位置、文化、风土人情等。
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典例探究
古人云:读万卷书不如行万里路。旅游可以帮助我们开拓视
野,丰富自己的人生阅历。你校英文报正在组织以“An
unforgettable trip”为题的征文活动,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1.你去了什么地方;
2.你在旅途中的所见所闻;
3.你对这次旅行的感受或收获。
An unforgettable trip
I have been to many places.__________________________
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四步法写作
◆ 第一步:思路剖析
(一)仔细审题
①文体:讲述自己的一次旅行经历,本文是一篇________。
②人称:讲述自己的一次旅行经历,以__________为主。
③时态:讲述自己的一次旅行经历,以____________为主;表达
自己的感受或收获,可用____________。
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
现在完成时
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(二)篇章布局
Beginning:引入主题——讲述自己的一次旅行经历。
Body:讲述自己在旅行中的所见所闻。首先,参观了故宫;其
次,爬了长城。
Ending:表达自己的感受或收获。
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◆ 第二步:推敲词汇
1.______________ 去某地的旅行
the trip to sp.
2._________________ 和某人去某地
go to sp. with sb.
3._________________________ 了解中国历史
learn about Chinese history
4.____________________ 爬长城
climb the Great Wall
5.__________________ 到达……的顶部
reach the top of…
6.___________________ 禁不住做某事
can't help doing sth.
7.___________ 拍照片
take photos
8._____________________ 学到很多知识
learn much knowledge
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◆ 第三步:连词成句
1.景色是如此的美丽以至于我禁不住拍了照片。(so… that…)
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The sights were so beautiful that I couldn't help taking photos.
2.在那里我们跟着导游了解了更多的中国历史。
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There we followed the guide and learned more about Chinese history.
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3.读万卷书,不如行万里路。(it's better to do sth. than to do
sth.)
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It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.
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◆ 第四步:连句成篇
初阶范文 高阶范文
An unforgettable trip
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And the trip to
Beijing is unforgettable.
Last summer, I went
to Beijing with my
parents. We went there by
plane. An unforgettable trip
I have been to many places.
And the trip to Beijing is the most
unforgettable.
Last summer, I went to
Beijing with my parents. We went
there by plane.
I have been to many places.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
First, we visited the Palace Museum. We followed a guide and learned more about Chinese history. What's more, we climbed the Great Wall. We felt tired, but finally we reached the top of it. The First, we visited the Palace
Museum. ①There we were led by
a guide and learned more about
Chinese history. What's more, we
climbed the Great Wall. Tired but
excited, we reached the top of it.
②The sights were so beautiful that I couldn't help taking photos.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
sights were very beautiful.
So I took lots of photos.
From this trip, I have
learned much knowledge
that I can't learn from
textbooks. I won't forget
it. ③As an old saying goes,
“It's better to travel ten thousand
miles than to read ten thousand
books.” From this trip, I have
learned much knowledge that I
can't learn from textbooks. I won't
forget it.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
句式升格:①句中使用被动语态;②句使用so… that…引导的
结果状语从句;使用can't help doing sth.短语;③句引用了谚
语。
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实战演练
假如你是李华。暑假即将来临,你打算和父母一起去旅游。
请根据下列提示信息给你的笔友Amy写一封电子邮件,和她分享
你的旅游计划。内容包括:
1.旅游的目的地及出行方式;
2.计划出行的时间、在那里待多久、需要携带的物品;
3.旅途中要做的事(参观名胜古迹、购物、品尝美食……)。
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注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Amy,
How are you doing? The summer holiday is coming.
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I am going to have a trip. I feel excited that I am going
to Qingdao with my parents. Since flying saves a lot of time,
we will go there by plane on July 20th. We are going to stay
there for ten days during the holiday. We'll bring some usual
medicines and clothes. Visiting, swimming and eating seafood
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Please give my love to your parents.
Yours,
Li Hua
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will be the main part of our trip. It will be a wonderful time
for all of us. Besides, we are going to buy some gifts. I'm sure
that we'll have a good holiday.
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