Unit5作文训练-2024-2025学年人教版英语七年级下册

Unit 5 Here and Now--如何写正在发生的事情 写作话题分析 本单元的主题是“与他人分享自己的生活”,要求学生能用现在进行时描述正在发生的事情或正在进行的动作。与此相关的写作通常有: ①描述自己和家人、朋友等在某个时间点正在进行的动作;②描述某个场景下正在发生的事情及人们的活动。 写作训练 假设你是李华,受某报纸的邀约要写一篇新闻报道。请根据下方表格提供的信息,向大家介绍此时此刻世界各地的人们都在做什么。 Places Time Activities Beijing 3 o'clock in the afternoon work hard; have lessons; read books Sydney 5o'clock in the afternoon wait for buses; shop Paris 8 o'clock in the morning sleep; have breakfast; do exercise 要求:1.语句通顺,可适当发挥; 的活动 2.词数 90 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 思路导引 At the moment. . . people are doing different things. 开头:引出主题 段落布局 3 p.m.in Beijing: working hard, having lessons, reading books 5 p.m. in Sydney: waiting for buses, shopping 8 a.m. in Paris: sleeping, having breakfast,doing exercise 中间:介绍各地人们正在进行的活动 It's interesting to know about people's lives in different places around the world, isn't it? 结尾:表达感受 词句积累 地点 at school在学校 in the park 在公园里 at home 在家 in the market在市场里 in the library 在图书馆 活动 have lessons 上课 read books 读书 wait for buses 等公共汽车 go shopping 去购物 have breakfast/lunch/dinner吃早/午/晚餐 do exercise 做锻炼 watch TV 看电视 ride bikes 骑自行车 感受 fun/interesting有趣的 enjoy oneself/have a good time/have fun玩得开心,过得愉快 relaxing 令人放松的 exciting 激动人心的 开头句 1.此时此刻,世界各地的人们正在做着不同的事情。 At the moment, in different places of the world, people are doing different things. 2.不同地方的人们正在做什么? What are people doing in different places? 中间句 1.现在是北京的下午3点,大多数人都在努力工作。 It's 3 o'clock in the afternoon in Beijing, and most people are working hard. 2.一些学生正在学校上课,另一些正在图书馆读书。 Some students are having lessons at school. Others are reading books in the libraries. 3.一些人正在公园里散步,享受着这美好的一天。 Some people are walking in the parks and enjoying this beautiful day. 4.在澳大利亚悉尼,现在是下午5点。 In Sydney, Australia,it's 5 o'clock in the afternoon. 5.许多人在等公交车回家。 Many people are waiting for buses to go back home. 6.一些人在购买食物,例如面包和肉馅饼。 Some people are shopping for food,such as bread and meat pies. 7.在法国巴黎,现在是早上8点。一些人还在睡觉。许多人正在家里吃早餐或者在公园里锻炼。 In Paris, France, it's 8 a.m. Some people are still sleeping. Many others are having breakfast at home or doing exercise in the parks. 结尾句 1.真是天壤之别! What a big difference! 2.了解世界各地的人们的不同生活很有趣。 It's interesting to know about people's lives in different places around the world. 佳作展示 At the moment, in different places of the world, people are doing different things. It's 3 o'clock in the afternoon in Beijing, and most people are working hard.Some students are having lessons at school.Others are reading books in the libraries. In Sydney, Australia, it's 5 o'clock in the afternoon.Many people are waiting for buses to go back home. Some people are shopping for food,such as bread and meat pies. In Paris,France, it's 8 a.m. Some people are still sleeping. Many others are having breakfast at home or doing exercise in the parks. What a big difference! It's interesting to know about people's lives in different places around the world, isn't it? 写作迁移训练 Writing 1 现在是课外活动时间，看看你的同学们都在做什么吧！请根据表格中的信息提示写一篇英语短文，描述你们的课外活动（可适当增加细节），并谈谈你的感想。词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Name Activity Place Lucy 弹钢琴 in the music room Lily 练习唱歌 in the music room John 打篮球 on the playground Sam 上网（surf the Internet） in the computer room Alice 阅读 in the reading room Now class is over. It’s time for after-school activities. Let’s see what my classmates are doing! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作提示】 1.主题：同学们在课外活动时间正在进行的活动 2.人称：以第三人称为主 3.时态：现在进行时 4.要点：描述同学们正在哪里进行什么活动、谈论你的感受 5.写作思路：首先点明主题，引出下文对同学们正在做的活动进行介绍；接着具体描述同学们在课外活动时间正在进行的活动；最后表达你的感受，总结全文。 【范文赏读】 Now class is over. It’s time for after-school activities. Let’s see what my classmates are doing! Lucy is playing the piano in the music room. She likes piano music. Lily is practising singing in the music room to get ready for the school talent show. John is playing basketball on the playground with his friends. What about Sam? He is surfing the Internet in the computer room to get some useful information for his homework. And Alice is reading a book in the reading room. She likes reading and wants to be a writer in the future. They are all having a good time after school. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$