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Unit 2 We’re Family! 单元写作学案
【写作任务】 话题:人&周围的人——介绍家庭成员
【思路点拨】 1. 定基调 体裁:说明文;时态:一般现在时
2. 列提纲、写句子
开头
Beginning
嗨, 我叫李华,来自福建厦门。我爱我的大家庭。这是我们的一张照片。
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Body
文
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主
体
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我就是戴粉色帽子的那个。______________________________________________________________
我不高也不矮,留着黑色长发。__________________________________________________________
我有一把二胡,我二胡演奏得很好。______________________________________________________
Father
左边这位是我爸爸。他非常帅气。________________________________________________________
他经常和我一起打网球。_________________________________________________________________
他有一些钓鱼竿,他花一些时间钓鱼。__________________________________________________
他是一位仁爱且热心的男士。____________________________________________________________
他经常鼓励我们为社区做社会工作。______________________________________________________
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Brother
我的弟弟李平坐在他的膝盖上。__________________________________________________________
李平非常喜欢国际象棋。_________________________________________________________________
他很有趣,他经常逗得我们哈哈大笑。____________________________________________________
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Mother
右边是我妈妈。她美丽又善良。__________________________________________________________
晚上她总是给我读故事。_________________________________________________________________
她有一架钢琴,她钢琴弹得真的很好。____________________________________________________
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Grandparents
中间是我爷爷和奶奶。___________________________________________________________________
他们是我爸爸的父母。___________________________________________________________________
他们有一条狗,名叫奥斯卡。____________________________________________________________
他们热爱动物和园艺。___________________________________________________________________
他们最喜欢的活动是饮茶和公园散步。____________________________________________________
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Ending
结尾
基础版
我们相亲相爱,互相帮助。______________________________________________________________
多么快乐的家庭!_______________________________________________________________________
致远版
①我爱我家,因为它充满了爱与快乐。
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② 家是爱开始且永不停息的地方。
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③ 在日常生活中,我们应该珍惜与家人和朋友共度的时光。
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④没有一个地方可以和家相提并论。
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⑤哪里有家,哪里就有爱。哪里有爱,哪里就有温暖和幸福。______________________________________________________________________________________
3. 成篇章
Hi, I’m Li Hua from Xiamen, Fujian. I love my big family. Here’s a photo of us.
I’m the one with the pink hat. I am not tall or short, and I have long black hair. I have an erhu. I play the erhu well. This is my dad on the left. He’s very handsome. He often plays tennis with me. He has some fishing rods, and he spends some time fishing. He is a kind and warm-hearted man. He often encourages us to do social work for their community. My little brother, Li Ping, is on his knee. Li Ping really likes chess. He is really funny, and he often makes us laugh. My mum is on the right. She’s beautiful and kind. She always reads me a story at night. She has a piano, and she can play it really well. My grandparents are in the middle. They’re my dad’s parents. They have a dog. His name is Oscar. They love animals and gardening. Their favorite activities are drinking tea and taking a walk in the park.
We love and help each other. What a happy family! (基础版)
I love my family because it is full of love and happiness. Home is the place where love begins and never ends. As we all know, there's no place like home. Where there is home, there is love. Where there is love, there is warmth and happiness. So remember to value the time we spend with our family and friends in our everyday lives. (致远版)
嗨, 我叫李华,来自福建厦门。我爱我的大家庭。这是我们的一张照片。
我就是戴粉色帽子的那个。我不高也不矮,留着黑色长发。我有一把二胡,我二胡演奏得很好。左边这位是我爸爸。他非常帅气。他经常和我一起打网球。他有一些钓鱼竿,他花一些时间钓鱼。他是一位仁爱且热心的男士。他经常鼓励我们为社区做社会工作。我的弟弟李平坐在他的膝盖上。李平非常喜欢国际象棋。他很有趣,他经常逗得我们哈哈大笑。右边是我妈妈。她美丽又善良。晚上她总是给我读故事。她有一架钢琴,她钢琴弹得真的很好。中间是我爷爷和奶奶。他们是我爸爸的父母。他们有一条狗,名叫奥斯卡。他们热爱动物和园艺。他们最喜欢活动是饮茶和公园散步。
我们相亲相爱,互相帮助。多么快乐的家庭!(基础版)
我爱我家,因为它充满了爱与快乐。家是爱开始且永不停息的地方。众所周知, 没有一个地方可以和家相提并论。哪里有家,哪里就有爱。哪里有爱,哪里就有温暖和幸福。所以,记得要应该珍惜与家人和朋友共度的时光。(致远版)
作文测试
嗨, 我叫李华,来自福建厦门。我爱我的大家庭。这是我们的一张照片。
我就是戴粉色帽子的那个。我不高也不矮,留着黑色长发。我有一把二胡,我二胡演奏得很好。左边这位是我爸爸。他非常帅气。他经常和我一起打网球。他有一些钓鱼竿,他花一些时间钓鱼。他是一位仁爱且热心的男士。他经常鼓励我们为社区做社会工作。我的弟弟李平坐在他的膝盖上。李平非常喜欢国际象棋。他很有趣,他经常逗得我们哈哈大笑。右边是我妈妈。她美丽又善良。晚上她总是给我读故事。她有一架钢琴,她钢琴弹得真的很好。中间是我爷爷和奶奶。他们是我爸爸的父母。他们有一条狗,名叫奥斯卡。他们热爱动物和园艺。他们最喜欢活动是饮茶和公园散步。
我们相亲相爱,互相帮助。多么快乐的家庭!(基础版)
我爱我家,因为它充满了爱与快乐。家是爱开始且永不停息的地方。众所周知, 没有一个地方可以和家相提并论。哪里有家,哪里就有爱。哪里有爱,哪里就有温暖和幸福。所以,记得要应该珍惜与家人和朋友共度的时光。(致远版)
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